Hi everyone i feel really bad because I haven't posted on here in a while, I have been caught up and busy with school and studying but I hope to comment and interact more!! i wrote this song yesterday and posted it yesterday just to see what people thought of it as a beginning verse/part of a chorus kind of.
will it be the last or baby will you be alright?
Hi @1AmberRose1 good to hear you again! Welcome back!
You got a super cool and modern vocal delivery! I really feel these lyrics ... you want to be who you are but it's hard to be yourself when you don't know who yourself is even supposed to be. .... This is a very fine song idea in my opinion.
Alright 'nuff said here. Keep it up. We want to hear more!
@1AmberRose1 I really like your voice! I love the first verse of this song...it's a great opening verse. I also listened to "Far Too Gone" on your soundcloud and thought it sounded great. Your voice is unique and very enjoyable to listen to.
You may have been flying. In a commercial plane, I mean?
Then you know these people instruct you to put on your own oxygen mask on first, before helping anyone else.
Knowing that you take good care of yourself, I feel a whole lot better.
And I would be even more alright if you'd post something more than barely a minute of beauty.
Btw, have you ever listened to Taimane Gardner, the queen of ukelele?
I bet you'd love that. A bit showy perhaps, but ahhhhh......, the sheer beauty of it.
I wait for spring to arrive and could do with a lot more of your music to forget about the rain. There's rain and a gale for over a week now.
I need loads of sunshine music to make up for that. And a little bird told me that you promised to go to chemistry class again. This IS chemistry already, @1AmberRose1!
Liking the upwards going melody at first. After one minute it feels like it cuold go in another direction. Always cool to hear this sketches, and halflings - the stuff of which songs are forged.
Keep at it, after college!
I love seeing you look for yourself through music in moments of tension. Your way of writing-singing is direct, it does not describe surroundings or decorations, it is simply a feeling of that moment. Your song is young and spontaneous.
When you do not compose not to escape only but because you give yourself that time, your songs will stop being in a hurry and your yourself will be surprised.
I'm looking forward to hearing those other new songs done calmly.
But don't push that river as these songs are important. Let them flow out just like this and there will come a time when one of them....or maybe a combination of a few...will become a fully fledged song.
You have a wonderful uniqueness to your vocal style that comes right out. I look forward to hearing more.
Hi @1AmberRose1 . Yes, the song is very straightforward and beautifully sketchy. So, in my mind, I inevitably started hearing other instruments on it as well. If you like, I could add a bass and possibly some percussion to it. You could post the result as an alternative version of the song, because what you did definitely has its own charm.
Thank you for this comment @1AmberRose1 - it makes the team feel we are doing something right.
A nice spontaneous and alive sounding track. Almost a postcard of a song. Hey when you are releasing your first album I want you to call it "Postcards" and you can give me a credit for the album title.
Keep of catching all your feelings and songwriting. It is good for your health and good for your soul.
@Bill from November Sound Thanks!! im glad my message was clear because thats exactly what i was thinking when i wrote it!!
@Kellyanneg woah thanks, and thanks for listening to Far Too Gone too!
@LePlongeur I recently posted a longer one yesterday! Im gonna share it with you all soon. I'll definitely check out Taimane Gardner also your comment about how you could use my music to forget about the rain makes me so happy!!
@oorlab i'll try to work on it to see if i can get it to change direction, its always hard to add more because i'm scared ill ruin it, thanks for your comment!
sorry for this big long post!