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The author of the article "The challenge of Exploring Venus" provides a fascinating perspective on studying the planet Venus despite dangers and doubts it could present. Supporting the claim that Venus is a worthy pursuit for humans even with the dangers and numerous factors it has, is diffucult to persuade. However, The author of this passage has supported his idea throughly with factual evidence. Firstly, in paragraph 5 the author begins his agrument on the worthy pursuit of studying Venus. the author supports his idea by provided a reliable source (NASA). the author begins his argument strongly with supported his claim with the idea of NASA. this idea can be found in paragraph 5 which says " (NASA) has on particularly complelling idea for sending humans to study Venus... would allow scientists to float above the fray." the author procedes to provide an example to the reader by illustrating a jet airplane and how "a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfrriendly ground conditions." The author also considers a counter-argument of how the temperature would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit but, gives a valid answer by saying "the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth." An important statement to note is that the living conditions will not as they are on earth, but "survivable for humans." Continueing with the Author's idea leads to Paragraph 7. Once more, the author supports his/her claim that venus is worth exploring with a similar idea from NASA. The author outlines the claim that studing Venus would require scientists to "get up close and personal despite the risk." This risk is Venus's ground conditions. This is a diffuclt task to complete, but he introduces his idea in paragraph 6 which says, " maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many respearchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus." This leads to is factual evdience in paragraph 7 where the author lists NASA as one of the researchers that are working on innovations. the author furthermore provides an example of elctronics that have been tested in similar conditions of those in Venus's surface. Arguments contrasting the authors idea of exploring and researching the planet Venus are considered by the author. This approach not only strengthens his argument but, reveals that he has though out his idea thorughly. In paragraph 2, it reads " Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study..". A perfect transition to paragraph 3 were the author lists potential challenges or obstacles for exploring Venus. the passage reads in paragraph 3, " even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenhiet, and the atmospheric prssure is 90 times greater than what we expierence on our own planet." The author considers these challenges by illustrating an example, " such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans..." other deadly conditions such as errupting volcanoes and powerful earthqaukes are mentioned in the same paragraph. The reason for devoting an entire paragrah to an agrument against his/her's is to answer to common question of why scientists are so intrigued to visiting the panets surface if the planet is "inhospitable" as well as creating an introduction to his/her arguement; The options for making a safe and scienfically productive mission." Supporting a rather unlogical idea on studying Venus is not easy, but the author has done just that. supporting his claims credited sources as well as considering obstacles and difficulties the scientists would face in Venus. Human curoisity and limiting our exploration of the universe should be pushed to the edge.
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Your evaluation score is: 5.0
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