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For starters, let me just say this is a piece that I've not seen such graceful style and such time put to. You really have a unique style here. The lighting and shading in contrast with the character is really stunning. I see that if you used blacks for shading you might have also used colors for the shading. However may I suggest making the eyelashes a tad be darker? It looks like it's part of the skin/coat's shading which is good for some styles but for this I would suggest a somewhat darker color for the eyelashes and add a bit of more shading to them, where the bangs go just over the eyelashes I cannot see shading if there is any and I would suggest making some darker shading or the eyelashes darker too. For the hair, in some parts the hair seems to flow out of place, maybe tweak how you make the hair flow a bit and practice on that some more. But overall this is a very good piece of art and I look forward to seeing more from you.