กลับมาพบกับเฉลยงานเขียน IELTS ใน Task 1 สำหรับหัวข้อที่เกี่ยวกับการผลิตไฟฟ้ากันนะคะ ใครที่ยังไม่มีโอกาสลองเขียนมาส่ง ลองกลับไปดูกันได้ที่
The given pie charts provide information about units of electricity productions by various fuel sources in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. It is readily apparent that both countries produced almost two-fold twice more electricity in 2000 than in 1980.
In 1980, the main fuel source in Australia was coal, accounting for 50% of all sources. Ranked second were hydro power and natural gas, at 20% and Australia used oil the least, with at a more10%. In 2000, the number quantity of coal used consumed rose for by around 75% as well as that of hydro power: increasing to 36%. Meanwhile, Australia used less very little natural gas and oil with 2%. It is interesting to note that Australia never used nuclear power to produce electricity.
In marked contrast, in 1980, coal and natural gas were clearly shown as the most common sources producing electricity in France, at 25%. The remainder was produced from oil (20%) and nuclear power (5%). However, by 2000, nuclear power had become the primary source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil had made up just 50 units out of 180 units. Other sources were no longer popular.
From an overall observation, the most common source producing electricity in both countries was different: Australia relied on coal, whereas France depended on nuclear power.
(Estimate IELTS Band Score: 6.5)
IELTS Examiner Comments :
This was a solid task I and you clearly have a good hold of English there are some issues with preposition and you need to add the total units data as well. This task is full of data and any omission receives a deduction. Try to rephrase more and bring more vocab into the task.
IELTS Institute Team