<p>In my opinion, it is better to use 请在包裹上写下 "some-text".</p>

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2017-02-20T19:59:22.303Z
2017-02-20T19:59:22.303Z
gongping
<p>This expression can be understood by Chinese. But usually native Madrin speaker will express it like this "请在包裹上写下" or "请在包裹外面写下". </p>

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2017-02-24T01:09:11.137Z
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user16520
<p>We don't usually say“外面上”，instead，we will say “包裹外面” or just “包裹上”, and they have the same meaning here.</p>

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2017-02-21T05:35:37.823Z
2017-02-21T05:35:37.823Z
Jason
<p>I want to translate to Chinese this phrase: "Please, write on the parcel  "some-text" ". </p>

<p>Is this variant correct? 请在包裹外面上写下 "some-text".</p>

<p>Thank you.</p>

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2017-02-20T19:31:36.743Z
why not?, the only question may be is "外面" needed, or is "在包裹上" sufficient, see examples in jukuu for 在包裹上 to see that this is sufficient.
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Is the following sentence correct?
# Is the following sentence correct?

(Asked by: username_0 on 2017-02-20)

I want to translate to Chinese this phrase: "Please, write on the parcel "some-text" ".

Is this variant correct? 请在包裹外面上写下 "some-text".

Thank you.

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> **Comments:**
> **username_1**: why not?, the only question may be is "外面" needed, or is "在包裹上" sufficient, see examples in jukuu for 在包裹上 to see that this is sufficient.  

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### Answer by username_2 on 2017-02-20. Score: -1 | Accepted answer

In my opinion, it is better to use 请在包裹上写下 "some-text".


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### Answer by username_3 on 2017-02-24. Score: 0

This expression can be understood by Chinese. But usually native Madrin speaker will express it like this "请在包裹上写下" or "请在包裹外面写下".


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### Answer by username_4 on 2017-02-21. Score: 0

We don't usually say“外面上”，instead，we will say “包裹外面” or just “包裹上”, and they have the same meaning here.


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