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Polluted environment is an ongoing dilemma in the modern world these days and it is conspicuous to see that increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Tackling this issue is challenging, especially given the speed of social change and the pressure of modern life. Therefore, this essay will explicate some key reasons why environment is polluted and will suggest a range of possible measures that can be taken to improve/change the situation and highlight probable knock-on effects of polluted environment. A wide range of reasons can be put forward to elaborate why the environmental pollution caused by produce consumer goods. Perhaps, one can definitely assert that lot of companies did not treat the drainage properly. The industrial waste of a monosodium glutamate factory called Ajinomoto can be taken as an example. To demonstrate, because the modern drainage was not installed by this company, and they threw all the industrial waste into the water causing water pollution in this area. Thus, it is no surprise to see that there is rise in producing consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Improvements to polluted environment can be achieved in a variety of ways, strict management of dischargement is one of the most favourable and note-worthy choice. To elaborate, government should be controlled strictly and only allow which company to have environmental protection standards so they never can throw their trash which are harmful to the environment into the atmosphere. This can improve the situation by controlling the amount of industrial waste to environment and encouraging recycle waste. Thus, while there can be other steps to be taken, this can be considered to be a good start towards declining the damage to the natural environment caused by manufacturing consumer goods.
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Your evaluation score is: 2.0
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