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>>136926349
>Teehee u proooved me right!
So you're an immature faggot who never intended to listen to feedback, you just wanted to cry because people didn't like ur speshal witta idea. Got it.
People didn't like your furfag OC because there's nothing to it. You are a dime-a-dozen, except you don't have anything to actually prove it.
And because you're typing like the type of annoying transexual that DESPERATELY wants to pretend that everyone is tsundere and not outright disgusted, I'm going to do you a favor and break down the problems with that stupid-as-fuck first page from a purely objective standpoint.
>A beautiful oppurtunity, we all agree, but fleeting?
There's nothing wrong with starting a story in the middle of a conversation, but doing it with a statement directly objecting a specific detail from some offscreen piece just leaves the audience lost. A good writer can use this to let the reader imply the prior conversation (i.e. a general opening a chapter by exclaiming "HOW MANY CANNONEERS!?"), but you aren't doing anything but saying "they're talking about something that's happening and discussing if that happening thing is quick or not," which is... just... nothing. Are they all deciding to fly down for Shamrock Shakes? Or maybe they're debating whether or not they want to binge watch Spongebob verses go to a baby shower. Nothing there clarifies anything, so we're left scratching our heads.

>I don't object, I just can't see why we NEED to realize it now.
Neither do we. Good on you for having that bit of confrontational attitude with that "I don't object" line (no, really, gives a bit of characterization), but without knowing what they're talking about, the stakes, and thus how nonchalant this character is acting, are lost.

>She is like a wild animal. Her thoughts are... nebulous.
Boy howdy, am I glad that I have all of these characters to explain things to me that I couldn't figure out by looking at a thought bubble later on!

1/2

[Assistant]
>>136919549
>>136922205
>>136926349
is cat, also to tl;dr the other anon there 'dont get too emotionally invested, your making yourself look the fool'
>>136926706
Going to stay long enough for more oc observations?


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>>136919549
>>136922205
>>136926349
is cat, also to tl;dr the other anon there 'dont get too emotionally invested, your making yourself look the fool'
>>136926706
Going to stay long enough for more oc observations?

[Assistant]
>>136926928
I plan on posting my own work later, so yes, but I'm relatively new to this general, so don't expect anything based on familiarity; purely at-a-glance and off-the-cuff from me if you're asking.


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>>136926349
>Teehee u proooved me right!
So you're an immature faggot who never intended to listen to feedback, you just wanted to cry because people didn't like ur speshal witta idea. Got it.
People didn't like your furfag OC because there's nothing to it. You are a dime-a-dozen, except you don't have anything to actually prove it.
And because you're typing like the type of annoying transexual that DESPERATELY wants to pretend that everyone is tsundere and not outright disgusted, I'm going to do you a favor and break down the problems with that stupid-as-fuck first page from a purely objective standpoint.
>A beautiful oppurtunity, we all agree, but fleeting?
There's nothing wrong with starting a story in the middle of a conversation, but doing it with a statement directly objecting a specific detail from some offscreen piece just leaves the audience lost. A good writer can use this to let the reader imply the prior conversation (i.e. a general opening a chapter by exclaiming "HOW MANY CANNONEERS!?"), but you aren't doing anything but saying "they're talking about something that's happening and discussing if that happening thing is quick or not," which is... just... nothing. Are they all deciding to fly down for Shamrock Shakes? Or maybe they're debating whether or not they want to binge watch Spongebob verses go to a baby shower. Nothing there clarifies anything, so we're left scratching our heads.

>I don't object, I just can't see why we NEED to realize it now.
Neither do we. Good on you for having that bit of confrontational attitude with that "I don't object" line (no, really, gives a bit of characterization), but without knowing what they're talking about, the stakes, and thus how nonchalant this character is acting, are lost.

>She is like a wild animal. Her thoughts are... nebulous.
Boy howdy, am I glad that I have all of these characters to explain things to me that I couldn't figure out by looking at a thought bubble later on!

1/2

[Assistant]
>>136926706
>>136926736
Okay because you spent all this time I will give you a serious response:
I posted that page (really more like a half-page) to ask about the artstyle, there's three lines and no context of course you are confused. I will read through your advice again but honestly it's mostly you just repeating that you don't know what's going on yet, but in an argumentative tone because you're mad.
>>136926736
>Yes. You will. Because there's no reason for me to think about you.
Anon, if there is anyone I am CERTAIN will read the next three pages it is you.


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>>136926706
>>136926349
2/2

>There's no reason to believe she could hold onto the impulse that brought her to us, to say nothing of whether or not she WANTS to.
...No shit.
This whole line could be summarized with "I don't know if she wants to be here or not," which, if you're going for a character that's meant to be the more cautious of the dichotomy, great. Contrast. But if it's anything less, this line is just redundant exposition.
And it's kinda stupid too in this long-winded form.
You just said that this outside character acts as a wild animal (implied to be impulsive), then question if she can hold onto impulse. Like... dude.
Let me give you a freebee here: switch the structure of the statement around. Have this character explain that she's unsure if the offscreen girl's impulsiveness will keep her around, recontextualize it to be a direct answer to why they need to "realize it now" (FOMO), and then use the animal comparison as a very brief justification at the end.

>Her nature is malleable, and she is clearly moving in the right direction
This. Is. Nothing.
Who are these people? Why do I care if they want some character we don't know to succeed with some unknown goal. What is their goal? What do they want?
I get what you're trying to do. You're trying to build intrigue. But it doesn't matter. It's three strangers talking about another stranger because... whatever. I can do that by eavesdropping any table at any of the bars in my area. (In fact that'd be more fun since the dialogue wouldn't be as dry).

>We only need to preserve her momentum.
Pretty much reads. "We promise we'll do something. Later."
I certainly hope. Otherwise the entire scene would have been actually useless instead of just too vague to have a point.

>Btw actually I will fade
Yes. You will. Because there's no reason for me to think about you.

[Assistant]
>>136926706
>>136926736
Okay because you spent all this time I will give you a serious response:
I posted that page (really more like a half-page) to ask about the artstyle, there's three lines and no context of course you are confused. I will read through your advice again but honestly it's mostly you just repeating that you don't know what's going on yet, but in an argumentative tone because you're mad.
>>136926736
>Yes. You will. Because there's no reason for me to think about you.
Anon, if there is anyone I am CERTAIN will read the next three pages it is you.


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>>136926706
>>136926349
2/2

>There's no reason to believe she could hold onto the impulse that brought her to us, to say nothing of whether or not she WANTS to.
...No shit.
This whole line could be summarized with "I don't know if she wants to be here or not," which, if you're going for a character that's meant to be the more cautious of the dichotomy, great. Contrast. But if it's anything less, this line is just redundant exposition.
And it's kinda stupid too in this long-winded form.
You just said that this outside character acts as a wild animal (implied to be impulsive), then question if she can hold onto impulse. Like... dude.
Let me give you a freebee here: switch the structure of the statement around. Have this character explain that she's unsure if the offscreen girl's impulsiveness will keep her around, recontextualize it to be a direct answer to why they need to "realize it now" (FOMO), and then use the animal comparison as a very brief justification at the end.

>Her nature is malleable, and she is clearly moving in the right direction
This. Is. Nothing.
Who are these people? Why do I care if they want some character we don't know to succeed with some unknown goal. What is their goal? What do they want?
I get what you're trying to do. You're trying to build intrigue. But it doesn't matter. It's three strangers talking about another stranger because... whatever. I can do that by eavesdropping any table at any of the bars in my area. (In fact that'd be more fun since the dialogue wouldn't be as dry).

>We only need to preserve her momentum.
Pretty much reads. "We promise we'll do something. Later."
I certainly hope. Otherwise the entire scene would have been actually useless instead of just too vague to have a point.

>Btw actually I will fade
Yes. You will. Because there's no reason for me to think about you.

[Assistant]
>>136926706
>>136926736
Okay because you spent all this time I will give you a serious response:
I posted that page (really more like a half-page) to ask about the artstyle, there's three lines and no context of course you are confused. I will read through your advice again but honestly it's mostly you just repeating that you don't know what's going on yet, but in an argumentative tone because you're mad.
>>136926736
>Yes. You will. Because there's no reason for me to think about you.
Anon, if there is anyone I am CERTAIN will read the next three pages it is you.


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>>136926706
>>136926736
Okay because you spent all this time I will give you a serious response:
I posted that page (really more like a half-page) to ask about the artstyle, there's three lines and no context of course you are confused. I will read through your advice again but honestly it's mostly you just repeating that you don't know what's going on yet, but in an argumentative tone because you're mad.
>>136926736
>Yes. You will. Because there's no reason for me to think about you.
Anon, if there is anyone I am CERTAIN will read the next three pages it is you.

[Assistant]
>>136927079
>Uhm... ackshually I meant to do THIS, and you just didn't know that because U R MAD.
I didn't comment on the artstyle because I, and I do not mean to sound condescending, this is 100% honest, thought that it was unfinished, and you were more asking if you were in the right direction in terms of character design/composition, which I didn't feel fair to criticize.

>Anon, if there is anyone I am CERTAIN will read the next three pages it is you.
This "teehee no u liiiiiek me :3" shit is cringe and cope.
I won't. I'm not invested in your hook. I gave my opinion, and you are throwing a crybaby fit because it's not praise, so there's no point because I do not have faith you will get better.


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>>136927079
>Uhm... ackshually I meant to do THIS, and you just didn't know that because U R MAD.
I didn't comment on the artstyle because I, and I do not mean to sound condescending, this is 100% honest, thought that it was unfinished, and you were more asking if you were in the right direction in terms of character design/composition, which I didn't feel fair to criticize.

>Anon, if there is anyone I am CERTAIN will read the next three pages it is you.
This "teehee no u liiiiiek me :3" shit is cringe and cope.
I won't. I'm not invested in your hook. I gave my opinion, and you are throwing a crybaby fit because it's not praise, so there's no point because I do not have faith you will get better.

[Assistant]
>>136927164
>Uhm... ackshually I meant to do THIS, and you just didn't know that because U R MAD.
Yes that's why I asked about the art and yes you are obviously mad.
>thought that it was unfinished
Understandable, I don't want it to look polished I just want it to look passable and not too empty since I'm trying to get it done quickly.
>This "teehee no u liiiiiek me :3"
You've invested more time into one page than it took me to draw it so I just expect you to read it, doesn't really matter if you like it or not.

Look, I appreciate that behind your anger there is some genuine intent to help. I don't know how else to tell you this but I will probably not take your advice seriously because your complaint is longer than the entirety of the work you've seen.


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>>136926928
I plan on posting my own work later, so yes, but I'm relatively new to this general, so don't expect anything based on familiarity; purely at-a-glance and off-the-cuff from me if you're asking.

[Assistant]
>>136926995
I can give you some quick doodles, I can plunk down an actual piece of art in the morning since im exhausted. Also, you two should kiss at this point.


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>>136927164
>Uhm... ackshually I meant to do THIS, and you just didn't know that because U R MAD.
Yes that's why I asked about the art and yes you are obviously mad.
>thought that it was unfinished
Understandable, I don't want it to look polished I just want it to look passable and not too empty since I'm trying to get it done quickly.
>This "teehee no u liiiiiek me :3"
You've invested more time into one page than it took me to draw it so I just expect you to read it, doesn't really matter if you like it or not.

Look, I appreciate that behind your anger there is some genuine intent to help. I don't know how else to tell you this but I will probably not take your advice seriously because your complaint is longer than the entirety of the work you've seen.

[Assistant]
>>136927294
Whatever you say. I'm not even reading past your first line.

>>136927429
I'm second-guessing if the upper-middle is the same character given the ear and cheekbones, given that you didn't put any hair, not even at a cheated angle.
The ear altogether is a bit fucky. It looks great in the top-middle (pointed ears give a strong sense of direction when used right, which, given the expression and focus, works), though it does look a bit like it's coming out of his cheekbone, which is odd when looking at the expression right below it.
Speaking of, that's probably the one I have the most problems with. The expression is great (a bit of a distant, haunting look), skull shape is great. Collar flair is well-defined. Not too sure what that hair is doing, because with the ear it looks like Sonic the Hedgehog got caught in a house fire, and everything below said collar, sans a hand pinching the hourglass, is a visual mess.

Again, I don't know shit about what you're doing here, but the guy here is triangular and slim. The top images all convey a very clear sense of direction for where his limbs and head want to go. The cool thing about your sketches here is that every one of them can be followed by the eye following two lines (I'm not going to give a definitive answer for what those are, but pic related is where my eyes followed). To put it another way, your character's body language wants to be pointy. But this bottom-middle doesn't carry that strong sense of direction.


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>>136926995
I can give you some quick doodles, I can plunk down an actual piece of art in the morning since im exhausted. Also, you two should kiss at this point.

[Assistant]
>>136927294
Whatever you say. I'm not even reading past your first line.

>>136927429
I'm second-guessing if the upper-middle is the same character given the ear and cheekbones, given that you didn't put any hair, not even at a cheated angle.
The ear altogether is a bit fucky. It looks great in the top-middle (pointed ears give a strong sense of direction when used right, which, given the expression and focus, works), though it does look a bit like it's coming out of his cheekbone, which is odd when looking at the expression right below it.
Speaking of, that's probably the one I have the most problems with. The expression is great (a bit of a distant, haunting look), skull shape is great. Collar flair is well-defined. Not too sure what that hair is doing, because with the ear it looks like Sonic the Hedgehog got caught in a house fire, and everything below said collar, sans a hand pinching the hourglass, is a visual mess.

Again, I don't know shit about what you're doing here, but the guy here is triangular and slim. The top images all convey a very clear sense of direction for where his limbs and head want to go. The cool thing about your sketches here is that every one of them can be followed by the eye following two lines (I'm not going to give a definitive answer for what those are, but pic related is where my eyes followed). To put it another way, your character's body language wants to be pointy. But this bottom-middle doesn't carry that strong sense of direction.


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>>136919527

just scribbled out some chicken scratch of the next page: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-110-wip-1-960015993

spoilers.

ill start working on it later on tonight.

[Assistant]
>>136925042

inking: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-110-wip-3-960034616


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>>136925042

inking: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-110-wip-3-960034616

[Assistant]
>>136927767
coloring: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-110-wip-6-960039422


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>>136927164
>Uhm... ackshually I meant to do THIS, and you just didn't know that because U R MAD.
Yes that's why I asked about the art and yes you are obviously mad.
>thought that it was unfinished
Understandable, I don't want it to look polished I just want it to look passable and not too empty since I'm trying to get it done quickly.
>This "teehee no u liiiiiek me :3"
You've invested more time into one page than it took me to draw it so I just expect you to read it, doesn't really matter if you like it or not.

Look, I appreciate that behind your anger there is some genuine intent to help. I don't know how else to tell you this but I will probably not take your advice seriously because your complaint is longer than the entirety of the work you've seen.

[Assistant]
>>136927294
>You've invested more time into one page than it took me to draw it
That's not something to brag about.


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>>136909331

Just finished a new page, hope yall like it!

[Assistant]
>>136919527

just finished a new page! check it out lol


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>>136919527

just finished a new page! check it out lol

[Assistant]
>>136929137

same energy


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>>136929137

same energy

[Assistant]
>>136929270
>tfw /hyw/ has this energy too rn


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>>136851759 (OP)
It was laid to rest two years ago and now merely deals in random escapades.
https://tapas.io/episode/2175817

[Assistant]
>>136853815
The show must go on.
https://tapas.io/episode/2831534


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>>136927294
Whatever you say. I'm not even reading past your first line.

>>136927429
I'm second-guessing if the upper-middle is the same character given the ear and cheekbones, given that you didn't put any hair, not even at a cheated angle.
The ear altogether is a bit fucky. It looks great in the top-middle (pointed ears give a strong sense of direction when used right, which, given the expression and focus, works), though it does look a bit like it's coming out of his cheekbone, which is odd when looking at the expression right below it.
Speaking of, that's probably the one I have the most problems with. The expression is great (a bit of a distant, haunting look), skull shape is great. Collar flair is well-defined. Not too sure what that hair is doing, because with the ear it looks like Sonic the Hedgehog got caught in a house fire, and everything below said collar, sans a hand pinching the hourglass, is a visual mess.

Again, I don't know shit about what you're doing here, but the guy here is triangular and slim. The top images all convey a very clear sense of direction for where his limbs and head want to go. The cool thing about your sketches here is that every one of them can be followed by the eye following two lines (I'm not going to give a definitive answer for what those are, but pic related is where my eyes followed). To put it another way, your character's body language wants to be pointy. But this bottom-middle doesn't carry that strong sense of direction.

[Assistant]
>>136927745
Huh, I do appreciative it, Actually the best go at my art in awhile. The only thing that connects the doodles together is more expressions since this character usually has a mask drilled into his face. All of them save the skeleton character are indeed the same person! Your dead on about the ear since I never have a fucking clue where to put the god damn things, let along if they're stupid long.

Also im aware of how fucking broken the hand looks in pic related, the mask is also a pain no matter what I do with it.
>>136931753
If I have a brain worm to make the things? sure they're fun. Otherwise about a good 85% of the time? FUCK NO.


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[User] Anons, do you enjoy the process of making a webcomic, or do you see it as a painful path to the results?

[Assistant]
>>136927745
Huh, I do appreciative it, Actually the best go at my art in awhile. The only thing that connects the doodles together is more expressions since this character usually has a mask drilled into his face. All of them save the skeleton character are indeed the same person! Your dead on about the ear since I never have a fucking clue where to put the god damn things, let along if they're stupid long.

Also im aware of how fucking broken the hand looks in pic related, the mask is also a pain no matter what I do with it.
>>136931753
If I have a brain worm to make the things? sure they're fun. Otherwise about a good 85% of the time? FUCK NO.


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[User] Anons, do you enjoy the process of making a webcomic, or do you see it as a painful path to the results?

[Assistant]
>>136931753
Pain is good, suffering is learning, being comfortable for too long will make you stagnant.


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>>136927745
Huh, I do appreciative it, Actually the best go at my art in awhile. The only thing that connects the doodles together is more expressions since this character usually has a mask drilled into his face. All of them save the skeleton character are indeed the same person! Your dead on about the ear since I never have a fucking clue where to put the god damn things, let along if they're stupid long.

Also im aware of how fucking broken the hand looks in pic related, the mask is also a pain no matter what I do with it.
>>136931753
If I have a brain worm to make the things? sure they're fun. Otherwise about a good 85% of the time? FUCK NO.

[Assistant]
>>136932387
>the mask is also a pain no matter what I do with it.
You think of simplifying it?


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>>136932387
>the mask is also a pain no matter what I do with it.
You think of simplifying it?

[Assistant]
>>136933253
Less complexity more 'trying to put a solid metal-like object over the mouth and nose.' ive gone in rather autistic detail over it but its atleast Right on the skin tight save for the nose and mouth-ish area, screwed into the cheek and jaw area and shaped to do that. Unfortunately it results in me having its other-side poke out in awkward angles. Honestly another symptom of my terrible grasp in perspective, highly likely from the lack of practice at alternate angles and my slightly skewed vision.


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>>136919527

just finished a new page! check it out lol

[Assistant]
>>136929137

scribbled out the chicken scratch of the next page: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-111-wip-2-960085299

SKREEOK-OK'-OK'-OK'~! KREEEEK-EK'-EK'EK'~! KIK-IK'-IK'-IK'~!

research pictures related! lol oh and uh... spoilers! lol


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>>136929137

scribbled out the chicken scratch of the next page: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-111-wip-2-960085299

SKREEOK-OK'-OK'-OK'~! KREEEEK-EK'-EK'EK'~! KIK-IK'-IK'-IK'~!

research pictures related! lol oh and uh... spoilers! lol

[Assistant]
>>136933465

only research i did for how to draw pterodactyl on fire by the way.


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>>136929137

scribbled out the chicken scratch of the next page: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-111-wip-2-960085299

SKREEOK-OK'-OK'-OK'~! KREEEEK-EK'-EK'EK'~! KIK-IK'-IK'-IK'~!

research pictures related! lol oh and uh... spoilers! lol

[Assistant]
>>136933465

'started inking: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-111-wip-3-960088932

will update page in link with progress but im in no hurry, mainly because im thinking about animating this page and holding back on a shit load of details to make it easier to animate it.....


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[User] Back in the game. Second panel is pure /v/ core

[Assistant]
>>136933909
lol, either your humor is getting better or your characters are really starting to grow on me, either way good stuff man!


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>>136933909
lol, either your humor is getting better or your characters are really starting to grow on me, either way good stuff man!

[Assistant]
>>136933925
Ty


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>>136933465

'started inking: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-111-wip-3-960088932

will update page in link with progress but im in no hurry, mainly because im thinking about animating this page and holding back on a shit load of details to make it easier to animate it.....

[Assistant]
>>136933772

inking done about to color..... and maybe animate..... maybe....


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>>136933772

inking done about to color..... and maybe animate..... maybe....

[Assistant]
>>136935123

colors wip: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-111-wip-11-960104416


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>>136935123

colors wip: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-111-wip-11-960104416

[Assistant]
>>136935518

gtg, will finish this when i get back home


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[User]
>>136926349
>Teehee u proooved me right!
So you're an immature faggot who never intended to listen to feedback, you just wanted to cry because people didn't like ur speshal witta idea. Got it.
People didn't like your furfag OC because there's nothing to it. You are a dime-a-dozen, except you don't have anything to actually prove it.
And because you're typing like the type of annoying transexual that DESPERATELY wants to pretend that everyone is tsundere and not outright disgusted, I'm going to do you a favor and break down the problems with that stupid-as-fuck first page from a purely objective standpoint.
>A beautiful oppurtunity, we all agree, but fleeting?
There's nothing wrong with starting a story in the middle of a conversation, but doing it with a statement directly objecting a specific detail from some offscreen piece just leaves the audience lost. A good writer can use this to let the reader imply the prior conversation (i.e. a general opening a chapter by exclaiming "HOW MANY CANNONEERS!?"), but you aren't doing anything but saying "they're talking about something that's happening and discussing if that happening thing is quick or not," which is... just... nothing. Are they all deciding to fly down for Shamrock Shakes? Or maybe they're debating whether or not they want to binge watch Spongebob verses go to a baby shower. Nothing there clarifies anything, so we're left scratching our heads.

>I don't object, I just can't see why we NEED to realize it now.
Neither do we. Good on you for having that bit of confrontational attitude with that "I don't object" line (no, really, gives a bit of characterization), but without knowing what they're talking about, the stakes, and thus how nonchalant this character is acting, are lost.

>She is like a wild animal. Her thoughts are... nebulous.
Boy howdy, am I glad that I have all of these characters to explain things to me that I couldn't figure out by looking at a thought bubble later on!

1/2

[Assistant]
>>136926706
>>136926736

Furfag annihilated by effort poster, total decimation.


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>>136926706
>>136926349
2/2

>There's no reason to believe she could hold onto the impulse that brought her to us, to say nothing of whether or not she WANTS to.
...No shit.
This whole line could be summarized with "I don't know if she wants to be here or not," which, if you're going for a character that's meant to be the more cautious of the dichotomy, great. Contrast. But if it's anything less, this line is just redundant exposition.
And it's kinda stupid too in this long-winded form.
You just said that this outside character acts as a wild animal (implied to be impulsive), then question if she can hold onto impulse. Like... dude.
Let me give you a freebee here: switch the structure of the statement around. Have this character explain that she's unsure if the offscreen girl's impulsiveness will keep her around, recontextualize it to be a direct answer to why they need to "realize it now" (FOMO), and then use the animal comparison as a very brief justification at the end.

>Her nature is malleable, and she is clearly moving in the right direction
This. Is. Nothing.
Who are these people? Why do I care if they want some character we don't know to succeed with some unknown goal. What is their goal? What do they want?
I get what you're trying to do. You're trying to build intrigue. But it doesn't matter. It's three strangers talking about another stranger because... whatever. I can do that by eavesdropping any table at any of the bars in my area. (In fact that'd be more fun since the dialogue wouldn't be as dry).

>We only need to preserve her momentum.
Pretty much reads. "We promise we'll do something. Later."
I certainly hope. Otherwise the entire scene would have been actually useless instead of just too vague to have a point.

>Btw actually I will fade
Yes. You will. Because there's no reason for me to think about you.

[Assistant]
>>136926706
>>136926736

Furfag annihilated by effort poster, total decimation.


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[User]
>>136919527

just finished a new page! check it out lol

[Assistant]
>>136929137

new page... the words kinda ruin it... but you get the idea... it... actually needs more words like the gun sound effects from the irish sharks shooting at it in mid air... but oh well...

same energy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TN7Lv0PR4Q8&ab_channel=JudasPriestVEVO [Embed]


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[User]
>threads have devolved to just bones and betz shitposting
>new user seems to be also a lolcow
>everyone is gone

a sad end to hyw.

[Assistant]
>>136937703
Don't act so smug yet. You didn't kill shit, everyone will come back when it's time.


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[User]
>threads have devolved to just bones and betz shitposting
>new user seems to be also a lolcow
>everyone is gone

a sad end to hyw.

[Assistant]
>>136937703
>a sad end to hyw.
Oh, it must be another day that ends in "y"


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[User]
>>136937703
Don't act so smug yet. You didn't kill shit, everyone will come back when it's time.

[Assistant]
>>136938312
I am not the shitposter. I am not happy it's dead. Just recognize it is.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>threads have devolved to just bones and betz shitposting
>new user seems to be also a lolcow
>everyone is gone

a sad end to hyw.

[Assistant]
>>136937703
I'm coloring in a page.


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[User]
>threads have devolved to just bones and betz shitposting
>new user seems to be also a lolcow
>everyone is gone

a sad end to hyw.

[Assistant]
>>136937703
These threads have just been targeted repeatedly in the past year or so, I think it's more of a reflection on the state of /co/ overall with more and more shitty, disingenuous users coming in to fuck shit up with no repercussions to push them back.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>threads have devolved to just bones and betz shitposting
>new user seems to be also a lolcow
>everyone is gone

a sad end to hyw.

[Assistant]
>>136937703
Pretty much what >>136938792 said. I noticed in the crab tournament threads too, there is simply a lack of real, intense action by the moderators to fight back the shitposters and grifters. People leave and migrate then to the discords, etc.

I will still post on hyw but now only to dump my update and leave like most artists do. Place is dead.


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[User]
>>136937703
These threads have just been targeted repeatedly in the past year or so, I think it's more of a reflection on the state of /co/ overall with more and more shitty, disingenuous users coming in to fuck shit up with no repercussions to push them back.

[Assistant]
>>136937703
Pretty much what >>136938792 said. I noticed in the crab tournament threads too, there is simply a lack of real, intense action by the moderators to fight back the shitposters and grifters. People leave and migrate then to the discords, etc.

I will still post on hyw but now only to dump my update and leave like most artists do. Place is dead.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>threads have devolved to just bones and betz shitposting
>new user seems to be also a lolcow
>everyone is gone

a sad end to hyw.

[Assistant]
>>136937703
Everybody is just busy with the crab event


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>>136929137

new page... the words kinda ruin it... but you get the idea... it... actually needs more words like the gun sound effects from the irish sharks shooting at it in mid air... but oh well...

same energy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TN7Lv0PR4Q8&ab_channel=JudasPriestVEVO [Embed]

[Assistant]
>>136937396

feeling cute, might uncuck spider man tonight before i draw the next page of my webcomic!

first i need to go eat dinner, then im going to try and undo some damage disney marvel did...

Paul: "This isn't like you at all spider man."

Peter: "You dont get to knock up my woman and tell me what im like you piece of shit!"

Paul: "So your just going to kill me, in front of my kids, that I had with MJ?"

Peter: "Give me one good reason why I shouldn't?"

Paul: "Im going to tell you the truth peter."
"she threw herself onto me"
"shes a super model and im just some random guy you know"

Peter: "She... She just?

Paul: "Yes, she s a total worthless whore, always has been, shes cheated on you so many time peter you probably know what the whole city tastes like"

"you deserve somone better than MJ, a filthy worthless whore, someone who would never cheat on you, someone that would of waited for you forever, someone who would of died waiting for you.... some one like--"

Peter: "BLACK CAT!"

"My god this whole time ive been wasting my time with that worthless slut MJ when my soulmate black cat was fighting along side me tis whole time..."

"Thanks paul, thanks for helping me realize that..."

Paul: "Bro's before hoes dude."


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>>136939986 →
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>>136939986 →

[Assistant]
>>136940003
Why?


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>>136939986 →
>>136939986 →
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[Assistant]
>>136940003
why?


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>>136939986 →
>>136939986 →
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[Assistant]
>>136940003
Idiot


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>>136939986 →
>>136939986 →
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[Assistant]
>>136940003
Absolute niggerfaggot of a newfaggot that you are


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136937396

feeling cute, might uncuck spider man tonight before i draw the next page of my webcomic!

first i need to go eat dinner, then im going to try and undo some damage disney marvel did...

Paul: "This isn't like you at all spider man."

Peter: "You dont get to knock up my woman and tell me what im like you piece of shit!"

Paul: "So your just going to kill me, in front of my kids, that I had with MJ?"

Peter: "Give me one good reason why I shouldn't?"

Paul: "Im going to tell you the truth peter."
"she threw herself onto me"
"shes a super model and im just some random guy you know"

Peter: "She... She just?

Paul: "Yes, she s a total worthless whore, always has been, shes cheated on you so many time peter you probably know what the whole city tastes like"

"you deserve somone better than MJ, a filthy worthless whore, someone who would never cheat on you, someone that would of waited for you forever, someone who would of died waiting for you.... some one like--"

Peter: "BLACK CAT!"

"My god this whole time ive been wasting my time with that worthless slut MJ when my soulmate black cat was fighting along side me tis whole time..."

"Thanks paul, thanks for helping me realize that..."

Paul: "Bro's before hoes dude."

[Assistant]
>>136939973

line art bump, gonna color this the exact way it is in the current run of zeb wells spiderman and slap some word balloons on it and its done


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[User]
>>136939973

line art bump, gonna color this the exact way it is in the current run of zeb wells spiderman and slap some word balloons on it and its done

[Assistant]
>>136941781

its gonna have all the same highlights and everything gonna be super easy to make it look like the comic and i will do clean ups on the line art when im done coloring


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[User]
>>136941781

its gonna have all the same highlights and everything gonna be super easy to make it look like the comic and i will do clean ups on the line art when im done coloring

[Assistant]
>>136942021

i dont want to keep posting wips, the final page art will be updated here: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/Uncuck-spiderman-Wip-8-960152935

already made some more progress on the flat colors starting to look like the actual comic book now..


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[User]
>>136941781

its gonna have all the same highlights and everything gonna be super easy to make it look like the comic and i will do clean ups on the line art when im done coloring

[Assistant]
>>136942021

one last wip bump before the finished page


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[User]
>>136942021

one last wip bump before the finished page

[Assistant]
>>136943021

ok, the page art is officially done because im done fucking with it, i dont even have time for this i have my own comic books to work on lol

time for word balloons....


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[User]
>>136942021

one last wip bump before the finished page

[Assistant]
>>136943021
Stop posting your WIP dude, nobody gives a shit about every single stage of your creative process. Posy the first sketch and then the finished work if you have to, anything more is fucking annoying


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[User]
>>136943021

ok, the page art is officially done because im done fucking with it, i dont even have time for this i have my own comic books to work on lol

time for word balloons....

[Assistant]
>>136943661

I did it... I uncucked spider man! Holy shit... lol

this was fun to make!

>>136943707
relax, im done, its over lol


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[User]
>>136943021
Stop posting your WIP dude, nobody gives a shit about every single stage of your creative process. Posy the first sketch and then the finished work if you have to, anything more is fucking annoying

[Assistant]
>>136943661

I did it... I uncucked spider man! Holy shit... lol

this was fun to make!

>>136943707
relax, im done, its over lol


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136943661

I did it... I uncucked spider man! Holy shit... lol

this was fun to make!

>>136943707
relax, im done, its over lol

[Assistant]
>>136944350

i cut the "why shouldn't i kill you" part because thats something spiderman would never say... but he sure did feel like killing paul after finding out he was breeding MJ, not once, but twice! OUCH!


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136943661

I did it... I uncucked spider man! Holy shit... lol

this was fun to make!

>>136943707
relax, im done, its over lol

[Assistant]
>>136944350

Fixed a spelling error: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/Uncuck-Spider-Man-Wip-19-960165985

>WAITED*


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136943661

I did it... I uncucked spider man! Holy shit... lol

this was fun to make!

>>136943707
relax, im done, its over lol

[Assistant]
>>136944350
>relax, im done, its over lol
>proceeds to make two more posts about minor fixes
Fucking hell dude


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[User]
>>136940003
Why?

[Assistant]
>>136940042
>>136940368
>>136940467
>>136940822
Because after thread 901 died, there was no /hyw/ thread for 2 days, so I had to bake this one.
>Someone else can do it then.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136940003
why?

[Assistant]
>>136940042
>>136940368
>>136940467
>>136940822
Because after thread 901 died, there was no /hyw/ thread for 2 days, so I had to bake this one.
>Someone else can do it then.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136940003
Idiot

[Assistant]
>>136940042
>>136940368
>>136940467
>>136940822
Because after thread 901 died, there was no /hyw/ thread for 2 days, so I had to bake this one.
>Someone else can do it then.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136940003
Absolute niggerfaggot of a newfaggot that you are

[Assistant]
>>136940042
>>136940368
>>136940467
>>136940822
Because after thread 901 died, there was no /hyw/ thread for 2 days, so I had to bake this one.
>Someone else can do it then.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136944350
>relax, im done, its over lol
>proceeds to make two more posts about minor fixes
Fucking hell dude

[Assistant]
>>136944987
bones is a retard and kills threads, what's new.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] betz and bones in such close proximity are a 1-2 combo of retarded these threads can't ever recover from

[Assistant]
>>136945166
Stop trying to derail the thread with your gay little slapfest you off-topic sperg.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136940042
>>136940368
>>136940467
>>136940822
Because after thread 901 died, there was no /hyw/ thread for 2 days, so I had to bake this one.
>Someone else can do it then.

[Assistant]
>>136945055
This thread wasn't saying yet, though? Not sure what your thinking was there
>>136945166
Shut the fuck up lolcow- fag wannabe. Go back to youtube


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] betz and bones in such close proximity are a 1-2 combo of retarded these threads can't ever recover from

[Assistant]
>>136945055
This thread wasn't saying yet, though? Not sure what your thinking was there
>>136945166
Shut the fuck up lolcow- fag wannabe. Go back to youtube


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136945055
This thread wasn't saying yet, though? Not sure what your thinking was there
>>136945166
Shut the fuck up lolcow- fag wannabe. Go back to youtube

[Assistant]
>>136945237
*saging


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[User]
>>136945055
This thread wasn't saying yet, though? Not sure what your thinking was there
>>136945166
Shut the fuck up lolcow- fag wannabe. Go back to youtube

[Assistant]
>>136945237
I'm guessing you are so new to 4chan you don't know what a bump limit is.
>330-340 posts - You make the new thread and let the old one die.
>343 posts - The thread will die on its own.
This way there is always a thread up, and people don't have to wait fucking days for the bystander effect to resolve itself.
>/co/ is a higher frequency board, surely you know how this works anon... r-right?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136945237
I'm guessing you are so new to 4chan you don't know what a bump limit is.
>330-340 posts - You make the new thread and let the old one die.
>343 posts - The thread will die on its own.
This way there is always a thread up, and people don't have to wait fucking days for the bystander effect to resolve itself.
>/co/ is a higher frequency board, surely you know how this works anon... r-right?

[Assistant]
>>136945343
Oh shit, does /co/ not have a bump limit?
>My bad. Please kindly disregard the fact that I suck cocks.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136945237
I'm guessing you are so new to 4chan you don't know what a bump limit is.
>330-340 posts - You make the new thread and let the old one die.
>343 posts - The thread will die on its own.
This way there is always a thread up, and people don't have to wait fucking days for the bystander effect to resolve itself.
>/co/ is a higher frequency board, surely you know how this works anon... r-right?

[Assistant]
>>136945343
>>136945402
It varies board-by-board. When the post count gets italicized, then it's at the bump limit.
JSON reads that the bump for this board is 500.
https://a.4cdn.org/boards.json


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136945343
Oh shit, does /co/ not have a bump limit?
>My bad. Please kindly disregard the fact that I suck cocks.

[Assistant]
>>136945343
>>136945402
It varies board-by-board. When the post count gets italicized, then it's at the bump limit.
JSON reads that the bump for this board is 500.
https://a.4cdn.org/boards.json


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136945237
I'm guessing you are so new to 4chan you don't know what a bump limit is.
>330-340 posts - You make the new thread and let the old one die.
>343 posts - The thread will die on its own.
This way there is always a thread up, and people don't have to wait fucking days for the bystander effect to resolve itself.
>/co/ is a higher frequency board, surely you know how this works anon... r-right?

[Assistant]
>>136945343
First. Are you such a big, smooth-brained newfag that you don't know that /co/ has a bump limit of 500?
Second. We don't make immediate new threads the moment a /hyw/ thread reaches bump limit. These rampant, successive threads always cause for shitposters and grifters to fill the threads up as the regulars are too busy working on their comics in the meanwhile to actually post. It's a unwritten thing to just make a new thread 3-5 days after the last one died to allow for people to come in more freshly and prepared with new content and material to discuss.
Third. You are a newfag to /hyw/ who already thinks he has to take it upon himself to direct the way stuff should go. That isn't how it should work. You're not helping the threads and are actively making it more chaotic. Newfags should really stop being so bold and just LURK MOAR. Because you have no understanding of the culture here, yet thinks he should be in charge.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136945343
First. Are you such a big, smooth-brained newfag that you don't know that /co/ has a bump limit of 500?
Second. We don't make immediate new threads the moment a /hyw/ thread reaches bump limit. These rampant, successive threads always cause for shitposters and grifters to fill the threads up as the regulars are too busy working on their comics in the meanwhile to actually post. It's a unwritten thing to just make a new thread 3-5 days after the last one died to allow for people to come in more freshly and prepared with new content and material to discuss.
Third. You are a newfag to /hyw/ who already thinks he has to take it upon himself to direct the way stuff should go. That isn't how it should work. You're not helping the threads and are actively making it more chaotic. Newfags should really stop being so bold and just LURK MOAR. Because you have no understanding of the culture here, yet thinks he should be in charge.

[Assistant]
>>136945489
see
>>136945402


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136945343
Oh shit, does /co/ not have a bump limit?
>My bad. Please kindly disregard the fact that I suck cocks.

[Assistant]
>>136945489
see
>>136945402


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136888234
Practice cars. It's easy, they're everywhere. Cars seem to have the same effect on artists as bikes. Everyone knows the rough lines, but ask someone to draw one from memory and all you get is a mechanically impossible abomination. But the weird thing is, most people seem to be able to draw semi-functional aircraft. Sure, the perspective can get wonky, but "tube with wings" seems to be something our minds can parse easily.

[Assistant]
>>136893233
Practiced the car. Did the rest of the page too.

Fuck coloring. Probably going to do that cheap-ass shit some comics do of just making the first page of each chapter color and then doing the rest black and white.
Not going to cope with any of that stupid "it's supposed to be bad on purpose" excuses or pretend like it gives it some charming marker look. Just going to do one page so that when more cat characters get introduced, the audience knows what colors they're supposed to be.


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[User]
>>136945489
see
>>136945402

[Assistant]
>>136945770
Take the L bro


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[User]
>>136945489
see
>>136945402

[Assistant]
>>136945770
It changes nothing, dumbass.
You are a newfag. You have no idea how /hyw/ culture works and yet thinks he should lead it. You fuck up. Please never do this again.

Also, your comic looks like absolute schizo-tier bullshit with bad, unintelligible artwork.


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[User]
I'm thinking about starting a webcomic because I'm starving creatively. I'm always working, I never stretch my legs anymore.
I'm a lazy git when it comes to production though. I like doodling exclusively in MS Paint and all the work I really enjoy is when i do it in M Paint. I also started to learn low poly modeling because that's what my computer can handle before dying. I don't see either approach as a problem, it's what I enjoy doing and producing. I fear if I end up tackling something more production heavy it'll end up feeling like another chore on top of my current chores instead of something fun to do. I don't really care if anyone reads it either. It'll give me a good excuse practicing writing, drawing, and building a website.

Thanks for reading my live journal.

[Assistant]
>>136946260
Low poly is sick, show us some of the works!?


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>>136945237
I'm guessing you are so new to 4chan you don't know what a bump limit is.
>330-340 posts - You make the new thread and let the old one die.
>343 posts - The thread will die on its own.
This way there is always a thread up, and people don't have to wait fucking days for the bystander effect to resolve itself.
>/co/ is a higher frequency board, surely you know how this works anon... r-right?

[Assistant]
>>136945343
Kek nice try at patronizing me, you dumb bastard
>>136945402
Acknowledged. Let's all get along now


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>>136945343
Oh shit, does /co/ not have a bump limit?
>My bad. Please kindly disregard the fact that I suck cocks.

[Assistant]
>>136945343
Kek nice try at patronizing me, you dumb bastard
>>136945402
Acknowledged. Let's all get along now


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>>136945770
It changes nothing, dumbass.
You are a newfag. You have no idea how /hyw/ culture works and yet thinks he should lead it. You fuck up. Please never do this again.

Also, your comic looks like absolute schizo-tier bullshit with bad, unintelligible artwork.

[Assistant]
>>136946156
>Also, your comic looks like absolute schizo-tier bullshit with bad, unintelligible artwork.
I know lol.


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TQ: Four Sketchbooks at around 100 pages each, spanning three acts (Book one is act one, act two takes two books and act 3 the 4th).

Cutting the panels together I get around 60 to 70 finalized pages sooo around 250 - 300 pages max to finish the damn thing.

Act one is completly done and I'm in the middle of the 2nd book. Gonna be a couple years until it is completely done!

[Assistant]
>>136856335
That is beyond cool, I can't wait til I draw that much for one story


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>>136946260
Low poly is sick, show us some of the works!?

[Assistant]
>>136946429
The one I posted was an example. Here's another.


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>>136910479
Brother, as much as I'd adore having some art from you, you owe me nothing man, it was a real pleasure to add ya in there. Glad you are at it with the pages, looking forward to reading your comic. Honestly everyone (at the time) was asking about where you disappeared off to, if you have any socials, drop em! Also, you really do have a unique style, such is why you made an impact from a short appearance, so keep going!

[Assistant]
>>136912056
I'll try to post to here (and in general) more. I'm in the process of a rebranding, so I don't really have much of social media presence at the moment.
>looking forward to reading your comic
Yeaaah, I have a few "pilot episodes" done but I need to figure out actual comic to commit to for a longer period, and make a few epsidoes of. I'm the kind of retard that has like a millions characters and plots and stories, so it's hard to draw them all I guess.
>>136906491
I keep hearing from my friends that use Twitter that it's dying every week. Is it really worth it to make a Twitter?


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[User]
>>136894979
missed your stuff

for marketing, feed the algorithim gods on twitter with images often

[Assistant]
>>136912056
I'll try to post to here (and in general) more. I'm in the process of a rebranding, so I don't really have much of social media presence at the moment.
>looking forward to reading your comic
Yeaaah, I have a few "pilot episodes" done but I need to figure out actual comic to commit to for a longer period, and make a few epsidoes of. I'm the kind of retard that has like a millions characters and plots and stories, so it's hard to draw them all I guess.
>>136906491
I keep hearing from my friends that use Twitter that it's dying every week. Is it really worth it to make a Twitter?


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[User]
>>136912056
I'll try to post to here (and in general) more. I'm in the process of a rebranding, so I don't really have much of social media presence at the moment.
>looking forward to reading your comic
Yeaaah, I have a few "pilot episodes" done but I need to figure out actual comic to commit to for a longer period, and make a few epsidoes of. I'm the kind of retard that has like a millions characters and plots and stories, so it's hard to draw them all I guess.
>>136906491
I keep hearing from my friends that use Twitter that it's dying every week. Is it really worth it to make a Twitter?

[Assistant]
>>136949675
Heck yeah, you've got all the time in the world, find that center for you and your characters. And for what it is worth, using twitter has been a really good creative outlet, being able to network, and share my goofy works has been surprisingly swell. Make sure to check in, I'll be your first follower! Hah
>>136948977
You take commissions? Love your work!


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[User]
>>136946429
The one I posted was an example. Here's another.

[Assistant]
>>136949675
Heck yeah, you've got all the time in the world, find that center for you and your characters. And for what it is worth, using twitter has been a really good creative outlet, being able to network, and share my goofy works has been surprisingly swell. Make sure to check in, I'll be your first follower! Hah
>>136948977
You take commissions? Love your work!


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[User]
>too mind-draining to draw backgrounds myself
>too poor to commission someone to draw good backgrounds
>every backgrounds I make in SketchUp looks SOULLESS at best and the 3d assets clashes with my art style at worst
what do I do, anons...?

[Assistant]
>>136950335
Don't give up on yourself, buckle down and work it. I have the same problems with backgrounds, use your strengths, and use that to place yourself in discomforts, you'll learn your worth!


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[User]
>too mind-draining to draw backgrounds myself
>too poor to commission someone to draw good backgrounds
>every backgrounds I make in SketchUp looks SOULLESS at best and the 3d assets clashes with my art style at worst
what do I do, anons...?

[Assistant] >>136950335


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[User] >>136950335

[Assistant] >>136951245


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[User] >>136951245

[Assistant]
>>136951939
>>136951245


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] >>136950335

[Assistant]
>>136951939
>>136951245


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User] >>136950335

[Assistant] >>136951245


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[User]
>>136929137

new page... the words kinda ruin it... but you get the idea... it... actually needs more words like the gun sound effects from the irish sharks shooting at it in mid air... but oh well...

same energy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TN7Lv0PR4Q8&ab_channel=JudasPriestVEVO [Embed]

[Assistant]
>>136937396

new chicken scratch wip of the next page: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-112-wip-2-960237880

Deargdue the gay vampire gang leader is delivered some bad news, not just that his plan failed and theres a new fire tie thats more powerful than the last one, but, *spoilers* his older brother shark tie was also told this info in prison and Ladaria the vampire slayer is on her way to to trade his water jinn eye back for the location of Deargdue.

Deargdue knows shark tie will sacrifice his own little brother to get his powers back in a second so Deargdue is a bit upset about it all right now...


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[User]
>>136951939
>>136951245

[Assistant] >>136952572


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136937396

new chicken scratch wip of the next page: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-112-wip-2-960237880

Deargdue the gay vampire gang leader is delivered some bad news, not just that his plan failed and theres a new fire tie thats more powerful than the last one, but, *spoilers* his older brother shark tie was also told this info in prison and Ladaria the vampire slayer is on her way to to trade his water jinn eye back for the location of Deargdue.

Deargdue knows shark tie will sacrifice his own little brother to get his powers back in a second so Deargdue is a bit upset about it all right now...

[Assistant]
>>136952937

almost done witht he line art: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-112-wip-3-960247200


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[User] betz and bones in such close proximity are a 1-2 combo of retarded these threads can't ever recover from

[Assistant]
>>136945166
It's been hilarious watching them throw a tantrum just because they're not allowed in the discord. One of the best servers I've ever been in with nothing but cool people sharing work and lifting each other up. At least we now know for sure who the bad actors really are so there is 100% no way they could ever possibly rebound.


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[User]
>>136945166
It's been hilarious watching them throw a tantrum just because they're not allowed in the discord. One of the best servers I've ever been in with nothing but cool people sharing work and lifting each other up. At least we now know for sure who the bad actors really are so there is 100% no way they could ever possibly rebound.

[Assistant]
>>136954888
Based


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[User]
>>136952937

almost done witht he line art: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-112-wip-3-960247200

[Assistant]
>>136954470

coloring: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-112-wip-8-960256219


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136945166
It's been hilarious watching them throw a tantrum just because they're not allowed in the discord. One of the best servers I've ever been in with nothing but cool people sharing work and lifting each other up. At least we now know for sure who the bad actors really are so there is 100% no way they could ever possibly rebound.

[Assistant]
>>136954888
Shut the fuck up you drama- chasing fag hag, and stop samefagging while you're at it. You obviously love them both since you keep bringing them up. I'd kill you with my bare hands if I had the chance, drink bleach you cocksucking lolcow- worshipping faggot


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136954888
Shut the fuck up you drama- chasing fag hag, and stop samefagging while you're at it. You obviously love them both since you keep bringing them up. I'd kill you with my bare hands if I had the chance, drink bleach you cocksucking lolcow- worshipping faggot

[Assistant]
>>136955072
stfu betz


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[User]
>>136954888
Shut the fuck up you drama- chasing fag hag, and stop samefagging while you're at it. You obviously love them both since you keep bringing them up. I'd kill you with my bare hands if I had the chance, drink bleach you cocksucking lolcow- worshipping faggot

[Assistant]
>>136955072
Holy shit you really are mad KEK


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[User]
>>136929137

new page... the words kinda ruin it... but you get the idea... it... actually needs more words like the gun sound effects from the irish sharks shooting at it in mid air... but oh well...

same energy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TN7Lv0PR4Q8&ab_channel=JudasPriestVEVO [Embed]

[Assistant]
>>136937396

just finished a new page, hope yall like it lol


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[User]
>>136937396

just finished a new page, hope yall like it lol

[Assistant]
>>136955967

same energy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yp5UHsnWolY&ab_channel=YOUMUSIC [Embed]


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136954888
Shut the fuck up you drama- chasing fag hag, and stop samefagging while you're at it. You obviously love them both since you keep bringing them up. I'd kill you with my bare hands if I had the chance, drink bleach you cocksucking lolcow- worshipping faggot

[Assistant]
>>136955072
Betz is seething


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[User]
>too mind-draining to draw backgrounds myself
>too poor to commission someone to draw good backgrounds
>every backgrounds I make in SketchUp looks SOULLESS at best and the 3d assets clashes with my art style at worst
what do I do, anons...?

[Assistant]
>>136950335
I trace photos from free-for-use stock images.


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[User]
>>136937396

just finished a new page, hope yall like it lol

[Assistant]
>>136955967
>>136955990
Hey man, it's okay if you're your own fan club, but could you be less of a jackass with going back-to-back with your own reaction posts?


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[User]
>>136955967

same energy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yp5UHsnWolY&ab_channel=YOUMUSIC [Embed]

[Assistant]
>>136955967
>>136955990
Hey man, it's okay if you're your own fan club, but could you be less of a jackass with going back-to-back with your own reaction posts?


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[User]
>>136943661

I did it... I uncucked spider man! Holy shit... lol

this was fun to make!

>>136943707
relax, im done, its over lol

[Assistant]
>>136944350
This drawing sucks and so do you. Fuck off forever.


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>>136893233
Practiced the car. Did the rest of the page too.

Fuck coloring. Probably going to do that cheap-ass shit some comics do of just making the first page of each chapter color and then doing the rest black and white.
Not going to cope with any of that stupid "it's supposed to be bad on purpose" excuses or pretend like it gives it some charming marker look. Just going to do one page so that when more cat characters get introduced, the audience knows what colors they're supposed to be.

[Assistant]
>>136946053
Page 2 WIP. Not dicking with color, but the red pencil doesn't want to erase, so that's going to be a pain throughout. Not going to post a WIP for each silly little panel, just enough to show the groundwork before working the rest later.
Definitely need to stop including so many people because you can tell the parts where I gave up.

Script so far:
>Panel 1: Salvia (Cat): Oh, great one, I will forgive you if you sate me with poultry.
>Sub-panel: Alyssum (Fat woman): Survivors. Humans. Second door to the right. Alice would have told me more, but SOMEONE broke my concentration.
>Panel 2: {S:} I'm going to eat them. {A:} You're not killing them! {S:} I'll save you one. {A:} THEY. ARE. NOT. FOOD! {S:} You say that EVERY time I bring you some prey!
>Panel 3: {A:} They might be our contacts. They might HAVE food. {S:} Fine. I'll check.
>Panel 4: [Creeeeeaak]
>Panel 6: {S:} "...Hello?"


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[User] Man I wish I had a drone so I could fly it over my city and get the pictures I want for my comic. 3d models are nice and all but I think i could get better results by taking my own photos. How much do drones go for these days?

[Assistant] >>136957538


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[User] Man I wish I had a drone so I could fly it over my city and get the pictures I want for my comic. 3d models are nice and all but I think i could get better results by taking my own photos. How much do drones go for these days?

[Assistant]
>>136957538
Honestly would be such a good idea


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>>136957538
Honestly would be such a good idea

[Assistant]
>>136957886
I live in a nice city where one half is historical colonial buildings and the other is new modern architecture.It's also right next to the sea so there's a lot of good shots. I saw a simple drone for 50 bucks on amazon. Camera isn't great but I just need the shot for perspective. Might end up getting one next paycheck


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>>136929137

scribbled out the chicken scratch of the next page: https://www.deviantart.com/jesse-the-art-maker/art/UBOSS-DAILIES-111-wip-2-960085299

SKREEOK-OK'-OK'-OK'~! KREEEEK-EK'-EK'EK'~! KIK-IK'-IK'-IK'~!

research pictures related! lol oh and uh... spoilers! lol

[Assistant]
>>136933465
I love arlokk lol


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[User] When do you guys go from prototyping to first actual phase?

[Assistant]
>>136961080
I usually just do really quick rough drafts of each page just so I can understand what type action I want to portray and how I want my panel layout to work around that action. Once that rough is done, I go over it with a more detailed pencil sketch. then I do line drawing, scan it, and finally add shading and additional detail in photoshop.


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[User]
>>136961080
I usually just do really quick rough drafts of each page just so I can understand what type action I want to portray and how I want my panel layout to work around that action. Once that rough is done, I go over it with a more detailed pencil sketch. then I do line drawing, scan it, and finally add shading and additional detail in photoshop.

[Assistant]
>>136962148
I don't mean for sketching, I mean for story planning.
Recently I read all of Berserk and noted how different the prototype Guts was from mainline story (a lot less stoic in the proto), in terms of personality. I have a feeling my story is going to take a similar rewrite, but want to know how far along some of you guys might have gotten before sitting back and re-evaluating your work, a balancing act of getting enough to reexamine verses getting too invested.


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[User]
>>136962148
I don't mean for sketching, I mean for story planning.
Recently I read all of Berserk and noted how different the prototype Guts was from mainline story (a lot less stoic in the proto), in terms of personality. I have a feeling my story is going to take a similar rewrite, but want to know how far along some of you guys might have gotten before sitting back and re-evaluating your work, a balancing act of getting enough to reexamine verses getting too invested.

[Assistant]
>>136962397
After leaving the prototype first page alone for two months, I took maybe a few days total to get an idea of the characters and plot. It helped that I got to bounce ideas off someone who was just as excited about them as I was (ty Smacky). As long as I stick to the outline, I’m not too worried about how my characterization changes over time. It’s not inconsistency, it’s character development!


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136962148
I don't mean for sketching, I mean for story planning.
Recently I read all of Berserk and noted how different the prototype Guts was from mainline story (a lot less stoic in the proto), in terms of personality. I have a feeling my story is going to take a similar rewrite, but want to know how far along some of you guys might have gotten before sitting back and re-evaluating your work, a balancing act of getting enough to reexamine verses getting too invested.

[Assistant]
>>136962397
It just really depends. Sometimes I keep finding new traits/behaviours in my characters that I really like. Other times I got serious writer's block but keep trying to write dialogue for my character regardless. I think the process of writing new characters is the same as making friends with a stranger. You're not gonna know everything about this stranger from just your initial introduction to them. You have to keep meeting them and talking to them. The more you talk to them, the little more you find out about them. Same as with writing a character, the more you write them, the little more you find out about them.


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136962397
After leaving the prototype first page alone for two months, I took maybe a few days total to get an idea of the characters and plot. It helped that I got to bounce ideas off someone who was just as excited about them as I was (ty Smacky). As long as I stick to the outline, I’m not too worried about how my characterization changes over time. It’s not inconsistency, it’s character development!

[Assistant]
>>136962851
>>136963074
I think I get it.
Write until you know where the character is.
Ask how they got there and if that's an interesting story.
Repeat until you have a point where your character's pre-development is still engaging enough for the audience to follow, but the 'where they're at' from prototyping is coherent enough that you can work you character towards this goal.
Am I on the mark?


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>>136962397
It just really depends. Sometimes I keep finding new traits/behaviours in my characters that I really like. Other times I got serious writer's block but keep trying to write dialogue for my character regardless. I think the process of writing new characters is the same as making friends with a stranger. You're not gonna know everything about this stranger from just your initial introduction to them. You have to keep meeting them and talking to them. The more you talk to them, the little more you find out about them. Same as with writing a character, the more you write them, the little more you find out about them.

[Assistant]
>>136962851
>>136963074
I think I get it.
Write until you know where the character is.
Ask how they got there and if that's an interesting story.
Repeat until you have a point where your character's pre-development is still engaging enough for the audience to follow, but the 'where they're at' from prototyping is coherent enough that you can work you character towards this goal.
Am I on the mark?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136962148
I don't mean for sketching, I mean for story planning.
Recently I read all of Berserk and noted how different the prototype Guts was from mainline story (a lot less stoic in the proto), in terms of personality. I have a feeling my story is going to take a similar rewrite, but want to know how far along some of you guys might have gotten before sitting back and re-evaluating your work, a balancing act of getting enough to reexamine verses getting too invested.

[Assistant]
>>136962397
>Recently I read all of Berserk and noted how different the prototype Guts was from mainline story (a lot less stoic in the proto), in terms of personality
I think it's pretty common for that to happen.

In my case, I've just made 6 chapters for my comic, but I didn't planned much before starting out, just the beginning, the end (sort of), and a basic personality for each character, but even then, I was open to change. For instance, there were five main characters, but I was halfway through the second chapter when I decided to erase one of them completely, because it was better for the story. He was supposed to show later on, so it was easy to dispose of him.

And now that I think about it, I also made a basic timeline with some plot events prior to the main story, and that's it. I'm not saying it's the right way to do it, maybe I should've planned a little more, but I'd never have started making it that way.

Good luck with your comic


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136962851
>>136963074
I think I get it.
Write until you know where the character is.
Ask how they got there and if that's an interesting story.
Repeat until you have a point where your character's pre-development is still engaging enough for the audience to follow, but the 'where they're at' from prototyping is coherent enough that you can work you character towards this goal.
Am I on the mark?

[Assistant]
>>136963251
Yeah ur getting there. Honestly just see about having a regular everyday talk with your character you want to develop. You don't have to have to ask such big questions to your character at the start (Would you ask these sorts of questions to a new acquaintance?). Start simple. Ask ur character how there day's been going, where they been. Do they take a courses at school or something? How's mom/dad/sis. Small questions like these. Try to write how they would respond to you. You'd be surprised where this can take the conversation if you let it.

Also, Check it out bois. Got a more detailed penciled page of my lite graphic novel done. Progress is being made finally.


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>>136962397
>Recently I read all of Berserk and noted how different the prototype Guts was from mainline story (a lot less stoic in the proto), in terms of personality
I think it's pretty common for that to happen.

In my case, I've just made 6 chapters for my comic, but I didn't planned much before starting out, just the beginning, the end (sort of), and a basic personality for each character, but even then, I was open to change. For instance, there were five main characters, but I was halfway through the second chapter when I decided to erase one of them completely, because it was better for the story. He was supposed to show later on, so it was easy to dispose of him.

And now that I think about it, I also made a basic timeline with some plot events prior to the main story, and that's it. I'm not saying it's the right way to do it, maybe I should've planned a little more, but I'd never have started making it that way.

Good luck with your comic

[Assistant]
>>136963376
Yeah that's the thing I'm starting to notice with not only graphic novels but a pilot of any sort of long running media. That pilot is really rough and its to just present the idea of what you want to do and get vital feedback for the next chapters/episodes. I'm trying to get a focus group for my first chapter to give me feedback once I finish it. Good luck to u all and ur comics/graphic novels.


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>>136962397
>Recently I read all of Berserk and noted how different the prototype Guts was from mainline story (a lot less stoic in the proto), in terms of personality
I think it's pretty common for that to happen.

In my case, I've just made 6 chapters for my comic, but I didn't planned much before starting out, just the beginning, the end (sort of), and a basic personality for each character, but even then, I was open to change. For instance, there were five main characters, but I was halfway through the second chapter when I decided to erase one of them completely, because it was better for the story. He was supposed to show later on, so it was easy to dispose of him.

And now that I think about it, I also made a basic timeline with some plot events prior to the main story, and that's it. I'm not saying it's the right way to do it, maybe I should've planned a little more, but I'd never have started making it that way.

Good luck with your comic

[Assistant]
>>136963376
>>136963417
Thanks guys.
I think I'll continue on this doomed prototype for a chapter or two. Even though I know the charaters, I haven't fleshed out their interactions with each other, so I think I'll go schizo as I write and ask them a few questions in some imaginary group session , then rewrite after the whole main cast gets introduced and they've chatted a bit.
(For reference, I made >>136946053 and >>136957237 and am
hating the interaction between the two mains).


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>>136963251
Yeah ur getting there. Honestly just see about having a regular everyday talk with your character you want to develop. You don't have to have to ask such big questions to your character at the start (Would you ask these sorts of questions to a new acquaintance?). Start simple. Ask ur character how there day's been going, where they been. Do they take a courses at school or something? How's mom/dad/sis. Small questions like these. Try to write how they would respond to you. You'd be surprised where this can take the conversation if you let it.

Also, Check it out bois. Got a more detailed penciled page of my lite graphic novel done. Progress is being made finally.

[Assistant]
>>136963376
>>136963417
Thanks guys.
I think I'll continue on this doomed prototype for a chapter or two. Even though I know the charaters, I haven't fleshed out their interactions with each other, so I think I'll go schizo as I write and ask them a few questions in some imaginary group session , then rewrite after the whole main cast gets introduced and they've chatted a bit.
(For reference, I made >>136946053 and >>136957237 and am
hating the interaction between the two mains).


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136893233
Practiced the car. Did the rest of the page too.

Fuck coloring. Probably going to do that cheap-ass shit some comics do of just making the first page of each chapter color and then doing the rest black and white.
Not going to cope with any of that stupid "it's supposed to be bad on purpose" excuses or pretend like it gives it some charming marker look. Just going to do one page so that when more cat characters get introduced, the audience knows what colors they're supposed to be.

[Assistant]
>>136963376
>>136963417
Thanks guys.
I think I'll continue on this doomed prototype for a chapter or two. Even though I know the charaters, I haven't fleshed out their interactions with each other, so I think I'll go schizo as I write and ask them a few questions in some imaginary group session , then rewrite after the whole main cast gets introduced and they've chatted a bit.
(For reference, I made >>136946053 and >>136957237 and am
hating the interaction between the two mains).


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136946053
Page 2 WIP. Not dicking with color, but the red pencil doesn't want to erase, so that's going to be a pain throughout. Not going to post a WIP for each silly little panel, just enough to show the groundwork before working the rest later.
Definitely need to stop including so many people because you can tell the parts where I gave up.

Script so far:
>Panel 1: Salvia (Cat): Oh, great one, I will forgive you if you sate me with poultry.
>Sub-panel: Alyssum (Fat woman): Survivors. Humans. Second door to the right. Alice would have told me more, but SOMEONE broke my concentration.
>Panel 2: {S:} I'm going to eat them. {A:} You're not killing them! {S:} I'll save you one. {A:} THEY. ARE. NOT. FOOD! {S:} You say that EVERY time I bring you some prey!
>Panel 3: {A:} They might be our contacts. They might HAVE food. {S:} Fine. I'll check.
>Panel 4: [Creeeeeaak]
>Panel 6: {S:} "...Hello?"

[Assistant]
>>136963376
>>136963417
Thanks guys.
I think I'll continue on this doomed prototype for a chapter or two. Even though I know the charaters, I haven't fleshed out their interactions with each other, so I think I'll go schizo as I write and ask them a few questions in some imaginary group session , then rewrite after the whole main cast gets introduced and they've chatted a bit.
(For reference, I made >>136946053 and >>136957237 and am
hating the interaction between the two mains).


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136963376
>>136963417
Thanks guys.
I think I'll continue on this doomed prototype for a chapter or two. Even though I know the charaters, I haven't fleshed out their interactions with each other, so I think I'll go schizo as I write and ask them a few questions in some imaginary group session , then rewrite after the whole main cast gets introduced and they've chatted a bit.
(For reference, I made >>136946053 and >>136957237 and am
hating the interaction between the two mains).

[Assistant]
>>136963588
Even if you're prototype doesn't work out. Don't sweat it. You can take what you did, analyze what didn't work and see if you can take what was good and make it better. I had a visual novel that got a couple thousand reads but some horrible reviews. I found out that readers were much more interested in the sub plot I was developing with my two main characters than the main novel bit, so i dropped it and am now developing that subplot via a light graphic novel.

Remeber, it's not a failure, it's information you need to help you make later what you were supposed to create on your journey to becoming an artist


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>>136963588
Even if you're prototype doesn't work out. Don't sweat it. You can take what you did, analyze what didn't work and see if you can take what was good and make it better. I had a visual novel that got a couple thousand reads but some horrible reviews. I found out that readers were much more interested in the sub plot I was developing with my two main characters than the main novel bit, so i dropped it and am now developing that subplot via a light graphic novel.

Remeber, it's not a failure, it's information you need to help you make later what you were supposed to create on your journey to becoming an artist

[Assistant]
>>136963814
For fear of digging old wounds, links?


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>TQ: How long do you plan on making your series? If it is short form, how many episodes will you plan to have in next year. If it is long form (serialized), how many panels/pages/chapters will your completed comic be?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
Previous thread: >>136755173 →

>Didn't see anyone else baking, so I figured I would.

[Assistant]
I've restarted my attempts several times, and each time it feels like i learn something but also fall far behind.
Im remaking my sprites for my main characters, and hopefully going to be able to draw consistently decent panels when the time is right.
I'm making a test project that im less attached to, to try and spark myself to work on something much more massive and personal.
TQ: ideally i want my first project to be in the ball park of 100 pages, im not sure if that counts as long or short lol.
gotta find a way to make things look decent on comicfury


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>TQ: How long do you plan on making your series? If it is short form, how many episodes will you plan to have in next year. If it is long form (serialized), how many panels/pages/chapters will your completed comic be?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
Previous thread: >>136755173 →

>Didn't see anyone else baking, so I figured I would.

[Assistant] Where does one even find a webcomics community to engage in anymore


[System] You are an anonymous message board user. You are opinionated and use informal language. You discuss various topics.

[User]
>TQ: How long do you plan on making your series? If it is short form, how many episodes will you plan to have in next year. If it is long form (serialized), how many panels/pages/chapters will your completed comic be?

>Current /hyw/ comics list
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1BHWvGGdywh188DAo5Y9YywzSz4uyrAEt6ba19NQ50W8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Where should I publish my webcomic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/
https://tapas.io/
https://comicfury.com/
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/
https://globalcomix.com/

BRUSH PACKS AND FONTS
CSP: https://rentry.org/CSP_Brushes
KRITA: https://conceptartempire.com/free-krita-brushes/
FONTS: https://fontmeme.com/fonts/

ITT: Post your webcomics and comic-making related discussion. If you have a criticism, make it constructive.
Previous thread: >>136755173 →

>Didn't see anyone else baking, so I figured I would.

[Assistant] https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=gIZ5tGOmGCI&pp=ygUVd2l0aCB5b3UgZHllciBwc2hkYXIg [Embed]