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A TALE OF CHINESE SLAVERY 4 by CELESTIN is here!
Re: A TALE OF CHINESE SLAVERY 4 by CELESTIN is here!
This sounds like it's going to be epic. I'm happy with the direction your going. ATOCS was perfect, ending it on #4 was the right call. Anymore and it would feel played out and forced. I'm sure I'll love this new series. It's a natural evolution for ATOCS to lead into. My only hope is that we get good abduction scenes. Hannah's abduction is amazing. When I start that comic over it's 50/50 if I'll get through the first few pages.
It's been about 6 months since your last comic, surely you have something to tease? If not a sketch maybe a Title?
I JUST got the inks from Celestin yesterday, looked them over, and sent back my feedback with some minor adjustments and a few new ideas. Nothing major as the entirety of the comic looks pretty solid but just some little things that should help with internal consistency. It's an entirely different thing to see it in "inks" from sketches as some things that weren't clear become more solid. One problem I had was two of the characters become hard to identify between the two due to the "standardized" fetishwear, but Celestin came up with a pretty great idea of separating the two while still making them relatively anonymous, which works great from a story perspective but is a pain from a writer's perspective, because I don't know which is which from the sketches alone.
I'm not entirely sure I'm in a position to release previews, but maybe I'll give Bego a little nudge if I remember.
Awesome! Every day gets us a little closer!