Past Continuous: A Memorable Trip
Using the past continuous to describe a memorable trip with family
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I went to haridwar & rishikesh few months back,i like the whole trip,we(Me,my husband & my son) went by car.
We started our journey at around 700am in the morning,we drived a 10 mins distance then we realised that we forget to bring water.then we again went back to picked up water bottle,we has lunch at a dhaba,food was really testy,we relaxed there for 20 mins.again we started towards haridwar.
we reached there at 700pm we didnt stoped there we went to rishikesh,when we were nearby rishikesh weather was really pleasant.it seems like clound are coming down to thouch me,really limate was very nice
I went to Haridwar & Rishikesh a
few months back (ago
enjoyed the whole trip. W
e (my husband, my son and I) went by car.
We started our journey at around 7:00
am in the morning
drived drove a for
distance then when
ed that we forgo
t to bring water. So
went back to pick
lunch at a dhaba and the
food was really testy. W
there for 20 mins. Then
there at 7:00pm. W
e didn't stop
there but continued
to Rishikesh. W
hen we were
nearby close to
weather was really pleasant. I
like as if the
coming down to touch
me. The climate was very nice.
We always say "a
few..._____". So, a few people, a few candies, a few hours later etc.Tip #2:
You can say 7:00am or 7:00 in the morning, but you don't need to say both. Choose one or the other.Tip #3:
We drove for 10 minutes. You don't need to mention distance. We assume that you are refering to the distance in terms of time.Tip #4:
Make sure to use capitals at the beginnings of your sentences.