Da imidlertid flere af vores kolleger, og ikke kun to, har gjort en aktiv indsats for, at ordet »Echelon« ikke skal forekomme nogen steder i teksten, foreslår jeg, at henvisningen til »Echelon« i titlen stryges, såfremt teksten i øvrigt forbliver uforandret, så vores kollegers anstrengelser lykkes 100 %.
Seeing as a few of our colleagues - and not just one or two of them either - have gone to great lengths to ensure that the word 'Echelon' does not appear anywhere in the text, I suggest that we delete the word 'Echelon' from the title itself, if the text remains unchanged. If this happens, then our colleagues will have been 100 % successful in their task.