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<p>thanks for reaching out,</p>
<p>&quot;您好，谢谢您发给我的消息&quot;</p>
</blockquote>
<p>消息 mainly means &quot;news&quot; you should write &quot; 來函 (formal term for &quot; the letter you sent&quot; or 來訊 (formal term for &quot;the message you sent&quot;)</p>
<p>A formal reply:</p>
<p>&quot;<strong>谢谢您的來訊</strong>&quot;</p>
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<p>I'd like to hear more</p>
<p>请你解释一下&quot;</p>
</blockquote>
<p>解释 mainly means &quot; explain&quot;</p>
<p>To reply formally, you can write</p>
<p>&quot;还望告知详情&quot; (Please tell me the details/ Please tell me more)</p>
<p>Since it is about the details of a job, you should add the topic &quot;this job&quot;  in your reply</p>
<p>&quot;<strong>还望告知此职位之详情</strong>&quot; (Please tell me the details of this job/ Please tell me more about this job)</p>
<p>More modern wording: &quot;<strong>谢谢您的來訊, 请告欣我有关这职位的更多详情</strong>&quot;</p>

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Tang Ho
<p>Perhaps better not to mix up 您 and 你. Stay with one of them.</p>

<p>First part is ok. "您好，谢谢您发给我的消息，</p>

<p>My suggestion for the second part is:</p>

<p>Could you please give me more details?
您是否能够给我更多的详细信息？</p>

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2017-12-06T23:15:30.783Z
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Pedroski
<p>Out of ambiguity, you'd better tell what kind of details you want to know from them. It can be something like: 你好，感谢与我联系！能把这职位的详细信息发给我看一下吗？ or 我想了解一下这个职位的详细信息。</p>

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2017-12-07T00:41:43.277Z
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dan
<p>A recruiter wrote me over Linkedin and I'd like to ask for more details, but my Chinese is completely rusty. Linkedin's predefined answer is "您好，感谢与我联系！我希望了解更多信息。". I would like to use another one, if there is any suitable, plus this one sounds a bit too 'canned'.</p>

<p>How about "您好，谢谢你发给我的消息，请你解释一下"？</p>

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2018-02-06T04:46:07.083Z
The downside of expressing it well is that if you get the job and then they realize that you are not as fluent as they had thought …
伟思礼
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How to reply to a recruiter ‘thanks for reaching out, I'd like to hear more’?
# How to reply to a recruiter ‘thanks for reaching out, I'd like to hear more’?

(Asked by: username_0 on 2017-12-06)

A recruiter wrote me over Linkedin and I'd like to ask for more details, but my Chinese is completely rusty. Linkedin's predefined answer is "您好，感谢与我联系！我希望了解更多信息。". I would like to use another one, if there is any suitable, plus this one sounds a bit too 'canned'.

How about "您好，谢谢你发给我的消息，请你解释一下"？

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> **Comments:**
> **username_1**: The downside of expressing it well is that if you get the job and then they realize that you are not as fluent as they had thought …  

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## 3 answers

### Answer by username_2 on 2017-12-07. Score: 1

> thanks for reaching out,
>
> "您好，谢谢您发给我的消息"

消息 mainly means "news" you should write " 來函 (formal term for " the letter you sent" or 來訊 (formal term for "the message you sent")

A formal reply:

"**谢谢您的來訊**"

> I'd like to hear more
>
> 请你解释一下"

解释 mainly means " explain"

To reply formally, you can write

"还望告知详情" (Please tell me the details/ Please tell me more)

Since it is about the details of a job, you should add the topic "this job" in your reply

"**还望告知此职位之详情**" (Please tell me the details of this job/ Please tell me more about this job)

More modern wording: "**谢谢您的來訊, 请告欣我有关这职位的更多详情**"


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### Answer by username_3 on 2017-12-06. Score: 1

Perhaps better not to mix up 您 and 你. Stay with one of them.

First part is ok. "您好，谢谢您发给我的消息，

My suggestion for the second part is:

Could you please give me more details?
您是否能够给我更多的详细信息？


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### Answer by username_4 on 2017-12-07. Score: 0

Out of ambiguity, you'd better tell what kind of details you want to know from them. It can be something like: 你好，感谢与我联系！能把这职位的详细信息发给我看一下吗？ or 我想了解一下这个职位的详细信息。


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