After you've written your story, had it critiqued numerous times, and revised it numerous times, it's time to proofread and self-edit. Be sure to take all precautions so you don't meet any obstacles on your road to publication.
Check each sentence for clarity. It's important to remember that you may know what you intend to convey, but your readers may not. If you have to have someone else read the manuscript for you. This is where a good critique group comes in handy.
Example: Joe hit head and was dazed.
Alternative: Joe banged his head against the tree. He wobbled a minute and fell to the ground.
Show, don't tell. Use your imagination and picture your character going through motions—maybe he's turning his lip up, or he's cocking his head. Try to visualize it; this will help in showing rather than telling.
A good way to add more showing is to add more sensory details. Use the five senses to create a living character and breathe life into your story.
Alternative: A chill ran through Joe's body.
Alternative: Joe's breath stopped. Goosebumps made the hair on his arms stand at attention.
This is especially important for children's writers since their stories should be told from the protagonist's point of view or perspective.
This is another must for all writers of fiction. If you're a children's writer this is even more important.
Children need a structured story; the story needs to be easy enough for them to understand. And, children need action and conflict to keep them engaged.
Need a ghostwriter or editor?
Good list, Karen! I do a series on self -editing too, and appreciate your pointers. Hey I've got your feature post up today. Stop on over, peeps are commenting already.
Great tips Karen. I'll be sure to check out the next post for tips 5-10!
Thanks for stopping by. And, Marvin I just stopped by your site.