The intended "mentor text" to be used when teaching this on-line lesson is the picture book Dog Breath by Dav Pilkey. Before writing, students should listen to and discuss the writing style of this book's author.
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Three-Sentence Overview of this Lesson:
Dav Pilkey’s story, Dog Breath, involves a family's distress over their dog, Hally Tosis, and his horrible breath. After enjoying the story, the writer will plan a detailed and sequenced story about an animal with a silly problem. While planning and revising, students will think about their use of memorable details and their story's pacing. Teachers: Click here to see the entire lesson plan.
6-Trait Overview for this Lesson:
The focus trait in this writing assignment is idea development; the writer's goal is to create a unique story idea that is made memorable by its use of details. The support trait in this assignment is organization; a sequence of events will be planned by the writer, and the pacing of those events will be thoughtfully planned.
Recipient of the NNWP's Excellent Writing Lesson Award:
Because of the quality of its resources and ideas, this WritingFix lesson was selected by the Northern Nevada Writing Project as November 2007's Writing Lesson of the Month. It was e-mailed to thousands of teachers who are members of the NNWP's Writing Lesson of the Month Teacher Network.
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