<p>Better use active voice in Chinese, e.g. "這個郵件組會刪除這個電郵地址嗎?"</p>

<p>Indeed, I think the real challenge in your question is the two occurrence of "this".  It is really awkward to have two "這個" in the same sentence.  If you provide more information, I think we can make a better translation.</p>

<p>Edit @sazarando : for "Will this email address be removed from the Inside_Sales mail group?", I suggest "這個電郵地址會從'內部銷售'郵件組刪除(掉)嗎?"  </p>

<p>(Instead of passive voice, I'd rather omit the subject.)</p>

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OK, how about... "Will this email address be removed from the Inside_Sales mail group?" - I want to ask if a particular mail address is going to be removed from the Inside_Sales mail group or not.
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<p>I think using passive voice is better, ex. "這個郵件地址將會(被)從(郵件)群組中移除嗎". It implies YOU may be going to delete/remote the address from the group.</p>

<p>If you use "這個郵件組會刪除這個電郵地址嗎", it means the GROUP is going to delete/remove the mail address actively.</p>

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<p>You can say "这个邮件地址会被邮件组删除/移除吗？". First, you need to catch the important words in this sentence. " email address"(邮箱地址),"removed"(移除) and "mail group" (邮件组). You can make a sentence with these three words in a logical order. " will" is future tense, so you need to use "会".</p>

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Could you explain the sentence a little bit? Maybe split it into pieces to explain how you constructed it? It's very low quality as it is.
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<p>I would like to ask, "Will this email address be removed from this mail group?"</p>

<p>The best I could come up with was, "这邮件地址会这个mail group除了吗？"<br>
How should I ask this?</p>

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How can I ask, "Will this email address be removed from this mail group?"
# How can I ask, "Will this email address be removed from this mail group?"

(Asked by: username_0 on 2016-07-05)

I would like to ask, "Will this email address be removed from this mail group?"

The best I could come up with was, "这邮件地址会这个mail group除了吗？"  
How should I ask this?

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## 3 answers

### Answer by username_1 on 2016-07-05. Score: 1 | Accepted answer

Better use active voice in Chinese, e.g. "這個郵件組會刪除這個電郵地址嗎?"

Indeed, I think the real challenge in your question is the two occurrence of "this". It is really awkward to have two "這個" in the same sentence. If you provide more information, I think we can make a better translation.

Edit @username_0 : for "Will this email address be removed from the Inside\_Sales mail group?", I suggest "這個電郵地址會從'內部銷售'郵件組刪除(掉)嗎?"

(Instead of passive voice, I'd rather omit the subject.)

> **Comments:**
> **username_0**: OK, how about... "Will this email address be removed from the Inside_Sales mail group?" - I want to ask if a particular mail address is going to be removed from the Inside_Sales mail group or not.  

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### Answer by username_2 on 2016-07-06. Score: 1

I think using passive voice is better, ex. "這個郵件地址將會(被)從(郵件)群組中移除嗎". It implies YOU may be going to delete/remote the address from the group.

If you use "這個郵件組會刪除這個電郵地址嗎", it means the GROUP is going to delete/remove the mail address actively.


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### Answer by username_3 on 2016-07-05. Score: 1

You can say "这个邮件地址会被邮件组删除/移除吗？". First, you need to catch the important words in this sentence. " email address"(邮箱地址),"removed"(移除) and "mail group" (邮件组). You can make a sentence with these three words in a logical order. " will" is future tense, so you need to use "会".

> **Comments:**
> **username_4**: Could you explain the sentence a little bit? Maybe split it into pieces to explain how you constructed it? It's very low quality as it is.  

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