Then I could feel the vibes, as mankind came closer to me.
i actually like that (wished i thought of it when I first wrote this poem :-). you are very close to the mark!
Thank you. I'm lookinq forward to reading the completed poem. Blessings and peace.
Not sure about the word "vibes": "Hey, feel the vibes, man!" It seems to belong to a different mood and style from the last six words. Depends on context, though, and of course that's what we haven't got.