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[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "25 years ago NASA discovered a face on Cydonia, Mars. It was extrodinary looking like an egyptian face! Many people think it was a human face that aliens created, but surely enough it isn't. As a scientist from NASA I know for sure it is definitely not. NASA went into further detail with this \"Face\". We looked further into the face just to show people that this is not a face created by aliens. Further more we found it was just another Martian mesa, common in Cydonia. Since the face was becoming popular, being in movies, magazines, radio shows, and books we had to prove that we are right. As a result in 2001 NASA took a even closer and more clear picture of this face on Cydonia. It showed that it was just illusions making the mesa look like it has eyes, a mouth, and a nose. Making this mesa look like a face. This revealed to all people that this face is just a natural landform. In conclusion NASA knows more than just typical average day people. NASA has proved us wrong from thinking it is a face created by aliens. This is just an illusional face as I would say. As a scientist I do wish that there is alien life on Mars, but as far as we know there is none. So the face on Mars is not a real face but just an illusion by natural land formation!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "25 years ago NASA revealed a face on Mars. They said it was a \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" What they dont realize is, even they said so themselves, this so called \"face\" is just shadows giving the illusion of a human face. The photos and evidence from the from this conspiracy are inaccurate because NASA just wishes there was an ancient civilization of Mars, the outdated equipent used cause it to look like a face, and it is confirmed to be a butte or a mesa. To begin, NASA wants there to be an ancient cilvilization on Mars for all the reasons that will benefit them. If there were to be an ancient civilization on Mars, NASA would not hide that from the public. If beeing so, NASA would recieve so much money for research. The author states that \"Defenders of the NASA budget wish there wasan ancient civilization on Mars.\" The face also \"haunted grocery store checkout line for 25 years meaning that the topic was so debatable and no one ever knew. In comparison, the equipment used to photograph this face, is outdated and old. For example, the author states that 'The cameraa on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.\" This implies that the \"Face\"was very haard to see and was viewed very poorly. Chief scientist Garvin also stated that they had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in field view. This could've cause many unreliable observations because it could've gotten blurry. The author also states \"Each pixel in the 2001imagespans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" This statement causess the readers to infer that they havent gotten a good picture of this face since 1976, which is very unreliable mnay years later. Lastly, it is confirmed that the Face is a butte or a mesa. A nutte or a mesa is a common landform around the American West. The author states that with new high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa. The author also supports this claim when he/she states that \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or a mesa.\" Chief scientist Garvin also states that it reminds him of the most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Therefore, the Face on Mars is not actually a face, it is a natural landform. There are many reliable sources to prove that it is a butte or a mesa. With the outdated equipent that was used, it makes it hard to believe that is was actually a face because of the quality of the pictures. NASA would have revealed a face if it were a face and not give a skeptical theory out to the public. The Face is actually just a shadow that gives an illusion of a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "25 years ago, a NASA spacecraft called Viking 1 was circling Mars, taking pictures of landing sites that its sister spacecraft, Viking 2, could possibly use. While circling Mars, it snapped a photo of a landform that seemed to look similar to a human face. Thay called it the \"Face on Mars\", and it became hugely popular, making appearances in movies, books, radio talk shows, and even grocery store checkout lines in the form of magazine covers. Contrary to some popular belief, wasn't anything to do with aliens, and here's why. The Face on Mars is what you would call the Martian equivalent of a mesa, a natural landform that is common in the American West. The scientists assumed so whenit first appeared on screen, but this particular mesa had shadows that made it look kind of like an Egyption Pharaoh. When releasing the images to the public, the author of the article made it sound like the eighth wonder of the world, trying to attract attention to Mars, and it worked. The photographs that were first taken of the \"Face\" were very hazy, and many people believed that there were some sort of alien markings under all the fog. The truth is, they took amazing photos with maximum resolution on April 8th, 2001, and there were no markings, aircrafts, little structures, or pyramids to be seen anywhere. What the picture does show is that the \"Face\" is, in fact, a kind of butte or mesa on Mars. Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Eploration program, said it reminded him of \"Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\". So, In conclusion, the \"Face on Mars\" was just a natural landform that got a bunch of hype in the press.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "25 years ago, around Mars, a spacecraft from NASA was circling the planet. It was taking pictures, until something strange happened. An enormous head appeared and seemed to be staring back at the camera. A few scientists believed the Face, was made by an \"alien.\" NASA has been discussing of what have may cause to make a face on Mars. We had millions of answers but didn't know which one was right. Aliens did it. They are the ones who created the face! \"Scientists believe the Face was an alien artifact.\" First of all, no one knows for sure what have may of caused it. It could've been the atmosphere, or it could've been an \"alien.\" Scientists thought it was probably a \"Martian mesa\", only this one almost looked like an \"Egyptian Pharoh.\" You see, the shadow gave an \"illusion of eyes, nose and mouth.\" It was a good way to attract the public to the attention of Mars. \"There was no alien monument after all.\" Thousand of people wondered and were curious about the Face on Mars. \"On April 8, 2001 , Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" Close enough, they could predict what the image appeared. \"So, if there were objects in this picyure like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" The pictured showed landforms most common , and you could relate to Earth. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" said Garvin. In conclusion, from 1976 to 2001, no one knows exactly what does the Face mean. The sensation was short. NASA says it could've been a \"huge rock formation...\" It became a popular icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazine, radio talk shows.\" Some people think the Fcae is \"bona fide\" evidence life on Mars. BUt what do you think? Do you think it was made by an alien? Do you believe that aliens do exisit? Well, were not sure . You see it coul be anything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "3/27/1945 Dear, jimmy I heard you may want to be a seagoing cowboy. Being a seagoing cowboy is a great adventure and it teaches you a lot of things. Well let's make you'r decision final. One good reason to be a seagoing cowboy is you get to help pople who have sufferd and have lost many realitives. You can draft for military service, but you do have to be 18 to draft for military service. I have had the most time of any seagoing cowboy my time is nine trips. Mabye you could beat my recored one day. Besides helpig people you could have the benifit of seeing places such as Europe, China, Greece, or Italy. When your traveling the high seas it could take a while to get to your destination. For me it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States, and a month to get to China. You may have to take care of the animals for the crossings and this will keep you busy for a while. Some thing that you will have to do to take care of the animals is to feed and give them water two times a day. Also you will have to pull up bags of oats and hay from the lower holds. last but not least the stalls will have to be cleaned. once on my second trip I served as a watchman and I slid down a slippery ladder luckly a long strip of metal kept me from going into the seas. There will be some times when you can have fun on board especially on the return trips because there wont be any animals in the stalls. When we could have fun we would go into an empty stall and play tabble tennis, fencing, boxing, reading,whittling,vollyball, and even baseball. But being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure. It opened up the world to me. Im very gratful for this oppurtunity. It has made me more aware that others may need are help. from Luke", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "40 years ago, on mars, NASA caught a picture of a huge rock formation that looked like a face! Many thought it was evidence of life on mars while scientist thought it was just another a natural landform. After all it was just a natural landform that was shaped like a face and shadows that made the eyes, nose, and mouth. First, Scientist just figured that it was just another Martian mesa, common around cydonia, but the only thing that was unusual was that the shadows made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. But, beside the shadows they still believe it is a natural land form. So they reveiled they photo for the world to see how cool it is. But, It was taken the wrong way. Even though the said it was natural landforms, others believed it was life on mars. It became popular quickly. It was in books, magazines and even Hollywood films. Since everyone thought it was life on Mars scientist had to prove them selfs and take it one step closer. Next, scientist had to go up in Space with Mars Global Surveyor to photograph Cydonia. On April 5, 1998 the Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Carmera snapped a picture the best they could. Jim Garvin said\" We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a shot.\" After looking at the photo, JPL website revealed that....it was just a natural landform. However, that did not stop the people who believed that it was a sign of life on Mars. They said \" the Face of Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98.\" Since it was cloudy around that time of year maybe you couldn't see all the alien markings because they were hidden by the clouds. Then, Scientist decided to take a better picture with no interuptions or anything in the way. So, on a cloudless summer day in Cydonia in 2001,The Surveyor captured an amazing photo. \"Malin\"s team captured an extradorinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" said Garvin. \"Each pixle in the 2001 image spans to 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meter per pixle in the best 1976 Viking photo.\"(Unmasking the Face on Mars) In conculsion, The face on Mars is a natural landform. Scientist took 3 photos to prove it. Others may still believe that the face is life on Mars, but scientist have proven it is just another natural landform on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "5 seconds; 5 seconds is all it takes for a driver to make a crucial mistake the could cost you, or another driver's life. Every day, accidents occur that can leave automobile owners disabled or even lifeless. Many car manufacturers have realized this and have already made attemps to fix this issue. The creation known as the \"Smart Car\" is believed to have a better response time, and more control than a human driver could manage themselves. I believe \"smart\" cars are the future to a safer road, , as well as a break while the car does all of the busy work. As stated above, Smart Cars are the future to a safer road. A World Reknown Innovator, Google, has made steps towards this since the 2000s. In 2009, they created a car that could drive under it's own control without the use of a foreign imput. Their computer-controlled cars have driven \"more than half a million miles without a crash.\" This new-age technology is all a result of position estimating sensors, a rotating sensor on the roof that has a constant updating 3D model of the car's surroundings, also including more radar sensors scattered all over the car. How's that for safer driving? The biggest concern for the legality of the car is whether or not it can meet the requirements of what the law has in place. Many qualifications must be met to have these on the streets. The issue is, who's fault is the accident. The creator or user. All of these features sound exciting and you may ask yourself, \"What's the catch?\" In order for proper safety percausions to be in place, the driver is requires to be alert at ALL times. BMW, a leading car manufacturer, announced their creation known as the \"Traffic Jam Assistant,\" in 2013. This car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves like most smart cars. However, it is required that the driver keeps their hands on the wheel at all times when the car is in motion. Other manufacturers have taken similar steps, such as GM's vibrating seat when the car could be in potential danger while approaching another car, and Google with a heads up display indicator. To conclude, safety is the main priority of car manufacturers world-wide, as well as the Law. Through years of innovating, the idea of a car that can ensure safety as well as entertainment, while being street legal, appears to be within grasp. By 2020, many car innovators plan to have the ability to do so. The question now is, how much better can it get?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "5-21-01 something happen on Mars, a human face was printed on Mars! The people that seen this was on a ship calledNASA\"S Viking ship 1-2 were in there ships taking pictures of landing sites. But before I get to telling you this, we think the human face is just a natural landform. A few day later the NASA'S unveiled the image for all to see, it captioned, \"A human head.\" THis face started shownign up in hollywood films,in book and magazines. But I think this might just be a landform because, how could a face just appear on mars, did someone go to mars we didn't now about or, did someone that went to mars put the face in the ground, or did someone die on mars and there body goes underneithe and forms a face. No, none of that happen because no one ever knew about it or heard about it, and how could they go to mars without a ship, and they are no such thing as aliens in the 21st century which we are liveing in now and if it is no one has heard about it so no in this case something happent with a rock or heave hard object and soon or later it form into the ground and it kepted forming from under the and it starts to llook like a humans face.Even MIcheal Maline said it was a landform not an Alien print or nothing like that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A \"driverless\" car, while an outstanding technological achievement, would be a far more dangerous and impractical vehichle as opposed to a regular, human-driven automobile. A computer automated car would be harder and more impractical to manufacture and mass-produce. A human controled car would be far easier to maintain and repair. Furthermore, the technology to create them is has not been entirely created or perfected. Until all of the technological requirments are created, perfected, and fulfilled, automobiles shall be safer and more practical to make and maintain when built to be human-driven instead of \"driverless\". To start with, the creation of a computer automated vehichle would be far less practical than the creation of a regular, current-day car would be. For starters, the technological advancements required to even succesfully build such a car has not been entirely perfected, and in some cases not invented yet. Secondly, even if the technology was perfected currently, the physical creation of \"driverless\" cars would require far more time and many new delacate procedures, not to mention a new assortment of computer software and hardware, and an entirely new kind of assemble process to make them. Sabastian Thrun himself sateted in the article that the technology was not yet fully operational, and very expensive in addition. Thirdly, as these cars are \"computer-automated\", they would in theory be subject to computer failures, viruses, and even hacking, all of which pose a threat to the drivers, passengers, and civilains on and off the roadways. Next, the maintainance of these cars would be much more expensive and impractical as opposed to normal cars. Not only would they require the normal physical work and maintainance that comes with normal cars, they would require maintainance and updates for bothe the computer software and hardware. All of the extra parts and work tied together would prove to be expensive for even the large manufacturing companies to afford, let alone a common consumer. Just the replacement computer parts alone would cost a small fortune. The \"driverless\" cars, as stated earlier, could be subject to a number of different computer problems, in addition to the common physical automible issues, that would make them far more impractical and expensive to maintain for any duration of time. In summation, while the creation of a completely, or even mostly computer-automated car would be an amazing and remarkable technological advancement, it would bring about more instances of hinderance than help. They would be far more difficult and expensive to maintain due to the numorous required parts. The new computer and physical technologies would prove far harder to put together and mass-produce due to the massive amount of time, money, and resources needed to make them. Finally, the vast majority of the technology, both physical and cybertronic, necessary to create the \"driverless\" cars has not been fully invented or perfected. For these reasons, a \"driverless\" car would be a far more dangerous and impractical vehicle to create and maintain as compared to a current-day, human-controlled car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A 3-D computer that has been made to show the emotions of a person has been in the works. It has been tested on paintings like the Mona Lisa showing her emotions. What if schools had computers like these 3-D ones for school allowing them to be more advanced then before. I believe these computers can allow schools to raise test scores, help counsleors, and make classes more fun. I believe that these 3-D compters could be able to help out test scores because they could tell when theres a confusing lesson or boring one. These computers could be able to detect when a student is confused on a lesson or even bored. I believe this could be helpful for teachers because they can change the way they teach there lesson in a more understanding way thus have better test scores. My second argument on why these computers could be useful to schools is helping out kids who are scared to talk out on their probelms. I think counsleors could find a machine like this useful for students who still fear tallking to them. Not only that but these machines could help them know when kids in class are sad or angry. My last argument is making lessons more fun. These computers can be able to see the students who find lessons or schools boring. Thus could help teachers know to make the class lessons better to have more students excited for class. I am for schools having these computers. These schools coudl realy be more advanced then ever with them. I think they would help schools with scores, help counsleors, and make classes more fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A A I felt simply I stoical life nadir Helplessly I written hero reply I determine wait see hero would ever reply My hero amazing lighting astounding name I understand music My best friend I would always talk awesome music fact started We two different people I CAPS even think could friends anything common music brought us together I wrote I thought PERSON even going look I watched write Weeks weeks past I really thought CAPS going read reply After started dilapidated I felt discourage talked photography project We really procrastinating toward project I little distracted cheerleading homework form high school college homework I ignoring calls texts Until I realize I made wrong choice I called friend god I A week later I two friends best friend since seventh grade best friend since eighth grade went watch really vehement movie After movie went meet friends dorms On way I telling amazing experience health health teacher given us assignment perfect body look like I facetious made alienlooking body The toes alien coming shoes alien warts We laughed nonstop obviously CAPS turn When arrived dorms presented friend big fan CAPS played various games I notice warts hands took shoes put saddles I CAPS help notice somewhat reminded drawing I hysterically started laugh nonstop friend kept asking I laughing I said CAPSJ looks like alien said wow s rude I said In eyes s perfect body We good laugh kept playing games listening The next day I meet work photography project All accomplish take pictures eachother things like dislike It called getting really know person I learned lot threw project In opinion I sometimes live life fast I barely catch breath I want everything school sports sometimes held back bad way I less time hangout friends simply rest But I love life CAPS trade everything I gets closer goal agent This project vehement To way life telling hang ll make due simple call We working hard phone kept ringing I little cantankerous I said answer phone said oh god I said stop messing around lets get back work put phone speaker hero phone I happy I started cry could happening us I blackedout like I stoical How could ever happen quotidian teens I could hear talking I making mind convoluted I took gasp air said hello I still shock said hello good luck track s I pastout When I woke I CAPS believe We cried ease tension said CAPS talked husband We laughed long time I best memory together started music never end That day I realized one miracles happen two laugh heals heart three always faith never give someone always hear give advice everything feels like coming said jump cliff built wings way someone help built As said come take hand ll walk road together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A A time I patience family goes point My family I go point lot Usually lines long sometimes hour Once first time wait hours went anyway We hour technical difficulties After min line moving When I got ride really fun although lasted seconds A couple years later new ride The opened looked fun line didnt I sure long waited go end rode ride amazingI glad I enough patience wait long lines", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Car Free Future? Is the car necessary in the 21st Century? Many city planners and government officals around the globe dont think so. Car free days are becoming common place in Europe and South America, and in the German town of Freiburg, an upscale neighborhood where cars are banned, has been a kind of experiment for larger towns and cities without cars. In Paris smog levels have gotten so high, that people have been asked not to drive their cars, in order to reduce pollution levels. In the United States, the number of miles driven peaked in 2005, but has dropped nine percent since then. This is largely due to the 2008 recession, but also due to more people becoming educated about the effects that cars have on the environment. More people are choosing to take public transport, or carpool, because mainly it's cheap, and it's good for the environment. Many key sociologists believe that this trend will continue. One of those sociologists is Professor Mimi Sheller, Diector of the Mobilities Research and Policy center at Drexel University. \"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift\" there are many factors that point to the \"major cultural shift\" that Proffesor Shelley referred to. For example,the renewal of city centers has made the suburbs seem less appealing, and has drawn many people into the cities. Many carpooling apps have appeared in the last 2 years. Better cities, more public transport, and an increase in telecommunications is the start of a global movement to reduce pollution and increase efficiency. the age of the car is coming to an end.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Cowboy Who Rides The Waves! ______________________________ There are many reasons that you should consider joining the Seagoing Cowboys program. It is a very fun activity to participate in. In this essay I will be stating a few reasons on why I believe that you should consider participating in this program. One reason is because you will mostly be on a boat at all times during this program. While you are on this boat you will be traveling all across the world. We all know that there are not many things to do on a boat but on these boats there most definitly be things to do. Such as sight seeing, Touristing, and much more! Another reasosn is because say you like to get out of the house, well this will be one great oppourtunity for you to do so. Reason being because you will probably be gone for a long period of time on each trip. Plus it will take even more time because you are on a boat, and those things arent very fast. So if you are one of those people who do like to get out of the house for a long time this will be your chance to do so. My third and final reason is because you will jus have a fun time. Mostly because there will be tons and tons of things to do on these Fun adventures. A couple of things that you might consider doing is if you are docked in paris for a few go check out the ifal tower, Or if you are docked in Washigton D.C. why not go see the White House and maybe you could even have the chance to meet the president himself. In conclusion there many reasons you should consider taking on the Challenge of being a Seagoing Cowboy. One reason is because you will be able to see things like never before. Another is because you will be out of the house for a long period of time on each of these Adventures. Last but not least is because you will simpily just have fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Cowboy Who Rode The Waves In the story there was a boy named Luke and he had just graduated from high school. He was working two part time job at the grocery store and at the bank. Then one day one of his friends invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke knew that this was a great opportunity for him to go with him so he did. In the story Luke did lots of travling and it sounds like he really enjoyed himself. I believe that peole now days should do these type of things today. My first reason why I believe that people should do these things today is because lots of people are lazy and do not do anything but sit around on their phones or either on a video game. It hurts peoples brains and its a waist of peoples lives. I think that alot of people would enjoy doing lots of other things then just staying at home laying down not doing anything. In the story Luke seem to have had a fun and great time experiencing lots of diffrent places in the world. My second reason is because we really could learn something about our world. We can experience it without using google or siri. It could be a fun way to actually be right infront of the place or be inside of the place. You could take lots of pictures in there. Also you would feel proud of yourself. You would feel proud of yourself by saying I travled there world before I died I actually did something with my life other spent time at home on my phone or Xbox or other device. My third reason is you could take a vacation with your family and go to some place like the Panama Canal. Also you could go to somewhere like Russia, Italy,Sweeden, and lots of other places you could choose. My forth reason is in the story Luke says that it would be a great opportunity to go travel the world. That tells me that he was instreasted in travling the world with his friend. Also at the end he got hurt and cracked his ribs. He could not work for a coulpe of days but he still enjoyed himself hurt or not hurt. In conclusion it would be just a fun journey to do and discover. If you could go travle the world would you do it? Or would you rather stay home being lazy on your phone? These are some question you would have to ask yourself. This is why reasons on why I think it would be a good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Cowboy Who Rode he Waves Essay Intoduction Luke had turned 18 before he arrived in Greece, he said\" I could be drafted for military services\" ( paragraph 4). It took Luke to get across the Atlantic Ocean eastern coast of the United States 2 weeks, and 1 month to get to China. Luke had made a least 9 trips, more than any Seagoing cowboy. By the time it was 1947 Luke had helped people he said \" Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China\" ( paragraph 5). Luke had visited Venice,Italy he rode a gondola because the streets were water. He also \" took a tour in a excavated castle in Crete, and the Panama Canalon his way to China\" (paragraph 5). Reasons A few reasons why you should to join the program that Luke is in because 1: he is a night watchman. That seems exicting because he gets to watch over the animal.2: he got to to visit a whole lot of places like Venice, Europe, China, and the Panama Canal. 3: he was on a boat so he got to visit the places like Europe and China. The last reason is to keep himself busy is caring for the animals during th crossing. Body What Luke likes about being Seagoing Cowboys is he metioned that this would be an opportunity of a lifetime. When he first got on the boat he was exicted to visit the coolest places. The First one he visited was Greece that was the place they headed first. Then it was Europe that was where the boat was headed toward. Venice it is last he said \" So was taking a godola ride in Venice, Italy, acity with streets of water. Conclusion They are so manythings that Luke learned that ws really acurate of being a night watchman. Like helping people benefit of seeing Europe and China. Going through new expirence places like Europe, China, Veince,Italy. I am sure he probably visited more but, who knows. Luke learned that they'res a lot to handle of being a military watchman. The opportunity of a lifetime if he didn't take who knows of what could've happened to his life after he took the opportunity I am also sure he said hello to my New Life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves Why you should join is that you can help animals it says in the article \"You get hired as a Seagoing Cowboy to take care of horses, young cows, and mules\". You can get a cargo with 335 horses or more plus enough hay and oats to feed them.When you ship all around the world you have the benefit of seeing anywhere Europe, China, Greece, Italy. Its like taking a trip and helping people at the same time. It can take up to a couple months to get to the place you need to go or even longer. Than it can he a hard job to do cleaning out stalls , feeding all, night watch or day watch making sure nothing happens to them. But its more like an adventure then a job. Then when you have unoaded the animals you get to play games on the ship it says \"They cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table- tennis tournaments ,fencing, boxing, reading, whittling and the gmaes helped pass by the time.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves is a program where you get to go on many adventures and visit unique places, but you also get to help those in need. Many countries were left in ruins after World War II, and to help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, nations joined together to form UNRRA. You sign up and can help take care of horses, young cows, and mules. A good reason to join this program is if you like helping people in need. The countries were left in ruins and lots of their supplies and animals were gone. You would get to help recover all of these things and help take care of animals. Another reason to join is that you are allowed to experience many adventures and travel across oceans. Some of the Seagoing Cowboys had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. You would get to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and make your way to China. There are many other countries to visit, one including Italy. Being a Seagoing Cowboy can be more than just an adventure. Sure you get to tour many great countries, but you also get the benefit of getting to help all those that were affected by World War II.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Electoral College is a meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president. \"The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a vote in Congress and the elction of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" We should keep the Electoral College because of the certainty of outcome, that everyones president and the swing states. These are some reasons on to keep our despised method of the choosing the president. We should keep the Electoral College because of the certainty of outcome. The certainty of outcome is a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College. According to the passage \" the reason is that the winning candidates share of the Electoral College invaiably exceeds his share of the popluar vote.\" For examples, President Obama recieved about 62% of the electoral vote when Romney had about 52% popular votes casted to him. Even a tie is possible because theres a total of 538 number of votes and its an even number. Secondly,everyone is president. None if the regions has enough votes to elect a president so no favorite has power to campaign heavily. So if the favorite was Romney he will not gain any vote by by increasing his plurality in states that he knows that he will win. According to source three.\"the residents of the other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised-to feel that their votes do not count,that the new president will have no regard for their interests,that he really isn't their president.\"(Line 19) This means that the people who vote will think that its a waste of their time since their vote will not count. They will be ignored knowing that their vote will have no interest and that the president wont really be thier president. Thirdly, we should keep it because of the swing states. The swing states is a winner-take-all method. Voters will pay more attention to the campaign because they know that they will decide on the election. They will be known as the thoughful voters because they will have recieved the most information and attention and should be the ones th decide the election. The other people wont know alot abnout the candiadates and will just pick their favorite. Some people might argue about the disator factor. Its where there is a tie between the states. They might say what will happen then? However, thats why there is representatives. They break the tie on who to become president. In conclusion,we should keep the Electoral college because of the certainty of outcome, everyones president and by the swing states.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Face To Remember A distinctly human face, nearly two miles in length, stretches across an arid, barren landscape. This came to be known as \"the face on Mars. It is a highly debated topic, being that some believe it was made by intelligent lifeforms, and others believe it to be a naturally formed landform. The latter is, beyond the shadow of a doubt, correct, the reasons range from picture evidence, to the same landforms forming on Earth, to the fact that it would help NASA's budget immensely if life were to be discovered on other planets. To begin with, concrete photos have been released to the public that clearly show that the \"face\" is merely shadows cast onto a natural landform. Since the beginning of its discovery in 1976, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah.\" Guess what? They were right, because in 2001, Mars Global Surveyor brought back a photo of the mesa that was in the \"...absolute maximum resolution,\" and it perfectly showed the mesa for what it was; a naturally formed chunk of land. Another thing distinct about this landform is that we have similair, proven-to-be natural landforms on Earth. To quote Garvin, \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" This means it is an undeniable truth that these kind of things can form naturally. Of course because something can, usually means that it will, so, without denial, this landform is proven to be real, and able to form. The final fact of the matter is that NASA would get an enormous amount of funding if they could prove there to be life among the stars. So the truth is, \"...defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" This discovery would lead to a piqued interest in space, and a need to conduct further research, meaning people would begin to give more donations to this new, interesting cause. In the end NASA would benefit, and the point is proven wrong. Over all, consiracy theorist seemingly wish to stir the masses, and make distrust flourish, but most times their theories are easily dissproven. The theory of the face on Mars was simple, and very wrong. The topic of solid photographs seems not to be enough, but the similair landmarks being on Earth, and the way it would positively effect NASA's budget should be. After all, there may still be life on Mars, for this is but a bump on a planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Face on Mars, or just a common mesa? Many skeptics belive that the mesa on Mars, located at 41 degrees north martian latitude, is proof of ancient alien civilazation. In 1976, when NASA's Viking 1 crossed over a landform that showed \"shadowy likeness\" of a human face. When NASA revealed the picture to the public, thinking it would be a good way to draw attention to Mars, caused an uproar. A few years later, Micheal Malin and his team took a picture 10x sharper than that of the Viking 1 spacecraft. When the photo first appeared online, it showed nothing but a common mesa that can be found in the American west. Again skepics were not satisfied, the picture was taken on a cloudy day over Mars. So they began to ask questions like; What if the alein markings were hidden by haze? So again, on a perfectly clear day, another photo was taken April 8th, 2001. They used the camera's \"absolute maximum resolution.\" Yet again, showing nothing but a common landform. Well what if NASA is hiding evidence of ancient alein life on Mars? Why would NASA hide groundbreaking news like this? \"Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was anceint civilazation on Mars.\" So why would NASA hide news like this, that would help advance space exploration? What else could it be, all evidence points to nothing except a common mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Face on Mars? People say that the Face just appeared on Mars, after something funny happened there. I think that what happened on Mars never really happened on Mars. I am going to tell you why I think what I thought. Twenty five years ago something funny happened on Mars. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photo's of possible landing sites ofor it's sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head nearly two miles form end to end, seemed to be staring back at tyhe cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. There must have been a degree if surpirse among mission controllers back at the Jet Propultion Lab when the face appered on the camera's. How do we know that that face on Mars wasn't already there? I think that this funny thing didn't happen at all. The Face was already there. The Viking 1 went all around Mars to find a good landing spot for Viking 2. When NASA looked before they over looked the Face and didn't notice it. Then they sent the Viking 1 and he found lots on Mars. The main thing he found was the face. The face was just a naturla landform that was formed when God made this univeris. NASA has no proof that this just happened because things like this can't just happen. The face was no alien artifac because God made this World and everything in it. You see ladies and gentaleman, that things like this can't just happen. God made this and no alien could without his help. This is just a natural landform on Mars. There is no living life on Mars to make this happen. So think to yourself Why would aliens make this. And why would I belivie that aliens made. It God made this Workd and everything in it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Face or A LifeForm Many people say that we are not alone in this universe. Some people say diffrent planets have secret life forms on it. But, i dont think believe that a face on Mars was created by another life form beside humans. There has been theries for centurys about space, that we are not alone and people from diffrent planets exsist. I dont think so because it there were other life forms out there why havent they made contact. Space is full of adventure, discovery, and wonder but to come to the realization that there are other life form beside or own. It would change how people think and would change reality forever. They put aliens on movies and telivision for entertainment only not to be taken into content. The face on Mars is just a creation of all the space debry and the astroieds that hit Mars and have sculpted in to resembling a human figure or ( human face). The face on Mars maybe could have been there for a long time before but, we just didnt descover it till now. People dont know how large space really is. They just know what people till them or what they have discovered, but why would aliens really exsist? Some people say there is life on all planest and we are not looking hard enough. Even if there were life on diffrent planents why would we just be hearing about it now and not sooner. What the picture actually showa is the Martian equivqlent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. The people of America and of this great nation dont need to be consirned about if we can defend then aginst an extra terresteral attack. Also, we dont know what knid of weapons they have or if they have powers or anything about them. We don't know there weeknesses or strenths. So, we would be litterally out numbers a maybe out-smarted and maybe out-guned and we might lose that fight to defend the world and out home. So i dont think it was aliens who did that face. But, the real question is do u ?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Face was just found on Mars. Some believe that it was created by aliens. They don't have proof to show that it was created by aliens. Therefore, the Face is just a natural landform. There are a great deal of reasons to believe that the Face is just a natural landform. First, what evidence do the people that say it was created by aliens have. To make people believe that te Face was created by aliens, they have to have something to prove it. Then, there are comparisons to landforms on Earth that are very similar to the Face that was found on Mars. They also have no alien markings to prove that aliens made the landform. There are many reasons to support my claim. Some say that it was too cloudy to see any markings. But the \"Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" The spacecraft was rolled 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view. The team had an \"extrodinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" Using a camera that good, people would be able to see anything resembling any alien markings. Using this evidence, peolple should believe that the Face is just a natural landform. The people who go against this have no proof of the landform being created by aliens. Go with the facts, not unproven theories.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Facial Action Coding System is where it sees if you're happy, sad, surpised, anger, digust, and fear. How? It will tell by have a picture of a no emotional , than compare to your see what's the diifference. Having Facial Action Coding System in the school, would be kinda great cause it would show the teachers what the student thinks about the assginment. Like, the Dr. Huang said ' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'. But, the computer needs to understand that most communication is nonverbal, like emotional communication. But, than i'm against because how can the computer see what all the student are feeling like? Like, is going to look at every student face, if yes that had be a waste of time cause that would take the whole class period. If no, than do the teachers have to buy a Facial Action Coding System computer for every student. Finally, I think it would be a good idea because the teachers would know how the students are feeling by something they had said or asign. If I was a student, I'd like it cause that would be a good new expreince.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Facial Action Coding system sounds like something that would be invented or created in the far future. So if there is a real such thing as a facial action coding system it seems that there aren't many negatives as to why it shouldn't be used in a classroom setting today. The Facial Action Coding System should be used in the classroom setting because it will show students understandment, interest level, and overall thoughts over a topic or subject. Also another plus is it could show students themselves something they may be interested in which they didn't know even themselves. So imagine a class where there is a Facial Action Coding System on a computer for each student to use, there would be so many benefits to using something like this, it sounds perfect for a classroom setting. First of all, it would show teachers the understandment level of students to a certain topic or subject, so if there is a subject or topic in which kids faces were scanned for their feelings about that subject, the teacher could maybe improve or make the lesson easier for students, which overall would create a better education system for the sutudents in the class and better oppurtunity. The second reason as to why it would be valuable to have the facial action coding system int he classroom would be because it would show students and teachers levels of interest kids may have on a certain subject or topic. For example say there are kids in a class and they begin there science notes or studies etc., and some kids have more higher interest feelings than others on the topic, that can show both teachers and even students what they truly feel about science, and it can lead to helping kids making bigger decisions in their lives, such as whether or not they want to pursue a career with lots of science involved or not. The third reason to use facial action coding system would be because it is universal. From the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", it is said that \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" The facial expressions for each emotion being universal means that anyone from anywhere around the world can use this as a tool to help them succeed in school, no matter what ethnicity they are from, and if they look different. Also if this facial action coding system is universal, imagine how accurate it is. So it definetely would be valuable to classroom setitngs all around the world, and would creat greater oppurtunites for students to get a better education. To conclude, the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable to a classroom setting because it shows understandment, shows interest, and is universal which could also mean it is extremely accurate and enhanced. The Facial Action Coding system has many benefits to it which would be a great help to teachers in a classroom as well. The Facial Action Coding System could be used as a tool to succeed to many around the world. And so overall, the Facial Action Coding System is great and would be extremely valuable to classroom settings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Heart Satisfaction The Seagiong programe is more than a programe set up to help those in need. It's an opportunity of a life time. The world has lots to offer than what most people see. There is more to life than what we have in front of us. The Seagiong programe cause people to see what they could never have amagined. Joining the Seagiong programe has people meeting other people, with a different style of living. The people who go with the Seagiong programe like Luck got to do things that they could never do ware they lived. They whent to places other people wish to see. They whent to China, Europe, and even Greece. During their free time they had fun on bored. They played fencing, boxing, and they had time to read. The Seagoing programe helps even the people who are working for the programe in different ways than others. The poeple working in the Seagoing programe get stronger phisicly and emotinaly. It causes the workes to feel happy when they see the smile on the peoples faces they help. The Seagiong programe opened up the world for the workes. It showed them their is more to life than what they see during their normal ways of living. The workes got to see Gods creation in other places like Itly and their excavated castles. At the end of the day the Seegiong programe is a great places to start for those who are lost and don't know what to do. The Seegong programe gives satisfaction to the hearts of the workers when they help other people. It helps people realize at all the stuff God has givin to them. In a good way it changes the way the people live when they come back from the Seegiong programe. Having the opprotunity to see by going with the Seegoing programe helps people charish every little thing they have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Helpful Change in Your Lifestyle Can you tell the air feels different? Over the past years some countries have put restirctions on car usage. Although this may sound extremely crazy to some, most individuals accept the new law's for car's. Motorized vehicles have put a tole on our environment, our well being, and our wallets. By certain countries banning the use of motorized vehicles it has allowed individuals stress level to decrease, lowered air pollution, and increase money that citizens have. Gas cars that create pollution are a thing of the past, we are moving to electric cars, bicycles, and more; the future is changing and its for our own benefits. Cars are one of the main sources for people's stress, whether it be because of car failures, others who annoy you while you drive, or the fact you can never find a parking spot. Heidrun Walter claims \" When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much mappier this way ( In German suburb, Life goes on without Cars 3).\" One main reason people are less tense and stress is because people do not have to constantly worry about if another car is about to hit them, if traffic is going to be to slow to get to work, or if your car is going to breakdown on you. Car's create unwanted stress that can be easily avoided. Indeed life would be very different without cars people in Bogota, Paris, and Germany have all been able to function properly without motorized vehicles. In fact \"70 percdent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold cars to move her (In German Suburbs, Life goes on without Cars 3).\" These individuals have proven that it is okay to make a switch. In order for you to reduce stress in your life, you have to take away the source of stress, and that is what citizens have done, and without cars majority of people are happier and healthier. Due to citizen's of Bogota, Paris, and Germany not using cars and having to switch to bikes, walking, and electric bikes; has greatly reduced toxic gases in the environment. Due to individulas in Paris not excessively using cars the amount of smog has reduced. According to Robert Duffer \" after days of near-record pollutions, paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city( Paris bans driving due to smog 10).\" Paris has enforced strict rules that rejects people from driving, also a switch to diesel fuels. In return these ideas have lowered the level of smog in Paris creating a cleaner environment for the citizen. Not only has Paris help reduce toxic gases from entering our environment, but so has Bogota. In the article Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota, Andrew Selsky stated that this has been Bogota's \"thrid year straight that cars have been banned for one day\" and the only motorized vehicles they have used are \"buses\". This switched has dramatically cut traffic, rush hour, and the amount of smog left in the air. Although there is still traces of pollution after this day it has lowered. The reasons are simple, using less cars makes less gases, also those who go the day without using cars may like the change better and permantely switch to a lifestyle without cars. Another thing that has been changed due to the limitation of car usages is that with individuals not having to buy a car, pay for insurance, and pay for gas, it has increased the amount of money citizens have in their wallets. Citizens of the United States of America have not exactly chosen to not use cars, but some have, the main reason Citizen of America have limited themself is due to a lack of money. During our \"recession\" Americans were \"unemployed\" and \"unable to pay (The end of car culture 32).\" Because citizens were not able to pay for cars, they did not use them, thus as you get adapted to a new situation you tend to stay with it. After the switch citizens who chose to continue a life without a car, were able to have more money because they didnt have to pay for the cost that come with a car. Now some citizens have made the switch to not using motorized vehicles, which has helped increase the amount of money citizens have, which is always an advantage because you are able to pay for other things that are neccasary to your life. Although cars seem like a material object that is so precious to life, it's not. In all reality people can live a life without cars, citizens in Bogota, Paris, and Germany have, and they enjoy it. Its time to make a switch and make a helpful change in your lifestyle. A life without cars is very benefitial, it is less stressful, lowers pollution, and has an increases of money. Although not using cars is a bit extreme, you can always make a better switch to using electric products, which can also help lower the amount of toxic gases in the air. Gas car's that produce extreme levels of gases are a thing of the past, I believe its time to move to the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A I heard laughter best medicine I believe true I could laugh day long finding anything everything funny world Laughter important without life would boring Sometimes Laughter good comes heart Other times cruel mean I like avoid cruel mean laughter stick good laughter When one friends laughing smiling makes want know re laughing I laugh Birthdays fun laughing usually comes fun I remember twelfth I decided party house I wanted special I invited closest friends cousins Family always makes everything special My cousin I pretty close born nine months age little We always good time us acting crazy always laughing For party mom made rainbow sherbert punch delicious Everyone fun soon party cousins leaving next day continued party I kitchen getting punch cousin came wanted I poured us glass CAPS good cousin said I know s I mom make wan na hear joke CAPS said CAPS kid named butt itches really sick one day died mom cried doctor CAPS poor butt itches CAPS wan na know doctor said CAPS CAPS itch took drink punch I said She spit punch mouth laughing got Usually someone spits spills something get mad I started cracking laughing CAPS gosh That s gross NUM I could stop laughing The joke funny punch kitchen We laughed least fifteen minutes even realizing moms standing kitchen They staring us wondering world happened You would think getting punch spitted face would make mad laughter makes ordinary days special In case laughter shortest distance I It would short get much punch Laughter made extra special I never forget twelfth", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Laughter hear child laugh think Do think peace happyness think I hear child laugh I think little sister outside playing peter pan inside playing doll s brights like light I see happyness It s sisters laugh brings joy s everyones I think laugh unique though hear child niece nephew grandchild laugh hear happyness A laugh changes grow older I remember hearing sisters brothers laugh simplest things younger But never laugh sick disgusting jokes laugh someone gets teased But thats case I one laughs someone something sill like americas funiest home videos But child laughs make funny face animal something funny They laugh littlest things To smile silent laugh I remember hearing saying A smile worth thousand words I think goes laughter Even though sound smile sound waiting come person I know fact I younger I abused ever something good happened hardly ever I huge smile face one would something funny I would try laugh I lasted like seconds I would start laughing hard I would start cry Theres one specific time high light life One day I hanging sister linda playing dolls My dad happened walk accidently stepped one dolls Linda started cry cause arm broken But started cry dad started hopping one foot held fell butt I laughed hard afternoon Then later day took linda store buy one new doll Again I say laughter beautiful thing earth Just reason heals soul You start bad day could come home end day walk house child laughing Then day gets suddenly better I wish I child could rewind make things much better I little I started bad situation I smart intelegent young lady Every laugh unique way cause every one different Just grow older nt mean laugh But every laugh change way I m sure happens grow older You laugh different things laugh much used", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A New Era Times are changing, and changing fast. While the car may once have been the ideal accessory to a rapidly changing world, people have now found that the opposite is now true. Limiting car usage is cheaper, better for the enviorment, and is quickly becoming the \"cool\" thing to do. America's facination with the 1950's fords are over, and a new era is upon us. Cutting down on car usage is much cheaper. Between the expensive vehicle itself and enormous gas bill, It's more fiscally responsible to carpool, use public transportation, or even walk. Places like Vauban in Germany are just the start of a quickly growing social trend to make cars more expensive. As stated in Source 1, \"There are only two places to park-Large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home\". Places like Paris have even been known to enact partial driving bans at times, with 22-euro fines enacted for those who failed to follow the ban. Driving, an already expensive task, is increasingly becoming a task only the rich can afford. Removing some of our outrageous motor vehicle usage is also good for the enviorment. As mentioned in Source 2, Smog that was already prevalent in places like Beijing, China has found it's way into modern European cities like Paris, with more to follow if we do't cut back, and soon. Paris has known to have over 147 Micrograms of pariculate matter per cubic meter, with other cities like Brussels and London having 114 and 79.7 respectively. If that didn't seem bad enough, it's worse in other areas. In some areas of the United States, passenger cars are responsible for up to 50% of greenhouse gas emissions. Having a lower dependence on cars isn't just good for the enviorment, it's now become \"cool\". The amount of driving done by young people has decresased by 23 percent between 2001 and 2009, and even big companies are starting to notice. As stated in Source 3, Bill Ford, the executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, acknowleged the growing change, and even offered suggestions to help. He proposed a better system to save time and resources while improving gas emissions and public safety. Meanwhile in Bogota Colombia, Millions of citizens in participated\"Day Without Cars,\" A yearly program set up in the city. While 10 years ago might have painted a different picture, the writing on the wall is clear. There's a global trend for decreasing dependency on cars, and it's not looking to stop anytime soon. A once needed tool is quickly becoming less and less relevent, due to cheaper costs, less strain on the enviorment, and the always prevalent \"cool factor.\" It's not the golden age of cars anymore, and about time changes were made to match modern day thinking.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A New Technology Are Facial Action Coding Systems the way of the future? In this article titled \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author explains a new way of technology. This technology is called the Facial Action Coding System and it gives computers a way to recongnize a persons emotion based on their facial expression. The author also includes that this technology could be implemented in schools in the future. I believe that using this technology to read students' emotional expressions is valuable because it can help determine if a smile is not genuine, or if a student is confused and needs help. This technology should be implemented in schools because it can tell if a smile is not genuine. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful (D'Alto par.8). By having a computer tell if a smile is not genuine while a student is researching something for a project or taking a online test this could be very helpful. For example a student is researching something for a group project and is having trouble conveying to the group members that he/she does not like the direction the project is going in. The computer could be able to recongnize the fake smile the child is putting on and alert the teacher to solve the problem. Another reason that using this technology is valuable is because it can help determine if a student is confused and needs help. \"A classroom computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\"(D'alto par.6). This would help in situations where a student is taking an online test and is confused ,the computer can detect the confused expression on the childs face. Then the online test can be changed to fit the students needs. This technology can also help when a student is reading taking an online test and is becoming bored. The content can be modified to be less laborious and more interesting to the student. Technology is advancing every day and soon computers in classrooms will be able to detect students emotions. This article went into detail about a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This technology could be very valuable to read students' emotional expressions because it can help determine if a smile is not geniune, or if a student is confused and needs help. Maybe one day computers will stop lagging too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A New technology called the Facial Action Coding System should be used to be read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. In the text, the author Paragraph 6 states, “'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" (D'Alto 6). If classroom computuers were to have the Facial Action Coding Systems, then students would be more encouraged to do school work outide of the classroom. Students would be able to work on their school work without being as confused or frustrated. The Facial Action Coding System could even help adults in college, work or at home. Adults would use the system for taxes, college work, bussness emails, etc.. Also, if a student or adult was trying to fill out a job application, not only would the employer get to know the student or adult by the application, they would get to know how smart or simple minded the worker would be. The system could even tell if you are faking a smile or not. In paragraph 8, that author states, \"But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. To an expert, faces don’t lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn’t being truthful.\" (D'Alto 8). Say if a student looks confused or upset, and the only thought that comes up is that the student is not ok, but even thought the teacher asks the student if he/she is ok, the student dosen't want to embarass himself/herself in front of the class, so they continue to say they are fine. The system will see that the student is confused or frustrated so it will try to help the student the best they can. The new technology should be used on students. The system would help students with their confusion, frustration, and aner during class and outside of class. The software could make students work faster in or out of school, with or without a teacher, even if they get confused or frustrated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Seagoing Cowboy is a cowboy who travels overseas to a different country and take animals/supplies there that they are in need of. This job takes a lot of work. You have to watch all the animals every hour, clean their stalls, and feed them. This job does take a lot of work, but it is a unique experience one will never forget. You get to Help other countries in need after the war, see amazing countries and sights , and have fun with new friends you get to meet while traveling. It is a great experience. After World War ll, several countries were left in destruction. This meant that someone needed to help fast, and get the people food, animals, and other supplies that were needed. 44 nations came together as UNRRA, also known as the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration, and hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\", like myself. We help deliver horses, young cows, and mules to the countries in need. It feels so great to help other people, and I will never forget all the smiling faces I saw when I arrived with their animals. It is a wonderful sight. When you visit several countries, you never realize how wonderful and amazing they can look, even after a war! Places like Europe, China, Greece, Italy, and the list countinues. After we deliver the animals, we get to have a little bit a of fun before we go back, so we get to go to tourist attractions, and popular cities in the country. I was able to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, where the streets are made up of water. I also got to see the Acropolis in Greece. Those trips were pretty special! There are so many great things to see and do in every country, so no matter where you go, you will have a great adventure exploring the cities, and having a ton of fun! While being on a boat, traveling to a country, you have to watch over the animals every so often. That is not the case on your way back, when the animals are gone from your boat at the country you just visited. Since the animals are gone, you can do whatever you want to do to make the time pass. We do things such as table-tennis, volleyball, boxing, fencing, baseball, reading, and more fun games. You really can't play things games without people to play with, which is a great way to make friends. Since you probably don't know the people working with you, you can get to know them, and make new friends. This is one of my favorite parts of being a Seagoing Cowboy, because without becoming friends with your co-workers, you job isn't fun. It's a great way to open up, and whats more fun then going over-seas with your friends and having a good time? In conclusion, becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is an amazing experience because you get to help others in need after the war, see amazing places/sights, and have tons of fun while making new friends with the people you work with. You will have so many great memories of your time at every country. Become a Seagoing Cowboy today!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Seagoing Cowboy is a job that you dont see that often. So why not try it out this job could change your life significantly. But if you dont want to try it then thats you choice. The first reason this is a good job is because you can expirence awesome adventures. This is good because you get to see places youve never seen before in your life! This man got to go on an adventure to Europe to help Fix things. The second reason this is a good job is because you get to visit uniqe places that youve never seen. This is good because sometimes nobody have seen these places. Half the people you see probably havent even heard of the places you get to see doing this job. In conclusion this job is good but it is not meant for every body. So before you voluteer, think into it to really make sure you think this job is right for you or others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Seagoing Cowboy is not always the easiest job. Although there are the dangers of the sea, it is a wonderfull chace for someone to see Europe and China. One can also make some new friends or peers. When aboard any ship or boat, there is a danger of storms or wind. Even just sliding off the boat. One always has a crew behind him or her to watch out for them. No one ever has to fear being badly hurt. True friends wouldn't let their friends fall off a boat. When they see them start to trip they would come running to see that they don't go overboard. On the boat one learns to trust others about what to do, where to go, and especially how to do something. The best part is that the cowboys that have been on the ships before can tell where the best tourist places are. When a person gets on the boat they are stepping into an adventure. While one is on the boat it travels to Europe, China, and other lovely places. These may be places that one has never seen before. In that instance the trip would be even more breath taking and exiting. Although there are a few dangers of the sea, being a seagoing cowboy is a lovely chance for sight seeing and new friends. When you go out to sea there are great opportunities for adventure. One will never really know untill they see for themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Seagoing Cowboy's Journey Imagine going to many sites that many people don't normally see and having mulitple adventures around the world. It is an unforrgetable experience that you don't want to miss. You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program becasue of the fun-filled games and freetime, helping the struggling individuals and families, and seeing the unquie sites. First of all, having some freetime and playing some games onboard is simply a time to relax and enjoy the great experience. Many of you may say that the games don't matter. You just want to travel the world and save as much people as possible. Even though that may be true, I belive that the games benefit in many ways, like making new friends and just having some tine to relax. The cowboys and I have played baseball and volleyball in some empty holds where animals have been housed. Other things to do in your freetime could be reading, boxing, whittling, table-tennis, fencing, and so much more! It has helped me have a better time onboard. Secondly, helping struggling individuals and families make you feel joyous inside. Some people may say that you don't want to help as many people and go enjoy the amazing sites and play games with fellow companions. And, helping people is really dangerous. But, I belive that if you do, it can make you a better person inside and out. And it doesn't just have to be people either; it can be animals too. Caring for the animals on the way to China kept me busy which was a good benefit because the trip to China took about a month. They had to be fed and watered two to three times a day. It helped me be more responsable and hard working. As for the struugling people, I helped people recover their food supplies, animals and more. The benefits were that same as those with the animals. The knowladge of helping someone or something is one of the best feelings in the world. Lastly, touring the sites was the best thing for me to experience. Multiple people might say that they don't care about the sights and they just want to do something else. But, I believe that if I didn't see those wonderful sights, I wouldn't be determined or encouraged to finish my job as a Seagoing Cowboy. It was an unbeliveable opportunity for me and it will be for you. I was able to see Europe and China! Two things that were special to me were seeing the Acropolis in Greece and taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. In Italy, many of the streets are water, which made my experience to Italty even more exciting. On the way to China, I also marveled at the Panama Canal and toured an excavated castle in Crete. In conclusion, you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because of the fun-filled games and freetime, helping the struggling individuals and families, and finally, exploring the unquie and wonderful sights around the world. I am very grateful for the amazing opportunity and it made me more aware of people and their countire's needs. You should think about participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program today!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Small number of the public utilise online websites such as facebook to have conversation with friends and some others use the Internet to know more about current announcements. This essay is going to explain how technology benefits us by providing breaking news around the world in seconds at any location, and also how social media fills the gap in long distance relatives. People are now in a technological period where distance does not matter for sending digital information such as photos and videos. Real time broadcasting is helping countries to reach almost all nations in the world if they want to provide urgent messages. Apps like whatsapp are now a basic need for any smartphone user, through which connecting to other people from any place is now simple. Also services like youtube helps to conway story on their live channels. Although advancement has brought changes in daily life, this comes with cost. The main problem of technology is there is no one to control things happening on the internet, since tracking of information such as age, location, education and interest of individuals are now done by new generations phones and cookies on websites customers visit. The spread of fake news is now a major concern as it can harm not only the victim of it but the entire circle of his or her friends. By considering this information, although the Internet can sometimes be harmful, use of this modernization can provide a better standard of living for humans. Easy connectivity can save lot of time and energy and thus advantages of technology are considerably more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Step in the Right Direction Cars are a great means of transportation. Unfortunately nothing is perfect. Cars have many advantages, and like everything, disadvantages too. People rely too heavily on their private vehicles especially with the easy accessability of public transportation. Limiting the use of cars limits pollution, which is a growing issue among many people. Among that, there are many other advantages too. Limiting the use of cars is certainly a step in the right direction. As the ice near the poles shrink, the problem of global warming grows. Global warming has been linked to car emmisions. Limiting cars will limit emmisions of harmful gasses into the air. Sadly people seem to like their cars more than the environment. This is unfortunate because there are so many other ways to get around. For some reason people are just too close minded to try something else. If the amount of cars on the road shrinks, then the amount of pollution going into our envirenment will follow. Car-free days in major cities is a good way to get the car-free trend started. With large turnouts, it certainly gets people open to the idea(Source 3). Saying that, this will not work long term. Getting the ball rolling and keeping the ball rolling are two completely different things. Car free cities is a better long term strategy(Source 1). Now lets talk about our economy. Most people probably wish it was a little better. Jobs make a strong economy. If people didnt have cars they would be in need of some public transportation. Instead of paying that monthly payment on your car, go take the bus. The demand for public transportation would rise immensily thus the supply would follow; opening more jobs. All in all, limiting the use of cars has more advantages than disadvantages. Most of the potential problems could be easily fixed with a little bit of brain power. Opening more jobs and cleaning up the envirenment should be reason enough to switch over to a car-free lifestyle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A The warm friends I planned spend We decided walking around looking cool stores Eventually would get lunch go park near river right next We agreed great plan would wonderful To start met bus stop movies I We decided go look inside first crazy things love Inside store I found dress die small grey skulls Unfortunately costed left Next went see store us I created black teddy studded leather jacket We gave awsome top hat named We thought pretty funny teddy bears supposed cute one kind scary We paid continued little adventure We decided lunch time went got chineese food left headed park next river Before got park stopped go see like bridge There towers rocks place decided build one We stacked almost tall toppled almost crushing way We followed little path away rock towers river lead us little beach next water There huge pillar separating trees bushes water We decided eat lunch instead going park After eating lunch full energy started pine cone war tagging back head one After minutes us involved We used giant pillar bridge shield nt quite work better aim us hitting everyone left right rest us teamed We threw pine cones one untill start backing away As reached edge shore tripped big rock fell backwards shallow water Instantly busted roar laughter continued good couple minutes finally decided helping water He unhappy situation quite pleased Jesica managed get vidio whole thing played back could nt help laugh us After went park Immediately ran slide I wan na go first screamed made jungle jim slide All us pushed shoved get slide I finally suggested going big swirly slide together Everyone els thought great idea attempted first wanted I second followed We started realy slow progressed speed us piled onto slide We ended pile bottom laughing histarically When came back reality realized time head home grabbed things headed bus stop In end turned even better expected The whole full joy laughter whitch key aspects life Without laughter would way extremely happy think something funny Happiness one thing need live fun fulfilling life I feel like ability laugh one thing makes person fun around Do think laugh often enough", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Time I Patient A time I patient I went doctor step mom brother He getting knee looked waiting room like two three hours Jody step mom getting really irritated I told doctor soon I patient playing phone That kind made relax usually Im patient usually everyone tells Im really impatient For reason Im really excited Im fairly patient I exulted see could get knee brace Sure enough happy two hours worth This time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Time I patient time I whent hours early walk front desk panting ruming thought late said Are ok I said CAPS I late appointment foyce Wo hours early said pulled Out two favorite hours school hours early I said sorry would like take back school CAPS I m good I said waited loby I fine I west game ball chichi I played I got bored I read wired adult magazine By easy I happened I m almost Then walked I got shots That time I patient ant longest", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A UFO lands in your front yard. Apart from the screaming, you hear beeps and boops. You turn to the side and see an Alien standing in your doorway. He opens his mouth and a loud alarm sound comes out. You open your eyes and then realize it was all a dream. That's the only reasonable explanation for you seeing a UFO or an alien. To this day scientist have not encountered signs of life on any other planet. So what makes you think aliens could have created the face on Mars? Two decades and a half ago scientist discovered a face like shape on Mars. It was about two miles long. Scientist claimed it was staring at the cameras, but there was nothing surrounding it. No power tools, or hammers, not even a few sculpting tools. How would aliens create such a thing? With alien-y tools? Magic powers maybe? No, because it was a natural formation. Scientist figured out it was just another Martian mesa, which are frequent around the Cydonia. According to the article the only thing different about this one was that it \"had unusual shawdows make it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" Which made people go wild. When Mars' face started its fifteen minutes of fame it became a beloved \"pop icon.\" It was featured in movies, books, and radio talk shows. It \"haunted grocery checkout lines\" for years. That is when people, mostly conspiracy theorists, started thinking \"What if aliens formed it?\" Some scientist even started to believe that it was an alien artificat. So more research was done. Scientist took more pictures, which were ten times sharper than the first ones, and stutdied them. Discovering, the obivious, that it was a natural landform. There was dissapointment all over the place, not only for the people, but scientist too. It was a mesa, a natural landform. It was even compared to the \"MIddle Butte in the Snaler River Plain of Idaho\". Since then the popularity of the face has gone downhill. Maybe one day it'll resurface on the social media as a funny meme that teens will talk about for two weeks. Tragic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A ago I went trip cedar point hour thirty drive go reason went dad work I kept car wait suaisn family waiting I burst running parky dad points height limits I NUMft tall I wasnt tall enough rides dad saw I tall enough We walk around looking ride importantly line So finally ride attention drawn ride line mouth practicely hit ground expression CAPS luck getting ride father looked sister mom I pointed faress whell covard course So get line sign least something degrees waited almost two hours finally got front got chair bar came us I remember one thing set quarter leg gravity takes hold A minute going like neteour quarter doesnt float At split second solid ground ride really worth wait hey Im covard", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A ago brought incision previous operation panste open Because physical coller coaster I missed three days one day school far I gone visiting Now I m back trying catch classes So far I ve achieved goal social yet catch subjects Although students allowed one day make missed per day gone teachers extremely patient helpful willing hold grading time catch class I think I ll make", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A argument Luke is dealing with from his point of view is how much things he has to do and if he does the commands wrong there will be horrible consequences for them. When Luke heard about the job he was so excited about it. He heard that being a Seagoing Cowboy was a amazing job. He has been dreaming about being a Seagoing Cowboy because of all the animals you take care of and all the traveling they do. That's why right away when Luke heard that they are hiring Seagoing Cowboys, he couldn't say no. It was a opportunity of a lifetime! As soon as Luke got hired, he was so excited to start working. He worked and worked all the time. He wanted to be the best Seagoing cowboy there has ever been. Sometimes he would work more than he was soppost to. He enjoyed taking care of the horses, young cows, and mules. Luke worked very hard and sometimes got tired. He went to alot of places. He went to New Orleans and Greece and other places. As soon as he was done with all the traveling he made nine trips all together! He made more trips than any Seagoing Cowboy! Later on Luke kept working with all the animals. All the taking care of made Luke very busy, beside with the traveling. Luke also had to clean. On Lukes second trip he served his night as a watchman. He had to check on all the animals every hour. But then a horrible thing happened. After making his hourly report to the captain, Luke slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. He landed feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metel along the edge stopped his slide, that kept him from going overboard into the dark Alantic Ocean. But luckly for him he was still alive. As soon as that insedant happened to Luke, he got his ribs cracked. Luke couldn't work for a couple of days. So while Luke was not going to work he managed his time to have fun on board. He played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals have been housed. He played alot more games aswell. Later on being a Seagoing Cowboy he thought of how amazing it feels to help people. He helped lots of people during his trips. So Luke had a great idea. He wanted people to help other people. He started to convince people to be a Seagoing Cowboy. But most of people thought he was crazy. He told people how amazing it is to be traveling and amazing it is to be helping others. People called his job dangerouse. It sure was. Luke got very annoyed and angry because people thought he was crazy and they did not like that kind of job. Luke stopped persuading people to be a Seagoing Cowboy. But He didn't give up on his job though. He liked his job the way it is and he wouldn't change it for anything. He got awards for being a very helpful, admiring, and amazing person in his job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A article about driverless cars have been brought ot my attention lately. People bicker over whether or not they should be developted or not. I personally think they should because they take less fuel to run, have more advanced tecnology to keep us safer, and you have less driving you have to do yourself. These three reasons are why I think they should be developed. Driverless cars are the things of the future as they save you gas money, they have more advanced technology, and they do most of the driving for you. Driverless cars use less fuel as reguler cars do according to Google. Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, says he envisions cars that would use half the amount of fuel then regular cars. It would also mean we would have more flexibility in cars in the future. Another reason driverless cars should be developed is because they have more advanced tecnology then modern cars now. Google has a modified Toyota Pruius that has position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotation sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor. The rotating sensor on the roof is the most important piece of the tecnology as it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the vehicle's surroundings. The last reason why I think they should be developed is that you have less driving you have to do. Google says the only thing humans have to do right now is to back in and out of places and to manuver their way through road constution and traffic jams. They say they hope that they can invent a car in the near future that will have itself able to do everything. Driverless cars should be developed as it helps show that the United States have a lot of tecnology advancements. They should that there is more to everything you see. With driverless cars you will be able to see more of the world and less of staring at the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A back I friend named We best friends like two peas pod We would hang everyday day One random day walked friend house see could hang We hanging day came idea She wanted stay stayed little past dark walked around We stopped house could get clothes left go back On way stopped house chilled We minutes laughing crazy stuff happened already When finally giving hugs go older brother smacked butt told nice We made fun longest time Not mention kept talking moved When left I singing new random person stopped asked directions Then I directed going said CAPS drove away When gone looked screamed That hottest guy I seen time reached road saw guy time nt hot He scruffy face long brown straggly hair tied ponytail dressed like hobo I still day give crap That greatest We ended going buy drinks started freaking losing So retrace steps way back house hoping d find Reretracing steps came across guy tried help us find By probably We finally gave decided head back Before We even stepped foot front door mom comes darting starts screaming So mom took back house time I knocked door locked everyone asleep go So I stuck homeless We walked around Almost fell asleep laundromat remembered aunt looking small white truck sale parking lot The truck bed back nt know sounded better hard floor laundromat crawled It tight squeeze managed Plus wreaked dirty socks pee It sure worst thing ve smelled doubt funnest I ve girl", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A back mom decided send camp When I heard I pretty upset I would nt know anyone Before camp started I I could let mom let go After I knew I would nt get way I knew I camp When I got place taking us camp nt lot people When I got camp I wrong lot people I nt know It extremely scary late go home Walking cabin nerve racking I nt know would cabin Meeting girls cabin awkward mainly nt know secondly counselor weird Right meeting counselor made us play game Playing first strangers strange started laughing We played laughed hours hours time lunch Lunch girls scary since muh fun playing still nt really know When lunch first thing play laughed fun started get know All played silly little game giggled laughed came along second camp us almost become friend laughing playing We played much first called CAPS instead Like things got tired went separate ways free time Everyone agreed free time boring played Laughing laughing till stomachs hurt laughing hard I think us really became friends We become thick thieves couple days everything together We talked swam played tennis importantly laughed together Camp I expected way better All girls cabin become friends fast strange people realy kind weird become best friends couple days Camp flying us knew almost Things good one us got sick I one ended sick horrible I stayed bed missing everything going Even worse I almost lost voice laying bed without laughing friends fun torture camp fastly approaching I could stay bed relief I could talk The rest camp I could bed enjoying camp When time ending evening arriving cabin party Our party much fun even though stay inside cabin We ate treats saved concession stand treats counselor brought It almost go bed soon leaving There one thing one game We played hour another counselor come tell us quiet Looking back first year camp I always remember us became friends We still talk every year camp still play That year camp I think one favorite memories became friends playing laughing together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A book represents person s beliefs feelngs topic Therefore censoring books wrong goes freedom speech I believe books media removed offensive truth something need read prevent tragedies happening A person finds topic offensive nt forced read If accept people beliefs prejudice books trying censor Many books threatened censorship books historical facts holocaust I think right know important events For one reason forget things likely repeated Do really want murder millions people repeated Just becaused ashamed something dose nt mean sweep carpet lay hidden waiting stike like hungry alligator Instead books prejudice events kept show example nt act While books censored shame censored certain group people find offensive There much easier solution censoring books The offended groups ignore book If offensive first place one forced read The book nt forced way like posters television broadcast It kept certain section library parties wishing avoid The main reason book censored first place someone finds offensive However nt keeping someone saying something offensive To A big target censorship treating everyone fairly If book like censored would like saying people better others Another big target censorship countries Censoring book would basically tell population wrong Censoring something wrong Not could cause sad events repeat offended parties simply avoid book While books offend people censoring book offensive parties The simplest thing leave reader decid read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A book words happenings re adventures stories travel one person another I find amazing someone one country could write book someone another country could read Inspiring stories reach one person another books music movies I believe things like help shape us today There many problems entertainment today oppinion They include things show lot violence intimacy fit people I nt think take shelves simply rate everyone knows expect Movies rated people nt want need see happen While appropriate parts guide us It s almost like preparing us worst hoping best We see happens one person articles entertainment helps us make sure nt make mistake I also believe many stories movies inspire us better people reach dreams If see one person think ca nt I Where would world one encouraged pushed someone else wanted Entertainment pushes concept adds everything show reality Whether things offense harsh contents still prepare help us battle everyday life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A boy is sitting in math class. The teacher calls on him due to the Facial Action Coding System informing her the boy is bored. She asks the student why but the boy insists he is not. The teacher gets angery for the boy lying and valuble class time has been wasted. This is one of the many problems that will arise if the system is put into a class room setting. Students know the responsability they have to ask questions and pay attention in class, a machince to do it for them would complicate things and take away life skills they will need. The artical talks about using the technology for reading your emotions for ads that pops up, progresivly adapting each ad to you. This is harmful in the same way it would be in a class room, it takes away skills you will learn by preventing hardship. School teaches you more than textbook defintions, it teachs you how to deal with stuggles and social interactions. This machine takes that away by skipping over a crucial step in the learning process. The Facial Action Coding System would be a stepback words for schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A butte and a mesa these are all natural things on our planet Earth. So why do you think that the planet Mars also can't have these things. Earth is covered in these mesas so more than likely other planets including Mars probably have buttes and mesas, its just coincidentall that it looks like a face. With the other pictures it proves that the mesa isn't an alien artifact and just a natural landform. If you go out to the Rocky Mountains and look around you can probably see tons of Mesas maybe not as big ,but they are still the same natural landform. The mesa is big and does look like a face at first glance ,but there is no way you can prove it. But for scientists you can back it up with facts not just opinions. If you look at the image taken from the spaceship Viking 1 from 1976 you can see that only looks somewhat similar to a face. And then 22 years later a picture from a Mars Global surveyor you can see that it very clearly isn't a face and instead just a natural landform. The only way that this could be an alien artifact is if the martians are inside of it or underneath it. That would explain how the camera can not see any other buildings around the object because they are all inside of it so no one is outside. They also could be inside of the butte because the planet is deadly for some paticular reason and they have shelter inside safely away. And another reason is because inside of the planet there may be some source of running water that is keeping them alive. Although this could not work because they more than likely would have gotten a picture of a martian outside doing something. And they would need some source of water which has already dried up on the outside of the planet. In the end it is not possible that the mesa is an alien artifact and is instead just a butte or a mesa that happens to like a face. Because the clearer picture shows that it now looks nothing like a face, water stopped flowing on the red planet a long time ago, and Earth also has these land forms all over the place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A camera that detects how you feel. Imagine walking on a peaceful day, you're trying to enjoy a nice spring day. On your walk you have random people trying to take pictures of you at the park. All you are trying to do is enjoy your day. Next thing you know, Goverment camera's using you as a study when you just want to be left alone. They dont even know you and you just want to enjoy the day. In the blink of an eye others have milions of photos of you. Its almost a invasion of privacy wouldn't you think? This System seem's like it would be cool to use on you'r phone, or with a group of friend's. But as we know thing's can easily lead to something bigger. That's why no one need's it. It would start out as something cool. Something new and people at the park would be trying to show you. Perhaps you like it at first and you take a photo with the person at the park. At the moment you could be okay with it, but then you go to bed, now some stranger has a picture of you and you'r kid. Or individual's thinking something about you when they dont even know you. That leads into the Goverment. They have millions of camera's and sutistic freaks that just view you and your family as a object. They want to use your looks to make them money, or get what they want. Such as banning things, or zone's where people can't be if they look mad when your not. After all there could be a database that says who you are, what your attitude is, and its open to the public. So they have this new database for the public. People can look up anyone and see who they are and there attitude, if they are always upset, happy mad or joyfull. Know you have the world to judge you and millions of photos to look at you. They are all random people who don't know you and its just what a computer thinks of you. who wants that? Regardless of the publuc, friends, or goverment all you wanted to do was enjoy your day. Know you have million's of photo's of you that you dont want people to have. A invasion of privacy, and possibly rights violated. who wants that when all you wanted was to enjoy your nice spring day and get out of the house after a cold long winter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car driving down the road. The wheels are turning, the engine running, and everything seems normal. The only difference is that the car is driving itself. Sure, this sounds cool, but safety is in question and safety is the most important aspect of a car these days. The thought of a driverless car looks good on paper. It seems like it could work, but after extended thought, it is a big leap of faith towards mankind. The driverless car demand responsibilty and too many people in the world don't have it. The negative outcomes of driverless cars outweigh the positive due to the possibility of malfunctions, cyber terrorism, and the lack of human crash prevention. A driverless car would primarily be ran by a computer system and, like a laptop, this system could malfunction. \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" shows that the computer system would determine the car's destination, its speed, etc. With the system being in control the majority of the time, malfunctions could be deadly. Not only would they be deadly to the people in the car, but also to anyone around them. Imagine a car speeding one hundred miles per hour down the road because of a small computer malfunction. The speed could cause the car to approach a turn too quickly. This creates a problem because now the car can't make the turn and a crash happens. One thinks, \"Oh well then the human driver can take over in this situation.\" Yes, as explained by the article there is that oprtion, but it may not work. Humans are naturally lazy and wil take advantage of the driverless car. At first they may stay alert, but eventually that alertness will die down. It is human nature. The driverless car doesn't just present the possible malfunction of the computer system, it also may cause a malfunction in the human driver. Cyber terrorism has become more common as technology advances. This is a serious issue that can be hard to stop. The car is powered by computer systems and all computer systems can be hacked and overridden. The human driver could be prevented from taking control. Suppose Barrack Obama is riding in his driverless car to an important meeting. Nothing seems out of place, but all of a sudden the car has a mind of its own. It turns around, accerates, and drives itself straight into a brick wall, killing everyone inside. One of the world's most important and powerful men died because a hateful hacker decided to take advantage of his driverless car. Obviously, this situation is unlikely because the President of the United States would have the best protection in the world, but the point is that it could happen to anyone. Terrorists are unpredictable and driverless cars could possibly be something they could take advantage of. Driverless cars allows humans to take over in time of difficult driving situations. As the article said it would alert them to take over at roadblocks, traffic stoppages, and other hazardous points in a journey from one place to another. What if the driver needed to take control in a non hazardous situation? They wouldn't be able to react fast enough. The road may seem safe, but then it suddenly isn't. An example of this would be a drunk driver. Millions of accidents happen a year because of them. Your driverless car could be cruising down the road and a car passing by crosses the center line and hits the driverless car. Could a human have prevented that? Could they have swerved onto the shoulder around the situation? Those are questions one has to ask because human may cause a lot of wrecks, but they also can prevent a lot of wrecks that compuer systems wouldn't be able to do anything about. Driverless cars are appealling at first, but after some thought the appeal dies down. Human mind are amazing things and they are more capable than a computer system. Malfunctions, cyber terrorism, and the lack of human crash prevention make driverless cars too risky. Bad people can take advantage of good things and driverless cars just seem like a tool people would take advantage of. The world might be ready for driverless cars in the future, but at the moment they aren't.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car free world?! That sounds splended! Over seventy percent of Vauban's families in Germany do not own cars, and almost fifty-seven percent sold their car to move there due to the fact that they are almost ninety percent car free. There are so many advantages on limiting your car usage. Think of it like this, you walk outside your front door and see hundreds of big bulky cars and trucks flying by giving off greenhouse gas emissions from their tailpipes, which is not good for you at all. Is that what you want to see every morning? Or do you want to swing up that front door, smell those roses, and see all your neighbors hopping on their bikes about to ride off to work. There are so many benefits of limiting car usage but a main one is the health of the people. How many times a day do you see an overweight person struggling to get in or out of their car? Here in America it has become a casual sight. Now picture this, you see that same person getting on a bike and driving to and from work. How long do you think it is going to take until they start to loose weight and start to feel healthier, inside and out. Some ignorant people say that the car industry is boosting, but I agree with those intelligent people who are seeing that the industry has been slowly declining. You see more people taking taxis, carpooling, or texting their friends to pick them up. \"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift.\" -Mimi Sheller, an extremely smart professor at Drexel University. She is refering to the decline in car buying and the amount of people getting their licenses. Did you know that their has been a large drop in the percentage of 16 to 40 year olds getting a license, while the older people are likely to retain their licenses as they age. According to a study found last year, young people driving has decreased twenty-three percent between two-thousand one and two-thousand nine. Do the smart thing, get a bike and ditch the gas guzzling, greenhouse gas emissioning, car of yours today!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car is a form of everyday transportation in some peoples lives. It's not nessisarily a bad thing, but it's not exactly a good thing either. Many areas in countries all over the world have begun to cut back on car use or ban it all together. Some countries have certain conditions that warrants car use dangerous. There are many reasons and advantages to living life without a car that can be easily explained in this paper. In a small German Suburb called Vauban, the people have given up a vital piece of modern day life, their cars. Things most people see everyday such as; parking lots, garages, and driveways, have been removed from the community. Of course it is not illegal to have a car in this suburb, it is just more expensive because they have to buy an allotted space to put their car in. Most of the families in this suburb have commented that they are in a happier state of mind without the \"stress\" of owning a vehicle. Along with being a source of emotional release, not owning a car means that these people are not contributing to the emissions of greenhouse gas. Cars are quoted to be responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe. Vauban is the result of years of effort trying to make cities more walking and bicycling friendly. Communities like this are fast growing in places like the United States and largly promoted by companies and even the Enviornmental Protection Agency. Places like Paris on the other hand have completly different reasons for going car-free. Paris has a quoted \"near-record pollution\". The contries climate causes car pollution to be trapped leaving a dense smog throughout the city. They have gone so far as to place restirctions on driving, one day vehicles with certain plate numbers must not be driven, and the next day vehicles with opposite plate numbers must not be driven, if they defy this restirction then they are fined. The cause of the smog was blamed on France's fuel choices. Paris's problems are just another reason to be car-free. In Bogota Columbia they ban the use of any vehicles, other than buses and taxis, for one day every year, it is called the Day Without Cars. It has been quoted as a good stress reliever, and a good way to lower air polution. The Day Without Cars has been part of an improvement campaign since the mid-1990s. Bogata has truly commited to supporting a car-free enviornment with the construction of bicycle paths, parks, sports centers, and even the replacement of damaged sidewalks. Even people such as President Obama are advertising for the cut back on the use of cars and greenhouse gas emissions. And even if they don't realize Americans themselves have already begun to use cars less. There has been a decline in American car sales and the number of people going to get licenses has declined as well. America has long been the ultimate advertiser for cars. Some of the most prominent car brands today call the U.S. their home. Now it is quoted that the lack of car sales can be blamed on America's declining financial situation and that the unemployment factor means their is no use for cars. Overall though, this decline in car use has lead people to find alternate modes of transportation that, even after financial and employment issues are resolved, they might continue to use. Combining all these different situations together, as well as \"shifts in culture\" leads to one simple thing. Nowadays personal car ownership just isn't something that people are too serious about. And when you add to that the fact that so many companies and influential parties are advertising the car-free way of life, cars are simply no longer desirable to some people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car is considered by many a nessecity for everyday life; however, limited usage of our cars has many positive advantages. Emissions from cars create greenhouse gasses, which are detrimental to our enviroment, and limiting the use of our cars can greatly cut down these emissions. Also, many people say that using alternant modes of transportation cut down on the stress they expireinced whilst using a car. In fact, many people are no longer conserned with cars, and young people are begining to stop getting liscenses. The smog, which is caused by car emissions, in Paris, France was so intense that the city had to place a partial ban on drivers. Those with even number plates faced a fine if they drove on Monday; and, on Tuesday those ith odd number plates would face the same fine if they drove. The ban was so successful in cutting down the smog that the ban was lifted in time for those with odd number plates to drive unrestricted on Tuesday.( source 2) Paris isn't the only city to place bans on driving, in Bogota, Columbia one day a year the city celebrates the 'Day Without Cars'. The idea of this day is to help reduce smog and has even caught on in Cali and Valledupar, also in Columbia.( source 3) Vauban, Germany makes owning a car unappealing to residents by only allowing two places to park and creating a city plan that facilitates alternative modes of transportation. Many of the residents as a result dont own cars and are happier this way! \"When I had a car I was always tense. Im much happier this way,\" said resident Heidrun Walter. Cities like Vauban are result of a growing trend in Europe called smart planning, which seprates auto use from suburban life.(source 1) People all around the world also feel positive after limited car use. During the Day Without Cars in Columbia Carlos Arturo Plaza states that the day is \" A good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" (source 3) In 2013 the average miles driven per American was down 9% from the peak of car usage. This may because the Internet allow people to feel connected or possibly because many center cities renewal have made the suburbs less appealing. Whatever the reason, one things for sure, there has been a substancial drop in the amount of 16- to 39-year- olds getting a liscence. (source 4) America isnt the only place to expierence a drop in car usage. Vauban, Germany makes owning a car impractical and 57% of families sold their cars to live there, while 70% dont own cars. (source 1) Limiting car usage has positive effects on the enviroment and has shown effective at lowering stress in people. Globally many are already starting to realize adavantages of cutting back on car usage. So while a car may seem like a nessecity, keep the advantages in mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car that can be controlled on its own sounds unsafe but Google cofounder Sergey Brin can make that happen? Google cofounder Sergey envisions a future with a public transportation system of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. Google cofounder Sergey says the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexiblity than a bus would. Google cars aren't all that driverless; they still have to alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with trafic issues. Example like road work accidents. Smart cars need alot of sensors for starters. Such as google modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating senors on the left wheel, rotating sensor on the roof of the vechical, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar senors, a GPS receiver, and lastly a interial motion sensor. That's alot of senors in my opinion. But, the most important technology in the system is the spinning sensor on the roof. It uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. Which is needed for a driverless car. Senors can cause the car to apply brakes on every wheel and reduce the power from the engine, allowing far better responses and control than a human driver could possibly manage alone. Trying to further improve in senors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer can lead cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own. Senors make sure that the driver keeps hold of the wheel. But none of the cars have developed completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves like most cars, but all are designed of notifying the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. So the human driver must still remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. GM have developed driver's seats and vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of back up into an object. The Google car lets the human know when to prepare to take over. Manufacturers are considering flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays, cameras to watch that the driver is remaining focusing on the road. While the driver is focused on the road, the car will be watching the driver. The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge. Dr. Werner Huber would like to interpret the driving fun in a new way. Otherwise drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive. Manufactures hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. The displays can be turned off instantly when the dirver needs to take over. This way the in-car system can actually be alot safer in the feature. As long at the cars can be as safe as possible they may allow this to happen in more states but this will only happen if the driverless car has improved. It has only been aproved in California,Nevada,Flordia, and the District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars. I think driverless cars sound useful for the future, but also need to be in the safest conditon as possible for many more states to aprove, so no one gets hurt in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car that can drive by itself? Is it safe? These are the questions many people ask themselves when it comes to driverless cars. Driverless cars have both positive and negative outcomes. But so far companies have not been very successful at making these cars to protect everyone in or around these cars. The driverless cars has more of a negative aspects. They have more of a negative aspect because the car has all of these sensors in them. What would happen if one of the sensors or the computers went out in the car? The car would them have to be drove by a person or you pay a lot of money to get the car fixed. If one of the sensor were to go out and the person in the car didn't know they could get involved in a serious accident. As the law questions: \" who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer\"? The law asks this question because the driver and the manufacturer could both be at fault in this situation. Driverless cars are also very dangerous because if the person was to fall asleep while the car was driving by itself and needed someone to take over what would the car do? Would the car continue to drive? Would it stop in the middle of the road? Lastly, would it switch over to manual and the person get into an accident? All these questions are a possibility that the car could do. This could once again be both the drivers and the manufacturers fault. \" We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Driving isn't supposed to be fun and sit back and relax for people. It's about getting yourself to where you and other people are going safe. In many states it is illegal to even test a computer driven car. California, Nevada, Texas, and the District of Columbia have led the country into allowing limited use of atonomous cars; many manufacturers believe that once the cars are proven safe many states will follow. But even if they are proven to be safe, even if traffic laws change, new laws will have to be made in order to cover liability in case of an accident. A car that can drive by itself? Is it safe? These are the questions many people ask themselves when it comes to driverless cars. Driverless cars have both negative and positive aspects. But overall, they have more negative rather than positive. We need to make sure that the people that drive the car and people that are surrounded by the car are all safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car that doesnt need a driver? For many years I thought I would just read about it or see it on tv, but now they actually built a car that can drive it self. I believe this would be one of the best inventions on earth. I support this project because its highly possible but as long as it has the saftey and laws i believe it will be a suscessful invention. A driverless car can be highly helpfull an extremly useful to every one.I believe it would lower the number of accedents and deaths due to cars all over the world. We wouldn't have to worrie about our teenagers going out and getting into an accedent because they were texting or calling someone while they were driving.We wouldn't have to worrie about drunk drivers as much iether because the driverless car.There are alot of people dieing from texting,calling,and even drinking and driving and even if the driverless car lowers the death or accedent ratio number then i think its worth having. As we know it takes alot to make a driverless car.Google co-founder Sergey Brin has been doing alot of reaserch such as in 1950's General Motors created a car built a car that could run on a special track with out a person but the road had a cable connected to the car that sent radio signals to the car,Engineers at Berkeley tried something similar,but they used magnets with alternating polarity.The car read the positivee and negative polarity as messages in binary codes.They worked well considering there time and they required massive upgrades to exsist in regular roads with traffic and people all around. With this people might say what if theres some problems or even some mis-signals with the driverless cars and thats highly possible and it could be big problems as such as law suits or accidents or even death.Rest assure the law isn't going to let this car on the road if there not completly sure its safe for everyone that uses it.But people could also abuse the power of the driverless car and be absolutly careless of the car and just not pay anyattention to the road or the things in its surroundings.But really that already happens with regular cars but the driverless car the like a better line of defens. Over all the driverless car will be a great help to the people all over the world and will help stop the accedents and deaths from happing all over the world.We should all come to gether and embrace this idea.Its a step up in history and it could save the next persons life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car that drives its self? There are very many pros and cons of this idead. What will happen if the car wrecks and you are not drving. Who will be to blame the company or the person. If one of the cars messes up who will pay for it? Driverless cars are not a very good idea what so ever. It states in the passage that it will make the person drive through contruction, as well as things it is not familiar with. The person may not be paying attetion at that time, that could cause a wreck or maybe worse. Paragraph 7 states that no car is fully driverless yet. It says \"They can steer, accelerate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" Paragraph 9 states that if we get driverless cars there will have to be many new laws made for the safety of the driver and the possibilitys that the car could hold. The valid points of the whole passage make me say no we dont need them. Driverless cars are an accident and a law suit waiting to happen. Also that will cost a grat amount of money that could be used for something more important. Driverless cars are a pointless experiment and idea. As well as the goverenment is already in debt with other countries, there is no money for these cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car that you do not have to drive. It sounds pretty cool right? There are many aspects on why driverless cars are good, but on the contrast side, many driverless cars are not that appealing, not to mention that they would be highly expensive. Driverless cars can cause accidents, are not truly \"driverless', and are not legal in numerous states. Driverless cars, even though they sound interesting, are in fact not that ethical. When you think of a driverless car you may think that they are safer, when in fact they are not. According to the article, they still have many kinks to work out, and big problems with liability.Cars that are driverless can cause as many accidents as a normal car can. If you were to get into an accident wtih a car that is driverless, and it was the techonolgys fault, who is to blame? When you think of the word \"Driverless car\" you would think that the automobile itself would be completely hands free, when in fact it is not. The article states that the driverless car can not do what a human can do. Such as go through heavy traffic, or going through work zones and around accidents. In fact, the article also states, that none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. The driverless cars are not in fact driverless yet. If car manufaturer was to think of a way to build a driverless car with all of the features it takes to make it a driverless car, he wouldnt be able to unless he lived in one of the following four states in the U.S. In the Unites States, according to the article, only have four states that allow you to test and make driverless cars. These states are: California, Nevada, Florida, and District of Columbia. With limited states that allow you to test drive these types of automobiles, how do we know that they are truly safe? On the contrast side the driverless car is a good saftey feature. It drives itself, but alerts the human when an action they can not do arises. Since these cars have this feature, they can alert the driver when they really need to pay attention. When you are driving the driverless car you always have to have your hands on the wheel or else it alerts you, which is a good saftey feature. Driverless cars have many keen features, and soon this will be the car everyone wants to buy in the future. But with all the saftey features only the higher class members would be able to afford it. Also, cars that are driverless could pose a threat to the newer generation by letting them slack off, and let the car drive itself. When in reality you are supposed to be driving the car. The question is, would you allow your teen to drive this car, even though the technology is not promised to work?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car that you get in and can't control? That insane. Driverless cars are coming and that could ruin a lot of people's days. Even though there are pros to driverless cars, there are very many cons, that could keep them off the road. Driverless cars could cause many wrecks in then ear future, be very expensive to make, and be very harmful to public demands. Driverless cars can become very dangerous. Now people might say \"can\" well that means they are not dangerous. Matter of fact, they will become dangerous. When people ride in these cars, they have to put all there trust into this car. The car could get your destination wrong, the car could shut down in a really bad spot, or it could misjudge another driver's actions. It would be great if people could get in a car and set back in relax without driving but it could be very dangerous as well. The cons to this prove it. In the article, it says the government does not agree with the driverless cars. Only some states are limiting the use of smi-autonomous cars. The states believe that safety is best achieved with alert drivers, not driverless cars. There are more and more people out there that agree, that driverless cars are not yet ready. The safety is a big factor. Not only are driverless cars dangerous and big safety hazards, they are also expensive to make. In the article, Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan all have plans to manufacture these cars. Now if you have ever seen a price tag on a Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, or Audi, you will know that these cars won't be cheap. Nissan might have a good deal on cars, but it is a foreign company, no telling what could go wrong there. Not only is it just the driverless system being built would be the expensive part, the sensors that would go on these cars would cost a fortune. The article says that these cars need a lot of sensors, the manufactures of sensors will raise the price do to the rapid rise in driverless cars that need sensors to drive. This will make the cars price tag, a lot higher. Since these cars cost good money to build, they will be sold for a hefty price. If the company doesn't sell them and tries to use them like a taxi service, the taxi and uber industry might shut down and prices to ride in these cars might sky rocket. There is just a lot of problems with money in this situation, that will make people dislike these cars or never ride in them. Last but not least, the people. People would miss the feeling of driving. The idea of getting in your car, turning up the radio, rolling the windows down and driving around would be forgotten? I think not. The feeling people get when they drive is great. Teenagers wait for 16 long years and finally get there license to drive, but now they can't because the driverless cars will take you. People like to be in control too. Control freaks like me wouldn't be able to ride in that car. You need to be able to control your vehicle that way if you do crash, it's your fault and you don't have to be mad at yourself for getting a car that you can't trust. Another thing is, this car would have a hard time becoming popular. In my town, people like to drive fast in there cars or blow big black smoke with there trucks. These cars will be only popular in the city and not in towns like mine. I don't think it time for these cars right now. Give it about 20 more years and I believe everyone will want one. Driverless cars have not yet become a thing and I don't think they will. These cars are great for being able to drive without someone in control but they are dangerous, expensive, and people like to drive themselves. Nothing will ever replace driving your own car. People love to drive. That why these cars are not the best idea. It could just turn bad for these manufactures and they could waste there money on a useless project.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car without driving is one of the best ideas that will go down in the history books. It is going to be revolutionary like Apple products. Let these cars develop. There are many benefits that come out of this. Sergery Brin, Google cofounder, is a genius. His unbelievable imagination about these cars is out of this world. \"He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" He is absolutely right, this will alter the world into a more beautiful and unique place. The development of these cars should continue because it saves money for the consumer, the consumer does not need to worry about themselves driving-wise, and it will be so much better for the world. One, while owing a car, needs to worry about paying for gas, an oil change, repairs, and car washed. Honestly the list can go on and on. With driverless cars, people can save a whole ton of money. With gas prices rising and more accidents occurs, we can eliminate that with these driverless cars. \"The car he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" According to Brin, these driverless cars are better than buses and does not use a lot of gas. That is a lot of money being expended using these other types of transportation. With the public-transport taxi system, many people can use that money to do other things. They can save up for college or buy that special someone something expensive. Driverless cars are a great and more efficiently alternative way that doen't make people go insane when they are burning their wallets. There are many accidents in today's world that deal with car crashes. The age group that is mainly directed to these car crashes is teenagers. Severe injuries happen and even death in some cases. The main problem that causes these terribel events is texting while driving. Well guess what? You don't have to worry about getting into a car crash because of texting while driving. You won't be driving all the time when you are in these special cars. So you can sit back and enjoy the ride. These cars can save a lot of peoples' lives. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones....The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" You see that. All people have to do is to remain alert and be ready to take over when their is such situation ahead. Besides, who wouldn't want to take a turn to drive these unique vehicles. Finally, with driverless cars, people can change the environment thay live in. Normal vehicles such as regulare cars, taxis, and buses use a lot of fuel. This causes pollution in the air which is bad for the environment. Driverless cars, as mentioned before, only use half the fuel normal taxis use. Car crashes also create a lot of pollutin as they let out carbon dioxide out with the fire they produce. \"Their cars have more than half a million miles without a crash...\" With the develpment of these cars, people can start breathing fresh air outiside. This creates a better and safer world for every human being on this planet. In conlusion, driverless cars should be developed. They save a lot of money by not using as much gas and consumers not worrying about oil changes and repairs. These cars can allow the driver to relax while in the vehicle because they don't have to drive most of the time. They also can make a healthier and safer place for everyone by reducing the amount of pollution in the air. The development of these cars would be revolutionary.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A certain number of individuals believe that youngsters must engage in volunteering activities during their leisure time of the day which will be beneficial for society's welfare and even the teenagers themselves. However, while I strongly agree with the advantages of community work for teenagers as well as society, on the other hand, volunteering should not be mandatory or imposed strictly on young people. With regards to the pros of community work, volunteering allows youngsters to work with a group or as a team collaboratively in terms of completing some tasks. This helps them learn to build strong relationships with a deep understanding of individuals and gain knowledge of cultures. Another example of this could be future opportunities. In other words, when young people interact with community work, they will gain experience and skills to open pathways in their careers. Moreover, instead of wasting time scrolling on social media, games and other unnecessary things, young people develop self–esteem, kindness and serving society brings happiness. Although volunteering is beneficial, it should not be compulsory. Youngsters should not join volunteer work if it is against their own will. Creating an environment where community work becomes an essential requirement might ruin the mental or physical health of the young generation. Taking responsibility with unwillingness could result in depression and harmful effects. Consequently, working under such circumstances may have a negative impact on becoming non-social in future with the fear of connection with society. To conclude, community help is the platform allowing numerous benefits for teenagers which are required for every responsible and independent individual only if it is a choice or desire.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A certain number of individuals trust that youngsters must do some free efforts for association because that can be helpful for minors as well for society.Itotally agree with this statement and in my following paragraphs i will discuss my view viewpoints with relevent examples to prove my opinion. In today's era,youth is happy to help their surroundings by doing volunteering at some places such as hospitals where they can help doctors and patients that can be beneficial for medical students.Moreover,they will have good knowledge of humanity by working in orphonages without any salary that will motivate them to learn alot about history from old generations living there.For instance,in a recent survey, a large number of youngones were seen in first add camp during covid situations. Moving forward,teenagers should do unsalaried jobs to see where they stand and they will be able see theri future in particular profession.Although,they will not be paid for that work but still teenagers will have good knowledge of every field.For example,minore can save some species of animals and birds by plantinf some trees in their neighbourhood that will be good point for community.In addition with,youth can do camping in different areas of cities to help people by providing some free food and clothes who are under poverty line.Teenagers will become more confident by exploring the world and will get opportunity to learn various cultures and languages. To conclude,it is true that everone should get wages for their service but every person has some duties towards their community that is beneficial for both minors and society.So volunteering should be necessary for youth's better future and sake of community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A certain number of people use social platform to stay connected to individuals, reports and events. I believe that the benefit of social networking outweighs the risk because it provides easy access to extensive information. However, it could also make individuals in the community less social. Firstly, one major demerit of social media could be less socialization amongst individuals in a society. People spend more time on their mobile devices, chatting with virtual friends and keeping tabs on their favourite celebrities. For example, my best friend who is a socialite attended a party in her neighbourhood. She noticed that people at the gathering, barely interacted with her or anyone else because they were so engrossed with their mobile phones. The party was so boring she had to leave after a few minutes. Consequently, the use of internet platforms has made socializing in the community almost non-existent. Secondly, I opine that the merit of internet platform could be providing easy access to information and instant connectivity to populace around the globe. A variety of social media applications such as Instagram, Facebook and WhatsApp are being used by individuals daily. Moreover, they use these social media platforms to relate to people, get updates of news reports and activities that occur worldwide. This has more benefits than drawbacks. For instance, when I use my Instagram account I can keep tabs on news, various popular occasions and also interact with my family living abroad. Thus, this has made global interaction and obtaining vast information effortless. In conclusion, I believe that the advantage of this technology by far outweigh the disadvantage because social networking makes it easy to stay connected to people as well as keeping up to date with reports and events worldwide.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A claim that I know about the author is that he know's what he's talking about like saying how Venus is the second planet from our solar system, they say Venus is Earths twin because Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. What I find interesting is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the surface of Venus the temperature averages over eight hundred degrees fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is ninety times greater than what we experience on our own planet. So if someone from here on Earth tries to go on Venus they would not make it because there is so much pressure up there and nothing to have on to protect you all that pressure will make your body explode, the same thing would happen if someone went really far down in the ocean they wouldn't last very long because your body isn't used to going that far which puts a lot of pressure on you, so if you have a scuba suit on it still won't help you, if you have a scuba tank it will put pressure on that to and make all the air flow out which means you wouldn't have enough time to get back up the the surface. One thing that I found facinating was they had computers in the 1940's during World War || they weren't that quick like the modern ones these days the ones they make now can run really quick, they can flip so they turn into a tablet, another thing they make now is you can buy a tablet and get a certain kind of keyboard that hooks on to the tablet so it turns it into a computer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A claim that evalulates the pursuit of studying Venus despite the dangers \"Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin\". also when he said \"Striveing to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value,not only because of the insight to be gained on its planet its self ,but also becuase human curiosity will likely lead us into many equall intimidating endeavors\". Hes knows this is a great risk but he still believes it could be done by a man and also thinks it would be worth it by acomplishing it. An explanation of the evidence is when the text says \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should nit be limted by dangers and doubts but shoukd be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". The text also says 'If our sister planet is so inhospitable ,why are sciencetists even discussing futher vists to its surface?\". The author really wants this vist to planet to go on along with alot of other sciencetists and he keeps convinceing us why this would be such a good idea and not only because the insight to be gained on its planet it self but also fir the human curiosity. There is alot for us humans to discover mabye some will be found hopefully some will be. There has been discoveries and invintions made that people never thought could possible and these things continue to happen as time passes by thats why believe in Venus trip I think with a little hard work this is totatally possible so theres no stopping the unbelieveable. Incredable remarks contine to happen each one sometimes better then the last some are not so I conclude that the future is abone us and so are bigger and better things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A classroom is possibly one of the most diverse places we can have in today's world. There are students with different ethnic backgrounds, different spoken languages, and different emotions. Regardless, all students gather to learn new material used to help them in the real world. However, certain material presents hardship with some students and ease with other. Being able to understand exactly how a student feels can make their learning significantly easier. Though some problems may occur, it can be invaluable to a student. The FACS technology can be utilized in the classroom in may ways with few downfalls. In the world like the one today, reliability and consistently are key. People today enjoy things that are useful and fun. The children of this generation especially want that. Before the children can age and make something with their lives, someone along the road has to teach them. Education is something that starts young and is so important and valued so heavily that without it you are looked at as irrelevant. States hire teachers and put trust in them that they are able to teach the children and provide a good base to go out and experience the real world. Teachers have so much weight bearing down on them. A teaching job is argueably one of the most mentally exhausting and frustrating. Some students do not care about grades while some graduate with a 3.8gpa. Imagine how different this world could be if everyone was able to graduate with a high gpa and go to college and proceed to make their lives meaningful. Thomas Huang, of Beckman Institue for Advanced Science at the University of Illonois was one such person. Along side Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam, Huang may have created one technology that can be the change. These scientists create the FACS, or Facial Action Coding System. The computer is used to read human facial motion and determine emotions. Prof. Huang even has gone on record to say that it can be beneficial in a classroom. This statement is true beyond a doubt. Students emotion's change from minute to minute. There are unlimited benfits with only a few cons. The main con is that the machine may take time to read a face and by the time it has been read, the emotion can change. Also, this technology can be expensive, especially for a school with hundreds or even thousands of students. Despite that, the machine can understand students that day. With a better understanding for the student, the lesson can be adjusted to make it more comprehensable. Since most classrooms are not this dynamic, every student moves on to doing the same thing at the same time. This technology can change up the questions so that an advanced student may move on faster than one who is struggling. Perhaps one of the most important things people need to be aware of in the education system is the student's emotion. Like stated previously, emotions change. So if the computers sees a student with health issues such as depression, it can aid the student in getting help. Parents, teachers, and other school administration need to be aware of the student more than the cost of things. Even with the cost the computer's benefits are easily overshadowing it. Teachers and students rely on technology so often and for so many reasons. Whether it be school work or just for entertainment, there is no harm to add a feature that reads emotion. The price should be looked at as just a number, and human emotion and feeling should out rank that in importance. The FACS computer is someting that schools need to be looking into for the care of their students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A classroom is very important for a child to grow up in. We need to have valuable thing to help the student grow and turn into adults with a good education. I hear from my teachers all the time there number one goal is to keep us safe. They also are there to edacate us so we are prepared for life. They should put this technology in the classrooms because iit could help them learn, it could help keep them safe, and it usefull technolgy. It could be used to learn because the teacher could use it to help with their lessons. If a teacher uses it she or he could see the that the student are into the leso and if not they could change it to make them happy and then they should be able to learn. The classes that are the most boring are the classes that my grade should be better in. I have have some english teacher that were so boring I hated it but the one that are fun and im happy in I have improved. In the classroom the teacher should make class fun, so the students are happy and showing good emotions. I know this cannot always be the way because teacher have to teach some things. The teachers could use to actualy teacher. It could be its own lesson. It could help the students learn about emotions and face muscles. \"In fact we humans perform this same impressive calculation everyday. For instance, you can probaly tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on there face\" (D'Alto). This could help the student enteract with other. All jobs you need to have good communcation skills. I learn so much about emotion by reading thi article. Have technology that can determire a students emotions can help keep them safe from themselves. Suscide is a terrible thing in teens. It is one of the leading causes of teen death in the United States. If we have this technology in the classroom the teachers would be able to tell if a student is depressed and could be thinking about commiting suscide. In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" we hear \"Eckman has classified six basic emotion- happiness, surpise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\" (D'Alto). Through see the sadness and fear we can get the student help and save his life. In the article it says \"According to the Facial feedback Theory of emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotion ,but also my even help produce them\" (D'Alto). The technology can help the student. By putting on a happy smile it works helping the student. The world these days have gone mostly using technology. The more technology the student use the more they are prepared for life.IN the article it says \"Hold on! Can we actually calculate emotion like math homework?\" (D'Alto). Using technology like this will grow the knowledge of the students technology. That why I think its important that we have chromebooks in class its making us learn how to use it. The more we learn about it in high school the more we can use it in the furture. Not all of us will have a job the is mainly using technology like coding or IT. Most jobs use technology in some way if it mainly technology or barely they all use it, and if you want to be successful out of school and be a indepent adult learning technology is important. In conclusion, We can improve the education for our student by adding technology like in the Article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.\" Technology is growing around so we need to grow with it improving our education system so everyone can grow. \" Whoever thought that making faced could reveal so much about science of emotion! (D'Alto).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A classroom isn't always everyone's first choice of being in when one is bored or confused. So, what if a student's emotion in a class can change just by a computer? It can change one's perspective on the class. Knowing the feelings and emotions of a student is valuable and can improve their learning ability. The better the environment for the student the better the ability of learning and staying on task. Being able to know a student's expression is an enhancement from automatically assuming how they are feeling just by their facial expression without analyzing it \"professionally\". In the article the author states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D' Alto). Just by analyzing someone's face, it can change the lesson for them in order to be more alert and attentive. For some it is difficult to change a lesson because not everyone works at the same rate. So being able to change the lesson can boost up their learninig comprehension, making it better for the student to get a higher grade in the class. Higher grades mean good college options, and good college options mean greater opportunities. The technology of detecting one's emotions can have a positive effect on the person, the impact it has on people can help out not just for classrooms but it can also help out for different types of environments. Being able to control how an environment works creates a better place for everyone. Instead of just assuming one's emotion, the computer can help to analyze them, allowing for them to adjust to their surroundings and enhance their understanding of what they're doing. Althought it might seem extraneous to use a computer for emotions, it can lead to great advantages for people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A classroom with the use of this technology would be a classroom of supieriority. This new techonology could greatly improve students´ abilities to learn. Often students are protrayed as being happy or content during a lesson, but really, they are confused. The FACS, Facial Action Cosing System, is an advanced piece technology that can help students with their school work and can be very valuable in the classroom. The FACS is a computer coding system that allows computers to be able to read the facial expressions of humans. According to the passage, the process in which the computer recognizes the feelings of a human begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of the face. Each and every muscle movement of the face can detect the exact emotions of any person. For example, the zygomatic major, a muscle that begins at the cheek bones, lift the corners of the mouth when someone is genuinly happy. The FACS system is incredible at calculating any person's emotions and can cause the computer to adapt to anyone's liking. It is not unusual for a student to \"fake\" their way through a lesson just to make it seem like they are \"okay\" when really they are misunderstanding everything that is being taught. According to the passage, this new techonology system is able to recognize the facial expressions of students as they work through an assignment on the computer. It interprets if the student is understanding the material or not. Through a slight frowny face or a confused face, the computer can tell that the student is not able to comprehend what is going on. In return, the computer program may change the lesson to make it slightly easier on the student until it detects a content face. This face will trigger the computer so that it is able to recognize that the student is now understanding the lesson. The program can act as an individual instructor for each student in order for the student to meet their needs. From this technology, the student will not only have an advantage, but the teacher will as well. Instead of individually tying to speak to kids if they need help, the computer can do it for them. Sometimes, it can get tough and frustrating for a teacher to try to meet the needs of each unique student. With the help of the technology, students can obtain their specific needs on their own. This will relieve a great deal of stress that teachers may carry on their shoulders, and would be very beneficial towards them. The FACS is a valuable piece of technology that can assist many in the classroom. Lessons will be adapted to meet the students needs when they are confused, becasue the facial recognition program will pick up on their moods. Also, teachers will no longer need to try to teach the lesson several different ways for each different student to understand it. This program greatly advances the students´ learning and acts as a helping hand for teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A coding system that can identify facial expressions of a person, how crazy. Prof. Thomas Huang of the University of Illinois and Prof. Nicu Sebe have created a coding system that can not only identify human emotions put on a painting. Using this technology in the classroom would be valuable to not only the student but the teachers the classroom. Using this coding system would be helpful to the students. For example, in paragraph six, it states, the system could tell if a student was getting confused or bored in class, then it could modify the lesson. Using this method could get students more involved in the lesson by making it easier to understand or making it more fun. Making it easier to understand could help the students learn the material faster and could possibly increase the students grade in the class. Making it more fun could get the students more involved in the lesson by asking questions about the lesson. This technology could also help the teachers. In paragraph six it states that the technology can modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. Using this system could help a teaher with their students because they cannot pick out the exact muscle movements of certain emotions the coding system can. For example, in paragraph three it states the operation and process of the sytem. First, it constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, then it observes the fourty four major muscles in the of the face of the model. When it is looking at the model it is looking for an action movent. An action movement is one or more muscles moving. Different combinations of the different muscles in the face create different emotions such as happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. How this would help the teacher is it could look at more faces faster than the teacher and it could pick out the slightest emotional change in a student. Then the system could modify the lesson to keep the students interested in it. Finally it would help the classroom. In paragraph nine it states that empathy or the feeling someone else's emotional state. may happen because we unconsiously imitate another person's emotions. This could effect the classroom. For example, if one student is sad their friends would try to comfort them and the might become sad too. Is a student begins to laugh they might cause other students to laugh. Having this coding system in a classroom could alert a teacher if a student is sad, so they can handle it so other students don't get upset. This could help keep the atmosphere of the classroom positive so learning can be done effeciantly. Using this technology in the classroom would be valuable. From modifing the leeson to make it easier for the students to understand and helping the teacher keep their students interested in the lesson to keeping the atmosphere of the classroom positve this coding system would be valuable in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A common situation has been widespreading for last decade like late birth of children. There could be several reasons affecting to it. An advantage of this is the conscious preaparation, although from the physical side it is considered as drawback. This essay will introduce with the two polar points and put forward several evidences. In most cases, an advantage of having the children not in the early stage is to be ready mentally. For example, a person before passing an exam preapares in advance, in order to gain as much as possible the best result. When the businessman would like to open a new deal, he learns beforeahead all tricks. Then, why before becoming a perent, a couple does not prepare? Upbrining of child will demand responsibility and knowledge if parents want to rise socially acceptable and emotionally stable individual. Unless mother and father worked out own weak points, the transmitions of goods to the child would be in vain. Consequently, it needs time and wisdom to cope with the situation. However, another thing that should be taken into consideration is physical state of women. A major difficult is that naturally there could be an enormous health risk. This is the main and the most dangerous threaten that can occur. For instance, woman might not be pregnant after the heavy birthing of child. According to the scientist`s researchs, there exist a common opinion that after thirty years female`s inside is reconstructed that poorly endures pressure. In conclusion, there is no appropriate time for youths birth, the core thing is it should be secure as for mother and baby. On the whole both physical and emotional states play equal role in upbrining. Additionaly, everything these have an own contribution to the quality of our generation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A commonly held belief is that music of the 21st century is harmful to children due to its lyrics and negative messages. However, there is an opposing argument which claims that music can have a positive influence over the new generation. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on both opinions and show why I approve modern music. To begin with, it is well-known that music has always had a powerful impact. Since ancient times it has been changing the way people think. Older people still consider present-day songs being detrimental for a child to listen to them. This is because composers and songwriters include too much violence and other inappropriate behaviours in their lyrics in the recent decade. For instance, nowadays rap genre is not what it used to be. It is full of swearing, violent language and most importantly - using narcotics. Consequently, some youngsters can be influenced by this genre which is harmful to them. On the other hand, we cannot neglect the significant", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A commonly known and disputed topic is the \"Face on Mars.\" You may believe that what is known as the \"Face\" is actually a formation created by aliens. Pictures from twenty-five years ago show the \"shadowy likeness\" of a human face. If you believe that the nearly two mile formation was staring back at the cameras was a face, the main reason this formation could not possibly be a formation of a face created by another life form on a different planet is because there is no scientific evidence of aliens to be discovered. The Face has recieved national recognition as being a representative for most pop icons, Hollywood films, books, magazines, and radio talk shows. But because the Face is a popular icon, the way the face is portrayed to have been created and used for has been taken out of context by audiences around the world. Spin-off series about the Face and aliens have promoted the idea that aliens are real, although there is no scientific evidence to be found. The media that used the Face has promoted audiences to believe that the Face is actually a formation made by aliens, as a way to keep their audiences interested and to make more incom by their audiences believing their predictions of aliens. As a result of the majority of people believing that the Face was an alien artifact, NASA decided to fly over the formation again to take a new picture using an updated camera that was ten times sharper than the camera used originally to take the first pictures, in order to investigate if he formation was really made and occupied by an alien life form. The new pictures concluded that what seemed to be an alien life form was actually just an actual landform. Yes, there may be different and unusual kinds of makrings on the land form because it is located on a different planet where there are different conditions occurring. What has now been proven to show that the Face is a natual landform is that the landform is the Martian equivalent of a buttle, which are landforms common around the American West. Whether you believe or don't believe that the landform on the Red Planet is made by aliens, there is more authentic evidence that is relevent to showing that the landform is just a natural occurrence, rather than evidence presented by science fiction enthusiasts. Although the formation may seem to have the appearance of a face, there are also many natural objects on Earth that have the appearances of faces too. So, making assumptions because of a conspiracist's predictions does not automatically make your assumption correct.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A completely agree to the fact that the government should encourage a certain percentage of high level jobs should be reserved for women. The reasons why I agree to this statement are as follows: First and foremost, if a certain percentage of jobs are secured for women in companies and other job places, it will encourage parents to consider teaching their female children so that those female children will benefit their parents after graduation because there will be available jobs for them in the future. This will also decrease early marriage and girl child drop out. Also, analysis have confirmed that the population of women are much more than that of men. Therefore, giving certain jobs to them will help to reduce social vices such as prostitution and unlawful job in the population of women. However, this policy will make females to be serious with their studies in order to achieve a better job in the future, they will study harder and make best use of the time they have to secure a better job in the future. Moreover, this will decrease the cost of dependant on men. As the woman will also contribute and take up other responsibilities from the man which will the equation of responsibility in a family very balance. In addition, some women has sharp mindset. Some of them become well orientated in their field of area and that help them to figure out great solution to critical problems and they also give crucial points to carry out in critical situations. The role they play becomes very vital especially when taking up action plans. It is believed that some women can run out high level job activities than men. In conclusion, I totally agree to the fact that certain percentage of jobs should be reserved for women as they are the building block of every family and a nation at large.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer as a teacher would make many young kid's dreams, but would it be a reasonable thing to do? I believe that reading emotional expressions of the student in a classroom is valuable. To support my claim, I will talk about the people who are behind the research, how the technology works, and what it could mean for the classroom. The people behind the Facial Action Coding System are a group of scientist who aim to better communicate computers and humans. The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" states, \"Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\" For the Facial Action Coding System project, Dr Huang teamed up with some colleges. This is stated in the first paragragh, and it says, \"The software is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institut for Advanced Science at the University o Illinois, woking in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam.\" These are the inveters of the Facial Action Coding System. Some importance about my claim being valuable in a classroom setting is how it works. The computer scans or face and conducts diffrent projects on a 3D model of your face. In paragraph 3, it states 2 evidences of the process. One from paragaph 3 is, \"The process begin when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscels.\" The other from paragraph 3 is, \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\" The process would be very safe in the sense that through time, it could be reduced to an instant, and cause a course to take diffrent action. Following how the coding works, the grander part is using it in a classroom. Some evidence that supports me from Dr Huang is whn he states, \"\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"Dr. Huang predicts, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\"This vision of his is a key factor in my claim of importance. He also goes on to support, \"\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional break communication, \"notes Dr. Huang. \"So computers need to understand that, too.\"\" This tells me that there is still things that are yet to be finished with the idea, but this can go from the classroom, to the world of buisness in an instant. To conclude, from the gathered information that was given to me by the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the evidence supports my claim of the importance of reading emotional expressions in the classroom. The specific topics of the article that helped me conclude this are the team pushing forward the project, the sceince behind the coding, and finally with the dream of the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer can tell the Mona Lisa painting is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. A computer is a complex machine with almost everything in it. A computer stores information like what sites you have been on, documents, and more. It also lets you get information in less than five seconds, but is this a good idea to use in classrooms with students? By looking at the reading \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" we can see how computers are helpful when it comes to students' expressions; the teachers can change the lesson up to make it more exciting on the spot. The software that can read people's emotions is the latest innovation from Professor Thomas Huang, who worked with Professor Nicu Sebe on this project. They are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an 'action unit.' Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" All of their research on human expressions went into this software. They noticed your frontalis pars lateralis muscle raises your eyebrows when you are surprised and your orbicularis oris tightens when you show anger. By using the software on the Mona Lisa painting, they predicted how she was feeling. She was more happy than angry according to the software, but by looking at the painting, a human can not tell if she is happy, angry,or sad. The computer can tell us how she is feeling by acknowledging her muscles in her face. This software can also tell us when a student is happy, confused or bored, and it will help the teacher adjust the lesson for the student. \"A classrom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confued or bored.' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". The technology can help a teacher and a student succeed together by telling each other how they are feeling even if they do not talk during class. Most students raise their hands to answers questions, but a student will not raise their hand to say \"I'm bored\". Some students do not want to tell the teacher they are confused either. Hence for the computer will automatically tell the teacher and they can explain the lesson better to the whole class because there are always multiple students who need extra help, but will not ask. There for, their software will make humans interact more by telling us how they are feeling. In conclusion, the software Professor Thomas Huang and Professor Nicu Sebe will help read students' emotional expressions. The software has information on how a humans' muscles move when they are happy, sad, angry, fearful, surprised, confused, etc. By using it on the Mona Lisa, we can see that the software works and it will also help find problems in it. Dr. Huang predicts that the software will also help the teacher know when a student is confused or bored. The teacher can then adjust their lesson to make the student more attentive. This will help the teacher succeed in their job more, the lesson more informational, and the student more productive in their school work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer is figuring out human emotions by just scanning facial expressions. People often do not express themselves enough, so others around them might not understand them. Celebrities often fake their emotions by appearing to smile like students in schools. The use of technology being able to read the emotional expressions in a classroom is valuable because it would improve understanding of the subject, can create a better mental state, and help students be more successful in the future. The understanding of a subject is important because of many reasons. People would be better at the subject which will improve their test scores. Technology that can read emotional expressions will also create a healthier mental state. People who are shy and confused by certain assignments will often stress about the assignments and not speak up about it. In order to help that, a machine who can detect these emotions can alert staff members to help this student without making them feel embarrassed which will lower mental stress. Emotion reading technology can also improve the future of the student. It can improve graduational rates because the students will receive excellent grades due to the machine helping their studies. More success in the future, improvement of mental state, and better understanding of a subject are reasons to why the use of emotion reading technology should be used in a classroom. Students like celebrities would fake their emotions frequently. Many do not express themselves enough to let others help them at all. Techology is advancing so fast that a computer could read facial expressions to figure out how people are feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer now adays can calculate when you are bored, happy, etc. Scientiest have made a program that can calculate all of the 44 major muscles in your face that make your emotions visible. Prof. Thomas huang, of the Buckingham Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, colaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleage are evperts at developing better ways fr humans and computer in communicate. This process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer ,odel of the face and all 44 major muscles in the madel must move like human muscles. If one or m,ore of the muscles are moving at once then Dr. Huanf calls this \"action unit\". Dr. Huang then relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, createer of the FACS ( Faial Action Coding System). Dr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness then he associates them with characteristic movement of the facial muscloes. For example your muscles above your eyes raise your eyebrows when your surprised and the muscles around your mouth tense up when you are angry. Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci (srtist of Mona Lisa) studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His hew computer software stores similiar anatomical information as elctronic code.For example if you are on your computer and an ad pops up another ad similiar to that will pop up, and vise versa to that if an ad pops up and you don't like it then a differnt ad will pop up instead, and all of this is read through your webcam. If you are doing your work on your computer and you are bored or confused it will indicate this and make something able to make it more clear or make if more fun so you can ocus better. This same techonolgy can make computer animated faces more exsprecive for video games or vidoe surgery. In conclusion I think that this is a good idea becasue people that have adhd become distracted very easy and with a tool that help them become more consentrated to their work would be helpful to them and to their teachers teaching.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer shouldn't be able to tell peoples emotions. Having emotions is a very personal thing between you and only you or if you choose to share them with others. Thats what makes people so real and relatable to. A computer shouldn't be able to determine somes emtions or be creditiable enough to do that because its not a human a lot of malfuctions can happen. Your taking the realness out of the human and puting it into a computer. Them wanting to use computers to show peoples emotions might make people feel very vulnrable. \"Even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" (like not smiling as broadly). Which is saying that they are calculating our different facial expressions. Also they shouldn't use math to calculate people feelings what if they calculate wrong? How do they know our emotions can even be calculated with numbers? We aren't calculators that you can just punch in numbers to figure us out. That will be very hard no one should feel like there feelings are being told off to everyone. Its no ones business espicially a computers job to be telling your emotions that what makes you a human being. Not everyone wants to be like da Vinci painting Mona Lisa. Some people just want to be themselves. Without having to put their feelings on display. That should be there choice not some computer, doctors, or scientist choice.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer software called the Facial Action Coding System has the ability to read facial expressions. One of the professors, Dr. Huang, predicts that this software could potentially be used in classrooms. He says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored,\" The software could also fit to various learning styles. Using technology to read students' emotional expressions would be a beneficial addition for classroom setting. The software would be able to detect emotions quicker than the teacher or fellow classmates can. The Facial Action Coding System is made by two professors who are experts in recognizing human emotions. Dr. Huang states \"Most human communication is nonverbal...\" The software is created to understand human emotions. With that said, the computer would be able to quickly target emotions and find an effective way to deal with it so it fits the student. For example, if a student became distracted, the software could pop a picture on the screen to grab the student's attention. The program can provide assisted learning. Because the program can detect emotions, it can recognize if a person fully understands a subject or a problem. The learning style would eventually be recognized and the student's interests could be put to use. The system could try many learning styles, or one could be simply selected. A person with a learning disability could obtain the help they need. The software has many other potential uses for a classroom setting. It could have settings for people who have disabilities. It could assist the school guidance counselor with issues a person could be dealing with. It could help a teacher recognize if a student is lying about losing his or her homework. It can even potentially help people understand each other better. It could possibly even have a reward system for the students and make them feel satisfied with themselves. FACS could even possibly help take the stress off future tests. Adding the Facial Action Coding System to classrooms would be a wonderful addition for everyone. The ability to detect emotions accurately is not available to everyone. But the Facial Action Coding System could help peers connect with it. The ideas are endless with this software! It's brimming with potential, much like every student in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer software that could tell how you were feeling just by looking at you. Could this be good for the classroom? Or perhaps could it pave the way for future students with new ways to learn? What are it's benifits? What are it's flaws? Could this new software be worse for us than it is good? Is this new software good or bad? Prof. Thomas Haung is the creator of this software. So far they say your home mac can't run this software but it could someday. Like all inventions theres got to be fails or bumps in the road. My question is what were they and how long did it take to make this software? I could definately see the the benifits of this being used in the classroom. Not only for the benifit or the student but the teacher as well. For example if the student has had a bad night at home. If the software works right it could tell. They said that it could identifly over forty four diffrent muscle postition depending on the exspression. Then at that point it could notify the teacher and then he or she could help or get help from a guidance councler. But not only that if the student is confused on what he or she is learning the teacher would know instantly and could help. This would elimante the shy students who hate being noticed and have trouble learning the subject. This could also pave the road for new ways to learn. So if the student does not like the subject or gets borded very easly like it said in the article it could switch the way it was treaching the student. With this it could also regrab the students attention letting he or she fully learn the lesson so they could fully understand it. If the software worked right it could do so much good for the students grades and help them perphare for the future. The benifits of the software could not only mean the better well being for students and teachers alike. But it could also help us interrogate prisioners by seeing there emotions towards things when you ask them a question. It could possibly replace the lie detector test or be combined with it to make it even better. The flaws could be major or they could be small. For example if the program uses a camrea it could very well lead to people hacking the system and finding there next traget. Or if its used in a prison and they hack it they could find out everything a prisoner knows and said during the interrogation. Or it could be used to get personal information from a councler and there patient or a doctor and there patient. Could this software be worse of us than it is good? It very well could be but it also has so many benifits to level the playing field. If it can be hacked its going to be but they can place secerity measure to counter this. I see no reason this could be worse than good. But there is always a possalbilty it could be. Is this new software good or bad? This new software can see fortyfour diffrent muscle in the face and read them like a book. But it could be hacked and used against us. Or be used to get personal information from us. It also got so many good use that it levels thoughs out making it sound as if it were for the better. Like useing it to help kids learn things better in class or to help them emotionally. So my arguement is that it should be used. Like it said in the article it can help students learn better or to draw there attention back to the subject. But it could also help teachers read there students emotions and be able to tell if there happy or sad or what there feeling and be able to change that. Or the ads for example say we don't like that ad or it offends us the software could tell and it could make it to were it no longer played that ad and kept it out of the playlist. Or even better your listening to music and you dont like the song it could tell and not play it anymore. But if you liked that song it could make a playlist for you or add to one. To not use this would be a mistake because of the benifts it has for us in our everyday lives even if it has its flaws. the good outways the bad in this situation. There are so many uses that even the bad that could happen from using this software are slim to none. With kids who have a higher learning means we can excel faster in advancement in medical and science. Prisoners on death row that are innocent could now be spared instead of living someone elses fate. So the good outways the bad in this situation and should be used with full intent to help us for the good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer that reads our emotional expressions?? That sounds awesome! I could see that helping in many ways, but then again not everything is one hundred percent perfect. I believe that using the technology to ready emotional expressions would helpful to students in all types of situations. For example, say a student is not happy at home or how things are going for them, using the technology could hellp the teacher or couselor understand the student ad try to help him or her in any way possible. Sometimes maybe a student just migt not understand something and they'd be confused on a subject. A teacher could use the technology to see wether or not students understand and help them out more with whatever help they need. Some students may not feel comfrotable with talking to other about their problems it could possibly only make things worse. Overall, I believe this kind of technology would be more helpful in many ways. Sure they'll be some negtives that come with it but its nothing anyone can't handle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A contentious debate surrounds whether the qualities of leadership are innate or achieved. While some argue that people are naturally born as leaders, others contend that these skills can be learned later in life. I strongly believe that the skills for being leadership are inborn, and can be trained over time. To begin with, people claim that leadership is not something that can be achieved. To expand the idea, while considering leaders as people who exert a great influence on people, their powerful presence can not be developed. Being articulate, and having oratory skills, which are supported by several scientists that they are inborn, to influence people through words is essential for being a leader. Furthermore, it is unavoidable that some people are born with a charismatic personality, which is a requirement for leadership. To cite an example, Mozart was a well-known composer in the world, and he composed music at the age of five. This exemplifies that inborn abilities are on a factual basis. Regarding the view of the opposite side, there are many affirmations by people who advocate that everyone can be a leader for the rest of their time. What is more, the more effort we put in, the more we practise skills, the better we become. While taking life experience as a significant factor into account, assertiveness to stand up for what you believe in and having confidence can be learned through practice and training. For instance, Bill Gates was a computer scientist 30 years ago, but if we look at the current situation, he is a renowned leader and owner of Microsoft, which emphasises the possibility of learning anything through time. I firmly opine that skills that are related to leadership can be achieved by people as success results from determination and hard work in any field. To conclude, although many believe that people are born with desperate character, the importance of industriousness and practices can not be disregarded. Consequently, I am on the side of people who believe in the power of learning without respite.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A controversial discussion point is whether enrolling in a university or getting a job immediately after graduating from high school is the best way to a successful career. While the author believes that studying at a university or college is better, some people have the opposite point of view. It should be acknowledged that to pursue a prospective career path, an enduring level of knowledge is immensely important. By enrolling in a college, students can obtain even professional skills and knowledge relating to their dream job. Thus, stand a greater chance of landing a well-paid occupation. For example, a study in the USA in 2000 revealed that more than 60% of employees have at least studied in an academy. However, some people hold the opposite view which is the better way to have a successful career is to enter the workforce immediately after high school. First, this help students enrich life experiences as well as occupational skills and also, taking a job early enables students to be more mature and independent in their life. Secondly, since pupils have a chance to interact with the public, they are capable of expanding their relationships with people around them. This will be a great thing as they can rely on these relationships to achieve higher positions in their workplace. It is the opinion of the author that having employment right after high school can bring some benefits, notwithstanding, to achieve a higher position, a great level of knowledge is immensely necessary. Because higher standing requires a better in-depth understanding of the occupation ,especially researchers and analysts. This can be obtained through lessons, courses and experiments in university or college. In conclusion, without studying in an academy, it is hard to obtain prospective employment only by entering the workforce. I believe that this point of view should be considered carefully and the essay has provided sufficient reasons for this statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A controversial issue in todays world relates to promoting the health of citizens. Some argue that we must prevent illnesses by investing in people's health while others argue that we can treat them. In my opinion, preventing is by far a better option than curing. The government should spend money on providing easy and affordable gyms. A place in every company or appartment where individuals are forced or pushed into doing an exercise. Having physical activity can help people with many pains or diseases. Additionally, if eveyone schedules a well-maintained work out program for themselves or with the help of trainers it will help with not having to struggle with many illnesses specially in a young age. Furthermore, the government should take away the tax on healthy foods and increase the tax on unhealthy foods. Currently, unhealthy foods which will cause many illnesses such as diabites and cancer are much cheaper than healthy foods like greens and grains. Moreover, the public money should also be spent on advertisments, free classess and application that will help families to gain knowledge on how to live a better and healthier lifestyle along with at home group excercises and meal plans that every one can enjoy. As a conclusion, while illnesses and diseases will always be inevitable helping ourselves to maintain a healthier life is always a better opition than having to cure. I completely agree with the argument that governemnt fundings should be used to prevent illness and promote the overall public health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A controversial opinion that is floating around these days says that in the not too distant future, all jobs will be taken over by artificially intelligent robots. While it is possible that all repetitive tasks will be done by robots, it is unlikely that they will be capable of tasks that require creativity. This essay will discuss briefly why ultimately only a few jobs will be done by people. Firstly, robots will replace humans quite extensively in cases of operations that are cyclical, because it is easier to create computer programmes that replicate and churn out copies of those actions. For instance, a receptionist's job of answering calls, connecting them, making appointments are all quite repetitive. Writing a programme for such a profile and building it into the circuit of a robot will mean that a company will no longer need a receptionist. Every such work that can be reduced to actions that follow the same cycle of input, process and output can be automated and make a human redundant. On the other hand, professions that require individuals to become creative in handling the different challenges they are faced with at every point of input, which will result in a variety of different actions, cannot be replicated by a machine. For example, a teacher teaching a class of thirty students will need to understand their individual needs and tailor her methods so that all of them can understand the content, as well as perform at a satisfactory level at least. As it is difficult to predict and automate teacher-student responses which are out of the ordinary any use of intelligent machines to replace teacher-student interaction will be an impossibility. In conclusion, although some people expect artificial intelligence to replace all work areas done by humans in the future, there will always be activities that require a variety of responses to some stimuli. Such areas of work cannot be turned into algorithms to generate artificial intelligence programmes. Consequently, only a few jobs will be available for human beings to execute.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A couple days ago I cheer lot drama going around team fifteen days befor compition everybody yelling someone There much yelling talking back coaches one could understand supposed The side I pom cutine second formation wasnt diagnal line supposed wasnt getting kickline time people side pushing us walk lot farther coaches daughters yelling side Im getting kickline time even though shes pushing us father cant get started yelling saying falt said LOCATION stop blaming everyone else everything arnt perfect everything ether ones pushing us cant get kickline time didnt know say said CAPS isnt true even though could tell knew true next time kickline didnt move closer center moved farther got spot really time couple seconds supposed I thought loyal even though might one best friends still friends best friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A couple months ago hanging freind It came spend first extreamly bored went walk go find something doWe found friend dylan skatepark stopped talk After hung two hours headed back houseWhen opened door sister started freaking left got stucked younger brother nt yell back nt want drama Her sister got even mad jesssika showing reaction sister By ten minutes exploded started throwing around freaking Me looked stated laughing really reallyhard funny sister looked mom calmed sistuation I made bed bedroom floor falling asleep bothbursted laughter funnest long time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A couple years ago I middle school I meet one bestfriend I great times When I first meet math class assigned seat next We started talking eventhough didnt know well could say laughter closest distance We would laugh really random things happened didnt really know talk Sometimes wouldnt make sence laughing But laughed way eventhough didnt understand others jokesLaughing something keped distance close Time went became good friends Laughing one thing keped us cose together nothing better We people like laugh lot get bored If humor first meet I nt think would got along well end We didnt really anything didnt know good We would hang lunch class together laugh thought funny really dumb We nothing better A couple months latter seemed become really close friends laughter We knew much better finally things talk found something common Laughter still something friendship much begining first meet During math time always talking laughing things would say That never happened But able talk things things made us laugh new laughter isnt thing keeping us colse together Now ways get along We friends could get along differenlty I friends really close distance would laugh lot With friends I didnt really laugh much close friendship My friends I get along different ways laughter We differents ways get along fun Some really calm like laugh lot like Mostly type like laughing time closer way I think laughing could shortest distance two people There things keep two people close together Laughing help people good time together I nt think big big part friendship I think get along somethings common It also depends get along treat Everybody different way keeps close friend I think s different everybody", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A crash happens. What is it? It is a driverless car. These cars are not a very good idea at all. I am sure many people can agree with me on this. The cars sound like a good idea in some ways, but there are more ways that they sound like an accident just waiting to happen. If the car will drive itself, that means that it has a mind of itself. Things that have a mind of theirself can be a very bad thing. Human drivers have been driving for over seventy-five years and have always been safe for most of the time. Many people are very good drivers and drive their car on their own. I do not think that driverless cars should ever happen. It is just a bunch of accidents waiting to happen and a bunch of money waiting to be wasted. How do we, the people, know that that car will not malfunction and run us off of the road and hurt our kids or our family? We do not want that to happen to us. I think that it will be very hard to prove these cars are safe and reliable. A lot of people have fun driving their own car and would much rather drive than sit back and watch the road from the passenger seat. The car company's who are making these cars will also probably ask an outragious amount of money for these cars. If they do ask a ton of money for these cars, not many Americans will buy their vehicle. Most Americans do not have the money to afford a super expensive car that may end up killing them. Many people may ask the companys how they know that their car will not malfunction. The companys will probably not know that because anything can malfunction at any time. What happens when the cars computer crashes and the car runs off the road? What happens when someone hacks into your cars computer and tries to run your car into something and tries to get you killed? These cars are all just bad ideas and bad things just waiting to happen. I think that if these cars do become a major production in the United States, people will start to rely on the car way to much which could also cause many, many wrecks. Also, the roads in towns and cities are always chinging and are always under construction. These cars will not be able to keep up with all of the changing of every single road in the world. The car is said to have a whole lot of sensors in the car so that the car could always read where you are and what the car needs to do. What happens when those sensors go bad? Also how often do you have to replace those sensors and how much are they to replace? These cars are not a very smart or safe thing to buy. They are just an accident waiting to happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A crazy idea none the other Facial Action Coding Systems are being tested. This opens up so many posibilities for up and coming ideas and inventions to be created and used to beter humand lives. The classroom has always been a contraversial thing. For some students it works perfect to be in a room with all there peers studng the same thing, but others can get nerous by the masses of people around them and find it hard to study and focus. Dr. Huang Claims \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored and modify the lesson to better fit the student.\" Great we have now turned the next generation of kids into shadows that do not talk to anyone but there own computer. Do not get me wrong I fully understand being intemidated by your peers and the people around you, but let's behonest nothing will ever be able to beat the human judgement or the intellecual need to actually talk and interact with someone else face to face. Look at people who get trapped on and island for example, they are cut off from society, ar alone, and lose all human interaction. When they are finally found and rescued to actually fit into there old normal lives it is increditably hard for them because they aren't accustom to it anymore. It's been proven kids that are more sociable in high school do better in the work force once they become adults. Is that not what school is all about training The next generationg to help make the world a better place. Overall I am againist the Facial Action Coding System. People need people no computer will beat an exprenced teacher in the classroom, no computer could motivate a kid who is falling behind like a actually living teacher could. You will never get some real life expirence if you never interact with people therefore I will alway stick with getting up and going to school. Aswell as learning to detect emotions by myself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A curious child goes library first time find story read Yet goes children s section book wants allowed library becuase said promote certain ideals children The child goes older sister help find different book The older sister busy looking book She walked library looking find answers questions liberal topic She ca nt find book wants library censored Why would censor librairies freedom press freedom speech It right censor libraries becuase restricitng allowed read taking away part freedom The press allowed print anything people read Will next thing censored A book like newspaper relaying story entertain auidence reading By censoring libraires taking away freedom speech Writing way express Authors share expressions writing hoping touch someone else s life assistance Whether book helps reader escape horrendus day answer questions curious teenager I use books daily escape stresses life CAPS series gave something allowed use imagination mind I could escape another world leave chores behind Some say offensive things censored In culture slightest thing called offensive If never learn offensive things would understand history There always rude things said exposed learn By censoring items never learn neither children cultures history liberal ideas Instead censoring items another solution Make certain items restricted red flagged If certain items become restricted would mean people certain age allowed read By child s mind would polluted could still exposed different ideas learn If system red flag item would allow reader know item contains could considered offensive material expose selves want others could This would work becuase books could stay library still used would warning system want around allow children around In conclusion censoring libraries bad idea It takes away freedom press speechWe also making ignorant way If put warning system fair everyone The offensive matterial stay libaries people know ahead time exposed children", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A current topic of debate is whether robots with artificial intelligence should perform all jobs in the future. Technology has evolved, with industry being one of the biggest beneficiaries, automating many of its processes with artificially intelligent robots. However, we must consider both the benefits and potential drawbacks of this new scenario. On the benefits side, integrating artificial intelligence into the industry using robotics as a workforce would increase productivity and improve efficiency. For example, if robotics was implemented in production lines with repetitive tasks, it would allow the human worker to enhance other more competitive and complex work areas. New employment opportunities would be created in new industries according to the needs of society, and routine and repetitive jobs would be delegated to artificial intelligence. However, this technological idealism has its drawbacks. Attributing certain jobs to robotics would generate unemployment and economic inequality. Even if other new jobs were created, many workers would not have the capacity to adapt to new job skills. Ignorance of a future job generates resistance, so it is essential to find a balance between the implementation of technological innovations in industry and their consequences in today's society. In conclusion, the idealism of a future replacement of human workers by artificially intelligent robots is a delicate and complex issue. While the potential benefits to industry in improving efficiency and productivity and creating a new concept of employment are undeniable, society is not ready for it until new job opportunities are created by upgrading the skills of the replaced workers. The key to success is to strike a balance between technological advances and social responsibility.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A current topic of debate is whether robots with artificial intelligence will replace human workers in the future. The rapid evolution of technology has benefited large industries by automating many of their processes with intelligent robots. However, we must consider the benefits and potential drawbacks of this new scenario. The great benefit of integrating artificial intelligence into industry would be using robotics as a workforce, increasing productivity, and improving efficiency. For example, if robotics were implemented in production lines with repetitive and precise tasks, it would allow the human worker to enhance other more competitive and complex work areas. Unlike the classics, new employment opportunities should be created in this new industrial concept, adapting them to the needs of society and delegating routine activities to artificial intelligence. However, this technological idealism has its drawbacks. Attributing specific jobs to robotics would generate unemployment and economic inequality. Even if other new jobs were created, many workers would not have the capacity to adapt to the new job skills. Ignorance of a future job generates opposition to progress, so it is essential to find a balance between the implementation of technological innovations in industry and their consequences in today's society. In conclusion, the idealism of a future replacement of human workers by artificially intelligent robots is a delicate and complex issue. Although the future benefits to industry in improving efficiency and productivity and creating a new concept of employment are undeniable, society is not ready for this until new opportunities are created by enhancing the skills of the replaced workers. The key to success lies in balancing technological advances and social responsibility.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A cursory glance at the academic systems all over the world show that education has been accompanied by competition. So it is pivotal to prepare children for this occurrence. Attending in sports contest may strengthen student&#39;s skills, while others believe that the downside effects will outweigh positive aspects. I totally concur with the latter statement, though, both points of view will be discussed in this essay. Turning to primary attitude, as we live in a competitive universe, compatibility with this circumstance is so vital especially during educational stages. Therefore, participating in sport matches may cause marked improvement. For instance, in many countries like Iran, student should struggle with a rough and competitive university entrance exam considered as a determinant element of their destiny. If they can test themselves in such sport games, it will provoke positive accomplishment like raising their performance and perseverance, acquiring capability of time-management, improving cognitive skills, drawing up a scrupulous schedule, finding long-term solutions and preparing room for considerable improvement. On the other hand, the demerits of being in competitive situations like sport games is undeniable and from my perspective may overtake the merits. It is blatantly obvious that stress and tension may be considered as a negative ramification. Due to this fact that everyone tends to attain the utmost rank and go up the advancement ladder, hence, the student&#39;s characteristics will be shifted to being sensitive and perfectionist. Subsequently, teenager may encounter with serious physical and mental disease in the near future. To conclude, I utterly oppose the competitive educational systems. Student should have a comfortable environment full of tranquility to study away from any destructive and stressor factors like competition.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]