<p>工商卡is not correct Chinese, but when you in china everyone know what 工商 is and everyone call it in that way, is correct. </p>

<p>didn't know your situation, but delete 順便，your 順便 used in right place, but it's impossible happening on this case. </p>

<p>順便找到了 &lt;&lt;&lt; this is impossible</p>

<p>you can 順便 take it with you 
you can't 順便 found it</p>

<p>i think you should say: I forget I have a 工商卡，but I just found one.</p>

<p>我以为我没有工商卡，可是我找到了一張</p>

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<p>I wrote this message to a friend on WeChat, who previously helped me open a 工商银行 account:</p>

<blockquote>
  <p>我以为我没有工商卡，可是，我顺便找到了。我说错了。<br>
  I thought I had no ICBC bankcard, but, I stumbled upon one.  I said the wrong thing.</p>
</blockquote>

<p>I was doing something else, and I found another bankcard from 工商银行 which I had long forgotten about, and realized I told him the wrong thing earlier.</p>

<p>I'm a bit uncomfortable with what I wrote:</p>

<ol>
<li><p>I'm not sure if 工商卡 is valid; maybe I should have written 工商银行卡 but it's a bit long.  It's not a credit card, but just a simple bankcard, so I didn't want to use 信用卡.</p></li>
<li><p>This is my first attempt at using <a href="http://youdao.com/w/%E9%A1%BA%E4%BE%BF" rel="nofollow noreferrer">顺便</a> in a sentence.  I think it's okay, but I'm not 100% sure.  I don't see it violating advice given here <a href="https://chinese.stackexchange.com/questions/15993/what-is-the-difference-between-%e9%9a%8f%e6%89%8b-and-%e9%a1%ba%e4%be%bf">What is the difference between 随手 and 顺便？</a></p></li>
</ol>

<p>I'm just after a critique of this snippet.</p>

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2019-10-30T04:35:50.890Z
Do you mean 随便 and 随手? 顺便 is not a relative word here. 顺便 should means **by the way**, or **... as well**, for exmaple: 我去超市买东西, 顺便吃了个饭: I went to the market to buy something and meanwhile I had a meal as well. You may speak like this: 我以为我的工行卡丢了, 没想到随手又找到了.
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How is my sentence? 我以为我没有工商卡，可是，我顺便找到了。
# How is my sentence? 我以为我没有工商卡，可是，我顺便找到了。

(Asked by: username_0 on 2019-10-30)

I wrote this message to a friend on WeChat, who previously helped me open a 工商银行 account:

> 我以为我没有工商卡，可是，我顺便找到了。我说错了。  
> I thought I had no ICBC bankcard, but, I stumbled upon one. I said the wrong thing.

I was doing something else, and I found another bankcard from 工商银行 which I had long forgotten about, and realized I told him the wrong thing earlier.

I'm a bit uncomfortable with what I wrote:

1. I'm not sure if 工商卡 is valid; maybe I should have written 工商银行卡 but it's a bit long. It's not a credit card, but just a simple bankcard, so I didn't want to use 信用卡.
2. This is my first attempt at using [顺便](http://youdao.com/w/%E9%A1%BA%E4%BE%BF) in a sentence. I think it's okay, but I'm not 100% sure. I don't see it violating advice given here [What is the difference between 随手 and 顺便？](https://chinese.stackexchange.com/questions/15993/what-is-the-difference-between-%e9%9a%8f%e6%89%8b-and-%e9%a1%ba%e4%be%bf)

I'm just after a critique of this snippet.

**Tags:** word-choice, sentence

> **Comments:**
> **username_1**: Do you mean 随便 and 随手? 顺便 is not a relative word here. 顺便 should means **by the way**, or **... as well**, for exmaple: 我去超市买东西, 顺便吃了个饭: I went to the market to buy something and meanwhile I had a meal as well. You may speak like this: 我以为我的工行卡丢了, 没想到随手又找到了.  

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### Answer by username_2 on 2019-10-31. Score: 1

工商卡is not correct Chinese, but when you in china everyone know what 工商 is and everyone call it in that way, is correct.

didn't know your situation, but delete 順便，your 順便 used in right place, but it's impossible happening on this case.

順便找到了 <<< this is impossible

you can 順便 take it with you
you can't 順便 found it

i think you should say: I forget I have a 工商卡，but I just found one.

我以为我没有工商卡，可是我找到了一張


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