<p>I may have understood the text wrong, but here is my trial</p>

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  <p>回顾我在 NYMA 训练的两周时，我感觉自学到了许多宝贵的知识。这其中最重要的，就是当这世界上来自不同文化、不同背景的人们都为了一个目标训练（行军）时，能创造出这么多令人难忘的回忆瞬间。而这个目标，就是领导能力。</p>
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2019-03-16T12:33:08.677Z
I like your translation better, but does it alter the original meaning of the speaker?
shenkwen
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@shenkwen I am not sure, could you please explain more about the text you quoted?
zyy
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zyy
<p>回顾我在NYMA的两周，我收获了许多宝贵经验，其中至为重要一条，就是来自世界各地背景殊异的人们，也能在拼搏于统一领导之下时，共同创造难忘经历。</p>

<p>If we must emphasize leadership, it is unnatural if we put it straight forward because it is awkward to put when clause at the end of the sentence. So my best try: </p>

<p>回顾我在NYMA的两周，我收获了许多宝贵经验，其中至为重要一条，就是来自世界各地背景殊异的人们，也有共同创造难忘经历的可能，即当他们拼搏于统一领导之下时得以实现。</p>

<p>More information needed to interpret the figurative expression: march wearing in one uniform: leadership.</p>

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Toosky Hierot
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  <p>Looking back at my two weeks at NYMA, I've learned many valuable lessons, but the most important lesson I will remember is that people from different background all over the world, can create unforgettable experiences together when they march wearing one uniform: leadership.</p>
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<p>上面这个句子的最后一部分该怎么翻译呢？直翻感觉很別扭。</p>

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2019-03-16T23:01:24.810Z
The last sentence reads unnaturally - “in” does not need to be there.
dROOOze
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2019-03-17T01:41:21.153Z
That's my bad, there wasn't an "in" there.
shenkwen
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How to translate "march wearing in one uniform: leadership"
# How to translate "march wearing in one uniform: leadership"

(Asked by: username_0 on 2019-03-16)

> Looking back at my two weeks at NYMA, I've learned many valuable lessons, but the most important lesson I will remember is that people from different background all over the world, can create unforgettable experiences together when they march wearing one uniform: leadership.

上面这个句子的最后一部分该怎么翻译呢？直翻感觉很別扭。

**Tags:** translation

> **Comments:**
> **username_1**: The last sentence reads unnaturally - “in” does not need to be there.  
> **username_0**: That's my bad, there wasn't an "in" there.  

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## 2 answers

### Answer by username_2 on 2019-03-16. Score: 2

I may have understood the text wrong, but here is my trial

> 回顾我在 NYMA 训练的两周时，我感觉自学到了许多宝贵的知识。这其中最重要的，就是当这世界上来自不同文化、不同背景的人们都为了一个目标训练（行军）时，能创造出这么多令人难忘的回忆瞬间。而这个目标，就是领导能力。

> **Comments:**
> **username_0**: I like your translation better, but does it alter the original meaning of the speaker?  
> **username_2**: @username_0 I am not sure, could you please explain more about the text you quoted?  

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### Answer by username_3 on 2019-03-16. Score: 1

回顾我在NYMA的两周，我收获了许多宝贵经验，其中至为重要一条，就是来自世界各地背景殊异的人们，也能在拼搏于统一领导之下时，共同创造难忘经历。

If we must emphasize leadership, it is unnatural if we put it straight forward because it is awkward to put when clause at the end of the sentence. So my best try:

回顾我在NYMA的两周，我收获了许多宝贵经验，其中至为重要一条，就是来自世界各地背景殊异的人们，也有共同创造难忘经历的可能，即当他们拼搏于统一领导之下时得以实现。

More information needed to interpret the figurative expression: march wearing in one uniform: leadership.


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