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>>136731903
I think a movie would suit Lackadaisy best. Since the timeframe in the Webcomic is so short, it would work better as a one and done 2 hour feature. If not then maybe a 3 part, hour each feature. I think a full series would stretch thin the material.

>>136731956
ProZD did seem to phone it in as Mordecai in the pilot. I feel he needs a slightly deeper voice.

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>>136732058
Mordecai needs to sound older, and everyone needs to sound less amateurish. That said it was pretty good for a youtube/indie project. The VAs for the Savoys need the most training but a few lessons should suffice to smooth out the rest of the perfomances. For example whoever does Rocky needs to practice his poems otherwise they're hard to follow. I did really likedthat squeak in "excuse ME" when he was first being shot at though, it was quite funny and an example of how a voice can help elevate the written script. I think it's the only moment in the episode where the humor came from the performance instead of the script.


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>>136732058
Mordecai needs to sound older, and everyone needs to sound less amateurish. That said it was pretty good for a youtube/indie project. The VAs for the Savoys need the most training but a few lessons should suffice to smooth out the rest of the perfomances. For example whoever does Rocky needs to practice his poems otherwise they're hard to follow. I did really likedthat squeak in "excuse ME" when he was first being shot at though, it was quite funny and an example of how a voice can help elevate the written script. I think it's the only moment in the episode where the humor came from the performance instead of the script.

[Assistant]
>>136732942
Kovox is pretty solid as a VA.

Maybe Malcomb Ray needs some more lessons but I think Serafine's VA is a pretty established professional.

Also, on the subject of VA's anyone else think Zib sounded like Liam O'Brian?


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>>136730738
7 million as of today

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>>136730777
>>136730738
Yea it did real well view wise. Personally not a big fan, but at least it had at least way more competent characters that didn't want me tear my ears out like the slim jim mc of zeruels monkey wrench. I love his animations but my god he needs to not be allowed to write characters/story.


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>>136700738 (OP)
6 million views and counting is hardly forgotten

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>>136730777
>>136730738
Yea it did real well view wise. Personally not a big fan, but at least it had at least way more competent characters that didn't want me tear my ears out like the slim jim mc of zeruels monkey wrench. I love his animations but my god he needs to not be allowed to write characters/story.


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>>136730777
>>136730738
Yea it did real well view wise. Personally not a big fan, but at least it had at least way more competent characters that didn't want me tear my ears out like the slim jim mc of zeruels monkey wrench. I love his animations but my god he needs to not be allowed to write characters/story.

[Assistant]
>>136733773
Most of Tracy's cast have 17 years of refining, so they work pretty well.
Haven't actually seen monkey wrench. All I know is there a start pirate dinosaur who seems cool. But the screaming parrot bit really made me not want to watch it.


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>>136732652
>Serafine just starts unloading her BAR towards the group, not even asking them who they were or why they were out in the dead of night. And on top of that, she starts LAUGHTING at them! This, here, is why Serafine Savoy is just too mean, and another thing...
>The video proceeds to bitch for 11 hours

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>>136732740
lmao it's too real


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Ooooooh. Ivy's blood splattering into the air and mingling with the raindrops, returning to mingle in turn with the mud.
Ivy's screams scattered by the single, inhuman hiss of the rain and becoming indistinguishable from the screams of thunder and lightning.

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>>136734224
Have you ever thought of writing brutal death metal lyrics?


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>>136734224
Have you ever thought of writing brutal death metal lyrics?

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She pleads with her eyes as her voice is stolen by a wad of cloth. Any elegance she once held lost by months of captivity and debasement. All she has left to give is her pain as the pins are driven in; anchoring her to her grave.

>>136735107
My voice is unfit for death metal and you can't tell how good/bad lyrics are until you sing/speak them aloud. I think I'll stick to ryona shitposting until it hits a critical threshold and I write an actual novel based around abusing Ivy.


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She pleads with her eyes as her voice is stolen by a wad of cloth. Any elegance she once held lost by months of captivity and debasement. All she has left to give is her pain as the pins are driven in; anchoring her to her grave.

>>136735107
My voice is unfit for death metal and you can't tell how good/bad lyrics are until you sing/speak them aloud. I think I'll stick to ryona shitposting until it hits a critical threshold and I write an actual novel based around abusing Ivy.

[Assistant]
>>136735178
>implying you have to have a good voice to do death metal vocals
just growl bro you can sound like shit as long as the riffs are hard


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She pleads with her eyes as her voice is stolen by a wad of cloth. Any elegance she once held lost by months of captivity and debasement. All she has left to give is her pain as the pins are driven in; anchoring her to her grave.

>>136735107
My voice is unfit for death metal and you can't tell how good/bad lyrics are until you sing/speak them aloud. I think I'll stick to ryona shitposting until it hits a critical threshold and I write an actual novel based around abusing Ivy.

[Assistant]
>>136735178
ivy's tougher than she looks
she'll give you creeps a one-two knockout!


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>>136735178
ivy's tougher than she looks
she'll give you creeps a one-two knockout!

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>>136735521
I have yet to meet little girl who can outsmart boolet. But seriously. I am losing my mind. Give me a week to get my shit together.


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>>136735178
ivy's tougher than she looks
she'll give you creeps a one-two knockout!

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>>136735521
Replace the bag with freckles balls


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>>136735178
ivy's tougher than she looks
she'll give you creeps a one-two knockout!

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>>136735521
Cute, I wanna do a fighting Ivy getting punched?


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>>136735521
Replace the bag with freckles balls

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>>136737132
and while we're at it replace Ivy's boxing glove with my tongue


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>>136735521
Cute, I wanna do a fighting Ivy getting punched?

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>>136737295
No point throwing hands if you can't catch any.

>>136737658
Things that she should not have spent her tuition money on. Only so many bloody dollar bills she can pull from dead gangsters wallets.


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[User] What she bought for you anon?

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>>136737295
No point throwing hands if you can't catch any.

>>136737658
Things that she should not have spent her tuition money on. Only so many bloody dollar bills she can pull from dead gangsters wallets.


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>>136737658
Cough medicine with hard drugs that will knock me out after a long day at the office, letting practice her ironing skills without having the smell of multiple burned slacks wake me up


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it was a bad pilot.
It's not written for those who not already familiar with the series.
The Main plot is about prohibition. they only left small subtitle in a 2 and half seconds on screen after multiple logos.
and then a poem. which can be interpreted in multiple ways. that supposed to narrate the story but no it was about the city.

doesn't explain the characters. I mean who are those characters ? what are we even watching ?
why are they being chased?
are those people chasing them random are supposed to be random thugs or reoccurring characters ?
why should we care about anyone on screen ?
why the tall cat suddenly became insane ?
is he always insane?
is he written as insane for sake of insanity ?
what's with circus ?
who is this old woman ?
why the bartender is angry ?
who are those characters in the bar ?
are they random patreons or main cast ?
why do they treat the tall insane cat like that ?

I don't know what this series is gonna be about. how the first episode gonna be like?
is it about people in the bar or is it about random trio ? what's the relationship of those trio to the bar ?

Is the Story about the Trio and their random freelancing jobs ?
or is it about the bar aka lackadaisy and who they gonna hire next to smuggle booze to them?
or are those trio part of the bar crew. are they a crew or family ?

Those things should be told in the pilot episode

>Note :
yes I am fully aware there are some mysteries which I didn't complain about. like who is that black cat character and their faction. and why there was clock noise when he aims. and why he didn't shoot the girl...etc

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>>136727164
you have to watch to find out
almost like thats the point


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>>136737658
She's bought new clothes and shoes for herself using money that was earmarked for her studies. She can't get away with borrowing and 'borrowing' other people's books and sneaking breakfast, lunch, dinner, and tips at the Little Daisy. She just can't keep getting away with it.


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>>136735178
ivy's tougher than she looks
she'll give you creeps a one-two knockout!

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>>136735521
is this old or did Tracy catch wind of these threads most... eloquent Ivy enthusiast?


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>>136700738 (OP)
its not enough for the coombrains. Besides, /co is dying

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>>136700871
its just hamuletta doing fake outrage shit in his threads again


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>>136735521
is this old or did Tracy catch wind of these threads most... eloquent Ivy enthusiast?

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>>136739511
What? No. Tracy knows better to come looking around these parts. And if she ever did, she'd never confide in anyone that she did. These are her Patreon request, crossposted (eventually) onto Twitter.
>https://twitter.com/LackadaisyCats/status/1456032585054924800

Source for my pic:
https://twitter.com/LackadaisyCats/status/1358103884150018049


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>>136737132
and while we're at it replace Ivy's boxing glove with my tongue

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>>136737377
fucking faggot


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[User] >you're my boyfriend cuz I said so, anon

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OCs inbound. This seems reasonable. As long as no canon characters fall for her blind ass.
https://twitter.com/MayFrappe/status/1647450834626650112

>>136739536
Creepy. Looks like something from children of the corn


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>>136739511
What? No. Tracy knows better to come looking around these parts. And if she ever did, she'd never confide in anyone that she did. These are her Patreon request, crossposted (eventually) onto Twitter.
>https://twitter.com/LackadaisyCats/status/1456032585054924800

Source for my pic:
https://twitter.com/LackadaisyCats/status/1358103884150018049

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>>136739614
makes me wonder if Elsa was a different kind of person before the war and over the course of it, it broke her down into the world weary doc she is today.


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>>136705652
Sure, it's not a bad match at all, and they seem to like each other decently well. But the irony is that if they had met in literally any other circumstances they'd have a much better shot than they do now. As it is there's a better than even chance that some part of their current criminal lifestyle is going to cause serious problems for them at some point down the road.

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>>136710423
I mean, Al Capone died of pneumonia when he was 50. Its not impossible to leave the business alive.


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>>136737377
fucking faggot

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>>136739810
yessir


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>>136723951
If we're talking just the 20s then that is right before the start of St. Louis' gradual downslide out of national relevancy. From the turn of the century and the 20s was arguably the time when the St. Louis was at its peak. It put on the World's Fair in 1904, the very same year it also hosted the first Olympic games to come to the US. It was a major center of river trade, and had one of the only bridges over the Mississippi at the time. It had a huge amount of industry, including the factories for over half the nation's car companies, and was one of the largest cities in the country. Basically what Chicago is now in terms of national importance and recognition is what St. Louis was back then.

Even setting aside prohibition there's a lot of stuff you can do with that time period. Corporate espionage, riverboat adventures, country boys looking to make their fortune in the big city, early union work and all the violence associated with it, businessmen from the east dealing with pioneers from the west and the resulting culture clashes, rising racial tensions as blacks traveled north during the Great Migration. And over all of it the looming specter of the Great Depression and WW2. There's a lot of potential for stories there.

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>>136732065
>WW2
I hope it never reaches that part. I personally find WW2 settings boring and overdone. Focusing on all that other stuff you said sounds much more interesting. I've always been fascinated with borders and transitions, two ways of life clashing in one location. The Mississippi is vast and marks a great wall between east and west, but also a bridge between north and south. A city located smack in the middle of that has to make for a grand setting back before highways and airplanes were a thing. I hope they continue to romanticize it a bit too, I like all the mindless violence with cute cats. It itches a spot in my mind I never knew I had.


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>>136726793
Compare her speech bubbles to his. How much she talks and how little he talks. How she won't let him say anything and how his responses are always unassertive. He's just a child at a predator's mercy. You faggots need to understand that autistic ≠ shy and that they can't think for themselves.

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>>136726853
Do most of the people you spew that bullshit at fall for it?


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>>136732065
>WW2
I hope it never reaches that part. I personally find WW2 settings boring and overdone. Focusing on all that other stuff you said sounds much more interesting. I've always been fascinated with borders and transitions, two ways of life clashing in one location. The Mississippi is vast and marks a great wall between east and west, but also a bridge between north and south. A city located smack in the middle of that has to make for a grand setting back before highways and airplanes were a thing. I hope they continue to romanticize it a bit too, I like all the mindless violence with cute cats. It itches a spot in my mind I never knew I had.

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>>136742180
WWII is 20 years later


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[User] I want to read the comics but am afraid I'll run out of them and act like a junkie on withdrawal. Why do these cats have to be so cute?

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>>136744257
I first became aware of this comic like over a decade ago from someone avatarfagging with it

Didn’t check it out out of spite.
Here I am years later, finally decide to check it out only to find I can read through it all pretty easily in a day. Now I’m bummed


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[User] Can this relationship realistically work out?

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>>136705652
>>136710423
What about... Crazy Freckle and Serafine?


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>>136705652
Sure, it's not a bad match at all, and they seem to like each other decently well. But the irony is that if they had met in literally any other circumstances they'd have a much better shot than they do now. As it is there's a better than even chance that some part of their current criminal lifestyle is going to cause serious problems for them at some point down the road.

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>>136705652
>>136710423
What about... Crazy Freckle and Serafine?


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>>136726853
>He's just a child
Ivy is younger than he is.

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>>136728069
According to the official site, she is younger.

By two months.

Freckle's DOB is March 10th, 1909. Ivy's is May 20th 1909.


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>2 weeks later
I am forgotten...

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>>136700738 (OP)
I made it 5 minutes in. Hate real human bean characters. That stupid fucking slow closed eyes laughing smiling animation shit.


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>>136700738 (OP)
I made it 5 minutes in. Hate real human bean characters. That stupid fucking slow closed eyes laughing smiling animation shit.

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>>136744936
…. nigga…..?


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>>136700738 (OP)
I made it 5 minutes in. Hate real human bean characters. That stupid fucking slow closed eyes laughing smiling animation shit.

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>>136744936
what thread did you mean to post this in?


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>2 weeks later
I am forgotten...

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>>136700738 (OP)
Supposedly


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>>136726853
Do most of the people you spew that bullshit at fall for it?

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>>136742666
>Satan defends grooming
Of course


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>>136742180
WWII is 20 years later

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>>136743165
Well,a bit sooner, really since WWII is over by '45 and America enters it in '41. Freckle might even still be draft eligible by that time given he'd be 32.


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>>136747077
Would any of the Lackadaisy crew whore themselves out to save the club? Let's rank them

>eagerly
Zib
Rocky
>reluctantly
Mitsi
Ivy
>never
Calvin
Victor
Zib
Horton
Mordecai
The rest of the band

[Assistant]
>>136747675
>zib
>eager for anything

Maybe if he’s allowed to lie like a corpse and doesn’t have to do anything strenuous like getting an erection or having an orgasm.


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>>136747675
>zib
>eager for anything

Maybe if he’s allowed to lie like a corpse and doesn’t have to do anything strenuous like getting an erection or having an orgasm.

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>>136747870
Put enough money on the table and Zib will probably actually offer some kind of actual service. Though he'd probably prefer it if you were Mary Ellen Mitzi


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>>136747077
Would any of the Lackadaisy crew whore themselves out to save the club? Let's rank them

>eagerly
Zib
Rocky
>reluctantly
Mitsi
Ivy
>never
Calvin
Victor
Zib
Horton
Mordecai
The rest of the band

[Assistant]
>>136747675
Rocky ? Eagerly whoring himself out? There's not even a hint that he's interested in sex. Just because people on this board want to fuck him doesn't change that he's more likely to kamikaze than get into prostitution.


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>>136747077
Would any of the Lackadaisy crew whore themselves out to save the club? Let's rank them

>eagerly
Zib
Rocky
>reluctantly
Mitsi
Ivy
>never
Calvin
Victor
Zib
Horton
Mordecai
The rest of the band

[Assistant]
>>136747675
>Ivy
She won't be a whore. She will be an expensive living urinal in the bathroom.


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>>136700738 (OP)
I finally got around to watching it and while I think the art direction and animation is pretty first class I still found it extremely underwhelming. When literally EVERY single side character is more interesting and better characterized than your main trio I gotta ask what the fuck were they thinking? Like holy shit Rocky is an annoying fuck. The whole split personality one is a tiresome trope. The only character of the main three that's entertaining is the girl and even then she can't carry the scenes she's in when she's dragged down by the other two. The pilot feels very all style and little substance and the main characters come off as self inserts rather than legitimate characters of their own. Real shame given that the side cast of characters are all well defined interesting and not completely annoyingly over the top.

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>>136702288
But isn't that the point? That we, the uninitiated see this world through the eyes of Rocky and Freckle, both also uninformed? And the fact that this world existed before we got here and the people in it have a history we can't know entirely but through snippets of interaction?


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>>136747675
Rocky ? Eagerly whoring himself out? There's not even a hint that he's interested in sex. Just because people on this board want to fuck him doesn't change that he's more likely to kamikaze than get into prostitution.

[Assistant]
>>136748523
If it was for Mitsi he'd do it for free and you know it.


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>>136747675
>Ivy
She won't be a whore. She will be an expensive living urinal in the bathroom.

[Assistant]
>>136748550
<Chaining Ivy to a wall and forcing her to her knees in all her flapper finery
<Cracking open her smile and keeping it open with a pair of dental gags
<Giving her a very simple choice, for the next 2 hours she can swallow or choke to death
<Unchaining her at the end and giving her a month's wage for 2 hours of work
<Telling her that the patrons enjoyed using her and theres always more money for her if she debases herself


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>>136748523
If it was for Mitsi he'd do it for free and you know it.

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>>136748744
Maybe, but I still maintain that he's more the type to blow himself up than whore himself out.


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>>136708010
>But yes...it has taken 17 years to span 4 days in universe.

Man and I thought Hunter X Hunter had the worse dragging story

[Assistant]
>>136708038
The ultimate universe took 12 years and at bare minimum 400 issues of comics to get through less than a year


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>>136739614
makes me wonder if Elsa was a different kind of person before the war and over the course of it, it broke her down into the world weary doc she is today.

[Assistant]
>>136740266
>>136739614
pretty nurse lady


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>>136739511
What? No. Tracy knows better to come looking around these parts. And if she ever did, she'd never confide in anyone that she did. These are her Patreon request, crossposted (eventually) onto Twitter.
>https://twitter.com/LackadaisyCats/status/1456032585054924800

Source for my pic:
https://twitter.com/LackadaisyCats/status/1358103884150018049

[Assistant]
>>136740266
>>136739614
pretty nurse lady


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>2 weeks later
I am forgotten...

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>>136700738 (OP)
Well clearly not if this thread is still up


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>>136740266
>>136739614
pretty nurse lady

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>>136749214
Bobby got so lucky


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>>136749214
Bobby got so lucky

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>>136749398
Now this is a rare Elsa. She's smiling.


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>>136749214
Bobby got so lucky

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>>136749398
more elsa MORE !!!


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>>136726175
/co/ and 4chan as a whole is obsessed with trannies

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>>136726505
>"maaaaaaaan, I just want to get away from wokeness that surrounds me, remove woke propaganda from my moving drawings entertainment products"
>can't stop talking about trannies and even forces ufunny memes about them on taiwanese lemon farming forum
Your average 4tarder.


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>>136749398
Now this is a rare Elsa. She's smiling.

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>>136749436
taken from a patreon stream, not sure if there is a full res one.

posted it earlier but heres another rare smiler >>136715932

Elsa smiles are rare but that just means they are worth cherishing more


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>>136712684
For me, it's Elsa.

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>>136749436
taken from a patreon stream, not sure if there is a full res one.

posted it earlier but heres another rare smiler >>136715932

Elsa smiles are rare but that just means they are worth cherishing more


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>>136749436
taken from a patreon stream, not sure if there is a full res one.

posted it earlier but heres another rare smiler >>136715932

Elsa smiles are rare but that just means they are worth cherishing more

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>>136749710
Just the slightest upturn to the cheeks. Thats all Elsa needs to throw on a veil of happiness existing within a sea of sorrow.


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>>136749046
I wonder what Mordecai would look like compared to Ivy.
Ivy in cat form looks way too sleek and slender compared to her gnome looking self, she looks like a 8-10 year old in her anthro form.

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>>136749792
Ivy is slender so I think her cat form is accurate but you're right that she looks much younger than her age. I wonder if she's meant to appeal to the loli crowd at this point.
See >>136705915


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>>136702306
What do you mean anon?

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>>136749792
Ivy is slender so I think her cat form is accurate but you're right that she looks much younger than her age. I wonder if she's meant to appeal to the loli crowd at this point.
See >>136705915


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>>136749792
Ivy is slender so I think her cat form is accurate but you're right that she looks much younger than her age. I wonder if she's meant to appeal to the loli crowd at this point.
See >>136705915

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>>136750116
The term you're looking for is femboy.


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>>136750116
The term you're looking for is femboy.

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>>136750177
No. The term I'm looking for involves being able to rape her for months without her flagging in her resistance or hatred.


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>>136749710
Just the slightest upturn to the cheeks. Thats all Elsa needs to throw on a veil of happiness existing within a sea of sorrow.

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>>136749852
I was originally thinking Elsa might've been cheating on Bobby with Viktor, but seeing this and re reading her thoughts in the comic, I do think she is genuinely happy with Bobby, she is just so weary that she almost needs him to balance her out.


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>2 weeks later
I am forgotten...

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>>136700738 (OP)
There's something eloquent of the script and dialogue between characters reminiscent of a Tom Sawyer story.


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>>136700738 (OP)
There's something eloquent of the script and dialogue between characters reminiscent of a Tom Sawyer story.

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>>136752532
first time ive seen someone else point that out. i love it


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>>136700738 (OP)
There's something eloquent of the script and dialogue between characters reminiscent of a Tom Sawyer story.

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>>136752532
Well, the author is pretty damn researched on the comic. Usually when there's an anachronism they make a note in the comments of their comic (such as being unsure if paper napkins had actually appeared due to a lack of available information at the time and Viktor having a model of radio that wouldn't be available for another few years).

I will say, with how researched she is, one thing that stuck out to me in the short was just no visible shots of Serafine reloading her BAR since I think she's using one with only a 20 round magazine. Especially since it's a plotpoint twice that Freckle, by contrast, runs out of ammo.


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>>136700738 (OP)
I just didn't find it entertaining, for some reason. The animation is fine, but the setting is kinda bland, and the characters are extremely vague, I didn't understand any of them. Is the main guy just quirky or is he legitimately retarded? What about the other guy who shoots the guns, what's his deal? Is he mentally ill? Are they both mentally ill? What about the girl, what's her specialty? And who are all those other people, are they important? Is that bar the main setting, and if it is, could they show us just a bit more of it?
It didn't really hook me in any way. For comparison, Hazbin did a much better job quickly setting everyone up and spelling out the setting in a way that makes you ask questions. It was fun to think about. This has a lot of fancy spectacle, but I wasn't asking for more by the end, I was just kinda done with it. And that's not a good thing for a pilot.


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>>136700738 (OP)
I just didn't find it entertaining, for some reason. The animation is fine, but the setting is kinda bland, and the characters are extremely vague, I didn't understand any of them. Is the main guy just quirky or is he legitimately retarded? What about the other guy who shoots the guns, what's his deal? Is he mentally ill? Are they both mentally ill? What about the girl, what's her specialty? And who are all those other people, are they important? Is that bar the main setting, and if it is, could they show us just a bit more of it?
It didn't really hook me in any way. For comparison, Hazbin did a much better job quickly setting everyone up and spelling out the setting in a way that makes you ask questions. It was fun to think about. This has a lot of fancy spectacle, but I wasn't asking for more by the end, I was just kinda done with it. And that's not a good thing for a pilot.

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>>136753063
not entirely brushing off your criticisms, but in regards to the bland setting and not wanting more: sometimes media just isn't made for you and that's okay.

some execs might see it the same way you do, but i'm banking on at least a few execs that might be into a historical fiction crime-drama-comedy with funny cats. just a few. i'm only begging a little bit.


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>>136700738 (OP)
I just didn't find it entertaining, for some reason. The animation is fine, but the setting is kinda bland, and the characters are extremely vague, I didn't understand any of them. Is the main guy just quirky or is he legitimately retarded? What about the other guy who shoots the guns, what's his deal? Is he mentally ill? Are they both mentally ill? What about the girl, what's her specialty? And who are all those other people, are they important? Is that bar the main setting, and if it is, could they show us just a bit more of it?
It didn't really hook me in any way. For comparison, Hazbin did a much better job quickly setting everyone up and spelling out the setting in a way that makes you ask questions. It was fun to think about. This has a lot of fancy spectacle, but I wasn't asking for more by the end, I was just kinda done with it. And that's not a good thing for a pilot.

[Assistant]
>>136753063
Hazbin is sensory overload. I don't get why so many people like it. If anything it's too much of an information dump. Lackadaisy also has much better scene composition, which I feel goes underappreciated. There isn't a single scene where you're wondering what you're looking at.


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>>136705652
>>136710423
What about... Crazy Freckle and Serafine?

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>>136744877
A daring proposition... but I dunno, I don't see Serafine actually genuinely being attracted to anybody- maybe just pretending to be long enough to lure them into knife range.


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>>136749186
Is that the same car from the original title drop illustration? I think it is.

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>>136753734
Thats not jsut a car that's Rocky's house, pay some respect.


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>>136753734
Thats not jsut a car that's Rocky's house, pay some respect.

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>>136754810
rocky's gotta smell so bad


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>>136755164
I love the "girl force herself on boy" trope.

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>>136755357
That's just a long way to say rape.


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>>136702288
But isn't that the point? That we, the uninitiated see this world through the eyes of Rocky and Freckle, both also uninformed? And the fact that this world existed before we got here and the people in it have a history we can't know entirely but through snippets of interaction?

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>>136748570
No, there are hundreds of stories where the main characters aren't green horns unaware of everything. We gain context to their work via their actions and understanding of their world by their discussions with others that ask them of their lives. This is exposition 101.


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>>136754810
rocky's gotta smell so bad

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>>136755000
Just ponder on the aroma, must be quite pungent


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>>136748570
No, there are hundreds of stories where the main characters aren't green horns unaware of everything. We gain context to their work via their actions and understanding of their world by their discussions with others that ask them of their lives. This is exposition 101.

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>>136755516
>discussions with others that ask them of their lives
YOUUUUUUUUU DDDDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE
fucking retard. That's called having an audience proxy. Someone who knows nothing of this world so that it doesn't feel like exposition when someone explains to literal mcbraindead Ser Freezy how to use the alchemical toiletries, or why the sky is piss.


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>>136755516
>discussions with others that ask them of their lives
YOUUUUUUUUU DDDDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE
fucking retard. That's called having an audience proxy. Someone who knows nothing of this world so that it doesn't feel like exposition when someone explains to literal mcbraindead Ser Freezy how to use the alchemical toiletries, or why the sky is piss.

[Assistant]
>>136755649
why are rocky fags like this?


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>>136755357
That's just a long way to say rape.

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>>136755420
I love the "rape" trope


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>>136755357
That's just a long way to say rape.

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>>136755420
Even if that's true anon, the fact is that they're fictional characters and I'm allowed to think it's cute. And so does Tracy apparently, since she like things such as pic related.


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>>136755420
Even if that's true anon, the fact is that they're fictional characters and I'm allowed to think it's cute. And so does Tracy apparently, since she like things such as pic related.

[Assistant]
>>136756184
Women's main fetish is rape.


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>>136756184
Women's main fetish is rape.

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>>136756529
They do enjoy raping men, don't they?


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>>136756529
They do enjoy raping men, don't they?

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>>136756733
If not physically then mentally


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>>136749852
I was originally thinking Elsa might've been cheating on Bobby with Viktor, but seeing this and re reading her thoughts in the comic, I do think she is genuinely happy with Bobby, she is just so weary that she almost needs him to balance her out.

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>>136752117
I always interpreted it as a sort of 'what could have been' thing, like she loves her husband and remains faithful but there is still some part of her that wonders (perhaps wishes) she had married Vik instead.


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>>136752117
I always interpreted it as a sort of 'what could have been' thing, like she loves her husband and remains faithful but there is still some part of her that wonders (perhaps wishes) she had married Vik instead.

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>>136757728
I like to think they at least kissed with tongue once.


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>>136749186
Is that the same car from the original title drop illustration? I think it is.

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>>136753734
>>136749186
Always interesting to compare the current designs for the characters with their original look.


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>>136753734
>>136749186
Always interesting to compare the current designs for the characters with their original look.

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>>136758185
Poor Mitzi got down syndrome


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>>136753734
>>136749186
Always interesting to compare the current designs for the characters with their original look.

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>>136758185
The designs obviously went through reworks but also character wise too.
Rocky was originally a sleazy gambler type who would be a lot more sly then goofy.
Freckle was originally planned to be a lot more psychotic 24/7. That got reduced and now he's a lot more innocent with only the gun rage remaining.
With Mitzi she used to sort of be seen as part of their gang directly. More like a trio.

Honestly I am kinda glad Tracy evolved these designs and character traits, the original incarnations would've been far less charming then what we have now.


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>>136753734
>>136749186
Always interesting to compare the current designs for the characters with their original look.

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>>136758185
He still has the three of clubs, even in his prototype.

>>136758490
Proving that an idea is not born great, but made great.


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>>136758185
The designs obviously went through reworks but also character wise too.
Rocky was originally a sleazy gambler type who would be a lot more sly then goofy.
Freckle was originally planned to be a lot more psychotic 24/7. That got reduced and now he's a lot more innocent with only the gun rage remaining.
With Mitzi she used to sort of be seen as part of their gang directly. More like a trio.

Honestly I am kinda glad Tracy evolved these designs and character traits, the original incarnations would've been far less charming then what we have now.

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>>136758185
He still has the three of clubs, even in his prototype.

>>136758490
Proving that an idea is not born great, but made great.


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>>136753734
>>136749186
Always interesting to compare the current designs for the characters with their original look.

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>>136758185
I'm sure there are some people that prefer the old designs but baggy oversized suits look hideous nowadays. Slender characters are probably easier to express body language with too.


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[User] I hate that now no one else can make a cartoon about prohibition without being called a rip off.

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>>136759496
Well you need to wait until someone does first


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[User] I hate that now no one else can make a cartoon about prohibition without being called a rip off.

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>>136759496
I'm sure the two other people who had an interest in doing that must be miffed


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>>136715310
The best antagonists for a Lackadaisy lovecraft story would probably be Yig Cultists or Elder Things. Cultists would be simple, either a group of snake worshippers move into St. Louis or it's revealed they've always been there, they start doing rituals, commiting murder, tainting the booze with snake venom. At first the Lackadaisy gang thinks they're just dealing with rivals, but it becomes clear that's not the case as stranger and stranger things happen. Like simply huge snakes being seen, along with horrid cat-serpent hybrids.

Elder Things would be much more of a slowburn. First some new fossils are found in the quarries and underground cave systems of St. Louis, peculiar almost formless, as well as what looks like machinery. And tthen one day either at a museum or at a quarry one of these specimens comes to life, going on a small rampage before escaping back into the caves. This would lead to underground places like the Lackadaisy speakeasy being threatened by much more than just rival establishments.

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>>136717238
Nah fuck that. Turf war with the Innsmouth fishman mafia or no deal.


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>>136728064
>oh noes he critiques my perfect show. something must be wrong with him.

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>>136730412
No one said being autistic was a bad thing, anon! Maybe you should get rid of your own biases first


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>>136758185
I'm sure there are some people that prefer the old designs but baggy oversized suits look hideous nowadays. Slender characters are probably easier to express body language with too.

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>>136759486
The baggier suits were changed according to Tracy because they existed in the 40s, not the 20s.


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>>136705652
>>136710423
What about... Crazy Freckle and Serafine?

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>>136744877
>Young, easily spooked, impressionable bf
and
>Older, spooky, manipulative gf

Brother of my heart


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[User] Some say that Mordecai is the autistic one but gotta say, Wick is pretty damn autistic when it comes to rocks

[Assistant]
>>136759947
>she will never lick your chert


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[User] Some say that Mordecai is the autistic one but gotta say, Wick is pretty damn autistic when it comes to rocks

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>>136759947
Mordecai seems more like the OCD type of guy, is like with time people forgot about common stereotypes and now everyone is forcibly called autistic
Wick is totally an autist though, look at him infodumping


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[User] Some say that Mordecai is the autistic one but gotta say, Wick is pretty damn autistic when it comes to rocks

[Assistant] >>136759947


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[User] >>136759947

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>>136760205
>/co/


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[User] Some say that Mordecai is the autistic one but gotta say, Wick is pretty damn autistic when it comes to rocks

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>>136759947
I don't get it


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>>136759947
I don't get it

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>>136760327
The content or the comic or why Wick is an autist?
For the latter, info dumping your obsessive love of rocks onto the owner of a speakeasy you've not met is a tad autsy


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>>136759947
I don't get it

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>>136760327
geologists lick rocks


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>>136759947
I don't get it

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>>136760327
>>136761973
Also, the joke is that as weird as that was, apparently there's not only a bunch of other people doing it but Lackadaisy charges for it.

On the side note: a designated licking wall invalidates the point of licking the walls! You're trying to get a measure of the stone, if it's a licking wall you'll just be getting other people's spit.

>>136759947
I guess I'm pretty autistic too since I actually liked Wick's infodump and found the impromptu geology lesson fascinating. But I also actually liked Eirik from the Monk job questline's history lectures in Final Fantasy XIV.


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>>136760327
geologists lick rocks

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>>136760327
>>136761973
Also, the joke is that as weird as that was, apparently there's not only a bunch of other people doing it but Lackadaisy charges for it.

On the side note: a designated licking wall invalidates the point of licking the walls! You're trying to get a measure of the stone, if it's a licking wall you'll just be getting other people's spit.

>>136759947
I guess I'm pretty autistic too since I actually liked Wick's infodump and found the impromptu geology lesson fascinating. But I also actually liked Eirik from the Monk job questline's history lectures in Final Fantasy XIV.


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[User] Some say that Mordecai is the autistic one but gotta say, Wick is pretty damn autistic when it comes to rocks

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>>136760327
>>136761973
Also, the joke is that as weird as that was, apparently there's not only a bunch of other people doing it but Lackadaisy charges for it.

On the side note: a designated licking wall invalidates the point of licking the walls! You're trying to get a measure of the stone, if it's a licking wall you'll just be getting other people's spit.

>>136759947
I guess I'm pretty autistic too since I actually liked Wick's infodump and found the impromptu geology lesson fascinating. But I also actually liked Eirik from the Monk job questline's history lectures in Final Fantasy XIV.


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>>136752117
I always interpreted it as a sort of 'what could have been' thing, like she loves her husband and remains faithful but there is still some part of her that wonders (perhaps wishes) she had married Vik instead.

[Assistant]
>>136757728
For Vik I feel like Elsa is the once person he can talk to without any defence or brittle exterior. Both suffered horrific hardships in the war and probably find comfort in each others company. Weather that could translate out to love is unclear. We might possibly get an interaction between them if Tracy is getting back to the comic so hopefully that can shed some light on the relationship.


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>>136760327
>>136761973
Also, the joke is that as weird as that was, apparently there's not only a bunch of other people doing it but Lackadaisy charges for it.

On the side note: a designated licking wall invalidates the point of licking the walls! You're trying to get a measure of the stone, if it's a licking wall you'll just be getting other people's spit.

>>136759947
I guess I'm pretty autistic too since I actually liked Wick's infodump and found the impromptu geology lesson fascinating. But I also actually liked Eirik from the Monk job questline's history lectures in Final Fantasy XIV.

[Assistant]
>>136762186
>Being able to Tolerate Eirik
My friend you have my upmost respect.


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>>136760327
geologists lick rocks

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>>136761973
I guess you could say I'm something of gynecologist then


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[User] this cat is wheeded the fuck out

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>>136762524
I kinda love Zib "Can't be fucked" existence. Guy just wants to play jazz and sleep


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>>136762524
I kinda love Zib "Can't be fucked" existence. Guy just wants to play jazz and sleep

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>>136762650
said it before i'll say it again: i want him carnally


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[User] Some say that Mordecai is the autistic one but gotta say, Wick is pretty damn autistic when it comes to rocks

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>>136759947
Man, I wish I paid attention more in my geology classes. Was cool to learn that geologists really do lick rocks, though.


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>>136760327
>>136761973
Also, the joke is that as weird as that was, apparently there's not only a bunch of other people doing it but Lackadaisy charges for it.

On the side note: a designated licking wall invalidates the point of licking the walls! You're trying to get a measure of the stone, if it's a licking wall you'll just be getting other people's spit.

>>136759947
I guess I'm pretty autistic too since I actually liked Wick's infodump and found the impromptu geology lesson fascinating. But I also actually liked Eirik from the Monk job questline's history lectures in Final Fantasy XIV.

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>>136762186
>Also, the joke is that as weird as that was, apparently there's not only a bunch of other people doing it but Lackadaisy charges for it.
Those guys aren't licking the actual wall, they're trying to get at the fluid seeping in through the walls (which I guess is alcohol?).


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[User] this cat is wheeded the fuck out

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>>136762524
The term weed as slang for cannabis actually goes back to the 1920s, fun fact.


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>>136762524
I kinda love Zib "Can't be fucked" existence. Guy just wants to play jazz and sleep

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>>136762650
I think if he had a choice, he wouldn’t even play jazz.


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>>136762186
>Being able to Tolerate Eirik
My friend you have my upmost respect.

[Assistant]
>>136762355
He drops some interesting lore info in uneditted lectures if you talk to him after he gives you quests.

>>136752117
>>136757728
>>136762287
I could see it as an emotional affair than anything. Honestly, I will say Viktor, for all his violence, seems pretty well-adjusted for a war veteran, just socially entrapped in a criminal life, then again, maybe it's, in a messed up way, because being a legbreaker gave him an outlet for his anger.

I do think the consolation is that, given the Pilot actually seems to be a sequel to the comic, it seems Viktor does recover from his pneumonia and seems in slightly better spirits. At least enough to death glare people and still be overtly bothered by Ivy getting into the business.

>>136762894
And as I said up thread: I hope you're ready to do basically everything because Zib seems so low energy you couldn't give him stiffie if your mouth was a black hole.


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>>136749852
I was originally thinking Elsa might've been cheating on Bobby with Viktor, but seeing this and re reading her thoughts in the comic, I do think she is genuinely happy with Bobby, she is just so weary that she almost needs him to balance her out.

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>>136762355
He drops some interesting lore info in uneditted lectures if you talk to him after he gives you quests.

>>136752117
>>136757728
>>136762287
I could see it as an emotional affair than anything. Honestly, I will say Viktor, for all his violence, seems pretty well-adjusted for a war veteran, just socially entrapped in a criminal life, then again, maybe it's, in a messed up way, because being a legbreaker gave him an outlet for his anger.

I do think the consolation is that, given the Pilot actually seems to be a sequel to the comic, it seems Viktor does recover from his pneumonia and seems in slightly better spirits. At least enough to death glare people and still be overtly bothered by Ivy getting into the business.

>>136762894
And as I said up thread: I hope you're ready to do basically everything because Zib seems so low energy you couldn't give him stiffie if your mouth was a black hole.


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>>136752117
I always interpreted it as a sort of 'what could have been' thing, like she loves her husband and remains faithful but there is still some part of her that wonders (perhaps wishes) she had married Vik instead.

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>>136762355
He drops some interesting lore info in uneditted lectures if you talk to him after he gives you quests.

>>136752117
>>136757728
>>136762287
I could see it as an emotional affair than anything. Honestly, I will say Viktor, for all his violence, seems pretty well-adjusted for a war veteran, just socially entrapped in a criminal life, then again, maybe it's, in a messed up way, because being a legbreaker gave him an outlet for his anger.

I do think the consolation is that, given the Pilot actually seems to be a sequel to the comic, it seems Viktor does recover from his pneumonia and seems in slightly better spirits. At least enough to death glare people and still be overtly bothered by Ivy getting into the business.

>>136762894
And as I said up thread: I hope you're ready to do basically everything because Zib seems so low energy you couldn't give him stiffie if your mouth was a black hole.


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>>136757728
For Vik I feel like Elsa is the once person he can talk to without any defence or brittle exterior. Both suffered horrific hardships in the war and probably find comfort in each others company. Weather that could translate out to love is unclear. We might possibly get an interaction between them if Tracy is getting back to the comic so hopefully that can shed some light on the relationship.

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>>136762355
He drops some interesting lore info in uneditted lectures if you talk to him after he gives you quests.

>>136752117
>>136757728
>>136762287
I could see it as an emotional affair than anything. Honestly, I will say Viktor, for all his violence, seems pretty well-adjusted for a war veteran, just socially entrapped in a criminal life, then again, maybe it's, in a messed up way, because being a legbreaker gave him an outlet for his anger.

I do think the consolation is that, given the Pilot actually seems to be a sequel to the comic, it seems Viktor does recover from his pneumonia and seems in slightly better spirits. At least enough to death glare people and still be overtly bothered by Ivy getting into the business.

>>136762894
And as I said up thread: I hope you're ready to do basically everything because Zib seems so low energy you couldn't give him stiffie if your mouth was a black hole.


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>>136762650
said it before i'll say it again: i want him carnally

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>>136762355
He drops some interesting lore info in uneditted lectures if you talk to him after he gives you quests.

>>136752117
>>136757728
>>136762287
I could see it as an emotional affair than anything. Honestly, I will say Viktor, for all his violence, seems pretty well-adjusted for a war veteran, just socially entrapped in a criminal life, then again, maybe it's, in a messed up way, because being a legbreaker gave him an outlet for his anger.

I do think the consolation is that, given the Pilot actually seems to be a sequel to the comic, it seems Viktor does recover from his pneumonia and seems in slightly better spirits. At least enough to death glare people and still be overtly bothered by Ivy getting into the business.

>>136762894
And as I said up thread: I hope you're ready to do basically everything because Zib seems so low energy you couldn't give him stiffie if your mouth was a black hole.


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>>136762650
said it before i'll say it again: i want him carnally

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>>136762894
same


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>>136762894
same

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>>136764165
Feels like in the pilot they played Zib to be a little bit gay, even if it's just subtle.


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>>136762355
He drops some interesting lore info in uneditted lectures if you talk to him after he gives you quests.

>>136752117
>>136757728
>>136762287
I could see it as an emotional affair than anything. Honestly, I will say Viktor, for all his violence, seems pretty well-adjusted for a war veteran, just socially entrapped in a criminal life, then again, maybe it's, in a messed up way, because being a legbreaker gave him an outlet for his anger.

I do think the consolation is that, given the Pilot actually seems to be a sequel to the comic, it seems Viktor does recover from his pneumonia and seems in slightly better spirits. At least enough to death glare people and still be overtly bothered by Ivy getting into the business.

>>136762894
And as I said up thread: I hope you're ready to do basically everything because Zib seems so low energy you couldn't give him stiffie if your mouth was a black hole.

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>>136764094
>Pilot seems to be a sequel
It's not really, more of the same world, same character, almost same story, just played differently. The pilot is more to show of the world and potential to investors.

>Viktor being adjusted.
Eh, he knows his stuff and he knows when to hold back, Out of everything I think Viktor wants a quiet life, not bothered by anyone, but his life choices and commitment to Atlas's dream keep breaking him and bringing him back into the violent fray. Elsa and the Defiance mortuary was probably the only real solace he's had.


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>>136764094
>Pilot seems to be a sequel
It's not really, more of the same world, same character, almost same story, just played differently. The pilot is more to show of the world and potential to investors.

>Viktor being adjusted.
Eh, he knows his stuff and he knows when to hold back, Out of everything I think Viktor wants a quiet life, not bothered by anyone, but his life choices and commitment to Atlas's dream keep breaking him and bringing him back into the violent fray. Elsa and the Defiance mortuary was probably the only real solace he's had.

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>>136764279
I mean it seems to largely follow up on comic plot points:
>Feds are in St. Louis now
>Mortuary is now supplying Lackadaisy despite prior commitments to Marigold
>Recent comics have dated things as May of 1927 while Mitzy's newspaper reading to Atlas refers to a real world death that happened in September of 1927 (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Isadora_Duncan)

To be honest, the only standout things that suggest it's entirely its own thing is that Rocky already knows Ivy never actually learned to drive, though that could be justified with him having learned that before getting his head split open.


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>>136764094
>Pilot seems to be a sequel
It's not really, more of the same world, same character, almost same story, just played differently. The pilot is more to show of the world and potential to investors.

>Viktor being adjusted.
Eh, he knows his stuff and he knows when to hold back, Out of everything I think Viktor wants a quiet life, not bothered by anyone, but his life choices and commitment to Atlas's dream keep breaking him and bringing him back into the violent fray. Elsa and the Defiance mortuary was probably the only real solace he's had.

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>>136764279
>>136764553
Dunno how I feel about having it be a sequel instead of its own separate (but similar) continuity, because then we'd already know all the main characters survive and the Lackadaisy still exists after the events of the comic unfold. I mean sure, there's other ways of creating and maintaining suspense than "who lives? who dies?" but knowing preemptively that everyone's gonna be okay and things will go 'back to normal' in the end of it all does suck some of the thrill out of it. Then again it's entirely possible that this whole project has all gone for so long that Tracy has become so attached to each character she feels reluctant to kill any of them off. That kind of thing has happened before.


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>>136764279
I mean it seems to largely follow up on comic plot points:
>Feds are in St. Louis now
>Mortuary is now supplying Lackadaisy despite prior commitments to Marigold
>Recent comics have dated things as May of 1927 while Mitzy's newspaper reading to Atlas refers to a real world death that happened in September of 1927 (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Isadora_Duncan)

To be honest, the only standout things that suggest it's entirely its own thing is that Rocky already knows Ivy never actually learned to drive, though that could be justified with him having learned that before getting his head split open.

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>>136764279
>>136764553
Dunno how I feel about having it be a sequel instead of its own separate (but similar) continuity, because then we'd already know all the main characters survive and the Lackadaisy still exists after the events of the comic unfold. I mean sure, there's other ways of creating and maintaining suspense than "who lives? who dies?" but knowing preemptively that everyone's gonna be okay and things will go 'back to normal' in the end of it all does suck some of the thrill out of it. Then again it's entirely possible that this whole project has all gone for so long that Tracy has become so attached to each character she feels reluctant to kill any of them off. That kind of thing has happened before.


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>>136764279
>>136764553
Dunno how I feel about having it be a sequel instead of its own separate (but similar) continuity, because then we'd already know all the main characters survive and the Lackadaisy still exists after the events of the comic unfold. I mean sure, there's other ways of creating and maintaining suspense than "who lives? who dies?" but knowing preemptively that everyone's gonna be okay and things will go 'back to normal' in the end of it all does suck some of the thrill out of it. Then again it's entirely possible that this whole project has all gone for so long that Tracy has become so attached to each character she feels reluctant to kill any of them off. That kind of thing has happened before.

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>>136765406
Uh, I believe Tracy's said she doesn't plan to have the comic/storyline end until after the Great Depression begins but before Prohibition is repealed. So, odds are still pretty high some folks are gonna be dead by the end of the story. My money is on:

>Viktor
>At least of the morticians
>Zib
>Wick (Tracy's even drawn his initial reaction to the stockmarket crash)

There's also some likely candidates I feel unsure of, in my mind it'd depend on if Tracy intends to see the members leave the rum running business or remain in it. If it's meant to end then Mitzy is probably gone (to be honest not sure even she could handle losing both Zib and Wick, even if her feelings to the latter are questionable it seems she cares enough), Mordecai is highly likely but I feel there's decent enough odds of his survival, Freckle, Rocky, and Ivy have a chance depending on how dark Tracy would take the series, Ivy especially since that would probably be something that would put Calvin into perma-crazy mode like in the concept art.


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>>136764279
I mean it seems to largely follow up on comic plot points:
>Feds are in St. Louis now
>Mortuary is now supplying Lackadaisy despite prior commitments to Marigold
>Recent comics have dated things as May of 1927 while Mitzy's newspaper reading to Atlas refers to a real world death that happened in September of 1927 (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Isadora_Duncan)

To be honest, the only standout things that suggest it's entirely its own thing is that Rocky already knows Ivy never actually learned to drive, though that could be justified with him having learned that before getting his head split open.

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>>136764553
>Recent comics have dated things as May of 1927
No, I think the comic is September as well. Because they’re just about to get  the tornado.

Mitzi is shown lamenting that she forgot to host the May Day Ball that year, but I think a part of that scene is that she’s only just realizing that like five months too late, making it extra depressing.


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>>136765406
Uh, I believe Tracy's said she doesn't plan to have the comic/storyline end until after the Great Depression begins but before Prohibition is repealed. So, odds are still pretty high some folks are gonna be dead by the end of the story. My money is on:

>Viktor
>At least of the morticians
>Zib
>Wick (Tracy's even drawn his initial reaction to the stockmarket crash)

There's also some likely candidates I feel unsure of, in my mind it'd depend on if Tracy intends to see the members leave the rum running business or remain in it. If it's meant to end then Mitzy is probably gone (to be honest not sure even she could handle losing both Zib and Wick, even if her feelings to the latter are questionable it seems she cares enough), Mordecai is highly likely but I feel there's decent enough odds of his survival, Freckle, Rocky, and Ivy have a chance depending on how dark Tracy would take the series, Ivy especially since that would probably be something that would put Calvin into perma-crazy mode like in the concept art.

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>>136765525
>Uh, I believe Tracy's said she doesn't plan to have the comic/storyline end until after the Great Depression begins but before Prohibition is repealed.
It took thirteen years to get through, what, four days? Aren't we at the early morning of the fifth day now? I feel as if any amount of time passing (months, let alone years) will feel like complete whiplash. Curious how it would work in any case.


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[User] Some say that Mordecai is the autistic one but gotta say, Wick is pretty damn autistic when it comes to rocks

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>>136759947
This is a good example of "men written by women"


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>>136765525
>Uh, I believe Tracy's said she doesn't plan to have the comic/storyline end until after the Great Depression begins but before Prohibition is repealed.
It took thirteen years to get through, what, four days? Aren't we at the early morning of the fifth day now? I feel as if any amount of time passing (months, let alone years) will feel like complete whiplash. Curious how it would work in any case.

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>>136765681
there's gonna be a time skip


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I am in love with the production of this show
https://twitter.com/LackadaisyCats/status/1645946474402816000

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>>136767892
The construction sketch line thing is retarded


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>>136767892
The construction sketch line thing is retarded

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>>136768200
I think it's charming but I wouldn't expect it in a proper series


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[User] So is Serafine black?

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>>136769114
She's blacker than black. She's French-American.


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[User] So is Serafine black?

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>>136769114
>>136769151
She's clearly a white cat.


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>>136769114
She's blacker than black. She's French-American.

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>>136769114
>>136769151
She's clearly a white cat.


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Ivy's ears as she hears the knives being honed
Ivy's eyes as she watches her arm being severed
Ivy's nose as she smells her arm being prepared
Ivy's tongue as she tastes her own flesh
Ivy's flesh as she is consumed piece by piece so the rest can live a second longer

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>>136769356
>Not cooking your meat
ngmi


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>>136700738 (OP)
I finally got around to watching it and while I think the art direction and animation is pretty first class I still found it extremely underwhelming. When literally EVERY single side character is more interesting and better characterized than your main trio I gotta ask what the fuck were they thinking? Like holy shit Rocky is an annoying fuck. The whole split personality one is a tiresome trope. The only character of the main three that's entertaining is the girl and even then she can't carry the scenes she's in when she's dragged down by the other two. The pilot feels very all style and little substance and the main characters come off as self inserts rather than legitimate characters of their own. Real shame given that the side cast of characters are all well defined interesting and not completely annoyingly over the top.

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>>136702288
I feel ya anon, I got around to read the comic, and the pilot feels a bit better after you get aroun the comic. Still, I feel like it wasn't able to capture the soul of the comic.

Rocky, being your main point, is a bit more interesting in the comic, maybe because the way you get to know him is more slow pace, you see that he had a rough pass with his parents, when on working here and there, end up living in a car. Having this job is pretty much everything he got left (he outright say that if he get fire he will become a vagabond), so maybe his goofy personality is a way to cope with everything...

Also, the "split personality" was a strange choice, in the comic he was just goofy, and after he got the stitches he became a bit more... unnerving, not "Crazy". So I don't know what kind of direction they are going with this shit...


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>>136702288
I feel ya anon, I got around to read the comic, and the pilot feels a bit better after you get aroun the comic. Still, I feel like it wasn't able to capture the soul of the comic.

Rocky, being your main point, is a bit more interesting in the comic, maybe because the way you get to know him is more slow pace, you see that he had a rough pass with his parents, when on working here and there, end up living in a car. Having this job is pretty much everything he got left (he outright say that if he get fire he will become a vagabond), so maybe his goofy personality is a way to cope with everything...

Also, the "split personality" was a strange choice, in the comic he was just goofy, and after he got the stitches he became a bit more... unnerving, not "Crazy". So I don't know what kind of direction they are going with this shit...

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>>136769968
forgot pic.


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>>136759947
This is a good example of "men written by women"

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>>136766629
Are you trying to say I won't infodump some crazy shit to someone I just meet if they ask me to?


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[User] Some say that Mordecai is the autistic one but gotta say, Wick is pretty damn autistic when it comes to rocks

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>>136759947
>>136761973
I didn't know that geologists lick rocks. That's weird but interesting.
Wick might be becoming my favorite character. I find it oddly endearing how he's so fascinated with something as boring as rocks.


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>>136760327
geologists lick rocks

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>>136759947
>>136761973
I didn't know that geologists lick rocks. That's weird but interesting.
Wick might be becoming my favorite character. I find it oddly endearing how he's so fascinated with something as boring as rocks.


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[User] this cat is wheeded the fuck out

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>>136762524
Kinda sad she doesn't have a cat character to interview the cast with, but I understand not wanting to deal with "Are you a furry?" questions (anymore than her old art already warrants), and the inevitable event of seeing someone draw your self-insert having sex with anyone of their choosing.


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>>136764165
Feels like in the pilot they played Zib to be a little bit gay, even if it's just subtle.

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>>136764220
I'm not sure if it was gayness, or sexual obliviousness.
Leaning toward the latter.


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>>136759947
>>136761973
I didn't know that geologists lick rocks. That's weird but interesting.
Wick might be becoming my favorite character. I find it oddly endearing how he's so fascinated with something as boring as rocks.

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>>136770255
Wick is also just a nice guy. Poor man is being taken for a ride.


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>>136759947
>>136761973
I didn't know that geologists lick rocks. That's weird but interesting.
Wick might be becoming my favorite character. I find it oddly endearing how he's so fascinated with something as boring as rocks.

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>>136770255
Its limestone. And the sheer cost-saving of cutting out the proccess of transportation flies over the heads of thesw so-called "businessmen".

>>136770921
Agreed. He should stop pining after Mitsi and marry Lacy. And he will, after Lacy tells him where that hole in his accounting can be accounted for.


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>>136770255
Wick is also just a nice guy. Poor man is being taken for a ride.

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>>136770255
Its limestone. And the sheer cost-saving of cutting out the proccess of transportation flies over the heads of thesw so-called "businessmen".

>>136770921
Agreed. He should stop pining after Mitsi and marry Lacy. And he will, after Lacy tells him where that hole in his accounting can be accounted for.


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>>136762524
Kinda sad she doesn't have a cat character to interview the cast with, but I understand not wanting to deal with "Are you a furry?" questions (anymore than her old art already warrants), and the inevitable event of seeing someone draw your self-insert having sex with anyone of their choosing.

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>>136770380
https://yerf.metafur.org/butltrac?page=1
Here's a link to her old furry arts if anyone's curious. Interesting to see how she started before deciding to practice more human anatomy.


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>>136762524
Kinda sad she doesn't have a cat character to interview the cast with, but I understand not wanting to deal with "Are you a furry?" questions (anymore than her old art already warrants), and the inevitable event of seeing someone draw your self-insert having sex with anyone of their choosing.

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>>136770380
Furry hands drew this.


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>>136770380
https://yerf.metafur.org/butltrac?page=1
Here's a link to her old furry arts if anyone's curious. Interesting to see how she started before deciding to practice more human anatomy.

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>>136771020
I love some of these, perfect late 90s furry aesthetic where the artist cant decide if they want to make disney furries or anime


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>>136769356
>Not cooking your meat
ngmi

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>>136769818
Ivy will eat her meat like a fucking chink, and love it!


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>>136727164
None of those questions are important or relevant for a pilot and are easily filled in details if a series is picked up. What matters for a pilot is if what you have works moment-to-moment, not the big picture stuff.

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>>136732635
Depends on the type of pilot they were making.

This pilot is meant to sell us on the series.

There are universal points of how to tell a story.
-Who are these characters
-What are their motives
-why Can't they have it
-resolution

so this pilot for a series failed in introducing the first question.
Who are those characters ?
if they didn't properly introduce them. then why do you care about them ?
(cause they are pretty cats ?) is that all ?

what do they want ?
The main plotline is about prohibition. well not everyone lives and should the history of United states. to know what that means. and can put one on two together. but they could have brought it up somewhere other than a 2 seconds subtitle which came after multiple logos.

Again they are random characters being chased by random thugs. they act randomly and they resolve their issue randomly.
All of this could have worked properly if they properly introduced the characters rather that poem at the start.
one or two throwaway lines would worked.

>>136739120
yes. not everything should be spilled out in the pilot. but the pilot failed to convey the basics or bare minimum.
(From person who didn't read any comic point of view)

Some stuff should be left for the series as you said (watch to find out) like what's the tall cat's back story ?
but this pilot failed to introduce him correctly. I mean is he a one shot character or a recurring one? or perhaps he is the main character ?
the trio in the start are the main cast ?
are they random one shot goons hired by the bar ?

unless one has knowledge outside what's in the pilot they wouldn't know.


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>>136727164
you have to watch to find out
almost like thats the point

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>>136732635
Depends on the type of pilot they were making.

This pilot is meant to sell us on the series.

There are universal points of how to tell a story.
-Who are these characters
-What are their motives
-why Can't they have it
-resolution

so this pilot for a series failed in introducing the first question.
Who are those characters ?
if they didn't properly introduce them. then why do you care about them ?
(cause they are pretty cats ?) is that all ?

what do they want ?
The main plotline is about prohibition. well not everyone lives and should the history of United states. to know what that means. and can put one on two together. but they could have brought it up somewhere other than a 2 seconds subtitle which came after multiple logos.

Again they are random characters being chased by random thugs. they act randomly and they resolve their issue randomly.
All of this could have worked properly if they properly introduced the characters rather that poem at the start.
one or two throwaway lines would worked.

>>136739120
yes. not everything should be spilled out in the pilot. but the pilot failed to convey the basics or bare minimum.
(From person who didn't read any comic point of view)

Some stuff should be left for the series as you said (watch to find out) like what's the tall cat's back story ?
but this pilot failed to introduce him correctly. I mean is he a one shot character or a recurring one? or perhaps he is the main character ?
the trio in the start are the main cast ?
are they random one shot goons hired by the bar ?

unless one has knowledge outside what's in the pilot they wouldn't know.


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>>136732635
Depends on the type of pilot they were making.

This pilot is meant to sell us on the series.

There are universal points of how to tell a story.
-Who are these characters
-What are their motives
-why Can't they have it
-resolution

so this pilot for a series failed in introducing the first question.
Who are those characters ?
if they didn't properly introduce them. then why do you care about them ?
(cause they are pretty cats ?) is that all ?

what do they want ?
The main plotline is about prohibition. well not everyone lives and should the history of United states. to know what that means. and can put one on two together. but they could have brought it up somewhere other than a 2 seconds subtitle which came after multiple logos.

Again they are random characters being chased by random thugs. they act randomly and they resolve their issue randomly.
All of this could have worked properly if they properly introduced the characters rather that poem at the start.
one or two throwaway lines would worked.

>>136739120
yes. not everything should be spilled out in the pilot. but the pilot failed to convey the basics or bare minimum.
(From person who didn't read any comic point of view)

Some stuff should be left for the series as you said (watch to find out) like what's the tall cat's back story ?
but this pilot failed to introduce him correctly. I mean is he a one shot character or a recurring one? or perhaps he is the main character ?
the trio in the start are the main cast ?
are they random one shot goons hired by the bar ?

unless one has knowledge outside what's in the pilot they wouldn't know.

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>>136772318
>cause they are pretty cats ?) is that all
You NEED more?


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>>136732635
Depends on the type of pilot they were making.

This pilot is meant to sell us on the series.

There are universal points of how to tell a story.
-Who are these characters
-What are their motives
-why Can't they have it
-resolution

so this pilot for a series failed in introducing the first question.
Who are those characters ?
if they didn't properly introduce them. then why do you care about them ?
(cause they are pretty cats ?) is that all ?

what do they want ?
The main plotline is about prohibition. well not everyone lives and should the history of United states. to know what that means. and can put one on two together. but they could have brought it up somewhere other than a 2 seconds subtitle which came after multiple logos.

Again they are random characters being chased by random thugs. they act randomly and they resolve their issue randomly.
All of this could have worked properly if they properly introduced the characters rather that poem at the start.
one or two throwaway lines would worked.

>>136739120
yes. not everything should be spilled out in the pilot. but the pilot failed to convey the basics or bare minimum.
(From person who didn't read any comic point of view)

Some stuff should be left for the series as you said (watch to find out) like what's the tall cat's back story ?
but this pilot failed to introduce him correctly. I mean is he a one shot character or a recurring one? or perhaps he is the main character ?
the trio in the start are the main cast ?
are they random one shot goons hired by the bar ?

unless one has knowledge outside what's in the pilot they wouldn't know.

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>>136772318
I see. Those are valid points, I'm not sure why others and I saw no problem with the pilot. If I had to guess, maybe it's because of the opening poem. It took me a few rewatches but it's the closest thing to an explanation of anything that's going on. "This is the setting and shit goes down" is what I understood from it. It almost felt like it was drumming up the setting itself to be the main character. Is that a weird thing to say? I can admit it leaves a lot of questions unanswered but I'm not sure it wants us to ask them in the first place. I guess only time will tell. I'm perfectly content with this being an animation pitch moreso than a story one.


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>>136764220
I'm not sure if it was gayness, or sexual obliviousness.
Leaning toward the latter.

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>>136770388
zib is bi


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>>136772318
I see. Those are valid points, I'm not sure why others and I saw no problem with the pilot. If I had to guess, maybe it's because of the opening poem. It took me a few rewatches but it's the closest thing to an explanation of anything that's going on. "This is the setting and shit goes down" is what I understood from it. It almost felt like it was drumming up the setting itself to be the main character. Is that a weird thing to say? I can admit it leaves a lot of questions unanswered but I'm not sure it wants us to ask them in the first place. I guess only time will tell. I'm perfectly content with this being an animation pitch moreso than a story one.

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>>136773036
the old man river poem really does set up the city and the prohibition as its own whole character and i like that


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>>136770388
zib is bi

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>>136773163
Prove it


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>>136773163
Prove it

[Assistant] >>136773205


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>>136773583
Rocky?


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>>136773583
Rocky?

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>>136773711
Dr. Scott!


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>>136773583
Rocky?

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>>136773711
when i put this handy-dandy link into my handy-dandy searchbar i get this gif


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>>136773711
when i put this handy-dandy link into my handy-dandy searchbar i get this gif

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>>136774274
Should have known better than to expect real answers from liberals. As far as I'm concerned everyone is straight unless drunk


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>>136710423
I mean, Al Capone died of pneumonia when he was 50. Its not impossible to leave the business alive.

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>>136740921
No one said anything about them dying, but Ivy is still treating things like its a fun game instead of a dangerous criminal activity and continuing to give Freckles guns is almost definitely going to end badly for somebody eventually. Either one of those could end up putting a big strain on their relationship if things come to a head.