Thank you so very much Meena Ji ………….
bhut gajab sir ….gajl ki tukbndi aapki dekhte hi banti hai.
So nice of you Mani for reading…..
Madhukar ji….बहुत देर बाद कत्ल किया है अपने. ऐसा……. .hahaha…बेहद लाजवाब…..मतले के दुसरे मिसरे में "कभी न चोट सहते हैं" और दुसरे शेर की दूसरी पंक्ति में "न जाने कितने लोग रहते है" सोच ले देखिये ज़रा…..
Babbu ji look at Matla from rakeeb's point of view and a slight change has been made in 2nd line of the 2nd couplet. Your reply is awaited.
Lovely creation with full heart of feelings. …!