I've just spent a
full week marking Junior High essays. Over the past couple of months my
students have been immersed in studying for their Language Arts Provincial Exam
(PAT's). I had the task once the fifty students wrote their
narrative essays and business letters, of marking their work.
I am convinced marking papers, especially four to five page essays, is the
greatest test of endurance and patience for any teacher. I AM NOT an
editor but I sure know how an editor must feel once the red pen comes out and
the red ink starts to "bleed" all over a student's paper.
Spelling...non-existent, sentence structure...huh? Punctuation?...not a
chance. I shake my head and circle another contraction without an
apostrophe. I know I taught contraction usage and spelling over the past
few months...was he even listening to me?
I pick up the next paper. I do not look at the name. I want
to be surprised. There have been too many disappointments today.
The first line grabs me. My red pen is perched above the paper but I'm
too caught up with the story to make a mark. It is like a roller-coaster
of emotional ups and downs, a plot-line worthy of print. Characterization
that is meticulous and imagery that transports me into another universe.
She is a brilliant writer. She is only fourteen years old and probably
a far better writer than I was at that age, and one who has the potential to be
even more outstanding as she matures. I almost wish I did not have to
circle the one spelling error. To put a red mark on the page
seems almost obscene, desecrating a near perfect work of art.
Interestingly enough, I remember her work from the previous year.
Hadn't I marked an essay and riddled it with red ink then? What happened?
I smile. Teaching has its rewards. I look at the paper I marked
before reading hers, my numerous red circles splayed all over it. At the
top of the page I leave a few comments about spelling errors and then
I add a check-mark smiley face with words meant to encourage: "Keep
trying! This is a good effort!"
Yes, this paper is rough-looking but I look forward to reading this boy's
work in a year's time. He'll make a fine writer. I just have to
look beyond the spelling, punctuation and convention errors long enough to just
read the potential. After all, it's in every student!