You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.
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It is argued that lucky is the key to some people’s success. As achievement is only attributed by hard work and determination, I completely disagree with this opinion. If success was free, everyone would have it. In fact, there are few successful individuals because each of them is determined and industrious. The harder people work on their dream, the more confident they become. Those who lack self-esteem also lack determination and end up losing hope and giving up, as a result they are the failure. For instance, Thomas Edison, one of the greatest inventors in the 20th century, conducted thousands of failed experiments with the filament until the finest light bulb was produced. His success is made by his hard work, rather than luck. Another clear case of success through determination is Nguyen Ngoc Ky, a disabled man. He could not write by hand; however, with his determination and hard word, he is able to write by his foot and became a successful teacher. By contrast, luck does not play a role on one’s achievements. Luck is just a state of mind, so if people are dependent on luck they could never be successful. For instance, a student who does not study for an exam, might fail. Moreover, it is clear that a person who wins a lottery, might soon lose all of his or her money as it does not require anything to achieve. In conclusion, for all reasons I have mentioned above, I believe that to become a successful person at the end of the day, people must be hardworking and determined to work on their dream , rather than rely on luck
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Your evaluation score is: 4.0
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