-Good use of translating the idea of reflection back to the idea of digital technology, for example using the blog post example is a clear indicator of linking back to our unit.
-Good use of linking the topic into the future career that you may take and/or develop.
-I like your concluding statement however should focus more on the question and rounding out what the topic wanted you to focus on.
1. How can children self-reflect in a classroom and how can teachers teach them this skill?
2. How can reflection be used on social media and other platforms as well as blog site posts?
Focus on what reflection is and how people use reflection in order to create a new perspective on a particular idea/issue.