Writing Strategies. 11 th Grade. The Writing Strategies Strand/Cluster.
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The following seven California English-Language Arts content standards are included in the Writing Strategies strand/cluster and are represented in this booklet by 20 test questions for grade 11. These questions represent only some ways in which these standards may be assessed on the Grade 11 California English-Language Arts Standards Test.
11WS1.1Organization and Focus: Demonstrate an understanding of the elements of discourse (e.g., purpose, speaker, audience, form) when completing narrative, expository, persuasive, or descriptive writing assignments.
11WS1.2Organization and Focus: Use point of view, characterization, style (e.g., use of irony), and related elements for specific rhetorical and aesthetic purposes.
11WS1.3Organization and Focus: Structure ideas and arguments in a sustained, persuasive, and sophisticated way and support them with precise and relevant examples.
11WS1.4Organization and Focus: Enhance meaning by employing rhetorical devices, including the extended use of parallelism, repetition, and analogy; the incorporation of visual aids (e.g., graphs, tables, pictures); and the issuance of a call for action.
11WS1.5Organization and Focus: Use language in natural, fresh, and vivid ways to establish a specific tone.
11WS1.7Research and Technology: Use systematic strategies to organize and record information (e.g., anecdotal scripting, annotated bibliographies).
11WS1.9Evaluation and Revision: Revise text to highlight the individual voice, improve sentence variety and style, and enhance subtlety of meaning and tone in ways that are consistent with the purpose, audience, and genre.
Was Early Medicine Just What the Doctor Ordered?
(1) The medical profession has come a long way, but it had to start somewhere. (2) Early medicine was often based on inadequate or unscientific information. (3) Early physicians sometimes did the right thing even if they did not do it in precisely the correct way. (4) For example, the ancient Egyptians used thousands of herbs for their incredible healing power.
(5) There is also evidence that they set and splinted fractured bones. (6) They even attempted surgery, but due to a lack of anesthesia, the patient usually had another problem, a bump on the head after being knocked unconscious. (7) However, ancient medical practice involved not only direct treatment but also philosophical ideas. (8) The Greek physician Hippocrates, known as the “father of medicine,” created a code of ethical medical behavior that is still used by doctors today.
(9) Renaissance physicians began to search for more scientific evidence to support their medical findings. (10) This search did not stop all old practices. (11) For instance, some of the first barbers also were surgeons. (12) They performed minor surgeries along with hair cuts and attention to small wounds; however, they were not as respected as physicians. (13) While some of these methods may seem like common sense and others demonstrate a lack of sense, the work of these early physicians pushed people to question and learn, essential skills in the world of medicine.
A This code of behavior is today known as the Hippocratic Oath.
B The growing interest in science that characterized the Renaissance in the 1400s brought changes in medicine.
C Interestingly, barbers have often been linked to medical practice.
D Common sense is a rare commodity, but it has been important in medicine.
A sentence 5
B sentence 6
C sentence 10
D sentence 11
Pioneer in Prevention
(9) After graduation, she worked as an intern at the New England Hospital for Women and Children in Boston. (10) During a three-month assignment in an outpatient clinic, Baker encountered a world very different from her own and learned that medical science was not adequately reaching these crowded city populations. (11) Consequently, she devoted her life to the children of these cities, first as a medical inspector for the New York City Department of Health and eventually as assistant to the commissioner of health. (12) Her success in these positions allowed her to gain funding for one of her most important achievements, a comprehensive approach to preventive health care for children. (13) In a time when most medical attention was given after a person was already sick, she tested her approach with remarkable results. (14) While her name may not be famous, her contributionsto infant and child care, including the creation of safe baby clothes, continues to save lives each day.
A , doubtfully,
B , amazingly,
C , however,
D , moreover,
A sentence 2
B sentence 6
C sentence 11
D sentence 12
After her retirement from the Bureau of Child Hygiene, she was a representative on children’s health issues to the League of Nations.
Where is the best place to add the sentence to the report?
A after sentence 1
B after sentence 4
C after sentence 9
D after sentence 13
A Family of Stars
(9) Caroline Herschel joined her brother in Bath in 1772 and became his assistant, recording his observations and calculating the position of various objects in outer space. (10) In 1786 the brother and sister team moved to a house in Slough with a yard big enough for their telescopes. (11) Caroline used these large telescopes to locate a new comet in 1786. (12) This discovery brought Caroline fame, publication in the Royal Society’s journal, and official acknowledgement as William’s assistant, a job which paid 50 pounds per year. (13) After William’s death in 1822, Caroline continued her brother’s work. (14) She won the Royal Astronomical Society’s gold medal in 1828 and became an honorary member in 1835, making her one of the most famous and admired women astronomers.
A William Herschel moved from Germany to England in 1757, then he became an organist at a chapel in Bath in 1766.
B When William Herschel moved from Germany to England in 1757, he became an organist at a chapel in Bath in 1766.
C William Herschel moved from Germany t
England in 1757 and became an organist at a chapel in Bath in 1766.
D Since William Herschel moved from Germany to England in 1757, he became an organist at a chapel in Bath in 1766.
A to compare William Herschel’s work to his sister’s
B to analyze the relationship between the Herschel siblings C to describe the Herschel siblings’ influence on astronomy
D to discuss Caroline Herschel’s discovery of a new comet
March 24, 2003
Tough Weather on Fragile Islands
1 El Niño is the term used to describe the weather phenomena resulting from the warming of the waters in the Pacific Ocean that flow southward along the coast of South America, around late December. As early as the 1500s, the effects of El Niño were recorded, but in recent history, about every four years, El Niño becomes powerful enough to cause changes all over the world (Wilson 83). Researchers in the Galapagos Islands, about 600 miles off the coast of Ecuador, are in a unique position to monitor the effects of El Niño since they are directly in its path (see fig. 1). In 1998, the fragile ecosystem of the Galapagos Islands suffered the devastating impact of the strongest El Niño since 1982–83 (Stewart).
2 The effects on sea life were the most profound. Warm water temperatures altered the food chain and led to a significant die-off of marine iguana and a decrease in the population of other animals such as sea lions. Fur seals were spotted in places where they are usually absent. Hammerhead sharks all but disappeared from their normal ranges and were found at unusual depths. While sea turtles fared well, the coral reefs, the “rain forests of the oceans,” did not (Gaines 17).
3 In fact, the coral bleaching that is the result of temperatures of only a couple of degrees warmer than usual was probably responsible for the wildlife disruption. Corals receive their brilliant coloration from zooxanthellae, a kind of algae that lives within their tissues and is essential for their survival (Wilson 87). When the water is warmer for a sustained period, the coral tissue expels the zooxanthellae, causing the coral to lose its color; this will eventually kill the coral and all the marine life that depend on it (88).
4 It is too early to know the long-term consequences, but scientists at the Charles Darwin Research Station suspect that the 1997–98 El Niño facilitated the establishment and spread of species alien to the Galapagos and altered the kind and number of the old species on the islands (Stewart). Researchers don’t know how many times this has happened in the past, but for now, they know that the future of this fragile ecosystem depends on the tough little weather phenomenon called El Niño.
Gaines, James J. Photographs by Herman Robins. “What is El Niño?” Environmental News. 16 Feb. 1998, 14-19.
Stewart, Joseph, “El Niño and the Galapagos Island Report.” New York Times, 28 Aug. 1998, late ed.: K1. New York Times Online. 24 Mar. 1999.
Thompson, John R. “El Niño’s Wrath Hits Galapagos Islands.” Science. 4 Apr. 1998, 89-94
Wilson, Eric K. Galapagos: Ecotourism on the Equator. New York: EcoBooks, 1999.
A visualize the information.
B organize the information.
C review the information.
D research the information.
A Gaines, James J. . . .
B Stewart, Joseph . . .
C Thompson, John R. . . .
D Wilson, Eric K….
A Gaines, James J. . . .
B Stewart, Joseph . . .
C Thompson, John R. . . .
D Wilson, Eric K….
1 What started as a race to space between the United States and Russia has turned out to be a technological revolution that has greatly improved the quality of daily life throughout the world. Scientists at the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) have invented new technology to make space flights doable. The same technology, when applied on Earth, has produced thousands of products in the areas of health and sports that have significant impacts on our lives.
2 Many of these improvements are in the fields of health and medicine. NASA-inspired technology fueled the great advances in the early detection of deadly diseases. For instance, computer chips designed for the Hubble telescope are used in digital imaging devices that help medical professionals detect cancer at very early stages. Eye doctors can now diagnose vision problems in very young children by using ocular screening. Ultrasound scanners, portable x-ray devices, and bone analyzers are among the medical devices developed with the help of space technology.
3 Fogless ski goggles and special sportswear are among the hundreds of items of sports equipment inspired by NASA technology. Space technology has been applied to sports too. The running shoes that athletes use today have midsoles that act like shock absorbers and keep the runners steady while in motion. These shoes utilize the technology NASA used to design the moon boot. In golf, athletes use a new ball that employs NASA research on how to make the flight of the ball from the tee to the green faster and more accurate. In swimming, athletes can swim faster because of NASA-developed riblets in the fabric of their swimsuits.
4 Almost all aspects of daily life continue to improve because NASA scientists are still at work. Transportation, methods of preparing food, and work environments are other ways in which NASA technology has made significant changes.
A name medical devices developed through space technology
B provide more information about medical professionals
C explain how the Hubble telescope helps detect cancer
D add details about ultrasound scanners, x-ray devices, and bone analyzers
A to inform readers about NASA-inspired improvements in lifestyle
B to entertain readers with stories about NASA
C to compare the work of NASA and Russian scientists
D to persuade readers to do more research about lifestyle improvements
A What started as a race to space between the United States and Russia has turned out to be a technological revolution that has greatly improved the quality of daily life throughout the world.
B NASA-inspired technology fueled the great advances in the early detection of deadly diseases.
C Fogless ski goggles and special sportswear are among the hundreds of items of sports equipment inspired by NASA technology.
D The running shoes that athletes use today have midsoles that act like shock absorbers and keep the runners steady while in motion.
A a statement from a doctor who uses space technology for diagnoses
B examples of sports equipment used in different sports
C a description of the race between the United States and Russia
D more details about running shoes and their components
A Job Interview
(3) The interviewer will see you before you say a word, so it’s important to be well groomed and properly dressed. (4) Wear clean, pressed clothes that fit well and are appropriate to the workplace. (5) If in doubt, visit the company’s parking lot just before starting time on a day before your interview to see how employees dress. (6) When you introduce yourself, smile, extend your hand, and look the interviewer in the eye. (7) Be prepared to answer questions about your experience and abilities, and be ready to explain why you are sure you can do the job well, and why you want the job. (8) Arrive on time or even a little early. (9) Listen carefully to what the interviewer says, and don’t interrupt. (10) Make sure to take with you all the information you might need to fill out forms, such as addresses and telephone numbers of references. (11) Think about what other information the interviewer might be interested in, and be sure to mention it. (12) If the job you are applying for involves working with children, and you were counsellor of the year at a summer camp for kids, bring a letter of recommendation or an award citation to show the interviewer. (13) Thank the interviewer for his or her time.
(14) A job interview can be an opportunity to showcase your strengths, rather than an occasion to dread, if you follow these guidelines.
A sentence 8
B sentence 9
C sentence 11
D sentence 14
March 5, 2003
Climbing Mount Everest
1 Imagine a group of mountain climbers at the summit of Mount Everest. It has taken the climbers days to ascend to an altitude of 29,000 feet. They have covered some of the most treacherous terrain imaginable, but the final 300 feet will prove to be the most formidable. From the South Summit, the climbers will traverse a narrow ridge that is vertically exposed on both sides, requiring them to proceed cautiously. The climbers will be forced to stop between steps before continuing to breathe six to eight times as a result of the high altitude and physical difficulty of the climb. Exhausted when they reach the top, the climbers will have little energy left for celebrating.
2 Since 1953, when Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay became the first to climb Mount Everest, only a little more than one thousand mountain climbers have successfully completed the 29,028-foot climb to the highest point on earth. Beginning their journey in Kathmandu, Nepal, the base of Mount Everest is reached after mountain climbers hike more than 100 miles, reaching an elevation of over 17,000 feet. This trek takes three weeks and helps the body adjust to the decreased oxygen levels experienced at higher altitudes. A process called acclimatization begins soon after climbers are exposed to higher elevations, increasing their bodies’ ability to make more red blood cells to carry oxygen. Complete acclimatization, however, takes several weeks. Even after reaching base camp, climbers have to make several round-trips to higher areas on Mount Everest to prepare their bodies for the lack of oxygen they will experience on the mountain.
4 In spite of the dangers involved in climbing Mount Everest and the odds against reaching Everest’s summit, adventurers flock to the mountain to have their strength tested, to test their courage, and have their climbing abilities put to the test. While some people wonder why anyone would face such obstacles to achieve this goal, climbers who dream of scaling Mount Everest identify with the legendary British climber George Mallory, who, when asked why he wanted to climb Mount Everest, replied, “Because it’s there.”
Exhausted when they reach the top, the climbers will have little energy left for celebrating.
In which sentence would the placement of the word finally best help to clarify meaning?
A Exhausted when they reach the top, finally, the climbers will have little energy left for celebrating.
B Exhausted when they reach the top, the climbers finally will have little energy left for celebrating.
C Exhausted when they finally reach the top, the climbers will have little energy left for celebrating.
D Exhausted when they reach the top, the climbers will have little energy left, finally, for celebrating.
A Krzysztof Wielicki made the first winter ascent to the summit of Mount Everest in 1980.
B As climbers ascend to higher altitudes, they tend to experience changes in their abilities to make decisions.
C Each year, Mount Everest grows in height as it is slowly uplifted by a tectonic plate moving northward below it.
D Winds often gust to 150 miles per hour, and temperatures range from minus twenty to minus one hundred degrees, even in summer.
A express his admiration for the challenges the climbers face.
B explain his own interest in climbing the mountain.
C educate readers about specific skills necessary to climbing.
D persuade readers to consider becoming climbers.
A to explain the challenges of climbing Mount Everest
B to define the process of acclimatization on Mount Everest
C to persuade readers to climb Mount Everest
D to describe the physical geography of Mount Everest