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[User]
>>137030684
>Love the linework
Thanks I've been studied some more traditional works like Calvin and Hobbes while the style was still developing so that may have something to do with it.

Your work is very expressive and you seem to have a handle on exaggeration. If you're looking to make a good everyman the trick is to put them between the fantasy elements of your world and reality. I would advise doing two sketches one version of your character that's as fantastic as the rest of your characters and the other as plain as possible before mixing the two experimentally until you find something that you like. Assuming that the three on the bottom right are your main characters I would leave two as they are, pick one to be your everyman, and use them as your POV character. The designs are really good and you only need one anchor.

[Assistant]
>>137031396
>Assuming that the three on the bottom right are your main characters I would leave two as they are
Nah those shits are chapter villains, grandkids of the Boss of the Gas Station, I’m formatting this like an Anthology Graphic Novel where each chapter is mostly different and disconnected from the rest, negative continuity, mostly horror and comedy focused, maybe a finale to have one gag tie everything together but I think I’ll avoid connections, implications and meta stuff
I suppose comparing it to Scooby Doo or Courage the Cowardly Dog is the visual tone I’m going for, writing-wise my ideas might be antiquated since I’m mostly familiar with only Wizard of Oz books as my favorite graphic novels
>the trick is to put them between the fantasy elements of your world and reality. I would advise doing two sketches one version of your character that's as fantastic as the rest of your characters and the other as plain as possible before mixing the two
Ah hell that’s actually good advice, I was just expecting someone to say to watch or read this one thing and try to take inspiration
Right, then I believe I’ve some ideas for one of the three lads
>Melting Love
for me it’s Big Bird


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>>137031254

if you have questions i can answer them.

>>137031258

i will delete my tapas account before midnight tonight. I never promoted my comic EVER, i literally just upload it and hope for the best. So theres no reason for the views to be so low on tapas unless, AHEM, tin foil hat time, im actually getting millions of views on tapas but they dont like the idea of a 4chan artist like me, a rebel without a cause, that will write faggot in bold capitol letters in his webcomic, to rise up in the ranks amongst all the boy love and sjw comics there, and thats fine, thats fine, my webcomics are to wild crazy and free and anti sjw for tapas, i get it, they dont need to be there. see ya'! lol

[Assistant]
>>137031399
based
>>137031258
how does it feel to be an international smash hit webcomic artist?


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>>137029817 (OP)
>>137030863
>>137031144

one last thing before I go, yesterday, UBOSS DAILIES hit over 20,000 page views on comics fury, and its double that on deviantart with over 40,000 views on deviantart!

Tens of thousands of people love my webcomic and flock to it everyday since it launched in late october of last year, its only been up for 8 months so far and its already a cultural phenomenon!

But sadly, I will be deleting it off tapas soon along with the rest of my comics and account because it barely has 100 views on tapas and theres literally no reason for me to have an account there, i never use it and i dont like reading comics there anyway to be honest.

[Assistant]
>>137031399
based
>>137031258
how does it feel to be an international smash hit webcomic artist?


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>>137029817 (OP)
>>137030863
>>137031144

one last thing before I go, yesterday, UBOSS DAILIES hit over 20,000 page views on comics fury, and its double that on deviantart with over 40,000 views on deviantart!

Tens of thousands of people love my webcomic and flock to it everyday since it launched in late october of last year, its only been up for 8 months so far and its already a cultural phenomenon!

But sadly, I will be deleting it off tapas soon along with the rest of my comics and account because it barely has 100 views on tapas and theres literally no reason for me to have an account there, i never use it and i dont like reading comics there anyway to be honest.

[Assistant]
>>137031258
>Absurd amounts of views
>Fuck all subscribers
Huh. Anyway, based. Fuck Tapas.


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>>137031254

if you have questions i can answer them.

>>137031258

i will delete my tapas account before midnight tonight. I never promoted my comic EVER, i literally just upload it and hope for the best. So theres no reason for the views to be so low on tapas unless, AHEM, tin foil hat time, im actually getting millions of views on tapas but they dont like the idea of a 4chan artist like me, a rebel without a cause, that will write faggot in bold capitol letters in his webcomic, to rise up in the ranks amongst all the boy love and sjw comics there, and thats fine, thats fine, my webcomics are to wild crazy and free and anti sjw for tapas, i get it, they dont need to be there. see ya'! lol

[Assistant]
>>137031399

I just deleted my tapas account and feel super good about it.

>>137031665

it feels like shit anon, im doing this shit for free because i am completely and totally insane, i should be making millions of dollars off my art and ideas, but here i am, on 4chan having to deal with retards like: >>137031346
and >>137030934

when im not even supposed to be here, by some cruel twist of fate im not working for marvel, dc, image, top cow, etc right now because i dont know how to get my billion dollar ideas published by a publisher, if i knew how to self publish and sell my shit myself i would, but im an artist, not a business man

the second i figure out how kickstarter works im out of here anon! you wont see me again because i will just be to god damn famous for this place.

facts.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137031399
based
>>137031258
how does it feel to be an international smash hit webcomic artist?

[Assistant]
>>137031399

I just deleted my tapas account and feel super good about it.

>>137031665

it feels like shit anon, im doing this shit for free because i am completely and totally insane, i should be making millions of dollars off my art and ideas, but here i am, on 4chan having to deal with retards like: >>137031346
and >>137030934

when im not even supposed to be here, by some cruel twist of fate im not working for marvel, dc, image, top cow, etc right now because i dont know how to get my billion dollar ideas published by a publisher, if i knew how to self publish and sell my shit myself i would, but im an artist, not a business man

the second i figure out how kickstarter works im out of here anon! you wont see me again because i will just be to god damn famous for this place.

facts.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137031258
shut up, stop posting

[Assistant]
>>137031399

I just deleted my tapas account and feel super good about it.

>>137031665

it feels like shit anon, im doing this shit for free because i am completely and totally insane, i should be making millions of dollars off my art and ideas, but here i am, on 4chan having to deal with retards like: >>137031346
and >>137030934

when im not even supposed to be here, by some cruel twist of fate im not working for marvel, dc, image, top cow, etc right now because i dont know how to get my billion dollar ideas published by a publisher, if i knew how to self publish and sell my shit myself i would, but im an artist, not a business man

the second i figure out how kickstarter works im out of here anon! you wont see me again because i will just be to god damn famous for this place.

facts.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030863
>>137030893
>>137030914

[Assistant]
>>137031399

I just deleted my tapas account and feel super good about it.

>>137031665

it feels like shit anon, im doing this shit for free because i am completely and totally insane, i should be making millions of dollars off my art and ideas, but here i am, on 4chan having to deal with retards like: >>137031346
and >>137030934

when im not even supposed to be here, by some cruel twist of fate im not working for marvel, dc, image, top cow, etc right now because i dont know how to get my billion dollar ideas published by a publisher, if i knew how to self publish and sell my shit myself i would, but im an artist, not a business man

the second i figure out how kickstarter works im out of here anon! you wont see me again because i will just be to god damn famous for this place.

facts.


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[User]
>>137031396
>Assuming that the three on the bottom right are your main characters I would leave two as they are
Nah those shits are chapter villains, grandkids of the Boss of the Gas Station, I’m formatting this like an Anthology Graphic Novel where each chapter is mostly different and disconnected from the rest, negative continuity, mostly horror and comedy focused, maybe a finale to have one gag tie everything together but I think I’ll avoid connections, implications and meta stuff
I suppose comparing it to Scooby Doo or Courage the Cowardly Dog is the visual tone I’m going for, writing-wise my ideas might be antiquated since I’m mostly familiar with only Wizard of Oz books as my favorite graphic novels
>the trick is to put them between the fantasy elements of your world and reality. I would advise doing two sketches one version of your character that's as fantastic as the rest of your characters and the other as plain as possible before mixing the two
Ah hell that’s actually good advice, I was just expecting someone to say to watch or read this one thing and try to take inspiration
Right, then I believe I’ve some ideas for one of the three lads
>Melting Love
for me it’s Big Bird

[Assistant]
>>137031647
Your concept sounds really cool. You'll have to share it once you have a bit more. It's always good to have something new to read.

>I was just expecting someone to say watch or read this one thing.
That advice is such a meme. If you're looking for something specific you shouldn't have to sift through an entire book to find the one thing that might help you if it even exists there in the first place.

>Big Bird
You have excelent taste my friend.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
Previous thread: >>136939986 →

[Assistant]
>>137029817 (OP)
Thread Question: Puffer works as her mom's enforcer/heir to her robot army. Since she idolizes her mom she currently is invested in her role. That could change though...


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>>137029817 (OP)
Thread Question: Puffer works as her mom's enforcer/heir to her robot army. Since she idolizes her mom she currently is invested in her role. That could change though...

[Assistant]
>>137031980
Here's the newest page btw: https://pufferandclarissa.com/


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[User] Cover for a fancomic I made for a friend

[Assistant]
>>137031742
Nice design work. Are Sonic's closed eyes supposed to be flesh-tone colored or are they blue? Just curious.


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[User]
>>137031647
Your concept sounds really cool. You'll have to share it once you have a bit more. It's always good to have something new to read.

>I was just expecting someone to say watch or read this one thing.
That advice is such a meme. If you're looking for something specific you shouldn't have to sift through an entire book to find the one thing that might help you if it even exists there in the first place.

>Big Bird
You have excelent taste my friend.

[Assistant]
>>137031884
I should perhaps share some drafts on characters here later once I’m going full steam ahead, as I could use the critique of someone who isn’t my friend, we only have the characters of the Boss, the Narrator and like two groups of antagonists figured out
Assuming these threads aren’t dead again, took a while to find one
> If you're looking for something specific you shouldn't have to sift through an entire book to find the one thing that might help you
I can see the logic honestly, if you need inspiration here’s this one media that matches your proposed tone and vision, I’m no stranger to inspiration but I think it pays off more to go blindly and without references to avoid ripping things off
Case in point
>You have excelent taste my friend
I owe a lot to Project Moon and its sequels, I think its Abnormality designs and weird tones changed my idea on how a monster or wild antagonist should look and act - completely bizarre


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[User]
>>137031399

I just deleted my tapas account and feel super good about it.

>>137031665

it feels like shit anon, im doing this shit for free because i am completely and totally insane, i should be making millions of dollars off my art and ideas, but here i am, on 4chan having to deal with retards like: >>137031346
and >>137030934

when im not even supposed to be here, by some cruel twist of fate im not working for marvel, dc, image, top cow, etc right now because i dont know how to get my billion dollar ideas published by a publisher, if i knew how to self publish and sell my shit myself i would, but im an artist, not a business man

the second i figure out how kickstarter works im out of here anon! you wont see me again because i will just be to god damn famous for this place.

facts.

[Assistant]
>>137031828
>it feels like shit anon, im doing this shit for free because i am completely and totally insane, i should be making millions of dollars off my art and ideas, but here i am, on 4chan having to deal with retards like: >>137031346
thank you for being so generous with your art sempai


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137031258
shut up, stop posting

[Assistant]
>>137031828
>it feels like shit anon, im doing this shit for free because i am completely and totally insane, i should be making millions of dollars off my art and ideas, but here i am, on 4chan having to deal with retards like: >>137031346
thank you for being so generous with your art sempai


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137031884
I should perhaps share some drafts on characters here later once I’m going full steam ahead, as I could use the critique of someone who isn’t my friend, we only have the characters of the Boss, the Narrator and like two groups of antagonists figured out
Assuming these threads aren’t dead again, took a while to find one
> If you're looking for something specific you shouldn't have to sift through an entire book to find the one thing that might help you
I can see the logic honestly, if you need inspiration here’s this one media that matches your proposed tone and vision, I’m no stranger to inspiration but I think it pays off more to go blindly and without references to avoid ripping things off
Case in point
>You have excelent taste my friend
I owe a lot to Project Moon and its sequels, I think its Abnormality designs and weird tones changed my idea on how a monster or wild antagonist should look and act - completely bizarre

[Assistant]
>>137032099
Critique and advice is a skill all it's own. You have to be able to disassemble something and understand how it works on a fundamental level then you have to find the piece of that picture that is missing and lay it out in such a way that the person you're talking to understands it. Not very many people can do that.

Also. I have run out of anomalies in my practice sketch folder.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
Previous thread: >>136939986 →

[Assistant]
>>137029817 (OP)
>Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?
Ms. Aminah Is a magic teacher, she enjoys her job, even if she doesn't show strong emotions.

Welp, I'm on hiatus.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
Previous thread: >>136939986 →

[Assistant]
>>137029817 (OP)
>>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?
Bryan the bard is a bard. He loves it, because it's the only thing he knows how to do, and what he was trained to do his entire life. He knows nothing else other than barding. Why did he get sent to be a bard at a village where music was banned, full of magical people whose magical aspects were only activated once they heard music? That remains a mystery.
Read Oi! Tales of Bardic Fury on Tapas and Webtoon. Website coming soon!
https://tapas.io/series/Oi
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/oi-tales-of-bardic-fury/list?title_no=303092

>Oi Vol 3 update: The good news is that I have finished pencilling the end of the book finally. There are 24 more pages including epilogue. It will be 288 pages when it's done. The next Oi stories I draw will definitely be shorter and more episodic for awhile before I start drawing another long arc. I want to try drawing some non-Oi one shot comic projects this summer too.


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[User]
>>137031742
Nice design work. Are Sonic's closed eyes supposed to be flesh-tone colored or are they blue? Just curious.

[Assistant]
>>137032052
Classic Sonic has flesh eyelids, they become blue in the redesigns as he gets older


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137029817 (OP)
>>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?
Bryan the bard is a bard. He loves it, because it's the only thing he knows how to do, and what he was trained to do his entire life. He knows nothing else other than barding. Why did he get sent to be a bard at a village where music was banned, full of magical people whose magical aspects were only activated once they heard music? That remains a mystery.
Read Oi! Tales of Bardic Fury on Tapas and Webtoon. Website coming soon!
https://tapas.io/series/Oi
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/oi-tales-of-bardic-fury/list?title_no=303092

>Oi Vol 3 update: The good news is that I have finished pencilling the end of the book finally. There are 24 more pages including epilogue. It will be 288 pages when it's done. The next Oi stories I draw will definitely be shorter and more episodic for awhile before I start drawing another long arc. I want to try drawing some non-Oi one shot comic projects this summer too.

[Assistant]
>>137032703
I won't be able to ink and finish the pages until the last week of May because tomorrow I'm leaving with my wife on my honeymoon to Japan. We got married last August but delayed the honeymoon until now. For a weeb like me, going to Japan is the dream! I'm hoping to get some good inspiration from cool Japanese graphic design while over there which should help when I draw the new Vol 3 cover. Hopefully by the end of May, Oi 3: BURN YOUR IDOLS will be finished. I'd love to know what any anon thinks of it once it's done. Until next time, my message to HYW is to keep calm and draw webcomics.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137032099
Critique and advice is a skill all it's own. You have to be able to disassemble something and understand how it works on a fundamental level then you have to find the piece of that picture that is missing and lay it out in such a way that the person you're talking to understands it. Not very many people can do that.

Also. I have run out of anomalies in my practice sketch folder.

[Assistant]
>>137032332
Well I still consider myself an amateur who is just now getting a grasp on body construction and environment, I haven’t had a formal class help me unfortunately, which in hindsight I really should have taken to make things easier, maybe that’s why I’m struggling to make original designs now that I’m on my own
Still, I think this trial by fire will work out one way or another, if just as a lesson before tackling the bigger stuff I had in mind
>I have run out of anomalies
Not to worry, I’ve drawn more
In fact, these border designs and captions may be what I go for once panels start going, but that is me thinking out loud, I shouldn’t think on 'what ifs' anymore and start executing things, hopefully we’ve a thread by then
Thank you for your help blondie, I feel like I’ve a much clearer direction for this part of the plan now


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137032703
I won't be able to ink and finish the pages until the last week of May because tomorrow I'm leaving with my wife on my honeymoon to Japan. We got married last August but delayed the honeymoon until now. For a weeb like me, going to Japan is the dream! I'm hoping to get some good inspiration from cool Japanese graphic design while over there which should help when I draw the new Vol 3 cover. Hopefully by the end of May, Oi 3: BURN YOUR IDOLS will be finished. I'd love to know what any anon thinks of it once it's done. Until next time, my message to HYW is to keep calm and draw webcomics.

[Assistant]
>>137032804
That’s a hell of a style you’ve got with shadows and scratches, I’ll look forward to seeing your work once I’m free later
Enjoy your trip by the way


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[User] fellas i truly cannot be bothered to work on any aspect of my comic

[Assistant]
>>137033052
if you keep craving and do nothing to sate it, it’ll become too big and burst eventually


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137032332
Well I still consider myself an amateur who is just now getting a grasp on body construction and environment, I haven’t had a formal class help me unfortunately, which in hindsight I really should have taken to make things easier, maybe that’s why I’m struggling to make original designs now that I’m on my own
Still, I think this trial by fire will work out one way or another, if just as a lesson before tackling the bigger stuff I had in mind
>I have run out of anomalies
Not to worry, I’ve drawn more
In fact, these border designs and captions may be what I go for once panels start going, but that is me thinking out loud, I shouldn’t think on 'what ifs' anymore and start executing things, hopefully we’ve a thread by then
Thank you for your help blondie, I feel like I’ve a much clearer direction for this part of the plan now

[Assistant]
>>137032813
Happy Hunting


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[User] This page is problematic.

[Assistant]
>>137033675
>Bum Muggery


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[User]
>>137032813
Happy Hunting

[Assistant]
>>137033673
Shucks man, thank you for the sketch too, the ayyliem came out great with that close up
They will be my first reference sheet, I owe you one fanart down the line


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] How did I do?

[Assistant]
>>137034609
I like it, I was amused enough to exhale at a somewhat faster pace than normal


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[User]
>>137029817 (OP)
>>137030066

thats not the last thread, thats the thread you made while the actual thread was still being posted in and i think hit bump limit with 500+ replies

anyway, since the last ACTUAL thread ive made 8 new pages, the last 7 pages are Ladaria vs Deargdue, but ill start with this page showing Skag making her daring escape using pocket sand.

more here: https://ubossdailies.thecomicseries.com/

[Assistant]
>>137030863
I made a thread for you to upload your stuff in there. So go and post before it dissapears and let the other kids talk in here. Jeez.


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[User] a Rubi to bless this thread

[Assistant]
>>137035447
Thread is saved!


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[User] Would you accept flowers from Robin?

[Assistant]
>>137036077
Those are some massive double D knockers. She is well endowed.


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[User]
>>137036077
Those are some massive double D knockers. She is well endowed.

[Assistant]
>>137036150
Please I have G cups and hers look even bigger than mine


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[User] What are you reading currently? Comics, webcomics, anything from the /hyw/ list? Anything you would recommend to other comic creators? Reading is an important part of creating, after all. If I feel like I'm burning out, I put the comic aside for a bit and read- I think of it as filling my cup.

[Assistant]
It’s an important page and I get bashful about drawing men. Progress is slow.
>>137034406
Still reading Entangled Life whenever I remember to pick it back up.
>>137032804
Have fuuuuuun!


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137032703
I won't be able to ink and finish the pages until the last week of May because tomorrow I'm leaving with my wife on my honeymoon to Japan. We got married last August but delayed the honeymoon until now. For a weeb like me, going to Japan is the dream! I'm hoping to get some good inspiration from cool Japanese graphic design while over there which should help when I draw the new Vol 3 cover. Hopefully by the end of May, Oi 3: BURN YOUR IDOLS will be finished. I'd love to know what any anon thinks of it once it's done. Until next time, my message to HYW is to keep calm and draw webcomics.

[Assistant]
It’s an important page and I get bashful about drawing men. Progress is slow.
>>137034406
Still reading Entangled Life whenever I remember to pick it back up.
>>137032804
Have fuuuuuun!


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[User]
It’s an important page and I get bashful about drawing men. Progress is slow.
>>137034406
Still reading Entangled Life whenever I remember to pick it back up.
>>137032804
Have fuuuuuun!

[Assistant] >>137036301


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[User]
>>137036150
Please I have G cups and hers look even bigger than mine

[Assistant]
>>137036253
>I have G cups
L O N D O N
O
N
D
O
N


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[User]
>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
Previous thread: >>136939986 →

[Assistant]
>>137029817 (OP)
>>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?

He does. He's an "exorcist" and, by far, is quite confusing for him.

http://www.figliodargento.net


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>>137032703
I won't be able to ink and finish the pages until the last week of May because tomorrow I'm leaving with my wife on my honeymoon to Japan. We got married last August but delayed the honeymoon until now. For a weeb like me, going to Japan is the dream! I'm hoping to get some good inspiration from cool Japanese graphic design while over there which should help when I draw the new Vol 3 cover. Hopefully by the end of May, Oi 3: BURN YOUR IDOLS will be finished. I'd love to know what any anon thinks of it once it's done. Until next time, my message to HYW is to keep calm and draw webcomics.

[Assistant]
>>137032804
Bless! Go to Ribera's steak house brother! I wanna see you in one of those jackets! Hahah


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
Previous thread: >>136939986 →

[Assistant]
>>137029817 (OP)
>tq
Bellboy does everything in the damn hotel and he silently resents that after 200 years, Andross hasn’t given him a promotion.


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[User]
>>137029817 (OP)
>tq
Bellboy does everything in the damn hotel and he silently resents that after 200 years, Andross hasn’t given him a promotion.

[Assistant]
>>137036856
You really aren't on twitter anymore! How am i supposed to subtlety hit on you!? Gaaahhh!


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[User]
>>137036856
You really aren't on twitter anymore! How am i supposed to subtlety hit on you!? Gaaahhh!

[Assistant]
>>137037091
Subtlely hit on her in Ardi's discord server that's where all the cool kids hang out nowadays


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137037091
Subtlely hit on her in Ardi's discord server that's where all the cool kids hang out nowadays

[Assistant]
>>137037127
I....I'm not cool enough ;(


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137037091
Subtlely hit on her in Ardi's discord server that's where all the cool kids hang out nowadays

[Assistant]
>>137037127
Are betz and bones banned?


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[User]
>>137037127
Are betz and bones banned?

[Assistant]
>>137037209
>obsessed


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[User]
>>137037127
Are betz and bones banned?

[Assistant]
>>137037209
Yes.


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[User]
>>137037127
Are betz and bones banned?

[Assistant]
>>137037209
None of the drama queens are in the server, it's nice


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[User]
>>137037209
Yes.

[Assistant]
>>137037287
>>137037341
b-b-b-BASED


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[User]
>>137037209
None of the drama queens are in the server, it's nice

[Assistant]
>>137037287
>>137037341
b-b-b-BASED


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[User] Just let it go. The last one had five replies.

[Assistant]
>>137030066
I was wondering why they named it #904, I guess they looked at some archive?

>>137030844
>>137030863
Not OP lol.

See >>136945055 →
Also.
See >>136945402 →

Clearly, I can't suck cocks in this thread because I'm not OP.
>Although, I'm obviously still a faggot anyway. So I'll suck cocks a second time, just for you.
>>137030844

>Regardless, here is todays page.


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[User]
>>137030066
Seems like it’s because that one was made by a retarded tripfag

[Assistant]
>>137030066
I was wondering why they named it #904, I guess they looked at some archive?

>>137030844
>>137030863
Not OP lol.

See >>136945055 →
Also.
See >>136945402 →

Clearly, I can't suck cocks in this thread because I'm not OP.
>Although, I'm obviously still a faggot anyway. So I'll suck cocks a second time, just for you.
>>137030844

>Regardless, here is todays page.


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[User]
>>137029817 (OP)
>>137030066

thats not the last thread, thats the thread you made while the actual thread was still being posted in and i think hit bump limit with 500+ replies

anyway, since the last ACTUAL thread ive made 8 new pages, the last 7 pages are Ladaria vs Deargdue, but ill start with this page showing Skag making her daring escape using pocket sand.

more here: https://ubossdailies.thecomicseries.com/

[Assistant]
>>137030066
I was wondering why they named it #904, I guess they looked at some archive?

>>137030844
>>137030863
Not OP lol.

See >>136945055 →
Also.
See >>136945402 →

Clearly, I can't suck cocks in this thread because I'm not OP.
>Although, I'm obviously still a faggot anyway. So I'll suck cocks a second time, just for you.
>>137030844

>Regardless, here is todays page.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030066
Seems like it’s because that one was made by a retarded tripfag

[Assistant]
>>137030066
I was wondering why they named it #904, I guess they looked at some archive?

>>137030844
>>137030863
Not OP lol.

See >>136945055 →
Also.
See >>136945402 →

Clearly, I can't suck cocks in this thread because I'm not OP.
>Although, I'm obviously still a faggot anyway. So I'll suck cocks a second time, just for you.
>>137030844

>Regardless, here is todays page.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] How did I do?

[Assistant]
>>137034609
I’m not sure what the joke about a pink sword is supposed to be,


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[User]
>>137034609
I’m not sure what the joke about a pink sword is supposed to be,

[Assistant]
>>137037946
the knight wants the sword to match his outfit


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[User]
>>137037946
the knight wants the sword to match his outfit

[Assistant]
>>137037978
I get that part but the woman is asking why would anyone need a pink sword as if it is weaker or less effective at killing
I get why the knight wants it but I don’t get why she has a problem with it


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[User]
>>137037978
I get that part but the woman is asking why would anyone need a pink sword as if it is weaker or less effective at killing
I get why the knight wants it but I don’t get why she has a problem with it

[Assistant]
>>137038099
She's worried she'll mix it up with the one in her drawer.


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[User] https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=_mWUIztXI8o&pp=ygUdaGVybWl0aGVhZCBpIHdvbid0IGxldCBpdCBkaWU%3D [Embed]

[Assistant]
>>137036848
I drew RoadKill reading the pages you drew him in! I'm still pretty honored being featured in the pages of Super J.


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[User]
just recieved the first 7 pages that my illustrator was drawing from the one-shot script I wrote.

I was planning to release all the story at once but now I'm thinking if it would be better to divide it by issues

[Assistant]
>>137038397
cute frog


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[User]
>>137036848
I drew RoadKill reading the pages you drew him in! I'm still pretty honored being featured in the pages of Super J.

[Assistant]
>>137039129
You honor me brother, Road Kill is such a rad design! Hoping we can mix it up somewhere down the road!


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[User]
>>137031980
Here's the newest page btw: https://pufferandclarissa.com/

[Assistant] >>137032000 And da next page


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>>137039129
You honor me brother, Road Kill is such a rad design! Hoping we can mix it up somewhere down the road!

[Assistant]
>>137039326
If I ever actually post my work anywhere!
>>137039406
This is a smart move. I've had some sets made to more easily figure out a scene / panel. 3D models are also great for props that need to be perfect (like cars and guns and other rectilinear objects)
>that's what I did


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] I'll be making mine in a 3D space and I'm not sure how stupid of an idea this is but it should be fun.

[Assistant]
>>137039326
If I ever actually post my work anywhere!
>>137039406
This is a smart move. I've had some sets made to more easily figure out a scene / panel. 3D models are also great for props that need to be perfect (like cars and guns and other rectilinear objects)
>that's what I did


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137039326
If I ever actually post my work anywhere!
>>137039406
This is a smart move. I've had some sets made to more easily figure out a scene / panel. 3D models are also great for props that need to be perfect (like cars and guns and other rectilinear objects)
>that's what I did

[Assistant]
>>137039921
You just take your time my man, all that's important is finding that place within yourself when reaching success in your works, whatever works to help you move forward, we can't always be happy with ourselves, but we must challenge our time, gain strength in our discomforts, find our worth! I love your art, keeping my eyes open for ya!


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] I'm making a Looney Tunes type animation planned to be about 5 minutes in length. Is that welcome here? It's not a webcomic, but it's a long form work.

[Assistant]
>>137040186
Try the /ic animation thread


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>>137040186
Try the /ic animation thread

[Assistant]
>>137040246
>/ic/


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[User] Would you accept flowers from Robin?

[Assistant]
>>137036077
With grace and without hesitation, yes I would


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[User]
Dumping last pages.

>TQ
Fiadh was a martyr, basically a child conduit that powers up the noostower. They are paid in food, a bed, and education. It's not optional though.

Asha has never been employed but life was rough enough where she lived even without that.

[Assistant]
>>137042079
Pontiff Asgados

>>137036077
With a lot of wariness.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] Would you accept flowers from Robin?

[Assistant]
>>137042079
Pontiff Asgados

>>137036077
With a lot of wariness.


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[User]
>>137042079
Pontiff Asgados

>>137036077
With a lot of wariness.

[Assistant] >>137042087


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[User] >>137042087

[Assistant]
>>137042093

>>137033675
Gave me a good laugh.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] This page is problematic.

[Assistant]
>>137042093

>>137033675
Gave me a good laugh.


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[User]
>>137042093

>>137033675
Gave me a good laugh.

[Assistant]
>>137042177
https://m.tapas.io/series/Wings-Of-Daera/info


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137042177
https://m.tapas.io/series/Wings-Of-Daera/info

[Assistant]
>>137042195
Forgot the page


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
Dumping last pages.

>TQ
Fiadh was a martyr, basically a child conduit that powers up the noostower. They are paid in food, a bed, and education. It's not optional though.

Asha has never been employed but life was rough enough where she lived even without that.

[Assistant]
>>137042079
>>137042195
You're a beast, leaving a trail of kills, your brutality knows no end.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137042177
https://m.tapas.io/series/Wings-Of-Daera/info

[Assistant]
>>137042079
>>137042195
You're a beast, leaving a trail of kills, your brutality knows no end.


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[User]
>>137039326
If I ever actually post my work anywhere!
>>137039406
This is a smart move. I've had some sets made to more easily figure out a scene / panel. 3D models are also great for props that need to be perfect (like cars and guns and other rectilinear objects)
>that's what I did

[Assistant]
Damn, actually impressed by the quality in this thread, it's motivational.

>>137039921
It's actually going to be fully 3D-modelled and rendered lol, characters too. No 2D element or nothing bar the eventual overlay edits.


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>>137029817 (OP)
>Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?
Ms. Aminah Is a magic teacher, she enjoys her job, even if she doesn't show strong emotions.

Welp, I'm on hiatus.

[Assistant]
>>137032486
Well m8 I'll be looking forward to when you resume "later this year" if you do. Thanks for the comic, I enjoyed it


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>>137030993

Ladaria vs Deargdue part 7/7

[Assistant]
>>137031008

just finished a new page, hope yall like it!

Ladaria asks tap if she would take care of her Jack if a vampire got the best of her and Skag comes up with an evil plan to get back at Tap even without powers...


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>>137031008

just finished a new page, hope yall like it!

Ladaria asks tap if she would take care of her Jack if a vampire got the best of her and Skag comes up with an evil plan to get back at Tap even without powers...

[Assistant]
>>137043515

woops just caught a major error, its been fixed on comics fury and deviant art

i left the copy past dialog on the bottom right corner, i copy and paster dialog to quickly write in the word balloons without having to select the proper font and size every time in krita text editor, the best way to do this is open up an older ".krita" file and copy and paste a line of text, this automatically lets you write in the same font and size without the hassle.

the reason this text was laft on the page is because i was going to have the merchant say "what?" but forgot all about it even being there by the time i finished the page lol


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>>137031008

just finished a new page, hope yall like it!

Ladaria asks tap if she would take care of her Jack if a vampire got the best of her and Skag comes up with an evil plan to get back at Tap even without powers...

[Assistant]
>>137043515
seriously dude, either go to your designated thread or stop spaming. Half the images should'nt belong to a single ratman.


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>>137031008

just finished a new page, hope yall like it!

Ladaria asks tap if she would take care of her Jack if a vampire got the best of her and Skag comes up with an evil plan to get back at Tap even without powers...

[Assistant]
>>137043515
>hope yall like it!
What's the point? You're convinced that you're hot shit and worth a million dollars, and just don't show it for lack of effort (same shit as a middle school beta convinced he could get a girlfriend if he tried). What's the point in describing every thought on every comic you post when you probably won't read it?


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>>137031008

daily reminder that i draw UBOSS DAILIES bad on purpose to add to the overall cartoon humor of the title, UBOSS NIGHTLIES however is a more serious comic and I will be drawing it a lot better than anything you have seen my draw in UBOSS DAILIES so far

also UBOSS DAILIES is coming to an end, new webcomics from me are coming soon!

the logo title for HERO HOUSE REMIX is still being designed, but THUMPERELLA and UBOSS NIGHTLIES title logo's are pretty much good to go.

[Assistant]
>>137031144
You gotta tweak those top two logos for readability, man. Idk what the top says and the bottom looks like it says UBOLL ngicifhes


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137043515

woops just caught a major error, its been fixed on comics fury and deviant art

i left the copy past dialog on the bottom right corner, i copy and paster dialog to quickly write in the word balloons without having to select the proper font and size every time in krita text editor, the best way to do this is open up an older ".krita" file and copy and paste a line of text, this automatically lets you write in the same font and size without the hassle.

the reason this text was laft on the page is because i was going to have the merchant say "what?" but forgot all about it even being there by the time i finished the page lol

[Assistant]
>>137043581
I for one vote to keep the text in for the sake of authenticity


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>>137029817 (OP)
Thread Question: Puffer works as her mom's enforcer/heir to her robot army. Since she idolizes her mom she currently is invested in her role. That could change though...

[Assistant]
>>137031980
Oh I see why she’s called puffer now.


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[User]
>>137043515
seriously dude, either go to your designated thread or stop spaming. Half the images should'nt belong to a single ratman.

[Assistant]
>>137044108
>>137035647
>i made a thread for you
>designated thread

what? link?

>half the images shouldnt belong to one rat...

there not, your just hyper focused on me, i cant help im more creative and produce more work and pages than everyone else, not my problem. maybe everyone else should pick up the pace and produce more work to be honest.

>>137044175
im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius, your welcome.

>>137044204
they are still in concept stage, i agree they still need a bit of work, but they are close to what i have in mind....

>>137043515
anyway, I just RE-mapped out the entire rest of the comic, to the very end, page 123-150, its gonna get crazy but its going to have the perfect ending for tap and the comic its self!

spoilers: the morale of the entire comic will be: "theres a meme posting shit lord in all of us." followed by "thanks for reading... the end..."

its going to be beautiful! lol


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030863
I made a thread for you to upload your stuff in there. So go and post before it dissapears and let the other kids talk in here. Jeez.

[Assistant]
>>137044108
>>137035647
>i made a thread for you
>designated thread

what? link?

>half the images shouldnt belong to one rat...

there not, your just hyper focused on me, i cant help im more creative and produce more work and pages than everyone else, not my problem. maybe everyone else should pick up the pace and produce more work to be honest.

>>137044175
im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius, your welcome.

>>137044204
they are still in concept stage, i agree they still need a bit of work, but they are close to what i have in mind....

>>137043515
anyway, I just RE-mapped out the entire rest of the comic, to the very end, page 123-150, its gonna get crazy but its going to have the perfect ending for tap and the comic its self!

spoilers: the morale of the entire comic will be: "theres a meme posting shit lord in all of us." followed by "thanks for reading... the end..."

its going to be beautiful! lol


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137043515
>hope yall like it!
What's the point? You're convinced that you're hot shit and worth a million dollars, and just don't show it for lack of effort (same shit as a middle school beta convinced he could get a girlfriend if he tried). What's the point in describing every thought on every comic you post when you probably won't read it?

[Assistant]
>>137044108
>>137035647
>i made a thread for you
>designated thread

what? link?

>half the images shouldnt belong to one rat...

there not, your just hyper focused on me, i cant help im more creative and produce more work and pages than everyone else, not my problem. maybe everyone else should pick up the pace and produce more work to be honest.

>>137044175
im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius, your welcome.

>>137044204
they are still in concept stage, i agree they still need a bit of work, but they are close to what i have in mind....

>>137043515
anyway, I just RE-mapped out the entire rest of the comic, to the very end, page 123-150, its gonna get crazy but its going to have the perfect ending for tap and the comic its self!

spoilers: the morale of the entire comic will be: "theres a meme posting shit lord in all of us." followed by "thanks for reading... the end..."

its going to be beautiful! lol


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137031144
You gotta tweak those top two logos for readability, man. Idk what the top says and the bottom looks like it says UBOLL ngicifhes

[Assistant]
>>137044108
>>137035647
>i made a thread for you
>designated thread

what? link?

>half the images shouldnt belong to one rat...

there not, your just hyper focused on me, i cant help im more creative and produce more work and pages than everyone else, not my problem. maybe everyone else should pick up the pace and produce more work to be honest.

>>137044175
im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius, your welcome.

>>137044204
they are still in concept stage, i agree they still need a bit of work, but they are close to what i have in mind....

>>137043515
anyway, I just RE-mapped out the entire rest of the comic, to the very end, page 123-150, its gonna get crazy but its going to have the perfect ending for tap and the comic its self!

spoilers: the morale of the entire comic will be: "theres a meme posting shit lord in all of us." followed by "thanks for reading... the end..."

its going to be beautiful! lol


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137031008

just finished a new page, hope yall like it!

Ladaria asks tap if she would take care of her Jack if a vampire got the best of her and Skag comes up with an evil plan to get back at Tap even without powers...

[Assistant]
>>137044108
>>137035647
>i made a thread for you
>designated thread

what? link?

>half the images shouldnt belong to one rat...

there not, your just hyper focused on me, i cant help im more creative and produce more work and pages than everyone else, not my problem. maybe everyone else should pick up the pace and produce more work to be honest.

>>137044175
im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius, your welcome.

>>137044204
they are still in concept stage, i agree they still need a bit of work, but they are close to what i have in mind....

>>137043515
anyway, I just RE-mapped out the entire rest of the comic, to the very end, page 123-150, its gonna get crazy but its going to have the perfect ending for tap and the comic its self!

spoilers: the morale of the entire comic will be: "theres a meme posting shit lord in all of us." followed by "thanks for reading... the end..."

its going to be beautiful! lol


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137044108
>>137035647
>i made a thread for you
>designated thread

what? link?

>half the images shouldnt belong to one rat...

there not, your just hyper focused on me, i cant help im more creative and produce more work and pages than everyone else, not my problem. maybe everyone else should pick up the pace and produce more work to be honest.

>>137044175
im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius, your welcome.

>>137044204
they are still in concept stage, i agree they still need a bit of work, but they are close to what i have in mind....

>>137043515
anyway, I just RE-mapped out the entire rest of the comic, to the very end, page 123-150, its gonna get crazy but its going to have the perfect ending for tap and the comic its self!

spoilers: the morale of the entire comic will be: "theres a meme posting shit lord in all of us." followed by "thanks for reading... the end..."

its going to be beautiful! lol

[Assistant]
>>137044494
>im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius
Bruh the first page you posted on this thread had a stale meme and the second had song lyrics.

You're 14.


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[User] I'll be making mine in a 3D space and I'm not sure how stupid of an idea this is but it should be fun.

[Assistant]
>>137039406
You’ll quickly find out that most artists use a lot of perspective cheats to frame things, but 3D modeling is fun and I use it for some of my background stuff


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137044108
>>137035647
>i made a thread for you
>designated thread

what? link?

>half the images shouldnt belong to one rat...

there not, your just hyper focused on me, i cant help im more creative and produce more work and pages than everyone else, not my problem. maybe everyone else should pick up the pace and produce more work to be honest.

>>137044175
im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius, your welcome.

>>137044204
they are still in concept stage, i agree they still need a bit of work, but they are close to what i have in mind....

>>137043515
anyway, I just RE-mapped out the entire rest of the comic, to the very end, page 123-150, its gonna get crazy but its going to have the perfect ending for tap and the comic its self!

spoilers: the morale of the entire comic will be: "theres a meme posting shit lord in all of us." followed by "thanks for reading... the end..."

its going to be beautiful! lol

[Assistant]
>>137044494
i wouldn't count your half assed shitty pages as anything of value


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137044494
>im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius
Bruh the first page you posted on this thread had a stale meme and the second had song lyrics.

You're 14.

[Assistant]
>>137044602
>>137044664
You know that all the complaining about Bones is more autistic that the rat man himself right?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137044494
i wouldn't count your half assed shitty pages as anything of value

[Assistant]
>>137044602
>>137044664
You know that all the complaining about Bones is more autistic that the rat man himself right?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137044108
>>137035647
>i made a thread for you
>designated thread

what? link?

>half the images shouldnt belong to one rat...

there not, your just hyper focused on me, i cant help im more creative and produce more work and pages than everyone else, not my problem. maybe everyone else should pick up the pace and produce more work to be honest.

>>137044175
im giving you a glimpse into the mind of a creative genius, your welcome.

>>137044204
they are still in concept stage, i agree they still need a bit of work, but they are close to what i have in mind....

>>137043515
anyway, I just RE-mapped out the entire rest of the comic, to the very end, page 123-150, its gonna get crazy but its going to have the perfect ending for tap and the comic its self!

spoilers: the morale of the entire comic will be: "theres a meme posting shit lord in all of us." followed by "thanks for reading... the end..."

its going to be beautiful! lol

[Assistant]
>>137044494
>I'm a genius! I'm a genius!
Look, I'm not going to knock you for being productive. That's a good problem to have, and it bumps the thread. My problem with you is the ego behind it for what's flawed work. Because it is flawed. Let's go over a few things.

>>137030863
>Ew, gross! Im only 10 years old!
What ten year old talks like this? Forget 'what 10 year old says no to boobs,' what 10 year old shouts their age?
You want to see the entire joke done better? Read the first issue of Dragon Ball, specifically the part where Bulma promises kud Goku a peek at her butt. Same joke. Goku actually acts like a kid. Actually has followup that makes sense.

>Thats it Skag! Your dead!
Why does she open the door? The hole that girl is looking through is big enough for her to crawl out of, so why does she need to do anything other than reach in and shank? It's an idiot move.

>Eat POCKET SAND
Ha ha meme funny ha ha serious and funny comics ha ha

>You're lucky I'm too busy to chase you!
Foremost, learn to draw legs.
Second. Busy doing... What? Busy standing there shouting? Fuck off.

>>137030893
>First panel
Elephant is really cool looking.
Lion's derpy. Owl is just there.

>{Welcome to the Jungle}
You don't need to keep the joke up after two lines. We get it. We know the song. It was written by smarter people. Copypasting lyrics is something 12 year old authors do in fanfic.

>Well your the first vampire I met that quoted guns n' roses
...As if that's a common thing.
Also, pointing out lazy writing is not a joke nor does it make it not lazy.

>>137030914
>First line
The edginess isn't endearing. And... Again... Pointing out your "joke" isn't funny.

>thor love and ragnarok
Ah, yes, that classic movie everyone knows... And namedropping a reference is totally hilarious!

>Last panel
Gorilla shading looks cool, but what the fuck is that face? Why's it giving the viewer an "amirite" glance? Also, what is that woman's anatomy? Does she have the digestive tract of a ferret?


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[User]
>>137029817 (OP)
>>137030066

thats not the last thread, thats the thread you made while the actual thread was still being posted in and i think hit bump limit with 500+ replies

anyway, since the last ACTUAL thread ive made 8 new pages, the last 7 pages are Ladaria vs Deargdue, but ill start with this page showing Skag making her daring escape using pocket sand.

more here: https://ubossdailies.thecomicseries.com/

[Assistant]
>>137044494
>I'm a genius! I'm a genius!
Look, I'm not going to knock you for being productive. That's a good problem to have, and it bumps the thread. My problem with you is the ego behind it for what's flawed work. Because it is flawed. Let's go over a few things.

>>137030863
>Ew, gross! Im only 10 years old!
What ten year old talks like this? Forget 'what 10 year old says no to boobs,' what 10 year old shouts their age?
You want to see the entire joke done better? Read the first issue of Dragon Ball, specifically the part where Bulma promises kud Goku a peek at her butt. Same joke. Goku actually acts like a kid. Actually has followup that makes sense.

>Thats it Skag! Your dead!
Why does she open the door? The hole that girl is looking through is big enough for her to crawl out of, so why does she need to do anything other than reach in and shank? It's an idiot move.

>Eat POCKET SAND
Ha ha meme funny ha ha serious and funny comics ha ha

>You're lucky I'm too busy to chase you!
Foremost, learn to draw legs.
Second. Busy doing... What? Busy standing there shouting? Fuck off.

>>137030893
>First panel
Elephant is really cool looking.
Lion's derpy. Owl is just there.

>{Welcome to the Jungle}
You don't need to keep the joke up after two lines. We get it. We know the song. It was written by smarter people. Copypasting lyrics is something 12 year old authors do in fanfic.

>Well your the first vampire I met that quoted guns n' roses
...As if that's a common thing.
Also, pointing out lazy writing is not a joke nor does it make it not lazy.

>>137030914
>First line
The edginess isn't endearing. And... Again... Pointing out your "joke" isn't funny.

>thor love and ragnarok
Ah, yes, that classic movie everyone knows... And namedropping a reference is totally hilarious!

>Last panel
Gorilla shading looks cool, but what the fuck is that face? Why's it giving the viewer an "amirite" glance? Also, what is that woman's anatomy? Does she have the digestive tract of a ferret?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030863

Ladaria vs Deargdue part 1/7

[Assistant]
>>137044494
>I'm a genius! I'm a genius!
Look, I'm not going to knock you for being productive. That's a good problem to have, and it bumps the thread. My problem with you is the ego behind it for what's flawed work. Because it is flawed. Let's go over a few things.

>>137030863
>Ew, gross! Im only 10 years old!
What ten year old talks like this? Forget 'what 10 year old says no to boobs,' what 10 year old shouts their age?
You want to see the entire joke done better? Read the first issue of Dragon Ball, specifically the part where Bulma promises kud Goku a peek at her butt. Same joke. Goku actually acts like a kid. Actually has followup that makes sense.

>Thats it Skag! Your dead!
Why does she open the door? The hole that girl is looking through is big enough for her to crawl out of, so why does she need to do anything other than reach in and shank? It's an idiot move.

>Eat POCKET SAND
Ha ha meme funny ha ha serious and funny comics ha ha

>You're lucky I'm too busy to chase you!
Foremost, learn to draw legs.
Second. Busy doing... What? Busy standing there shouting? Fuck off.

>>137030893
>First panel
Elephant is really cool looking.
Lion's derpy. Owl is just there.

>{Welcome to the Jungle}
You don't need to keep the joke up after two lines. We get it. We know the song. It was written by smarter people. Copypasting lyrics is something 12 year old authors do in fanfic.

>Well your the first vampire I met that quoted guns n' roses
...As if that's a common thing.
Also, pointing out lazy writing is not a joke nor does it make it not lazy.

>>137030914
>First line
The edginess isn't endearing. And... Again... Pointing out your "joke" isn't funny.

>thor love and ragnarok
Ah, yes, that classic movie everyone knows... And namedropping a reference is totally hilarious!

>Last panel
Gorilla shading looks cool, but what the fuck is that face? Why's it giving the viewer an "amirite" glance? Also, what is that woman's anatomy? Does she have the digestive tract of a ferret?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030893

Ladaria vs Deargdue part 2/7

[Assistant]
>>137044494
>I'm a genius! I'm a genius!
Look, I'm not going to knock you for being productive. That's a good problem to have, and it bumps the thread. My problem with you is the ego behind it for what's flawed work. Because it is flawed. Let's go over a few things.

>>137030863
>Ew, gross! Im only 10 years old!
What ten year old talks like this? Forget 'what 10 year old says no to boobs,' what 10 year old shouts their age?
You want to see the entire joke done better? Read the first issue of Dragon Ball, specifically the part where Bulma promises kud Goku a peek at her butt. Same joke. Goku actually acts like a kid. Actually has followup that makes sense.

>Thats it Skag! Your dead!
Why does she open the door? The hole that girl is looking through is big enough for her to crawl out of, so why does she need to do anything other than reach in and shank? It's an idiot move.

>Eat POCKET SAND
Ha ha meme funny ha ha serious and funny comics ha ha

>You're lucky I'm too busy to chase you!
Foremost, learn to draw legs.
Second. Busy doing... What? Busy standing there shouting? Fuck off.

>>137030893
>First panel
Elephant is really cool looking.
Lion's derpy. Owl is just there.

>{Welcome to the Jungle}
You don't need to keep the joke up after two lines. We get it. We know the song. It was written by smarter people. Copypasting lyrics is something 12 year old authors do in fanfic.

>Well your the first vampire I met that quoted guns n' roses
...As if that's a common thing.
Also, pointing out lazy writing is not a joke nor does it make it not lazy.

>>137030914
>First line
The edginess isn't endearing. And... Again... Pointing out your "joke" isn't funny.

>thor love and ragnarok
Ah, yes, that classic movie everyone knows... And namedropping a reference is totally hilarious!

>Last panel
Gorilla shading looks cool, but what the fuck is that face? Why's it giving the viewer an "amirite" glance? Also, what is that woman's anatomy? Does she have the digestive tract of a ferret?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137044494
>I'm a genius! I'm a genius!
Look, I'm not going to knock you for being productive. That's a good problem to have, and it bumps the thread. My problem with you is the ego behind it for what's flawed work. Because it is flawed. Let's go over a few things.

>>137030863
>Ew, gross! Im only 10 years old!
What ten year old talks like this? Forget 'what 10 year old says no to boobs,' what 10 year old shouts their age?
You want to see the entire joke done better? Read the first issue of Dragon Ball, specifically the part where Bulma promises kud Goku a peek at her butt. Same joke. Goku actually acts like a kid. Actually has followup that makes sense.

>Thats it Skag! Your dead!
Why does she open the door? The hole that girl is looking through is big enough for her to crawl out of, so why does she need to do anything other than reach in and shank? It's an idiot move.

>Eat POCKET SAND
Ha ha meme funny ha ha serious and funny comics ha ha

>You're lucky I'm too busy to chase you!
Foremost, learn to draw legs.
Second. Busy doing... What? Busy standing there shouting? Fuck off.

>>137030893
>First panel
Elephant is really cool looking.
Lion's derpy. Owl is just there.

>{Welcome to the Jungle}
You don't need to keep the joke up after two lines. We get it. We know the song. It was written by smarter people. Copypasting lyrics is something 12 year old authors do in fanfic.

>Well your the first vampire I met that quoted guns n' roses
...As if that's a common thing.
Also, pointing out lazy writing is not a joke nor does it make it not lazy.

>>137030914
>First line
The edginess isn't endearing. And... Again... Pointing out your "joke" isn't funny.

>thor love and ragnarok
Ah, yes, that classic movie everyone knows... And namedropping a reference is totally hilarious!

>Last panel
Gorilla shading looks cool, but what the fuck is that face? Why's it giving the viewer an "amirite" glance? Also, what is that woman's anatomy? Does she have the digestive tract of a ferret?

[Assistant]
>>137045030
>>Ew, gross! Im only 10 years old!
>What ten year old talks like this?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137031008

daily reminder that i draw UBOSS DAILIES bad on purpose to add to the overall cartoon humor of the title, UBOSS NIGHTLIES however is a more serious comic and I will be drawing it a lot better than anything you have seen my draw in UBOSS DAILIES so far

also UBOSS DAILIES is coming to an end, new webcomics from me are coming soon!

the logo title for HERO HOUSE REMIX is still being designed, but THUMPERELLA and UBOSS NIGHTLIES title logo's are pretty much good to go.

[Assistant]
>>137031144

about to fix these logo designs for my original comics.

added tiny synopsis.

>>137045075
im doing a 50 page epilogue encore though...

>>137045030
thank you for your input anon.

>>137044957
i know right?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] Remember when bones said he'd stop his comic at #100? Pepridge farms remembers.

[Assistant]
>>137031144

about to fix these logo designs for my original comics.

added tiny synopsis.

>>137045075
im doing a 50 page epilogue encore though...

>>137045030
thank you for your input anon.

>>137044957
i know right?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137044494
>I'm a genius! I'm a genius!
Look, I'm not going to knock you for being productive. That's a good problem to have, and it bumps the thread. My problem with you is the ego behind it for what's flawed work. Because it is flawed. Let's go over a few things.

>>137030863
>Ew, gross! Im only 10 years old!
What ten year old talks like this? Forget 'what 10 year old says no to boobs,' what 10 year old shouts their age?
You want to see the entire joke done better? Read the first issue of Dragon Ball, specifically the part where Bulma promises kud Goku a peek at her butt. Same joke. Goku actually acts like a kid. Actually has followup that makes sense.

>Thats it Skag! Your dead!
Why does she open the door? The hole that girl is looking through is big enough for her to crawl out of, so why does she need to do anything other than reach in and shank? It's an idiot move.

>Eat POCKET SAND
Ha ha meme funny ha ha serious and funny comics ha ha

>You're lucky I'm too busy to chase you!
Foremost, learn to draw legs.
Second. Busy doing... What? Busy standing there shouting? Fuck off.

>>137030893
>First panel
Elephant is really cool looking.
Lion's derpy. Owl is just there.

>{Welcome to the Jungle}
You don't need to keep the joke up after two lines. We get it. We know the song. It was written by smarter people. Copypasting lyrics is something 12 year old authors do in fanfic.

>Well your the first vampire I met that quoted guns n' roses
...As if that's a common thing.
Also, pointing out lazy writing is not a joke nor does it make it not lazy.

>>137030914
>First line
The edginess isn't endearing. And... Again... Pointing out your "joke" isn't funny.

>thor love and ragnarok
Ah, yes, that classic movie everyone knows... And namedropping a reference is totally hilarious!

>Last panel
Gorilla shading looks cool, but what the fuck is that face? Why's it giving the viewer an "amirite" glance? Also, what is that woman's anatomy? Does she have the digestive tract of a ferret?

[Assistant]
>>137031144

about to fix these logo designs for my original comics.

added tiny synopsis.

>>137045075
im doing a 50 page epilogue encore though...

>>137045030
thank you for your input anon.

>>137044957
i know right?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137044602
>>137044664
You know that all the complaining about Bones is more autistic that the rat man himself right?

[Assistant]
>>137031144

about to fix these logo designs for my original comics.

added tiny synopsis.

>>137045075
im doing a 50 page epilogue encore though...

>>137045030
thank you for your input anon.

>>137044957
i know right?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030914

Ladaria vs Deargdue part 3/7

[Assistant]
>>137030933
>Damn, got to go full power to get past this locked door!
...Why? It's a door. This isn't Kingdom Hearts (zOMG I'm so funny I namedropped a piece of tangibly-related media!)

>>137030950
>First row
That's not how grenades work...

>Last row
First panel is cool. Second is stupid. "Oh my God! I'm getting shot at! Getting shot at is not good! And it's a good thing that while I'm standing here and shouting what's happening, none of his bullets are hitting me! How convenient!"

>>137030974
>First panel
What tank? Show, don't tell.

>Second panel
Seen the first dialogue's joke plenty of times done better. Immediately to mind springs the Old Man Henderson "I found out what the nasties are weak too" line, but personally my favorite is https://youtu.be/kvkJZxzv-TA [Embed] (zOMG REFERENCES ARE FUNNY! The people who made the material I am referencing aren't geniuses, I AM!)
Also, the dialogue composition needs worked. It's easy to read the explanation for how she survives before seeing even her reaction shot. If you were pressed to keep the dialogue, instead of the bottom-left panel, you should have had a panel of her getting up, showing the eye, and dedicated the bottom-right to the antagonist making their reaction.

>>137030993
>First row
Cool panel. Only thing I want to note is that the expressions whiplash a bit for the protag between this and how the prior page ended.

>Next row
Unneeded. Especially the dramatic, unrelated owl. You could have dedicated this to showing where the Deus Ex Machina in the last row comes from, because as it stands, the entire thing is rushed. It's just "oops, I'm defeated now I guess."

>>137031008
"Oh, yes, I'm going to arbitrarily keep the villain alive and not have the protagonists kill him because... Uhm... Reasons!"
This shit is boring and a stupid copout.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030933

Ladaria vs Deargdue part 4/7

[Assistant]
>>137030933
>Damn, got to go full power to get past this locked door!
...Why? It's a door. This isn't Kingdom Hearts (zOMG I'm so funny I namedropped a piece of tangibly-related media!)

>>137030950
>First row
That's not how grenades work...

>Last row
First panel is cool. Second is stupid. "Oh my God! I'm getting shot at! Getting shot at is not good! And it's a good thing that while I'm standing here and shouting what's happening, none of his bullets are hitting me! How convenient!"

>>137030974
>First panel
What tank? Show, don't tell.

>Second panel
Seen the first dialogue's joke plenty of times done better. Immediately to mind springs the Old Man Henderson "I found out what the nasties are weak too" line, but personally my favorite is https://youtu.be/kvkJZxzv-TA [Embed] (zOMG REFERENCES ARE FUNNY! The people who made the material I am referencing aren't geniuses, I AM!)
Also, the dialogue composition needs worked. It's easy to read the explanation for how she survives before seeing even her reaction shot. If you were pressed to keep the dialogue, instead of the bottom-left panel, you should have had a panel of her getting up, showing the eye, and dedicated the bottom-right to the antagonist making their reaction.

>>137030993
>First row
Cool panel. Only thing I want to note is that the expressions whiplash a bit for the protag between this and how the prior page ended.

>Next row
Unneeded. Especially the dramatic, unrelated owl. You could have dedicated this to showing where the Deus Ex Machina in the last row comes from, because as it stands, the entire thing is rushed. It's just "oops, I'm defeated now I guess."

>>137031008
"Oh, yes, I'm going to arbitrarily keep the villain alive and not have the protagonists kill him because... Uhm... Reasons!"
This shit is boring and a stupid copout.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030950

Ladaria vs Deargdue part 5/7

>>137030934

nah.

[Assistant]
>>137030933
>Damn, got to go full power to get past this locked door!
...Why? It's a door. This isn't Kingdom Hearts (zOMG I'm so funny I namedropped a piece of tangibly-related media!)

>>137030950
>First row
That's not how grenades work...

>Last row
First panel is cool. Second is stupid. "Oh my God! I'm getting shot at! Getting shot at is not good! And it's a good thing that while I'm standing here and shouting what's happening, none of his bullets are hitting me! How convenient!"

>>137030974
>First panel
What tank? Show, don't tell.

>Second panel
Seen the first dialogue's joke plenty of times done better. Immediately to mind springs the Old Man Henderson "I found out what the nasties are weak too" line, but personally my favorite is https://youtu.be/kvkJZxzv-TA [Embed] (zOMG REFERENCES ARE FUNNY! The people who made the material I am referencing aren't geniuses, I AM!)
Also, the dialogue composition needs worked. It's easy to read the explanation for how she survives before seeing even her reaction shot. If you were pressed to keep the dialogue, instead of the bottom-left panel, you should have had a panel of her getting up, showing the eye, and dedicated the bottom-right to the antagonist making their reaction.

>>137030993
>First row
Cool panel. Only thing I want to note is that the expressions whiplash a bit for the protag between this and how the prior page ended.

>Next row
Unneeded. Especially the dramatic, unrelated owl. You could have dedicated this to showing where the Deus Ex Machina in the last row comes from, because as it stands, the entire thing is rushed. It's just "oops, I'm defeated now I guess."

>>137031008
"Oh, yes, I'm going to arbitrarily keep the villain alive and not have the protagonists kill him because... Uhm... Reasons!"
This shit is boring and a stupid copout.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137030974

Ladaria vs Deargdue part 6/7

[Assistant]
>>137030933
>Damn, got to go full power to get past this locked door!
...Why? It's a door. This isn't Kingdom Hearts (zOMG I'm so funny I namedropped a piece of tangibly-related media!)

>>137030950
>First row
That's not how grenades work...

>Last row
First panel is cool. Second is stupid. "Oh my God! I'm getting shot at! Getting shot at is not good! And it's a good thing that while I'm standing here and shouting what's happening, none of his bullets are hitting me! How convenient!"

>>137030974
>First panel
What tank? Show, don't tell.

>Second panel
Seen the first dialogue's joke plenty of times done better. Immediately to mind springs the Old Man Henderson "I found out what the nasties are weak too" line, but personally my favorite is https://youtu.be/kvkJZxzv-TA [Embed] (zOMG REFERENCES ARE FUNNY! The people who made the material I am referencing aren't geniuses, I AM!)
Also, the dialogue composition needs worked. It's easy to read the explanation for how she survives before seeing even her reaction shot. If you were pressed to keep the dialogue, instead of the bottom-left panel, you should have had a panel of her getting up, showing the eye, and dedicated the bottom-right to the antagonist making their reaction.

>>137030993
>First row
Cool panel. Only thing I want to note is that the expressions whiplash a bit for the protag between this and how the prior page ended.

>Next row
Unneeded. Especially the dramatic, unrelated owl. You could have dedicated this to showing where the Deus Ex Machina in the last row comes from, because as it stands, the entire thing is rushed. It's just "oops, I'm defeated now I guess."

>>137031008
"Oh, yes, I'm going to arbitrarily keep the villain alive and not have the protagonists kill him because... Uhm... Reasons!"
This shit is boring and a stupid copout.


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>>137030993

Ladaria vs Deargdue part 7/7

[Assistant]
>>137030933
>Damn, got to go full power to get past this locked door!
...Why? It's a door. This isn't Kingdom Hearts (zOMG I'm so funny I namedropped a piece of tangibly-related media!)

>>137030950
>First row
That's not how grenades work...

>Last row
First panel is cool. Second is stupid. "Oh my God! I'm getting shot at! Getting shot at is not good! And it's a good thing that while I'm standing here and shouting what's happening, none of his bullets are hitting me! How convenient!"

>>137030974
>First panel
What tank? Show, don't tell.

>Second panel
Seen the first dialogue's joke plenty of times done better. Immediately to mind springs the Old Man Henderson "I found out what the nasties are weak too" line, but personally my favorite is https://youtu.be/kvkJZxzv-TA [Embed] (zOMG REFERENCES ARE FUNNY! The people who made the material I am referencing aren't geniuses, I AM!)
Also, the dialogue composition needs worked. It's easy to read the explanation for how she survives before seeing even her reaction shot. If you were pressed to keep the dialogue, instead of the bottom-left panel, you should have had a panel of her getting up, showing the eye, and dedicated the bottom-right to the antagonist making their reaction.

>>137030993
>First row
Cool panel. Only thing I want to note is that the expressions whiplash a bit for the protag between this and how the prior page ended.

>Next row
Unneeded. Especially the dramatic, unrelated owl. You could have dedicated this to showing where the Deus Ex Machina in the last row comes from, because as it stands, the entire thing is rushed. It's just "oops, I'm defeated now I guess."

>>137031008
"Oh, yes, I'm going to arbitrarily keep the villain alive and not have the protagonists kill him because... Uhm... Reasons!"
This shit is boring and a stupid copout.


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>>137044602
>>137044664
You know that all the complaining about Bones is more autistic that the rat man himself right?

[Assistant]
>>137044957
Hi Bones.


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>>137044957
Hi Bones.

[Assistant]
>>13704527957
What are you? Retarded?
Bones would never put this much effort into something.


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>>137044957
Hi Bones.

[Assistant]
>>137045279
>>137045320
Don't know how I messed up the (you) there. Maybe I was the retarded all along.


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>>13704527957
What are you? Retarded?
Bones would never put this much effort into something.

[Assistant]
>>137045279
>>137045320
Don't know how I messed up the (you) there. Maybe I was the retarded all along.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

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>>137030933
>Damn, got to go full power to get past this locked door!
...Why? It's a door. This isn't Kingdom Hearts (zOMG I'm so funny I namedropped a piece of tangibly-related media!)

>>137030950
>First row
That's not how grenades work...

>Last row
First panel is cool. Second is stupid. "Oh my God! I'm getting shot at! Getting shot at is not good! And it's a good thing that while I'm standing here and shouting what's happening, none of his bullets are hitting me! How convenient!"

>>137030974
>First panel
What tank? Show, don't tell.

>Second panel
Seen the first dialogue's joke plenty of times done better. Immediately to mind springs the Old Man Henderson "I found out what the nasties are weak too" line, but personally my favorite is https://youtu.be/kvkJZxzv-TA [Embed] (zOMG REFERENCES ARE FUNNY! The people who made the material I am referencing aren't geniuses, I AM!)
Also, the dialogue composition needs worked. It's easy to read the explanation for how she survives before seeing even her reaction shot. If you were pressed to keep the dialogue, instead of the bottom-left panel, you should have had a panel of her getting up, showing the eye, and dedicated the bottom-right to the antagonist making their reaction.

>>137030993
>First row
Cool panel. Only thing I want to note is that the expressions whiplash a bit for the protag between this and how the prior page ended.

>Next row
Unneeded. Especially the dramatic, unrelated owl. You could have dedicated this to showing where the Deus Ex Machina in the last row comes from, because as it stands, the entire thing is rushed. It's just "oops, I'm defeated now I guess."

>>137031008
"Oh, yes, I'm going to arbitrarily keep the villain alive and not have the protagonists kill him because... Uhm... Reasons!"
This shit is boring and a stupid copout.

[Assistant]
>>137045257

jesus christ anon

thank you for the in depth review...

i know you wont believe me when i tell you this, but uboss dailies is a shit post, a joke, a rushed mess, on purpose, all my projects after this one are going to be a more serious, well drawn affair that warrants this level of review, but your thinking way to much about what logically makes since in my cartoon rat girl comic, it only got sort of serious when ladaria and the gangs show up because they are from my more serious comics you will see in the future, and in ladarias case, my past comics like goth grill z where ladaria was a main character there to until all the other goth girls became vampires and she had to kill them...

i appreciate the review, i do, but its just a prank bro. lol


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>>137045257

jesus christ anon

thank you for the in depth review...

i know you wont believe me when i tell you this, but uboss dailies is a shit post, a joke, a rushed mess, on purpose, all my projects after this one are going to be a more serious, well drawn affair that warrants this level of review, but your thinking way to much about what logically makes since in my cartoon rat girl comic, it only got sort of serious when ladaria and the gangs show up because they are from my more serious comics you will see in the future, and in ladarias case, my past comics like goth grill z where ladaria was a main character there to until all the other goth girls became vampires and she had to kill them...

i appreciate the review, i do, but its just a prank bro. lol

[Assistant]
>>137045462
>uboss dailies is a shit post, a joke, a rushed mess, on purpose
"It's bad on purpose" is not a defense. It's a cope. Promising that you will eventually make something worthwhile is not a defense either because those allegedly better future projects don't exist. It's one step removed from "the story sounds better in my head," except that platitude requires a bit of self-awareness that you clearly don't have.


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>>137031144

about to fix these logo designs for my original comics.

added tiny synopsis.

>>137045075
im doing a 50 page epilogue encore though...

>>137045030
thank you for your input anon.

>>137044957
i know right?

[Assistant]
>>137045139
>>137045320
>>137045334
This new batch of anons is retarded


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[User]
>>13704527957
What are you? Retarded?
Bones would never put this much effort into something.

[Assistant]
>>137045139
>>137045320
>>137045334
This new batch of anons is retarded


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137045279
>>137045320
Don't know how I messed up the (you) there. Maybe I was the retarded all along.

[Assistant]
>>137045139
>>137045320
>>137045334
This new batch of anons is retarded


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] Would you accept flowers from Robin?

[Assistant]
>>137036077
No. Witches deserve the rope.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137045257

jesus christ anon

thank you for the in depth review...

i know you wont believe me when i tell you this, but uboss dailies is a shit post, a joke, a rushed mess, on purpose, all my projects after this one are going to be a more serious, well drawn affair that warrants this level of review, but your thinking way to much about what logically makes since in my cartoon rat girl comic, it only got sort of serious when ladaria and the gangs show up because they are from my more serious comics you will see in the future, and in ladarias case, my past comics like goth grill z where ladaria was a main character there to until all the other goth girls became vampires and she had to kill them...

i appreciate the review, i do, but its just a prank bro. lol

[Assistant]
>>137045462
What a horrible cope.
>>137045664
Bones is a /hyw/ oldhead, but he was always a retarded oldhead.


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[User]
>>137045139
>>137045320
>>137045334
This new batch of anons is retarded

[Assistant]
>>137045462
What a horrible cope.
>>137045664
Bones is a /hyw/ oldhead, but he was always a retarded oldhead.


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>TQ: Does your MC have a job? If so what is it and do they enjoy it? If not, why?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
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[Assistant]
>>137029817 (OP)
Cat-Fu saves the day.


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>>137045139
>>137045320
>>137045334
This new batch of anons is retarded

[Assistant]
>>137045664
I may be retarded but at least I draw


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>137031144

about to fix these logo designs for my original comics.

added tiny synopsis.

>>137045075
im doing a 50 page epilogue encore though...

>>137045030
thank you for your input anon.

>>137044957
i know right?

[Assistant]
>>137045139

Fixed the logos

you can read uboss nightlies now without having to tell you what it says

only problem is its impossible to have nightlies like like blood without having to over highlight what the blood is spelling out... ill figure that out later, before i launch the comic or start a kickstarter to make it a pay to read affair...

>>137045676
not a cope. the truth, believe it or not.


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[User]
>>137036077
No. Witches deserve the rope.

[Assistant]
>>137045139

Fixed the logos

you can read uboss nightlies now without having to tell you what it says

only problem is its impossible to have nightlies like like blood without having to over highlight what the blood is spelling out... ill figure that out later, before i launch the comic or start a kickstarter to make it a pay to read affair...

>>137045676
not a cope. the truth, believe it or not.