You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.
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In this day and age, it is widely accepted that people change their minds more and more to be important personal life rather than work. It is true that office workers who are not married can complain because this is not profitable for them. However, I firmly believe that the workplace should have some policies in which parents can take care of their children officially, although all fathers do not need time off from the office. To begin with, the main reason is that children are an important value for our society, although parents have only responsibilities in law. To be a healthy society, kids have to learn essential factors such as cultures, manners, and histories. This is the example that if a single parents divorce, it could be a very hard time for working and taking care of their child. As a result, their children could be alone and not learn the necessary education, which would cause another problem in the future. Secondly, there is another reason that single parents cannot focus on their work without solving taking care of children. It triggers decreasing work efficiency. For instance, certain single parents frequently worry for their children in the workplace where there is no policy for them. I believe that people cannot focus on work while worrying about the child. In conclusion, all fathers should have eligibility for time off from the working place, although someone does not need it. For these reasons, it is clear that children are an important value and solving taking care of children helps work efficiently. Therefore, our society should make effort to create policies for fathers, although someone complains about this circumstance.
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Your evaluation score is: 4.0
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