Aeisha @ Tamaki Primary School: stardome - planetarium.
secondly in the planetarium there were loads of comfortable chairs. Also you can lay back on them like your in a dark globe! in the planetarium you can see 3d robot movies, constellation, compass points, planet at night including the southern cross.
WALT: repeat writing an explanation. focus on sentence control. continue to use a comma for punctuation.
CHALLENGE: This time I added: simile was to repeat this. explanation.