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This is not a terribly serious thing, I wrote it at work a few weeks ago and needed to post.
Welp, I've finally found it. The best piece of human media ever created or to be created. I thought I had it with Gyakuten Kenji 2, but it was outdone fairly quickly. It is time to return to my home planet. Farewell SCP, I might return someday.
This isn't clearly written as a third person omniscient narrative or an in-universe document, and seems to haphazardly switch back and forth in those modes. It is also switches between present and past tense.
Apparently in-universe, but the rest of that paragraph is written in a casual narrative style despite this.
D-9985 groans directly into his radio, producing a harsh noise.
3rd person omniscient and present tense.
Dr Seidelman replied from back at base camp, from the old storage room across from the utility closet designated Area H-2-5.
3rd person omniscient past tense.
Now we are back to an in-universe epistolary mode?
a basic field lab in a storage room across from the utility closet containing Area H-2-5.
This is completely redundant (and nearly word-for-word) with the previous sentence.
The safety tether – designed not for his safety, but the safety of the transmission – in plain view on the video feed, dangling over the railing across from him.
There's no verb in this sentence.
Legitimately going to adjust these when it's not 2 am. Thank you!