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Graduating high school early can be a beneficial decision for some students, as it can open up more opportunities to gain experiences and explore alternative career paths.Students can use the extra time to take classes or participate in activities that help them achieve their career goals. It can place additional stress and workload on students who are taking on classes before they are fully prepared, and the transition to college without the full scope of a high school education can cause difficulty in adapting to the new environment. Additionally, completing high school early will allow students to take on a heavier workload as they transition to college or other postsecondary education earlier.
However, graduating high school early does come with its own set of risks. Additionally, students may miss out on certain activities or experiences that could help them in the long run.
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Students should not be able to graduate early. Some students already get stressed by the amount of work they get in regular classes. Which gives them less time to do their work and study.. They might also have a job they have to get to save money for their college supplies like textbooks. They also won't have as much homework and classwork to do at a time.
The students will have more career choices to choose from. For example there is a nursing class, carpentry class, electricity class, welding class, and many more that can help them get started. They can get stressed by all the homework and classwork they get from all their classes. The classes will be easier because they will be learning at their grade level, not a grade level above. If they have more time they will be able to have electives that can help them choose their career. Students might be stressed out too much. They can take more classes than those who would graduate early. The fourth year of high school gives them more time to learn. If students stay in school the extra year they have more opportunities. If they can't take electives then they won't have experiences that may help them.
Lots of work on a students can cause them to be stressed out. It also gives them more time to explore different careers they might want to do. Imagine all the stress they get when they are taking more classes at a time. It is better to take your time then to rush your career.
Students who go the last year of high school have more time to learn more
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I'm so grateful to have a support system I can turn to in times of need, and the advice I've been given will continue to be a driving force in my life for years to come.. I try to remind myself of this during the toughest of times, and it always brings me back to a place of appreciation.
My sister has perhaps the most meaningful advice of all: to always be true to myself. I've seen the power of this advice in my own life time and again; whenever I've faced a challenge I've never hesitated to keep going.
My dad's wisdom lies in showing me the value of gratitude. Growing up surrounded by expectations, it was often hard to decipher what exactly was true to me. He taught me to always be grateful, even when life doesn't seem to be going my way. My parents and my sister have been giving me advice since I was a young child, and the lessons they shared with me have served me well throughout my life.
My mom has always told me to never give up, no matter what situation I face. But my sister's words of wisdom are something I cling to, and I remind myself of them whenever I find myself struggling with making the right decision.
The wisdom of my family has been with me since I was young, and shapes my outlook on life even today.
One of the greatest gifts life has given me is the wisdom of my family. She taught me that hard work and perseverance will always pay off, and to never be discouraged by failure
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My dad helps me understand all of the tips and tricks through sports when I can't get anything right he's there to teach me some ways to move past that.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my sister. My mom shares wisdom with me all the time like for instance when i'm feeling down my mom would tell me when people been through worst to make me fell like what i'm going through isn't as bad.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my dad. Ways my sister shares her wisdom with me is by teaching me about teenage life and how to be a better person each minute. A lot of people shared wisdom with me but the most important people who shared wisdom with me are, my mom, dad, and sister.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my mom. Ways my dad shard wisdom with my is through sports. She helps me when I need help or when i'm curious about how to be more lady like.
In the end when people share wisdom with you it can come in handy when your ever lost stuck or just need advice just remember when people shared there wisdom with you and what they said.
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As a result, a student with a C average should at least have extra help and should be allowed to partake in activities with the agreement of the student, parents and teachers.
With the agreement of the student, parents and teachers, these activities may include extra tutoring, field trips, and group projects. In fact, some students with a C average can achieve great success if given the opportunity. Extra tutoring can also show the student new subject materials or help them bolster their understanding of a certain topic. For these students, extra help and a chance to take part in activities can be especially beneficial.
Although a C average may not seem like an impressive academic achievement, it does not necessarily reflect the potential of the student. These activities can be an enlightening and empowering journey that can help the student reach their academic goals.. For example, a field trip can open new doors of knowledge, while a group project can help the student learn how to collaborate effectively. These types of activities can help these students learn the necessary skills they need to succeed in school
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Dear principal,
You are changing school policy so student that have a C average can not participate in sports or other activities unless the students have at least a B average .I think that students that have a C average should at least have an extra class that they need help in so they can pull up their grades up so the students can participate in sports or activities. the students that don't recognized that what their doing is wrong and they don't get privileges like other students do.
sincerely, STUDENT_NAME
1-27-11. If the teachers of the student think that they are working hard to bring their grades up at least the principal should give the students 30 minutes of free time on the activities or sports they want to participate in.
The school should make a contract saying that students that have a C average cant participate in sports or activities. The parents ,teacher ,principal ,and the student should sign the contract .The students that don't even try to work hard to get a B average should stay an hour after school to catch up the work they have been missing
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It also encourages positive self-reflection, with students becoming more self-aware and mindful of the work that has been put in. On the one hand, praising students for their effort can boost their self-confidence and encourage them to persist in the face of disappointment. .
Praising students when their work has not yet reached its full potential has both positive and negative implications. It can also lead to unrealistic expectations about performance, creating a false sense of confidence which will inevitably be crushed in the face of more significant challenges. On the other hand, praise which is given too freely can result in students forming the belief that hollow compliments will be rewarded, instead of hard work.
Overall, it is clear that praising students for their efforts, even when their work has not reached its full potential, is a delicate balance. It can also serve as a way of rewarding a student for engagement with the task, regardless of outcome. Rather than expecting students to always achieve an "A" grade, recognizing worthy effort helps to foster a growth mindset, enabling students to realize that mistakes and failures are part of the learning process. Used constructively, it can motivate and reward, but overused it can create excessive expectations and detract from meaningful learning.
When used in moderation, however, praising students for effort can be beneficial
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In that case if the students feels good their work will be better. Giving students praise always makes students feel good. Therefore, the work being produced was very productive.
Praising a student builds their self esteem by making them feel good about the work that has been done. Which means if they feel very good and proud of the work thats been done the work that will be produce will be very creative and outstanding.
Praising students who produce deficient work encourages them to produce better the next time work is been given to them. Praising students who fail always has a different outcome the second time they do the task been giving.
Giving the students praise always comes out to be better than what they were expecting;for example,a student who was doing bad before you praised them realized what the purpose of the work was and put all their effort into the work. Therefore,the student knows that someone is always there to encourage them when needed.
In conclusion,praising students always tend to make them do better. . Students believe in praising them builds their self esttem,even when the work is not at its full potential. But others say giveb praise for deficient work undermines the learning by lowering standards
Although student get to proud and tend to over do the work, giving the student praise always comes out to be better than what they actually expected to achieve
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With practical wisdom and life experience, these mentors can help advise through difficult decisions—from the small but significant ones in teenage life such as career choices, to the bigger life decisions such as sorting out relationships and financial management.
Finally, as children become adults, having someone with experience to act as a sounding board to discuss career opportunities, sports, social situations, and relationships, can be key to making wise choices. Throughout our lives, as we experience the highs and lows of life, wisdom and experience from those who have gone before us can be invaluable.
The world is a complex place and, oftentimes, there is no better guide through life than a loving parent or guardian. A parent or guardian who is wise and experienced can help a young adult tap into their strengths and teach them how to find and develop wisdom.
To sum up, wisdom and experience from a parent or guardian can be invaluable. While a young person might be more independent, those with parents or guardians to help guide them on their journey will have a much greater chance of success and fulfillment in life.. For this reason, it is important to obtain wisdom and experience from a parent or guardian.
For the younger generation, the guidance of a parent or guardian can help them make wise decisions, especially during times of adversity
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It just helps me to stay more focus in my work by just hearing from someone Like my Dad. Learning from someone like my Dad.
Hearing wisdom from my Dad will definitely make me a better and smarter person. It makes me want to try harder than other people and be better than them. Because my Dad would push me to work as hard to be the best.
Learning new things from someone that has an experience like my Dad can help me have more better ideas about what I'm doing . It will also make me work and study harder so I can get to where his telling me to. And it's really important for me for him to shared that. But I think by just hearing from someone that has an experienced before will definitely help you to be better person. And not only I could be like my Dad one day I could probably be a better person and smarter person than him. It also helps me create new ways how to do stuff. And it gives me an open mind about new ideas that I didn't even know about. Everyone is not perfect in this world and everyone definitely needs helps on something it doesn't have to a big thing it can be a very small things. . Because it will make me motivated to think like him and be like him . Because by just hearing from them will teach you new ways new ideas and even stuff you didn't even know existed. And will also gives me better techniques and more ideas. So in the future I can try to change and try different things from what I have learned from my Dad.
It's also really important for my Dad to give me his wisdom, Because I can't imagine doing stuff without someone helping me on things that I don't even know about. My Dad is someone who has shared wisdom and experience with me. Because helps me get better at things ,it teaches me new things that I didn't even know about, and also helps me grow smarter and as a better person. And lastly it will make me think smarter and push my self to be the best I could be.
So I think it's kinda obvious that every person or even smart people needs help sometimes from someone thats has an experienced before
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Athletics is an essential part of holistic education, and too often we forget to think of it as such.
For these reasons, it is highly unfair to limit access to sports based on grade requirements. It is our job as educators to ensure that all students have equal opportunity to participate.. This is an unfair practice, for several reasons.
First, it sets up a false dichotomy between academics and athletics, an artificial separation that should not exist. Unfortunately, access to these activities is often limited when students are required to achieve a certain grade in order to participate. The flip side of this coin is that students who already excel in academics are given extra incentive to keep up their performance, while students who struggle are left behind.
Finally, and most importantly, sports activities help young people develop lifelong skills and friendships. Students should be encouraged to excel in both areas.
Sports activities are an essential part of physical and mental development in young people. Sports, in particular, can foster resilience and provide a constructive outlet for frustration or disappointment with academic performance.
Second, using grades to limit athletics unfairly disadvantages those students who are already at a disadvantage. These experiences should not be denied to students based on one area of performance
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Because people. All the people with A, or B can play because the C is the baldest grade on the school. Dear TEACHER_NAME,
I WRITE THIS LETTER TO SAID THAT IS NOT FAIR THAT Only the people that have good grades can play in one of the sport
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With the advent of the internet, access to vast amounts of information is now literally at our fingertips. The internet has made it easier than ever before to access information from across the globe, allowing students and researchers to broaden their understanding and learn from the collective knowledge of our species.
Last but not least, technology has a major impact on our economy.
In conclusion, technology has had innumerable positive effects on humanity. Automation has allowed businesses to increase their productivity and efficiency in an incredibly cost-effective manner, and the use of technology has had a major impact on how we conduct business on a global scale. From the development of modern medicine, to providing an easier means of communication and transportation, technology has significantly changed our lifestyle for the better. For example, the use of automated machines for patient diagnostics, and surgical robots, has allowed for a more precise and detailed diagnosis compared to older traditional methods. With the use of technology, businesses no longer have to rely solely on manual labor for their operations. It has improved our lifestyle, supported knowledge, and had a major impact on our economy.
One major example of this is in the healthcare industry; the advancements of technology have allowed medical professionals to deliver treatments with a greater level of accuracy, speed and efficiency than ever before.
Technology has profoundly impacted humanity in positive ways throughout the years. We can only imagine what the future holds in store for us with advancements in technology.. This, in turn, not only saves critical time and resources but also provides a better standard of care for patients worldwide.
Not only does technology improve our lifestyle, but it also supports knowledge and education
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My position about technology is this brings many effect positive for us huminity life. For example, many years ago we had to go the store and we watched the stuffed we need. For example on market every people want to down the price of production, the new technology helps on this.
In conclution, technology shows to good change on human's life,
in the economy, in the konwlege and many areas technology helps.. we can bay only.
Second reason, tecnology gives support to the knowledge with the creation of new tools and more precision.
For example, before we used the telescopes for treated to understand the universo, now the technology us helps with the creation of new satellite .
Thrid reason, that support the tnechnology have good effects in our economy. now with the new technology, we do not need to move. I take this opinion for the chaning on our life and the support positive in the knowledge.
First reason, for saying the the tecnology have good effects on the human's life is it helps to do many activity fast and easy
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We conducted extensive research, developed experiments with different chemicals, and repeated each of the experiments multiple times to ensure accuracy and consistency in our results.
We set out together as a group to explore the ways the natural phenomena of wind, the solar system, and the moon affect us. Through this process we showed our collective understanding and ability to work effectively and collaboratively as a group.. With the knowledge we gained from our research and experiments, we created our project and presented it to our peers
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This is one of the most enjoyable educational things to do.
Doing a science project gives knowledge specially if is about nature. A science project is also fun because you get to work with chemicals and see the reaction of each chemical. Working on a project with friends is always gonna be fun specially on a science one because you have to repeat the project three times to make sure it gives the same result every time and its super educational to do.
The chemicals you use during a project could be dangers but at the same time they could be fun to use. This is one of the most enjoyable educational stuff you can do and its fun.
This is an enjoyable thing to do you have so much fun doing a project,and Helping out friends by giving them ideas for the project working as a team to make it perfect and learning. Also getting help form your friends is better everyone gets to give ideas and help with the fun project. . For me this is the most fun thing to do when i have a project, and theres so many more activities but a science project is enjoyable to do and is also the most fun thing to do. The most fun part of a project is that you get to repeat things more then once in order to get the correct results is the most fun thing during a project testing out stuff. Also working as a team with you'r friends is helpful because you get to hear different parts,and it would help you learn more about the project you are doing.
Working as a team to see the different points of view of everyone is fun,and it helps for the project. This type of projects give you a lot of knowledge, and this projects give you an idea on how nature works is easy to do and is fun. Learning is boring but the science projects make learning more fun and it gives ideas for future projects. This is an educational fun project because you get to see how the reaction of different chemicals. This is fun because you get to help friends out, and do experiments with chemicals. If the project is about nature the things you'r gonna learn are fun and easy for example what causes wind,solar system,and how does the moon help us this projects are gonna make you learn about how earth works. Presenting the the project would make you nervous if your by your self if you did it in a group its gonna be fun and also more easy. One educational activity I like to do is doing a science project is the most fun thing to do with your friends
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Failure and setbacks are part of life, and how we respond to them can often determine our final success. Her story highlights how no amount of failure should ever hold someone back from their dreams.
These examples show that failure can actually be a key driver towards success. The most successful people in the world have likely faced numerous failures throughout their lives, but their willingness to take risks and never give up has ultimately enabled them to lead happy and successful lives. His refusal to accept failure and continued perseverance eventually led to his success.
Another inspiring example is that of Marie Curie, who won two Nobel Prizes despite facing significant gender-based obstacles. She overcame numerous failures throughout her life, and ultimately achieved tremendous success due to her persistence and unwavering determination. History is full of examples of people who have had to overcome failure and struggle in order to achieve their goals.
No one has ever achieved success without making some mistakes along the way. It's important to keep in mind that failure is never an excuse for giving up — but instead, it should be seen as an opportunity to learn, grow, and ultimately, reach success.. Take the example of Mahatma Gandhi: Though he had faced numerous setbacks throughout his lifetime, he never gave up and eventually achieved India's independence from Britain in 1947. It can provide invaluable lessons and the opportunity to learn from our mistakes
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So he gives me a schedual on what i should be doing to get fit. A good example would be the book persude of happynes. Failing tests you on how pationant you are at what you are doing and are you willing to fail again and again to be succesful. By failing people are learning on how not to make the same mistakes again. I played for the best clubs, i was named the best player in the team, and i have never been cut from a team. failure is the key to your success.. One day my coche tells me that there is a professional soccer try out next week and he want me to get ready. Failure playes a huge part of becoming successful. I did all of those things somedays i did not want to train and just start eating unhealthy but i fought through it. But nobody would buy it. at the end of the day they gathered every body up and called all the people that made it. we started out with warm ups and went to drills. I was not one of them. The person that bought it told some people on how good the machen was and they started to buy it to. Everyday i have to eat right and train hard. I have failed to become a pro soccer player. He became successful because he did not give up on his dream even though he was geting regected every time he tryed to sell it. Finaly after his ups and downs somenoe bought his muchean. Still nobody was willing to buy it off of him. I can eather stop playing soccer and choes a diffrent routh or i can pick my head im and try again. So he was homeless for a cuple of weeks. i was like the best player at the fiald. He was also a dad with one kid and lived in a motal. In this book the main person makes a muchen and he wants to sell in. For example lets say that i was trying to become a professional soccer. he got kicked out of the motal because he was not able to pay his bills. Even though he was homeless that did not stop him from trying to sell his machean. I was amazing. Try out day comes and i was ready as i will ever be. Now this is the part where enthisiasm playes a role
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They discussed the different parks and eventually arrived at a decision through a vote. Who was going to bring the camera? Who was going to take the photos? They assigned tasks and made sure to be mindful of the time, planning activities to do once they got to the park.
It was time for Generic_Name, Generic_Name, Generic_Name, Generic_Name, and Generic_Name to decide which park to visit. Once the decision was finalized, they immediately started to figure out the details. Excited for the adventure ahead, the five friends set out on their journey.
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A week later Generic_Name waking up up early and telling them to eat breakfast and get. Soon turn to sad because he comepletly forgot his camera because he was in a rush getting ready. On the way home Generic_Name started getting a bit excited because in a week everyone gonna. Way tho Generic_Name was telling everyone "Guys next week finally time for the nation park"
Four days later everyone went to go buy 2 cameras because. As he is finally done he ran saying "are we all ready" with joy everyone shouted "YES". Generic_Name just a bit mad but also trying to have a good time. Who have a bit of trouble deciding where to visit. To eat and take breaks,"alright so eat or start walking" said Generic_Name. Everyone want to go in a diffrent direction but they only had one camera so. To go to a park,Generic_Name and Generic_Name wanted to go. Generic_Name said "well i guess its time to eat then lets play a quick game of ball then we go home. She replied "gotta be out their when ur friends need help". so he went to everyone rooms to go wake them up but they were. Few hours later park announced "the park is closed please exit have a good night" not noticing the time. Everyone felt bad,Generic_Name came up to him and said "dont work remember Generic_Name always has the extra". Three days later Generic_Name waking up late but he thought he was early. Generic_Name and Generic_Name were not Generic_Name said "why not the national park its huge and beautiful". Then have a good time at all. We'll go to the most voted park first to the least since. Community park wasen't really that far its about 20 minutes over there.
When they arrived wasent really alot activites like the state park but was a good place for a walk and another spot. Gone in shock he ran to the living room to see everyone saying "good moring sleepy head". One day the 5 good friends or known as Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name were planning. Generic_Name then was conviced at the state park but. Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name all ran to the car then headed home. Generic_Name quickly went to get his clothes ran to his closet to change and get ready. Then they drove of to the final park of their month and "hopefully" said Generic_Name last one of the year.
When they arrived Generic_Name with almost anything thats a positive feeling. Instead played for thirty minutes they all went back. At a community park but Generic_Name and Generic_Name suggested a state park. After some talking and arguments everyone decided. During the walk they came back to the spot where they can eat. As ten minutes go by they forget about the time and. Ready to go, 2 hours later everyone all ready for the. State park had the most votes that was their first destination.
When they arrived mostly everyone was happy except Generic_Name. Once again they had to vote where to go.. Welcome to the story about 5 good firends. They hugged as they entered they were amazed to see how huge and beautiful this place is. Have to go to the park she voted for the community park. Everyone said walk first to see whats around and maybe play ball at a good spot. Generic_Name didn't really care where we went he just want to hurry this up so we all can soon go to the national park. If they loose 1 they Generic_Name will be holding the other one. Generic_Name said to Generic_Name "Thank you i nearly ruied our whole trip". To the car and on their way home on the. They finished then decided to play a quick ten minutes of ball. Generic_Name will be holding the extra was expensive but they had to go with it
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In the end, I was accepted to my dream school and graduated with honors.
For example, in high school, I applied to college and was rejected. Each failure has provided me with the tools and experiences necessary to better persevere and face the next challenge. Most of my successes have been a result of my ability to keep pushing forward despite my many failures and lack of enthusiasm. Instead, I applied to more schools, studied harder, and took on more extracurricular activities. Although it wasn't what I wanted at the time, the experience taught me that failure is not the end of the world.
As someone who has experienced failure on numerous occasions, I must say I agree with Winston Churchill's statement that success consists of going from failure to failure with loss of enthusiasm.
All of this is to say that failure is an integral part of life and if accepted and embraced can be turned into success. I learned the importance of adapting to changing circumstances and developing a positive attitude in order to achieve my goals, which is why I agree with Winston Churchill’s statement that success consists of going from failure to failure with loss of enthusiasm.. Throughout my life, I have learned that every time I have faced a difficult challenge or failed at something, I have become a stronger and more resilient person
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like when I came America with zero English that was the biggest straggle in my counsel. Nothing can make me stay a way from what make me successful.
And the end, as human our enthusiasm can make us stronger then failure. As human we can learn anyn things that we thought that is hard to learn it. But that never stop me from what I want to do. I could not focus with what I was doing like school and work and other thing because of people around me. Former British Prime Mrimister Winston Churchill once said that ''success consists of going failure to failure loss of enthusiasm. They were making fun of me when I spook English. So way where was applying for jobs the company require have whether Spinsh or English so I can not speak any of other, for tow year I was just home, job no money to help my family back home because of language
But I did not stop after two years fund a job so I was dishwasher, it was too tough to communicate with my Mangers and employees too. ''she said be yourself and if you are important to yourself that will makes it different''. That word change my life to think positive. "Do you agree with of Churchil's statment about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success ? Take a position on this question. All my families were worry about me. From experince , I'm saying yes that the failure makes my life better. No back round of school like knowledge or education because I never been in the school in my childhood so that made it for me so difficult to understand what the teachers were saying. So another attack of failure in my way, I did not no how to study because there was no one to help me what should I do in that time so fall at school. We have to look what other people did in the life because of enthusiasm. there were a lot of pressure no me . And one day I asked one of my friend what you did to be successful in your life. Now I'm a superior in the pace I work for it. So over and over I fall of everything. I did not let the language or anythings else to stop me back from what would me my life best.
School and Study .
Second , as student that was the hardest than that I though . Because I do not what let other people make decision of what should I do or not.
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Third was to wake to believe of myself and to make nay decision. . I could not eat well for two years and I got sick. As emyplee , student and self developing.
Emyplee.
First, as emyplee it was not easy to find job because of English language. Use reasons and specific examples to support your ideas.
Yes I agree.
The Failure in My life.
The failure in the life is just the first step of counsel to success. Because of what other people were saying about me like that impossible that you can go further than that you are now which is can not get high school diploma there were a lot of failure in my life .From failure to a big surprise that I making this year, I will be my graduation form high school and the nest will be collage
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This could be in fields such as entrepreneurship, coding, web development, project management, analytics, or consulting.
Completing high school earlier than the traditional age of 18 or 19 can offer many benefits, both professionally and personally. The early completion of high school will also open up the doors to more personal opportunities. For those who opt to complete their secondary education at a younger age, they will have access to an array of longer professional fields to explore, and potentially even establish themselves within sooner than their peers. Being young allows the individual more freedom to explore and do more in life. Additionally, younger adults are physically stronger and more resilient, allowing them to take on more physically-demanding jobs.. As a young adult, there are many opportunities for travel, volunteer work, internships, apprenticeships, or even higher education to pursue
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Although some students will don't want graduate early because they are not ready to being a university life or alone life, nevertheless for others students is a good choice being her life or overtake her life, for example they have more opportunities for study a long profession like Doctor, students will have more time to doing think they like as to travel, and if they want can make a family.
Students make a complied because they want to study a long profession and they don't have some many time to doing all thing they want. So many adolescences think in money since so young , they need money, money for buy some material thing like a car, an apartment, so many clothes so expensive. The students said normally the people finish high school between the 17 or 18 and they know are young, but some time they need a break before to enter the college and if one student want to study a long profession he or she don't have so many time to take a break and study a profession like a doctor than is during like
5 or 6 years. Additionally in the future may be they need another break after the finish college I opportunity the young people like travel too much and know others countries, they own country, they want watch new things, they know different s people, different language, different accent or pass free time with her family, friend, or play any sports. Maybe if they finish high school when they have 16 have more time to graduate the college early and doing so many thing they like to do.
Another students want finish early high school to do others things so different like make a family and find a good job they like so much. This significant than student need more time to doing one thing fun before to enter the college. This is important because although they have time when they graduate at 18 or 19. So many students need to finish the school more early than others, it's a good think the student finish high school in three years, they have more opportunities for study wherever they like. . This is important because the adolescences think finish most early high school is like they said " if I graduate the high school a the 16 then a began to work like than i will have 21 i have all the thing I need for begin an alone life, then will want to married get a big family.
In conclusion, the this a good program of some schools than students can graduate in three years, sometime students need more time in her life for doing thing they like an the opportunities for choice a some long profession and have time to do thing they like or job for a better life
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My own personal experience helps me understand this statement, especially in my teenage years. With the stress of school and navigating social relationships, I found myself trying to fit into what everyone else expected of me. . By making decisions that reflected my own individualistic preferences, I gained a sense of peace and self-confidence.
Ultimately, it is important to stay true to oneself in spite of the world around them. But I quickly learned that nothing was worth compromising my own individual values and desires for. Knowing who we are and standing up for our individualistic values will allow us to achieve the greatest possible amount of personal satisfaction. While it can be difficult, it is essential if we want to enjoy a meaningful, fulfilling journey through life.
Ralph Waldo Emerson once famously said, “To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.” This statement epitomizes the importance of individuality in life, as it lays out the struggles of being oneself in a world full of people trying to conform you to their expectations
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It was not easy but I did it.
I remenber some days that I had to walk for hours to be in some place close the border, and also some days that i didn't eat nothing because I didn't have food, and in some ocassions I feel that I can't no more, but on my mind I had a objective and a dream. Keep dreaming and get foccus on your objectives.
Don't be afraid in a world that is constantly trying to ,ake you something else, just be you and don't worry be happy, enjoy the little big things that the world give it to you like friends and family, enjoy with people that you love, and always be thankful with everyhing, if doesn't matter if it is good or bad, everything happen for a reason.. You change the world, and you have to be sure what you want and what you do not want, you have to be yourself, you can be different, the different it is not bad, because sometimes "Be like others is do not be no one".
For those reasons is why you have to be yourself, you have to follow your dreams and you have to fight for them, don't let the people throw you, and if you felt, you have to get up and keep fighting for your dreams. My objective and my dream were stay in this country and to provide help to my family.
But in my mind I am keeping have some objectives and dreams, and one of my objectives is makes to my parents proud of me and one of another objective for me is be a example to my brothers, I wanna give it to them the best of the world.
My brothers and my parents are the reason why I work hard everyday, and I try to do the best on school, I try to be a really good students but sometimes it is hard for me, because the languages are different, so I try everyday to learn English, so everything can be easier and that can help me a lot.
You always have to be yourself because a more than a person goes to like you, so just be you and don't let the world change you. Remenber if you felt 99 times, you have to get up 100 times, and never let that people and the world convert you in something that you don't want it, in something that you don't love it, in something that you don't wish or something that you don't enjoy.
Also in my life some people tried to change myself, but I always try the way to carry on and keep fighting for my drams, and one of my dreams was traveled to this country, and some people told me that I can not do it, even some people told me that I will die on the long way from El Salvador to United States.
That was a long and a hard way, a diifficult trajectory, but I did my objective. I am agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because in this world you have to be yourself and if doesn't mater how you are, you have to be yourself even if the world is against, because the world doesn't change you. It was not easy, because sometimes I had to sleep in the desert or in some mountains, so the polices can not found me.
Also sometimes I had to move the one place to another placer and some pelaple and me did it acrros the cars, but we had to hide on the trunk of the cars, and I remenber we was like 12 persons on a trunk car
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As a result, attending a physical school allows for fostering long-term relationships that can benefit a student’s learning experience.
On the other hand, attending a physical school offers the ability to interact with a group of peers and the instructor in a way that is not possible in an online environment. You don’t need to physically be in the same place as your instructor to get help or to learn. One major positive of taking online classes is that you can attend them from anywhere in the world. Additionally, attending a physical school allows for in-person help so you can get direct feedback from teachers if you are having difficulty understanding something. In this environment, you have the opportunity to build close relationships with teachers and classmates by having face-to-face conversations, growing together through discussions, and participating in interesting activities. Additionally, with online classes, you have the ability to reach out for help at any time and you can pause or rewind lessons if needed.
Online classes offer many advantages to taking traditional classes in a physical school building.
Though each option has its own advantages, it's important to take these factors into consideration when deciding between taking online classes or attending a physical school.. Taking an online class also leaves you with more time to focus on other activities that may not be related to study
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If students get this opportunity to take their classes online, ''I'' think it will be a good idea and they will benefit from being able to attend classes from home, Because Many students can't be at for many reasons,they can be sick or injured. In some cases the student can have family ''(kids and wife)'' and online classes can help the student to spread more time with his/her family.
In conclusion,
schools offering distance leaning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. And it can prevent people from getting sick too.
Online classes are easier because, students can take the class at anytime they want and do what every they want do after the class. Two, online classes help to students to take class at anytime they want . . And they can take the class after work or before work on online. So the student getting the opportunity for taking or getting his/her work done on online classes will make it easier for the student, instead of students going to school when they're sick or Injured. The students can do whatever they want to after taking the class on online ( spreading time with family and having fun).
THE END....... Also online classes makes it easier for students who have jobs and the same time going/attending school.
Moreover, online classes can save students some money and time. This opportunity will help students in so many ways. For example Students get a job and make some money to pay for school fees and bills and also they can support their family with the money. Students can save that money for gas and do something else with, for example they can pay bills with that money or even they can support they're family with money. Because driving to school everyday is a waste of gas, money and time. So a sick student can stay at home and get his/her work done so they wouldn't be to spread the sickness or the disease around the school. Some schools offer distance leaning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Three, online classes save students more time and money.
Many students can't be at school for many reasons, for example the student can be sick or injured. Students will get more time to get they're work done on time and also save money for them self. Generic_Name
ONLINE CLASSES ARE BETTER THAN GOIING TO SCHOOL.
Talking online classes are way easier and better then attending/going to school
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While there is a risk associated with failure, it is important for people to understand that they can find a way to turn failure into success. In addition, it can require significant effort, and there is no guarantee that success will be achieved. One way to do this is to stay motivated and focus on the positive aspects of the situation.
In conclusion, for those people who are looking to find a path from failure to success, it is important to stay motivated and take risks. People should focus on the growth that is achieved by learning from their mistakes and discovering creative solutions to the challenges they face.
Failure is a common occurrence and one that everyone must learn to accept.
However, there are certain drawbacks associated with this process. For example, failure can be emotionally taxing, and the journey from failure to success can be long and difficult. By maintaining a positive mindset and being willing to learn from mistakes, individuals can overcome failure and achieve the success they strive for.
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Here is another example, my Math and History have good grades, but my English and Science don't have good grades, so not everyone is gonna have good grades, people have strengths and weaknesses, they just got to study and work because not everyone is perfect.
In addition, some others may say that going from failure to success is a waste of time. For example, my friends told someone that playing basketball is not a good sport for him, but overtime he has gotten better at basketball. They also say that they have to work hard to pay for their house, their bills, health insurance, car insurance, and even for their family. Not everyone is gonna succeed in life, we all make mistakes. . Going from failure to success in life is not easy, but they just got to have the potential to reach that goal.
First, some people may tell others that going from failure to success is a good thing. Also, it is a good idea if they study and learn the materials they could accomplish. People just got to try harder even if it takes years to achieve. The people in the world that say that it is a waste of time are the people that can be homeless or the people that just have no life at all.
Lastly, the reason why that everyone should always go from failure to success is because it's gonna make people feel good about there selves. Things aren't gonna be easy, people just got to understand that it is life, we just got to work harder.
On the other hand, most people in the world experience this. Even in school, it is very unlikely to find someone that is not having a hard time with there classes. There is not one person in the world that didn't have any issues throughout their whole life. Most people in the world are gonna say "practice makes perfect." Another example is that my sister wanted to go to UVA, and she studied hard to get into that college, my family thought they wouldn't accept it, but a few weeks later, they accepted her in UVA. What Minister Churchill is trying to say is that going from failure to success is not gonna be easy in life. What could they do to reach their career and have success? People will agree with this statement. Failure is not the end of the world, people just got to find what is best for them. People think that there is a lot of information in school, college, and even a job that they have to go through just to have success in life. Even if people don't succeed in life it is fine because they still have a chance, all they got to do is to study hard and work hard for it because in the future they will not regret it. Another reason why you should be successful is if people finish everything they need for their career, then they don't have to deal with it in the future than having to deal with it later. Others say that it won't help their career in the future. Everyone was not smart when they were born, people got to work for it to get smarter
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Examples of successful people who committed to a career at a young age can be seen in individuals such as Mark Zuckerberg, who at the age of 19 founded the social networking site, Facebook. While committing to a career at a young age can have a positive impact, it is important to understand that not everyone is suited for committing to a career at such a young age. Further, there are examples of those who have decided to slow down their career pursuits and wait until later in life, achieving success in a different manner.
Ultimately, commitment to a career and deciding to follow a certain path is an individual choice and should be based on trust in one's own abilities. Trust in the process and in yourself can lead to career success, regardless of when you decide to commit to your chosen profession. Those who commit to a career at a young age tend to have opportunities to gain experience and are able to focus more clearly on their career goals. Ultimately, it is important to understand that making a decisions on when to commit to a career is personal and should be made with thoughtful consideration and research..
In recent years, more and more young people are choosing to commit to a career at a very young age
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Students should have to commit career at a young age bacuse they can trust what their are doing. Studrents can reach their goals.
Students who commit to a career at a young age always doing better things in them life, and when students get a old age he or her always know what they have to do because they trust their work when they was young.
Ex: Generic_Name said, when she was a young, she was trust her things and it was always teaching her many thing and shows her what to do and how to be, and many people was care about her, they was not doing them things without her, when they want to do their things, they was waiting her because she was help them and teaching their, and she get an achievement in her life, and reach her goal.
Students having to commit to a career at a young age to get an achiever in future, they doing what their trust, and they always doing what they know because they believe that whatever they trust puting them in a good way to reach them goals.
Ex: Generic_Name said,When she was young, to commit to a career was the best thing that put her in the best way, and believe her thing, when she belive her things, always she was in a good way and it always protect her life, and many people get to respect her, because there are people who was not having an respect to her, and it's shows her what kind of something she have to do that can give her the way to reach her goal.
Coulcaim:Many people said, Students should not having to commit to a career at a young age because it's not important in their life,it cannot help them anything at all.
Therefore: to commit to a career can teaching students nothing in their life, they cannot trust or believe them work or what they are doing.
Coclusion: To commit to a career in life makes students to understand many things, and if students trust them things they can get good safe in their life, they can teach others and protect their life, and students having to trust them things in lives, students cannot lives without trust what they are doing and reach their goals.
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Improved academic performance could also lead to increased self-confidence in students, which could be beneficial in other aspects of their lives. On the other hand, the implementation of an afterschool homework club could be a strain on resources and staff, leading to increased pressure on teachers and additional stress for parents who may be finding difficulty managing their already tight schedule. On the one hand, the motivation that comes with the dedication to completing homework in a supportive academic environment could significantly improve student grades and attendance.
After careful consideration of the potential benefits and risks, it is clear that implementing an afterschool homework club could have far-reaching consequences for students, teachers, and parents. It is essential to carefully weigh all the pros and cons before making any decisions.
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and some parntants don't have the money to pay for a teacher, so if we can work togather to make a club that helps out students that would be great for the students, and the parntents would not have to pay alot of money to make they child good at school.
a other example would be that students can stay afterschool with there teachers, but for a little bit of time, so if were going to have a homework club lets make it more than 47 minumies. More time equlas a lot of work getting compled.
in conclusion we need a homework club it can help out a lot of students and save a lot of pernts money, and also make stundents pass more tests and help tham on schoolwork, and make students feel like difficult work is easy since they got all the help they need from the afterschool club, also if some teachers don't feel like staying for another they could just let the students help each other and let the teacher rest.
overall I think this idea is very good, and well help out a lot of students with there work. . I argree with haveing a afterschool homework club, because It well help out alot of students improve in school, and do better overall.
also don't you want extral help when you need it? students are the same they want help on schoolwork and homework cause it could be difficult.
students don't really like difficult homework, so they give up and do something else, but with a homework club they can go afterschool and do the work there teachers can help students out.
for example I sometimes need help, so I have a teacher that helps me at home with my work and my parntents has to pay that teacher
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By committing to a career at a young age, students can ensure that they get the most out of their education and embark on the career path they have chosen with confidence.. On the other hand, students who don't want to commit to choosing a career at a young age may find themselves with a disadvantage later on; without having the time to find out what career they would ideally like, they may find themselves accepting jobs they don't want out of desperation. For one, those who are younger often have the capacity to learn faster, meaning that they can get ahead with their career preparations sooner.
Committing to a career at a young age has many advantages. The mental and knowledge preparation that is a part of committing to a career at a young age is also one of its benefits, as they will have the time to explore different career options and become properly informed of what the job will entail
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If you compare this jobs with like a being a doctor, dentists, or technician; this jobs requires you to have a college degree, and you have to go to college for either 2,3,4 or 5 years so you can get the degree of any of this careers, and they pay you a lot and it is not heavy and you don't expose yourself to hot or cold temperatures, and that is a benefit for you if you want to have a really sotf or calm job.
Basically if you know what career you want to take, and you prepare yourself like taking all your classes, and what you need, you should be good for the most part. For example, you can be a singer, and if your music is loved by most of the people you can success and make money out of it by selling albums or promoting your songs to different platform in internet. For example, when you know what career you want to take since the beginning of high school and you are focus on that career, and you take the classes that will help you be prepare for that career, when you go to college you have an idea, and you are not going to be as stress as other students who didn't want to take advantage of that.
I would personally take the chance so I can be prepared for college, I think if I take classes that will help me be prepared it would obviously be good for me. Playing sports like soccer, basketball, tennis, or baseball can give you a chance to make money, for example, you can have a career out of that, but you most good for big teams to pick you up and pay you which payment is a lot if you make it to the big teams.
This doesn't always work for everyone only for the talented ones that were meant to be good at each of the careers. Not all the time going to college to get a degree so you can get a job is the only way to get money or make a living out of it. In fact, not going prepare to college it can be complicated to students and probably stressful since they have no idea what so ever of what they are going to see or learn. My parents also recommend me to commit to my career at young age so I can learn and practice my skills. Some students finish high school and then they decide to do this type of careers which sometimes work for few of them, they reached their goals and sometimes they don't even finish high school, but if they can't accomplish this, then they have all they need which is their diploma or they can continue with their studies to get the job they would like to have.
In conclusion, is a good thing that students commit to a career early so they can be prepared for the future this will also help them develop their capacity when they go to college where things will get a little bit hard for them. Some students don't have the support of their parents like I do and they just decide to finish high school and be done which is not really good if they want to get a job that will give them a lot of money, and most of the jobs requires you to have a degree of some sort or specific for that job.
There are jobs that don't ask for anything just the high school diploma, but those jobs don't really pay that much, and they are kind of heavy, not all of them but most of them. Some jobs like construction, and plumber don't require that you need to have a college degree just the high school diploma, and this jobs also pay really good, but they are really tiring and heavy, mostly construction that you have to be outside in that hot temperature or cold. In most cases student are committed to a career at a young age by school or their parents to guide them early. For example, I like to play soccer, but I am not good enough to make a career out of it, so I decided to finish my studies, follow my career, and get the job that I would like. Most of the students do this and they success in their careers, I would to the same because I know high school will help me get prepare for college, and I don't have to feel the pressure of not knowing anything all, I already have a little bit of understanding and knowledge.. This could be a benefit for them, since they are young and have the capacity to learn faster, also if they are in high school it would be good for them to be guided at a young age to help them on a career they would like to take, and when they go to college,they don't find the stuff they are going to see complicated, and they are somewhat prepare and have an idea of what they are going to learn if they choose to go to college.
I think it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because it helps students prepare their mentality, knowledge, and give them an idea of what they are going to see, and focus on the career they want to choose. I already know what career I want to take and the classes that are recommended for that specific career, and it is actually good because I can learn more about that career, I know that I am capable for the career I want and that it will not be hard for me since I always liked what I want to do which is about computers, and technology related. Most of the time students do not want to commit to a career at a young age because they are either so stressed out from school and they feel like they cannot decide what career they want to take or because they feel like it is not really going to help them much on what they choose. Some students don't know or can't decide what career they want to take, and that is not okay because they most know by the time they are at least in 11th grade, so school can give them the appropriate classes to prepare them for that career, and those classes to help them when they go to college
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To do this, we must focus on creating an environment that is conducive to progress and success instead of allowing ourselves to be held back by excuses or excuses. Once we have identified effective methods of setting and achieving goals, we can focus on developing resilient mentalities that will allow us to attain success time and time again.. It is important to find ways to take control of our mindsets, dealing with self-doubt as well as any negative criticism or judgment from others.
Setting and achieving goals can be a challenging process. We must have the courage to move past fear and laziness and push ourselves to create and strive for short and long-term goals. Additionally, we need to develop effective strategies to motivate ourselves and hold ourselves accountable for our goals
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Unluckily purposes don't come by itself as a miracle. Among the time the girl started to eat healthier and started to walk everyday she was adding one more lap ,then she started to jug and after run . Each human person in the world have a purpose , goal to get in a future and is something that we really want to have in our life. We are trying we aren't being like the rest and that make us unique ans specials, show to whoever said we could't do it or make it how wrong they were and they judge us before knowing our capacities. A lot of girls bother her, and others saw her crying and hurt and they didn't stop them. There is a lot of people doing a lot of activities everyday and some others doing nothing than just watch TV. We won't feel good after that and we'll feel embarrass of ourselves , we wouldn't be capable of going out with our mind thinking in what other people is thinking . After everything we'll feel great and proud of what we've done.
It is hard to try without being scared , without doubt .Believe in our capacities is something that we stopped doing , and say I can't became more common and we hear that everyday. Show others trust and appreciation for everything they get , be happy for them and give them more motivation.
Generic_Name an English teacher said "People just see the defect in other person's life without seeing in their person's first" . It won't be perfect at the first try , it may not be the same thing that we were expecting, but the effort you put is what it counts. Demonstrate the people that was supporting us what we did to make them proud and we know how good we are going to feel that day. It is so much emotions going on and we can't describe the feeling after we went through all that and we finally did it,we got our purpose we make it and the feeling of victory is inexplicable,we need more positivism in us.. This is a experience that taught me to see different the things , to see how we can do it
, if we want , if we put a lot of effort and we are patient to see the changes. No one is perfect we might see people getting their purposes easily and we can't understand how , what we don't know is the reality of how the live by the way we don't need to be comparing our live with others life .
A girl from school had extra weight and she didn't played any sports , she was lazy to walk and all her friends were skinny and she felt bad about herself and very ashamed of her body she tried to lose weight but slowly she was quitting ,she was crying a lot and feeling weird and unwanted by everyone , some students started to judge her and no one wanted be her friend and they were bullying her . A lot of people accomplish more if they are always doing something and others ask if inactivity also serve as a purpose. What we can really do is confront the reality , understand our mistakes try to solve them ,try to get better by the time . Her bones and body develop she got skinnier and after she got back to school everyone got impressed .Now she was more confident and it wasn't easy , it took time , tears , sacrifices but she did it . Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle..It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing".
Some person's give up easily, they think is impossible, hard, complicated, but basically what they are doing is waste their capacity to make something and improve themselves, just because someone doesn't trust in our capacity means we have to stop doing what we like and quit . At the beginning of every subject we want to experience by doing it ,is hard , we got anxiety, nervous,sad,happy. Always is better to try than just watch .Everyone has their daily things to do , some people work , others study , others do both or more things and they don't have time for them. We don't do things we want to do because of our insecurities and our laziness when there is a lot of people dying to have an opportunity. It is necessary to take our time to make this things possible, it is necessary to have clearly our mind and see what are we capable to do and how far we can go . We don't need to take care of what others say, they might give us advises but we are the only ones deciding our actions.
What the quote means is how we make bad decisions an sometimes we just do what others do,or we just quit to something we were trying to do and it was hard so we drop off that and now we don't do anything else than watch others happy for getting their purpose. If we fall down we need to stand up again , dropping some tears and being in bed all day won't help , think in what other people might think about us won't do anything than just make us feel even more weak. Every person has a different purpose,some purposes are complicated to reach,and there's also some less complicated but doesn't make any difference because every person decides and picks what are their purposes and whether if they give up or they do anything to reach them. We can't limit ourselves with good stuff we need to spend time and learn new things , experience , teach other people and share our experiences and recommend and help others to never quit. This is so truth , we don't see in ourselves first , we spend more time critizating and wishing bad luck to those making their purposes , feeling jealous of them because they could do it and we could't because we didn't want to put effort and time so we'd rather give up and do nothing than just complain about it and make excuses .That is not a reason , choosing a goal or purpose is something we need take it seriously because if you take it like a game then we are wasting your time , and the time of those person's helping us and going through all our steps , in our mentality has to be all positive .Being more strong than our bad thoughts feel proud of us,because we are doing something that others can't do. Quit is the easy way to give up , and that is they way to demonstrate weakness the people that didn't trust in us would laugh and spread the rumors of our fail
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With clear expectations and penalties in place, students and teachers can work together to ensure that the phones stay out of classrooms, and that students remain focused and productive during the school day.. Students should also be aware that if they are found to be breaking these policies, their phones can be taken away by teachers.
All in all, students should be allowed to bring their phones to school, provided they are used responsibly and only during the times designated by the school.
Students should be allowed to bring their phones to school, provided they are used only during lunch, recess, or any other designated time outside of class. Also, if there is a policy in place to keep phones away from sight during class, phones should not be used at any time in the hallway, classroom, or any other public area until students are out of class. For instance, phones may only be used during breaks or lunchtime only and must remain off and away from sight during class. It should go without saying that they should abide by school policies and not use their phones during class. Teachers should also enforce consequences if rules are broken, such as temporary removal of the device.
On the other hand, students need to take responsibility for their own phones. By having phones available, students can keep in touch with their parents, say if they need a ride home, or in case of an emergency.
In order to avoid distraction from student phones, teachers should set clear expectations for when and how students are allowed to use their phones
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Also, I think that the students know better to turn off their phones, if they don't want their phones to be taken away. Students need their phones for any emergencies. Students still bring their phones to school whether you teachers and principal don't allowed them to. However, students are to understand that teachers don't want them to be disturbing the class. Dear, Principal
In my opinion, I think that you should allow students to bring their phones to school, but with the condition, to use them outside their classes. So, I absolutely agree with the policy of letting students bring their phones
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His commitment to personal liberty and the free exchange of ideas inspired countless reformers to pursue similar ideals. He encouraged people to think critically, challenge norms, and strive for progress. His most notable accomplishment was the passage of the Declaration of Independence, which laid out the fundamental principles of freedom and justice that guide our nation today.
Jefferson was a firm believer in the power of education and the importance of improving society through science and technology. He famously stated, “It is never too late to form the habits of a good life.” His commitment to this philosophy has been credited with inspiring individuals to strive for greatness and work to make the world a better place.
Jefferson’s beliefs and accomplishments still serve as invaluable lessons for today. In an ever-changing world, his forward-thinking ideals are still applicable and are a reminder of how a single individual can make a lasting impact on society.. He served as the third president of the United States of America and was instrumental in shaping the early years of the nation.
Thomas Jefferson was a statesman, inventor, and influential philosopher
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TOMAS JEFFERSON
Thomas Jefferson wrote, important article for benefit the our society."His determine to be idle in his life.
It's wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing like Tomas Jefferson doing in the his life.
Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose to the our community. Like Tomas Jefferson was in the his life wrote important stuff.
Thomas Jefferson is a person that our society need because he was and still important, I learn from hin different thing .
Example; He was a wonderful man so we can learn from him and do many different thing to benefit my community.
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Thomas Jefferson was and still a wonderful person for our society. I learn a lot from hin how can be a good person in my community also in my life.
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This can lead to a variety of benefits, such as getting started on college a year earlier, entering the workforce sooner, or taking a gap year and traveling. Students may find themselves needing to make more difficult or complex decisions in a shorter amount of time and struggle to keep up with the faster pace of the program.
One of the primary advantages of taking a three-year high school program is that it allows students to finish their secondary education a year earlier. This can be extremely advantageous for those who wish to move forward with their lives as quickly as possible.
However, taking a three-year high school program can be quite challenging. Additionally, some courses or extracurricular activities may not be available in the three-year format, which could be a major issue to those who are looking for specific activities or pursue a certain educational track.
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Now that I showed you how hard could it be for students that would take a three year high school program, now it clarifies that theres no need to rush with education and that students should take normal high school program because it wouldn't be so hard as taking the other program that I just talk about, in conclusion students have more changes to graduate with a four-year-program, as long as they keep themselves in track with what they are suppose to do it won't be no problem, and there will be less stress for them, more freedom to take a break when they need to, and enough time to study.. Not because of the time but for those students that would decide that they would not only risk to fell some classes but also not to take elective classes during summer because that's what this prompt says.
It will be more stressful:
As we all know school sometimes can be stressful but imagine how stressful if for students that graduate in four years as every other normal programs that high schools offer, now imagine how it would it be for students that take programs allowing them to graduate in three years. I'll say they have to work even harder, during the summer they have to take courses in order to be upgraded to the grade the are going to, also a lot of SOL's test will be taking in less time, I'm not saying that those people won't have enough time to study, but what I'm saying is they would have a really busy schedule with all their classes plus all of those tests coming up it wont be easy for them.
The reason that why I used those examples to explain the main idea like this, it was for you to understand that such as that program it can be very difficult for students, not just that but for students that might not be quick to understand new subjects or new units, it can get them stuck in there with no option but to get into a point when they would just give it up and quit because it will get really hard for them. My position about this prompt is that students should not take the program that allow students to graduate them in three years, because is not like taking normal classes, for example what would happen if students get to take the program that will allow them to graduate in 3 years?
They would have to take more classes in less time:
Because as I read in the prompt there was one part that says "for students in order to graduate must take summer courses", and this means that they would not have a break in this time
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In addition, the lack of physical presence can also reduce the potential for cheating, by providing a secure environment where all students have equal access to resources. One of the key advantages of distance learning is that it frees students from the physical and social pressures that can be found in a classroom setting. Without the traditional classroom environment, students can avoid the peer pressure, judgment, and discouragement that can be experienced in an academic context. With so many advantages, distance learning offers an ideal educational solution for students who are looking for an alternative to the traditional classroom environment..
Distance learning can provide students with a valuable educational experience that can be tailored to their individual needs, offering a range of benefits that the traditional classroom setting cannot. Furthermore, distance learning offers a scalable form of education that can be easily accessible to students regardless of geographic location, allowing students to continue their studies without worrying about their ability to attend a physical classroom
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Do students that attand classes from home, ever cheet?! we'll never know if they do. all I can think of is what I provided. You get your work done and you move on. Other students that gets in trouble all the time are just better off learning from home. We all are doing the same work, depanding on our grades. What If It was so bad that I couldn't go to school?! Some students are just not good at school, and just prefer learning from home online or by video conferencing. Anyways, It's not like people at home are doing less work than people at school. Yes, I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. It is hard as a kid or a young teens to go to school and have to deal with other kids, and I get it, because it is hard for me to deal with other kids too. I would like an answer for my question, but I bet there will never have a proper answer.
There is a lot of resons why it is good for students to be able to take classes from home, and I will never be able to tell you all that resons. They aren't in a classroom. their will be no more trouble.
Most of the times our parents say that going to school and socialism is good for us. But this is what my attantion goes to. The only differance between people that are taking online or video conferencing from people at school is that they are not going to school. We all need to turn in our work on time or it will be counted late, same test, same quiez everything. There, at home, there is no one to to fit with. Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attand classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. We all have to studie for our test, quiez... Less take me as an example; I had personal problems before, and It was auwefull. Is that true?! Is that the case?! Well I am not sure about that, but what I do know is that I think we students should have the options to decide what we really are confortable with, and our parents should help us with that. Online or video conferencing are not so bad themself, I will have done if I have the opportunity to.. But not all of those kids are hard to deal with
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However, the extended school day should come with specific guidelines such as an optional lunch period and alternate modes of instruction to ensure that student engagement and educational goals are not sacrificed.. Additionally, students who are working would not have to miss classes and would benefit from better time management skills that would come from the four-day school week.
After researching the advantages and disadvantages of extending the school day to two hours for a four-day week, it is the recommendation of this report that the school should extend the school day. The extended school day would provide more time for teachers to complete their syllabi and would reduce the amount of student stress due to shortened test-intensive days
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Should my school follow the route of a conserve energy and resource business to extend the school day to two hours for a four-day week? This idea has an advantage and on the other hand a disadvantage because student will be stress out, some will not get enough time to rest before going to work,and they wont get time to learn.
First,students will be stress out. When this happens,the student will end up failing the class which is not suppose to happen.
Again,most of the student will not get enough time to rest after school before going to work. There are different kind of people in a school,some may be fine when it comes to sitting for a longtime,others may have problems. Example;if a teacher is teaching and the students are sleeping,the student will end up not hearing what the teacher said about the topic. some students may be sleeping while the teacher is teaching. Teachers always rush when they are teaching just to catch up the syllabus and students will not understand the concept they are teaching but when two hours is added to the time,the teacher will take her time to explain for the students to understand the concept very well.
I will conclude by saying,adding two hours for a four-day week school has a lot of disadvantages,therefore,my school should not follow the route of a conserve energy and resource business or else it will affect the academics of the students,and also weak the body since they dont have enough sleep. Example;some people do not close early when they go to work,those student get a little time to rest before going to work.
This idea is important because,it will help teachers to complete their syllabus in time and also rest on the fifth day,and get time to be with their kids. Sitting down for more than three hours can cause waist and back pain. . some subjects involves a lot and needs much time to complete. Majority work after school,therefore,they have enough time to rest before going to work. There are a lot of students in high school who work and cater for their living. If the school hours is extended by two hours,they will not have enough time to rest and will be sleeping later in the day in class
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Failure is the stepping stone to success, and can act as an encouraging motivator when objectively analyzed. He realized that success was not capable without having endured failure. Without failure, young minds are unable to understand resilience and perseverance. It is only when we walk this winding path of successes and failures that we can gain the insight needed for achieving accomplishments..
Failure is a valuable learning experience, and an essential part of any journey to success. This phrase, resonates with many, often providing that needed hope for those wishing to reach their goals. Winston Churchill understood this, famously stating "What is Success Without Failure?"
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Human behavior mostly influences in their achievements and failures throughout life. I strongly agree with the Churchill's statement regardless to the critical role failure plays in life. It influences in many adolescences, gives the hope of being able to achieved their expected accomplishments and it provides higher knowledge from their mistakes. A successful person is the one who have seem to dedicated their time to be able to greatly achieved their dreams. If we keep encouraging people to practice resilience, they would most likely be able to manage every hard situation in life and would have the courage to keep trying even if they are aware they might fail, in other words, they would be practicing negative reinforcement that is based on failing but being aware they could have rewards at the end.
Overall, Failure plays an essential role in the pursuit of success since it gives individuals the challenge of becoming better human being and achieving their goals regardless to the situation. We, as humans tend to follow other's behavior to feel accepted by society. . Society has been exacerbating this concept by creating irrational fear in those who are not willing to take risks to become better persons once they seemed to have failed, which leads to the mediocrity of the world.
Furthermore, there are many people who were born in a extremely poor region, yet they became successful persons due to the hard work they constantly showed and the multiple failures they have experienced, that helped them work harder on specific goals, and that have made an enormous impact in many young minds since it exposes how someone could be able to achieved anything they are expecting, if you keep trying. It gives the enthusiasm every individuals need in order to be successful in life, it motivates young minds to follow their expectations, and provides more knowledge in many cases since we learn from our mistakes.
Accordingly to many researches, individuals tend to give up when they are facing an obstacle in a complicated occasion, that prevented most of society to stop achieving their accomplishments due to the constant fear of experiencing failure. It exposes how human behavior react with the idea that success is not only one extraordinary idea. What is success without failure?
I can infer that the mentioned statement Prime Minister Winston had provided has an strong point of view from many perspectives. If individuals were to give up in the first try, we would be a world with ignorant in it.
Moreover, It is psychological proven that a brain can effectively works in better conditions, if they seem to be in a place where failure could be the main issue. Success means being able to manage the situation with resilience and perseverance even if they seem to have made multiple mistakes. To be able to achieved your expected goals without loosing enthusiasm, and demonstrating resilience is the greatest accomplishment
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Online classes from home provide students with an abundance of benefits. All these factors make taking an online class from home an appealing option.. Additionally, taking tests remotely can help students save time and energy by not having to travel to and from testing locations. An added perk of taking classes online is that students may also have the opportunity to have free time for other activities. To be successful in taking one, students need to be focused and have high concentration levels. These classes offer students a chance to develop new skills and knowledge quickly and efficiently
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If students study a lot they can do better. work hard and believe in your self. Smart. To change the way to you study. Students develop their studying skill and more knowledge.
Although, taking class in school isn't that much bad but student can't concentrate at class. When I take class in school i can not focus that much because to many students yelling at class. Students become thoughtful.
In conclusion, Students can get benefit from being able to attend class from home. I am seeking to do more than I do on class. Students being thoughtful and work Harding. When he study at home, the place is quit that can he focus in studying, then he will be smart and good thinker. I have online class thins year. They will get good job.
This provide that, Being though full. ,Nevertheless, Being taking online class at home important to develop knowledge. Student should have opportunity to take online class and Done with their work and have time to rest. Because, Students being focus only on online class. When they take online class they start thinking much. They don't want to studying at home. . So taking online class is better. That is better way to improve skills. being work harder. Being taking online class at home important to develop your skills of studying. Being Good thinker. That is make students proud. they start seeking to understand about that class. They being prefect and smart. Then you will graduate. If I start taking online class I will save my time on the other hand I develop my knowledge. However, Students have time to study. When you do by yourself you will have much confidence. Students will get better grade. If you study on online you will get better and you will believe in yourself. Also you could do any test. Fixing The way of i'm studying before. Gain perfect. Students become work hard and study hard. Improve the way of studying. And Students will have confidence on their self. Being developing skill of studying and developing knowledge.
This for that, Taking online class help you get more knowledge and skills. So they will take care of about the subject. Nobody can bother you when you take online class at home. Being smart.
For example, When students before taking online class they pay for it. Online class helps you study more and also, help to having experience.
Obviously, Online class can provide your problems. Instead of playing game study online class. genius. Gain perfect. Being confidence by yourself. They will finish early and they start doing another stuff. Being gain smart. Gain smart. When they take in class they start taking with friends they stop focusing on class. To be a good thinker. To avoid bored of study. That is the way of improve knowledge. Being work harder. Students get more free time to do online class at home. If you study a lot on online class you will do a lot. Students know what to do so, If they want to take their time, online class is one of the best way to take their time. Students can get more opportunity to do better job. They start thinking to do more. Most students are hated studying at home. Seeking to know more. I can do by myself.
To began, Taking Online class at home is help to take students time. you won't afraid any tests. That is student can get benefit.
Clearly, The way of taking class at home can save your time. But, If they have online class they starting study and they will fix their problem. They starting believe in their self. Some people thinking taking online class is bored but isn't bored if you try to know something about what you are studying you will be loved it. Students can get benefit from being able to attend class from home. That's makes me have confidence in myself. Being happy. I prefer to take online class because it's much easier than taking school. Online class can save your time. gain smart. Instead of studying they prefer to play games. Instead of wasting time taking online class at home. you will better than that you did on class. Being develop skill. When you take online class you will save your time. They will be focus on that and getting good grade. Nobody yell at him he can concentrate and also he can think very well. Also, online class can help you to fix your problems. If you senor you want to graduate this year but you didn't finish your credits, So the best way is that you can take online class which is you have to take to graduate this year
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Doing the same thing over and over does not allow you to reach new heights and experience different things. However, it is important to remember that no matter how certain you might be that your opinion is right, one person's opinion is rarely enough to reach a successful resolution. With each member in the group bringing a unique perspective and expertise, we were able to come up with a unique and creative solution to the project that none of us would have thought of alone.
Making decisions can be challenging, and many of us struggle to decide the right path to take. Without having all of us involved and working together, the project would have been much less successful.
In addition, it is just as important to take risks. Taking multiple opinions into account and having the courage to take a leap of faith will help you become more confident in your decisions and achieve things you never thought were possible.. Although it was a bit of a roller coaster, I quickly learned about the city and grew an appreciation for it while meeting amazing people and making lifelong connections.
It is these risks that are often the biggest rewards. Taking the input of more than one person and considering multiple angles is an essential part of the decision-making process.
This was something I realized during my sophomore year in college when my professor assigned us a group project. After graduating college, I decided to take a risk and move to a new city, despite having no job prospects there
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What i'm trying to say is takeing a risk is not always bat every thing happens for a reson at lest that is what my parants said. I evan told my frinds about it and they where like "can I chick it out" if i sed no i would sound disrspactful so I said sure ill bring it tomorrow in lunch.
Taking more then one oppenion might be time consuming but trust me it will help you make a 90% better choose then if you would just run in blind and start makeing bad chooses. Its always fun learning about other peoples storys and what they did to get to where they are. That is what all of the succesful peaple do inclouding the prastent, besniss men, loyers becoase if the make the wrong call they could posibly face some vary big concaconses and if you want to be succeful you will have to be vary careful and take as many oppenions as posoble.
Taking peoples oppeinons could be risky at times but a good tip is to take that risk. Taking more then one persons oppenion is a good way to make your final call for example, ther was one time where I wanted two differant books but I only had eangh for one. if you do lesson to every thing I said in this your oppenions to others would change a lot and what i mean by that is you will look at many thing in a differant precpactive, your disagon makeing would change lats say you take six peaples oppenions three of them said there favert coler was blue and the other three said green now this is when a risk comes in now you are going to chose a coler lats say you chose blue now the numbers have changed 4 blue and 3 green so blue won. . and let me tell you I had a lot of fun reading that book. I had to make a good disagon becouse if I did not then it would have been a wast of $15. one of the book was called Nialarmstrong it talked about the life of Nialarmstrong and the other was called Dog Man it talked about a dog that some how got transformed in to a human offecer cinda like capton americ exapet hes not a super solder. taking big riskes is a part of our lives every human being took a risk at lest ones in there lives sometimes you would not evan know that you took that risk but in realty you did for example im take a risk typing this ovesly the conscances are not that big but they still mater in life.
My oppenion is to watch out, becareful, and take the risk like I sad riskes dont alway tearn out bad. these thing is are in you every day life so you have to becarful,take risks,and take other oppenions. My conclogon is paople should take more then one oppeinon.
I dicided to take my frends Generic_Name oppenion he told me to " take Dog man it is so cool " but i feelt like there was something about the Nailarmstrong book. I did not stop there I wanted anther oppenion so then I want and asked the libarn oppenion she told me " the nailarmstrong book sounds better to me but your choose to pick out the book that standes out the most to you" so then i took her edvide and the book that stoude out the most to me was Nailarmstrong
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Though she was born in a part of the world known for its patriarchal values, she persevered and fought for equal opportunities for girls’ education.
The late Dr. also serves as an inspiring example of setting a good example.
Setting a good example is one of the best ways to inspire and positively influence those around us. Martin Luther King Jr. As a result, our good examples can create opportunities for us, provide stability in our surroundings, and help us create a powerful legacy that can last for generations.
One example of how setting a good example can lead to positive outcomes is the story of Malala Yousafzai. He demonstrated to the world that by remaining steadfast in his beliefs and displaying unwavering courage in the face of oppression, he created a legacy of peace and justice.
In conclusion, setting a good example is essential for achieving positive outcomes both for ourselves and those around us. Throughout his long-fought battle against racism and racial injustice, he remained hopeful and peaceful, never resorting to violence in spite of the violence meted out against him and his supporters. Establishing good behaviors, such as kindness, understanding, and courage, can help us create the legacy of a lifetime and inspire generations.. These traits can inspire others to believe, respect, and trust us. She spoke out against the injustice, sparking a movement and becoming a symbol of strength and courage for millions of young girls around the world. It can be as simple as exhibiting positive behaviors, such as being kind to others, showing understanding, and exuding a sense of warmth
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However, if you show them by how you act like for an example: you don't bother anyone, you show where a location is or try to, being polite, patience, showing manners, etc.
they will find you setting a good example or showing good behavior. Not only setting a good example can make people say you're a good person , it can also lead to "good karma".
Lets say you have a younger sibling, and they want to be like you , you can be smart , responsible,and a good behaving person, show them a good example so they can be as successful as you. . In my opinion setting a good example is the only way to influence people you're a good person. same goes to people dont show them a bad behavior or example, thats not gonna get you anywhere, that'll only make people not like you and assume different things. Another thing is always set good example when you're out in public with a family member, because if you dont people will not like that and have your family at fault.
in conclusion to all this if you show good behavior or set a good example by showing it , It will not only make people assume you're a good person it will also influence young ones to do the same. many people wont believe you're a good person just because you say you are
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For this reason, it is important to recognize when praising actually helps, and when it can be harmful.
Motivating a student without the use of praise can be a difficult but important task for educators and parents. While praise may be beneficial in small doses, celebrating successes holistically and emphasizing the journey rather than the result can be just as, if not more, rewarding for a student - and is less likely to have a negative effect. Research has shown that giving praise to students has a positive effect on their self-esteem, providing them with a sense of accomplishment and gratification. But on the flip side, there is also evidence that suggests an excessive amount of praise can have a detrimental effect. Encouraging students to strive for personal goals and achievements can encourage them to become independent and self-motivated. Giving praise too often can lead students to become dependent on external validation, making them less likely to take initiative and self-motivate if it doesn't come with the promise of a reward
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Make them regret what they said and go accomplish more.. So what if they dislike your achievements? so what if they start doubting? prove them wrong with all your accomplishments that are coming your way. I agree that praising a students work is an outstanding idea to jump start a students path to success,but praise is not the way to increase their self-esteem. By accomplishing something could make you learn new things in life too. Students will also have a harder time dealing with constructive criticism. I say this because people don't usually thank you or give you any comments they usually mean. You don't need people telling you about your work or whatever you are doing because at the end of the day you're the only one who knows what you're accomplishing in life. Teachers should let students achieve their goals and not worry about what the other person has to do or say. If you achieve something and you keep on achieving things in life you will get many blessings. You would never know what could come out someone's mouth.
They wouldn't want to agree with this but, that's because we all think different and most of us know the real meaning behind something similar to this. People don't usually know the difference between praising and achieving your goal without it. However, if a student works really hard to achieve something,then that feeling of completion can motivate them to continue to their path of success. By overpraising a student his or her confidence has to be on a different level. Getting your business done without any praising and knowing you put your all into it could make you feel way better about yourself and it would just not motivate you but the people around you. People get confused and don't get the message, we need more people to believe in their selves and not about what other people have to say.
Although I think it's nice of people complimenting and saying positive things about your work but, I still have to go with achieving it on your own
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It is important to allow ourselves to feel negative emotions and understand that the fullest potential of success cannot be reached without recognizing our insecurities, doubts, and fears. Finally, being surrounded with positive influences and supportive friends and family can help to reinforce our positive outlook and provide us with the optimism and belief of achieving success.. It enables us overcome any obstacles that may stand in our path and push us to our full potential; however, success is not exclusively dependent on having a positive attitude.
It is widely accepted that having a positive attitude helps individuals to achieve success. Finding simple activities that can be enjoyed in our own time can help to temporarily take our minds away from our worries and stressors. Even with a positive outlook, success is not always guaranteed. Furthermore, having a positive attitude can help us discover our passions and achieve our personal objectives, as we recognize the opportunities and meaningful objectives that each day has to offer.
One beneficial strategy to maintain positivity when surrounded by negativity is to take a break and focus on something else that brings us pleasure
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Since the majority of people want the success, but the successful does not come over night. Obviously, having a positive attitude will help you success. Even if you always are failing in your life, but if you still have a positive attitude you can achieve your goals and be successful.
First, with a positive attitude the people are going to recognize you as a person that always like to fight with positive attitude an achieve your goals. To demonstrate this positive attitude you can achieve your goals no matter what obstacle that life put in front of you.
Secondly, to be successful you need to have a positive attitude. In other words you just have to find your talent and prove in a different way that you can be successful. you should use your talent and so you can change the direction of your goals. Some persons are always trying to make you negative but you have to keep going and fight for your future. . Clearly not everyone needs to have a positive attitude to have an accomplishment.
Surely having a positive attitude is beneficial to accomplish effectively what your proposes of life should be.
If you are not successful in something, it is because you are not trying something that is a passions of yours. So you have to get out of your comfortable place and take control of your life without fear. Something the success does not come as fast you would like. Many people believe that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. The most important thing to success is to know what you really want in life and grab it with an attitude.
Sometimes it is not important to have a positive attitude to obtain success
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Life experience can be a great source of wisdom for important decisions, as it can provide insightful observations and a unique perspective that can help someone to see a problem from a different angle. Ultimately, the combination of life experience and wisdom from trusted sources can be invaluable when making decisions.. These can range from friends and family to mentors and consultants.
Therefore, it is clear that both life experience and guidance from friends and family are essential when making important decisions. Seeking input from trusted advisors can help to confirm or adjust the direction of a decision, leading to a more informed choice. His advice was simple but powerful—to make sure to keep an open mind and think through every angle before making a final decision. Although I had already made up my mind to do so, I still sought out the advice of my father, who had also served. We often build our closest circles of friends over many years, and they get to know us as well as we know ourselves.
I personally experienced this when I was considering joining the military after graduating high school.
When making important decisions, it is often essential to seek out the advice of the people who are closest to us. He knew the value of carefully weighing the pros and cons of any decision, even one as significant as mine.
In addition to family, friends are also an invaluable source of advice when making decisions. Good friends can often be additional eyes and ears on a situation, and can even offer fresh perspectives that would not have otherwise occurred to us
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Because she's older than me. They think, we don't need anyone to guidance us.
But I think in every moment of life, we need someone, who had a lot of experts to guidance us.
Father and mother are the best persons, to share our everything in our life.
They have a lot of experience and important matters in life. In the first he was so happy, but after a few months he become sad.
When he saw his all friends going to school and he works he felt sad.
He was so regretful, because of what he did. Because we don't have any experiences of the thing.
My uncle, he was 17 years old. Sometime before i say anything she know, I'm thinking about what and what I want to tell her. Everyday we meet a new thing in our life. That we don't know what is it? and where is it come from? Our parent are older than us, they know everything. thats means, they understand better about us and about our situation.
My mom she always feel me. She was in my age before me.
We are like a person that don't know about anything, because everything is new for us. "My son always share whatever you have in your mind with the person that you can trust and believe, and listen to them, they will always guide you".
Finally he understood, what he did was wrong, but he also like to work too.
That time he came to his father and share that he wants to study and work.
His father was so happy that his son come and asked him for showing the good way.
His father guide him and show him that what should he do.
He went to school and also continued his work too.
Right now he's a businessman, he always says" to us to share anything with your family or friends".
He said that to us" the way that I am success and a good businessman was my dad experience, my dad guidance".
I learn from my uncle that if your mom and dad teach you how to speak and how to eat and.... We should learn something from the experiences.
Life is full of thing, actually new thing. They can feel us In every situation.
We always should ask from our mother or father, about our life decisions.
we should have someone to hear us and support us.
Our parent experience can be a lesson for us.
Experiences make our life. LIFE DECISIONS
In every part of our life, we need someone to share something with them.
Maybe they are our family or friends.
In these days, people are more self-reliance. Having the experience are good, you know better how to solve a problem and guide someone who trust you.
If I have a plan for future I will share it with my mom, she support me and guide me.
Experience of the life are best lessons to us, everyone should guidance from experts of their parent or friends.. If i am sad even if i didn't tell her she know that I am sad. He always just listen to himself.
He didn't share anything with anyone until he did the work, than he comes and tell us that what I did.
Everyone was sad about him because he was younger and he don't know about anything.
His mother and father told him to finish school first then open a fast food, but he didn't listened to them.
He leaved the school and started his work. He wanted to open a small fast food in our country. He didn't listen to his parent and he just did what he wants.
Than he came to his parent and said sorry, because of not sharing his idea with his parents.
My grandfather said to him" I was in your age, I did the same mistake that you did, but in different way. They were in our age and now they're older than us. I told you to school is the first important thing in our life, you can't leave an important thing in life"."I had the experience that why i was trying to tell you that. they also can teach us how to life good.
I always ask from my mom and share my day happens with her.
She hear me and feel me
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Online classes can be a useful way for students to receive an education, but they also come with risks that cannot be ignored. Social interaction is a crucial part of learning, as well as a student's development. Schools in the United States should not offer online classes if it means compromising the quality of education and decreasing social interaction for their students.. By exclusively taking online classes, students miss out on learning skills such as public speaking, participating in group activities, and working collectively with peers. Some schools in the United States should not offer online classes for their students because they could easily become a substitute for vital social interaction and can lead to a decrease in the overall quality of learning.
For many students, online classes remove the compelling motivation of being in contact with their teachers and peers.
In conclusion, the potential risks that come with online classes are not worth the convenience. Without this real connection with people, it can become extremely easy for students to neglect their work, skip assignments, and procrastinate more than if they were physically in the classroom. If students are used to exclusively taking classes online, it poses the risk of further isolating them from the world. Without this condition of accountability, students are more likely to receive a sub-par education.
Furthermore, it is impossible to replicate the real-world experience from a computer
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Avoiding classes online will reduce the percent of students to become wird and shy and to have a better relationship with people.
In conclusion, many schools of the United States should stop offering students online classes becuase it requires a lot of work for the students. They believe that students will have flexible schudeles during the day. Also, students are afraid to interact with other people face to face because they spend most of time in their computers. Although some say that offering online classes by the school would be more beneficial, actually it won't be beneficial for students who wants to attend online classes offered by the school because it will require more work for students and students will have less interaction with people face to face.
Those who believe schools should offer online classes have reasons. If students want to take other classes they won't have time to do it. Essays and reading books counts as a big percent of his grade. He says that he doesn't have too much time to practice a hobby or do something else because he needs to do a lot of assignments for his online class. They also think that students will become more responsable attending classes from home. Schools should privide students a diferent method to help students to attend their classes becuase online classes keep students from the real world and their interaction with people. And it doesn't include the warm-ups and classworks during the class. Also his class online requires to write a lot, such as essays or read books. One day her school offered her some online classes to take. Students don't see benefits of attending online classes, instead it just make their life difficult in many ways.. It will help students to relieve strees and to work if they have a part-time job. Sometimes he has to do two homeworks each day just for one class. Some schools of the United States are looking forward to the day that students will attend classes from home by way of online. For instance, my counsin Generic_Name she used to be a girl that really liked to interact with people. These classes just make students's life busier than what they expected. Like my friend Generic_Name his life has become very busy since he stated taking this online class offered by his school.
In fact, students become very wird because they have less interaction with people face to face. Doing their work in their own will develop a self- decipline.
One of the main reasons why schools of the United States shouldn't offered students to attend classes online from their is because it requires more work from the students. Making students to attend classes online happens will change many students lives. Requiring this ammount of work schools shouln't offered these classes online because too much work is assigned just for one class. For example, my friend Generic_Name. He is attending one class online from his home. The real world need students who like to interact with people not shy students. Later, her parents found out that her online clases made her become a wird child because of the less interaction she had with people. Well in a short period of time her parents starting to notice that she was becoming a very shy and wird person when time was passing and continuing taking clases online. Dispite this exciment it can be not beneficial for some students in the way of learning. She said yes
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In conclusion, self-reliance is an incredibly valuable trait that is both necessary and beneficial.
The thought process behind self-reliance is personal and divergent. Ultimately, self-reliance is the key to personal growth and success..
In real life, self-reliance can be seen as a problem-solving tool when faced with various obstacles.
The same applies to nature, where animals and plants must use self-reliance to survive in their ever-changing environment. It requires the individual to assess the situation, consider potential options, and weigh the pros and cons of each decision before making a final choice. It cultivates a sense of independence and autonomy that is necessary for growth and personal development. For example, a student who is struggling to write a difficult essay may need to rely on themselves in order to overcome the challenge. It is the ability to make decisions and cope with the consequences, both good and bad, in order to achieve a certain goal. It is impossible to progress without the ability to make informed decisions and face the consequences alone. Seeking help and guidance from others can be helpful, but it is ultimately up to the student to make the final decisions and take the necessary steps to reach success. They must navigate their surroundings, make decisions, and weather the consequences in order to secure resources and thrive. The decisions we make can have a considerable impact on the outcome, so it is important to consider all the consequences and think logically before we act.
Self-reliance is an essential human characteristic that is both necessary and beneficial
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Self-reliance allows one to follow their own path and makes their own decisions. Like when we shop, you choose between two or more pieces of clothing. The process of thinking about your ideas.
Our stance on the matter of self-reliance in humans stans to show people need to be self reliant because it is good to not distinctly require independence on any other. The prices are in the same range, a worker comes up to you asks if you need assistance. In our minds we think about different things in a situation, the good and the bad. People who are self-reliance are capable of doing the same tasks they are in. People are capable of making their own decisions. Others can conduse issues more than solve them, at times. With guidance it can be helpful, it can also be misleading and people aren't completely following their instincts. The thought of, what am I going to do, to make my essay satisfied so I can succeed? You feel like you need to find information yourself, managing your stress and time. These types of situations is what most people struggle with, but this helps people benefit from themselves.
We all value self-reliance to the fact that if someone makes their own decisions they have to solve the problem. Guidance is helpful if there are no choices that the person sees that needs it. An over-sized black hoodie and a regular sized white hoodie. Although guidance makes you sound weak, but we want to be satisfied with our decisions. In nature, most animals get to be self-reliance in order to stay alive, for example, as bear gets older, their parents have to let them go alone in the wild.
We have voices in our minds that we talk to, and get really indecisive. With self-reliance, one is more keen on their own inabillities and strives to problem solve with a more in-depth and notable understanding.. Then you feel like you're being held back by people who offer advice.
When I read my prompt for this essay, I struggled coming up with ideas and examples
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It can be a chore or a pleasant experience, depending on how activities are implemented. As such, educational activities should be seen as an ideal way to foster long lasting learning that can be both enjoyable and educational.. This can include learning to play a guitar, singing along with a choir, or mastering the drums.
Education is a fundamental part of life. When done right, activities can be enjoyable and educational simultaneously. Through using examples from science experiments, sports activities, and playing instruments, we have seen how educational activities can engage children on multiple levels, while also providing an avenue for personal growth and satisfaction. This essay will explore the concept of education activities that are both enjoyable and educational by looking at examples from science experiments, sports activities, and playing instruments.
Science experiments are an often overlooked source of educational activities that can be enjoyable. It can be as simple as playing a game of tag, where the children have to use their knowledge of math and geometry, or using a basketball court to illustrate the basics of angles and trajectories. Not only does this give children an opportunity to use their bodies, minds, and senses, but it also helps engage their curiosity, problem-solving skills, and ability to think critically.
Sports activities are also an excellent way to make learning enjoyable. This type of activity can also foster a sense of accomplishment and pride in the student, making it an enjoyable educational experience.
In conclusion, educational activities can be both enjoyable and educational when done right. For younger students, easy experiments such as growing plants, producing audio waves, or exploring the natural world with a microscope can provide hours of enjoyable education. Team sports, races, and competitions can bring out the best of children, who are looking for a chance to learn and grow at the same time. These activities require the use of key listening, coordination, and analytical skills, while also allowing the student to explore music theory, composition, and history. This can be an incredibly effective way to make learning fun and memorable.
Finally, playing musical instruments can be both enjoyable and educational
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And I have more fun around my friends.
finally, In sixth grade I was in band and I was in strings class. Do you think educational activity's can be enjoyable? I think they are because I like science experiments and I love when I do them myself. In the eight grade i made ice cream and it was fun but it was so cold.
furthermore, and the sports that I play are fun to because I play tennis and wrestling. I played the drums in math class and I played the viola in strings class I was very good at the instrument but I stopped in seventh grade. They are very fun and i like tennis more because I got hurt more in wrestling then tennis. And sometimes I play tennis witch is pretty fun. When i was in the sixth grade I was in band and strings class and I
played the drums and the viola that was my favorite until i got to the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it.
first of all, I like to do science experiments and one time in seventh grade I dissected a frog and it was fun. And sometimes I play tennis witch is pretty fun and wrestling. Once I was in the fifth grade and I put a gummy bear in a cup of water and it got bigger. And most of my friends do tennis and I like that. When i was in the sixth grade I was in band and strings class and I
played the drums and the viola that was my favorite until i got to the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it.. But in the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it I think I can play that instrument better than the viola and the drums.
in the conclusion, Do you think educational activity's can be enjoyable? I think they are because I like science experiments and I love when I do them myself
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For instance, a few months ago I decided to rely on myself for a project that I was tackling. When we go beyond our comfort zone, we open our minds and broaden our perspectives, allowing us to see things from new and interesting angles. All in all, going beyond one's current knowledge helps develop valuable skills as well as a sense of self-satisfaction..
Ralph Waldo Emerson once said, "You must try to do something beyond what you have already mastered" in order to grow. Not only had I acquired a new skill, I had also developed the confidence to keep pushing myself and discovering difficult concepts. I chose to learn a new programming language that I had never used before, and the sense of accomplishment I felt when I completed it was immense. This is a powerful idea that encourages us to challenge ourselves and venture into new areas of knowledge and understanding. Additionally, pushing ourselves into unfamiliar territory can help us realize our own potential
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Allthuo life is hared and learening is hared but som times whan you learen a lote you get a lote .
whan you have different ideas you have different way of thinking. "Unles you try to do somthing beyond what you have already mastered you will never grow".
Yes you will never grow becuase you will never have now experience, that will need in the feater I agree with author Ralpn Emerson for three reasons. First, whan you try a now things you are going to have different naleg about a laset of different thing . Than ,whan i staret to learen more about the language i start to go beyond my noleg. First , people wode love to talk to you and now you. Thired, Knowing a lot healp your famliy tow . Sconed, whan you in school you will have a lots of ideas about what class to take . finely that why haveing a lot of ideas healp you.
Whan you try to see how other people and how they act and how thiar coolter is you now how to talk with thim othout disrspact thim. and, that whay i agreed with the auther Ralph Waldo Emerson becuase going beyond what you have already mastered is laring .. Sconed , you can choos the prson that you are going to love from larning about how the siseaty work . Thired , whan you try to see other people and how they act and thiar coolter you will now how to talk with thim without disrspact thim . Sconed , whan you have different ideas you have different way of thinking. Lastly, that why we sholed alwase laren.
Whan I try a now things i alwas laren some thing now .
For exampe, whaen i came to the U.S i did not have enafe naleg about what is in the U.S so that was a issue ror me learening the language i shragl becuase did not go beyond what i have already mastred. first, whan you you lisone to people and how the talk you going to larn e what cined of pirson he is and how to talk with thim . Third, bieing nice to every one mens you are goning out and seeing other people
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Exercising and participating in physical activities can place physical strain and stress on the body, which can lead to aches, pains, and injuries if one is not careful. Staying active can also help one's mental health, as studies have shown that regular physical activity can help reduce levels of stress and depression.
Being active and having an active lifestyle can have many benefits and drawbacks. Furthermore, staying active requires motivation and dedication, which can be tough for some people to find.
In conclusion, while there are both benefits and drawbacks to living an active lifestyle, the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to living an active lifestyle. Additionally, not all forms of exercise are equal, and certain activities can involve more risk than others. Engaging in regular physical activity and staying active can help one achieve overall physical and mental wellbeing, and can also help reduce the risks of many serious diseases.. One benefit of staying active is that it can help improve one's overall physical health, as it can aid in decreasing a variety of disease risks such as obesity, diabetes, and heart disease. Additionally, staying active can help maintain a healthy weight, and can even help one to look and feel better
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Doing something all the time can make you physically fit. My thought on the prompt are that I think it's better to be active. For example, if you are watching a movie at the movie theater. It can be frustrating to other people if everybody is working but you and they need your assistance. If I'am inactive for a long period of time i can get sick or really anybody if you have been laying around doing nothing for days. In some people's life activity play's a major role in there life's. Your body needs movement or some type of exercise. I can'not stay inactive for a long period of time like many people in this world. You can be moving all the time and a lot it can be good exercise.
I like working out or helping people out especially my family. Many people enjoy or like to be active and it makes them feel good including myself. Like a personal trainer or a coach.
Inactivity is sometimes bad especially if you do it for a long time. You can'not be jumping and running all over the place you are going to get kicked out. In some situations when something bad is happening out side your home is better to stay as far away as you can and do'not intervene is better to stay idle.
Finally,I some occasions is inactivity serves a purpose. That's why it's better to be active.
Therefore, inactivity can sometimes be good or necessary. Being active or doing something all the time is good. You can be very helpful by helping people out or doing chores. You do accomplish more if you stay active and you can meat your goals in life if you put hard work and not staying idle.
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For example, some entrepreneurs have built a successful business by leveraging their past failures to refine their product and operation strategies.
The quote by Ralph Waldo Emerson that “Without failure you won't succeed in life” is an accurate statement for the most part. On the other hand, some individuals have achieved success without any failures, such as award-winning actors and authors. Many successful people have succeeded by taking risks and learning from their failures. In my opinion, failure is an inevitable part of life, and one of the key strategies for achieving success is to learn from mistakes and continue striving towards one's goals.. It can be argued that failure is not always necessary for success and that a person can reach their goals with the right attitude, perseverance, and hard work
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Without failure you won't succeed in life. . They are both a team. i mean is good that your sucessing in life but just wait until the unexpected comes thats whe all the boom lets lose. Failure is something you didn't succeed or accomplish yet failure does help you succeed in life. Also knowing you have fail you'll know what is expected in order the success.
I disagree with Ralph Waldo statement because you won't accomplish as much goals. i fact success isn't as bad is actually good.
In my opinion i would say success isn't as better as failure. For example if you only succeed in life you won't know what to do if you fail or how to fix them. There for you'll achieve and have more success by failing. For example you won't know what to do if you ever do fail. While i agree this is why i pick Ralph statement is cause the un expected always comes in lfe. As a matter of fact, this could actually help you accomplish your goals.
I agree with Ralph Waldo statement because, you won't realize your mistakes. This helps because you'll actaully know the struggle people would put themself to accomplish their goal
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Additionally, if students are using their phone for non-educational purposes, such as playing games or sending messages, this takes away from focus on educational tasks. Not listening to the teacher eliminates the opportunity to learn and participate in a meaningful way, leading to decreased academic success.
Cellphones in the classroom can have a marked effect on student success, both positive and negative.
Three key effects of having a cellphone in the classroom are decreased attention to the teacher, inappropriate usage for non-educational purposes, and disruption of the classroom environment. Finally, when the classroom environment is consistently disrupted by the noise and visual distraction that accompanying cellphone use, the learning experience is compromised.
Although there are potential benefits of having a cellphone in the classroom, people should not use cellphones for non-educational purposes. Although having a tool for information available can be beneficial, it can also be a distraction from the important task at hand—learning and engaging in academic pursuits. Rather, phones should be used for academic pursuits with caution, in order to maximize the positive impact to academic success.
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. Using cellphones in class will also disturb other from learning, because they are so in to their cellphone. The cellphones will ring and stop everyone from learning, because they will pay attention on whose phone is ringing. Overtime your cellphone vibrate you always going to want to see what it is and that will have your attention. You should not be ignoring what your teacher has to has to you and your classmates. The students with not pay attention to what the teacher, because they are so busy in their cellphones. Using your cellphone in class may get you off task and u would not know what u learn today in class. These are the reasons why using a cellphone in class should not be allowed in the classroom. Some days u would be mad and take it out on other, because of what you heard on your cellphone. You will not be able to know how to do the work if do not know what to do. The effects of allowing students to have and use cellphones in the classroom is not listening to what the teacher has to say, not using it property for your educational purposes, and disturbing the class from learning. These are the reasons how using cellphones in class can effect them from learning.
First, you will not be able to learn if you are using your cellphone in the class. They should not have it out unless the teacher say you can for your assignment. Last but not least, do not make your classmates fell just because you do not want to successful does not mean your classmates do. This is why people should not use cellphones in school for these purposes.
Thirdly, people will disturb other people from trying to learn with there devices that can cause a disruption. You should not disturb your classmates from being successful in life.
As you can see, the effect of having a cellphone in class while you are trying to learn to be successful. Some students decide not to use it for educational purposes and uses it for other purposes. you are disturbing your classmates that are trying to learn the material they need so they can do something with there lives. You will not be able to focus like you use to with our education and be on your cellphone at the same time.
Second, using your cellphone for other purposes can not help you learn what you need to learn. The use of the cellular device can only be use for education and not other purposes. If you do not use your cellphone for educational purposes you would not know noting from school to know about. You can get in some problem for not using it for education
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To conclude, having a positive attitude in everyday life can have immense positive consequences. One of the primary benefits is an individual's mental well-being; those who approach life with a positive frame of mind are more likely to remain calmer and better equipped to handle stress.
On the contrary, there are those who believe a positive attitude is not required in order to succeed. Taking the time to cultivate a positive viewpoint can create innumerable long-term benefits that are well worth the effort.. Additionally, a person with a positive attitude is a lot more appealing to others, increasing the likelihood they will build strong relationships with the people around them. People who cultivate a positive outlook on life are more likely to pursue educational and career opportunities, helping them to reach a greater level of success. However, studies have demonstrated that having a positive attitude can have a significant impact on the decisions an individual makes throughout their life. Moreover, finding the opportunity to learn from every situation can create a lasting advantage in areas such as problem-solving and creativity. Not only does it help maintain an individual's mental health, but it also increases the likelihood of making better decisions that may lead to higher levels of success.
Having a positive attitude in life can be beneficial in a myriad of ways
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Although this be valid there are several important idea to be considered such as positivism maintain good mental health. everybody can be a person with a good attitude in your life for that life be easy.
Make that life be comfortable with yourself. . also the people will tire to not became mad for simple thing that happen
In conclusion believe that help that be comfortable in life. For example that people that are around you will see your positive personality at the point that you can became the people mood to a positivism. and have a character strong that show a person different that make that the people see a thought positive. In totality is agree with that should have a positive attitude in the life . For example a person with a character positive have more opportunities in your life because help that not have preoccupation, In your life and can explore thing that never see also a person that feel a positive actittude not have problem with other people because have calm when other people can be heat thing for your self.
While some people believe that should have a positive attitude in the life.
other argue that should dont have a positive attitude in the life because being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life. For example, Held take best decision en your life because this help to have clarity thought, that maintain out of every conflict with the other person. Which be the characteristic that show a person positive always time? A person with a positive attitude be kindness with other people show that in life have that be change. Is a form that maintain in your head that make for help to have a mental strong, and that other people can see your positive personality in your life have chose a reason that will be change and mark the different for world. For example being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life, make that life be comfortable with yourself, and positivism maintain good mental health.
In addition being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life
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I provide them with a variety of toys and let them interact with our family and friends. I also make sure to spend time with my dog, allowing them to feel my love and affection. Lastly, I find a comfortable spot where my dog is able to rest and relax after a long day.. During the summer months, I make sure to keep a bowl of fresh, cool water in the yard, and in the winter I make sure to provide my dog with a bowl of regular water.
I make sure to provide my dog with a healthy, nutritious meal every day. Whenever I can, I take my dog out for a long walk and allow them to go outside whenever they need to go to the bathroom
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The dog need to take a shower at least 2-3 times at week, when the dog get out from the bathroom and she/he wet you should put planket on them to not get cold and sick, and you need to brush them hair and dry it with a hot air to not get cold, the important thing that you need to clean his/her eyes everyday in the morning because they will have something in them eyes because they sleeping like humans when they wake up they wash them face because it's not cleand and brush them teath. Sometimes people leave them dogs in the car because they not alawed to go in resturant so they leave them in the car, dogs feels that they lonly and they waiting for you to come back really bad. Dogs like to live with a family not one person because they like to set with them and if they have a childern they really like to play with a baby or children because the childern have a lot of power to run, play, to anything and the dogs have a lot of power, enrgy to run, to play, and etc.... The dogs do not like to get wet a lot so do not get him/her out when it's raining outside. . The vet for your dog gonna tell you what you suppost to feed him/her and what you not soppust to give him/her. .
The dog only thinking about you and the food and how he/she can save you from anything dangerous like, when someone come and stell something from your house and you sleeping, the dog will pits him/her in them legs, and the dog try to wake you up with his/her "wror" the the dog make, sometimes the dog need to have a comfy space so he/she come and set behind your legs and sleep, but when your dog wake up he/she get bored so they trying to wake you up by liking your face or your toes, a lot of people love dogs so they buy it for a lot of money because some dogs are no really avalable in some places so it's hard to find theis dogs, and they still cost a lot of money, dogs can alive like 11 years to 15-20 maybe if your dog not that long with you you not gonna be sad at him/her if they but if they at least 2-3 yeas with you you really gonna miss them and if you died your dog will cry on you because I tried that before when my grandma died my dog was not even eating or drinking water or palying she was just seting and crying, and I was having two dogs they was brother and sister, so they was playing together everyday but one day the her brother was died i was really sad and crying and she was not even eating or drinking like when my grandma die, she was really sad for a long time and then I give it to my uncle house he was have a dog and a cat, she started to play with them and having fun so she happy right now bwcause she forget her brother and found a dog and a cat to play with them.
The dogs like to live in a big house and a big backyard to play in, and they need to live in an organize place. And what time you should go to the doctor to see or check at your dog. You need to a vet to check your dog every month at least, maybe they have alergece for something or they need to take a shock for something in them body. How you can have a good relation ship with your dog?
You need to have a good relationship with your dog because, when you get a new dog and your dog need to take him/her out and you do not know that you soppust to do that the dog will do not like you at all, like here's I am gonna give you some exampls for what you should do for your dog to not hate you, the dog need to feed him/her a food every day, cold water in the summer to not be hot, a normal water in the winter need him/her to go out to walk or poop out side,the dog need to have you be with them all the time, he/she need to feel that you like them, give them food, water, play with them every day, take them outside when you hang out with you family, friends, etc..... . but you an put him/her in your car and go shoping with them
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Furthermore, short summer breaks reduce the amount of disruptive absences; this allows students to maintain the same peer group over the course of the academic year, providing them with a sense of accessibility as well as the ability to form relationships with their peers, teachers, and school faculty. Even more, longer summer breaks can give students the opportunity to explore and participate in extra-curricular endeavors, such as internships or job shadowing opportunities, which can help them find a career path they are interested in or gain valuable job skills.
Overall, both short and long summer breaks provide students with potential educational benefits, and it is ultimately up to the students and their families to decide what works best for them.. For example, classroom environments are structured to provide students with a consistent and secure learning atmosphere — something which they may not have access to over a long summer break. For one, students can have the opportunity to stay engaged in educational activities, such as reading or attending summer school, which can help maximize learning outcomes and boost academic success.
Long summer breaks for students have several potential benefits for their educational development.
On the other hand, short summer breaks can also provide benefits for students’ educational development
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Whereas many people argue that the break should be year-round schools, and it should be a 3-4 week break in summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. . Summer break is what educators and students are looking forward for. Students need break but a short break is unnecessary.
To begin with, students are waiting for a long summer break where they can spend all their time at the place that they wish to be at. Furthermore, some teacher put onerous on students, which they giving out homework and big project for a test grade just because they don't want the student to forget the information that they have learn. Imagine an aboard student come from different country that is far away from United State, so she need a long summer break to return to her country for visit her family. For instance, teachers love give homework during the break for no reason. The long break is much better than a short and unnecessary break. For example, an exchange student from Vietnam came to United State with her parents for emergrates, but her siblings still live in Vietnam because they were married before sign up. Students didn't expect teachers to finish grading their work during the break, but teachers expect them to finish the big project, it is unfair for students.
As a final point, the summer break should be longer because students need more time for their vacation, and they will not have to worry the homework that they left at home. For instance, a break in the middle of the school year easy to get students forget what they have learn. For long summer break teacher don't give homework, and students feel free to plan out their vacation for entire summer. Further more, students will not want to go back to school after few days off. Furthermore, some students are working full time in summer to have a provision for their consumption in the future such as buying a car, college,etc. The summer break should be longer and less short break because students need more time for their vacation, and they will not have to worry the homework that they left at home.
While many people believe that the summer break should be shorten, a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall because the educators feels that if the break too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall, this is a week argument. Going out with friends but still have to bring paper and pencil to do homework is very humor. Summer break is the only time that allows the student to go back to her country for visiting. The part time work that students make during school year does help but not much for preparing or satisfy the claim inside teenager.
In addition, people want to have a relax time on a long vacation, none of the students want to be thinking that they still have work waiting for them at home and the deadline is coming
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Group work helps foster a sense of collaboration, communication, critical thinking, and problem-solving skills. By participating in group work, students gain the important skills needed to succeed both in and out of the classroom.. Working in a group also encourages students to form meaningful relationships with their peers, which can help ease the transition from school to a professional environment, where team collaboration is vital. They can learn valuable leadership skills, as well as the importance of listening and understanding others' points of view.
Overall, group work is beneficial for students in several aspects.
Working in a group is beneficial for students and life outside of school.
For example, working in a group can teach students the importance of compromise, negotiation and organization when tackling a problem. These skills are invaluable both in and out of the classroom and can help prepare students for entering the workforce
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The communication is important and many cases because with communication you can do many things, like if you don't understand something you can tell somebody for help and all the persons on the groups can practice all days to do a great work,and also some student's need a lot of help so students that know more can join to the groups to help the others,but sometimes is not because some students don't know how to do the work sometimes it because they don't understand sometimes is because the language is a problems for some student's so there is good to make groups to help them,Third it can be an experience to work in groups because some students that don't know each others later on they can be friends and work in groups it can be helpful to students,but also to school because work on groups students can understand more and they can get betters grades also work in groups and a a good relationship it can be helpful not only at the school it can be helpful like in your home with the family and not to get in trouble with their, but also it can help you on your job to work well and not to have problems with the people that you work with,is like on soccer that why it call a soccer team because they help each others they share new or more strategies that it can help others to do a great job because work in groups students have more and betters benefits to do a great job,Finally is good to have a good communication in groups because with a great communication all the the group can understand each others and is important to have a good relationship in the group so like that they can do a better job and some students help others and that is great to be generous with others because if you help to someone that need help other people is going to help you on what you need and is a lot much better to work in group than alone sometimes when you are working alone and you got stuck in something no body is going to help you,but if you are working with more people in group they going to help you on what you need but most of the teachers want's to students work alone sometimes is good that students work alone because sometimes students got distracted for the people on the group and the teachers don't wants students to copy each others sometimes is good to work alone maybe better concentration,but sometimes is not that good to work alone because sometimes you got stuck in somethig, but if you are working with a group they are going to help you i would like to see more teachers that put more student's to work in group i don't think student's would like to work alone than with a group is better an sometimes is more easy and faster
In conclusion, is a great idea for me thats teachers make students to work in groups on my opinion is much helpful to they work in groups instead to work alone,because when people work in groups they have betters ideas and they can do a better work with more interesting and more opinions is better to do a great job and also have a great relationship and a great communication is so important to work in a group and some students know more than others so the students thats know more is good that they help the others on what they need and is good to work in group so like that you can know others people i hope teachers continuing making groups to students can learn more than what they know and work in group it can help you on your life because if you got a job and many people work there too but you don't like to work with others people as a group the boss is going to kick you out only because you don't know how to work as a group and if you only like to work alone it can be a problem if you don't understand work with others people is better always more ideas,opinions like that you can do a better work and it can help your future job and the rest of your life sometimes some student's don't like to work in group's sometimes it because they don't know others people,but i thing if teachers would like to student's work more in groups i thing they would like it and they can have more communication student's would like to work with a group, I like to work with a group because sometimes i don't know what to do so others students help me to do a great work and we all share other.. The greats benefits to work with a group
To work on groups is better for many reasons,everybody can help each others,in groups student's can do a better work,and it can help all the people on the group to learn more skills,it can help students to know each others and be friends, more communications, more ideas and sometimes it can be helpful to work in groups because some students don't know what to do,i thing teachers should let student's to work more on groups so like that they would help each other and work better,and is good to work with a group because that can help you for the rest of your life like on your job also with your family and you con do better and a great job if you work in group
It can be helpful for students to work in group,First, because with more people helping are more and betters ideas and more helpful for every students,and sometimes student's don't know what to do,but if somebody on the group help so he would understand and know how to do a great job and work with a group is much helpful than work alone on many ways like to understand better with communication with your group and it can be helpful so you can do a good work and pass the class and not failed,and work in group it can help you to know others people that are in the same classroom but you never have the oportunity to talk wich their so in the teacher make a group and you can joing to one there is going to be new people and you can know others people
,Second,it is good for student's to work in groups because they can learn more skills such like the communication and they can help each others with the written,and also they can help each others how the way they talk
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By having a positive attitude, people can be better prepared for any situation and have the energy and enthusiasm to stay the course.
Negative thinking can be a huge roadblock to progress and success. Someone with a positive attitude has best chance of succeeding because they believe in their own abilities and the value of their contributions. To maintain a positive attitude, it is important to focus on the present, practice gratitude, and surround oneself with encouraging people.. People who lack a positive attitude often become overwhelmed by obstacles, spend too much time worrying, and don’t take risks. A positive attitude helps to increase motivation, enables better communication with others, and increases productivity.
Having a positive attitude in life is of paramount importance for success. Those who have a positive attitude approach tasks, relationships, and challenges head-on with the knowledge and confidence that they can succeed. Moreover, having a positive attitude in the face of adversity helps to keep morale high and enhances resilience. With a negative attitude, people are more likely to make mistakes, procrastinate, and miss out on opportunities that could lead to success.
It is important to recognize that giving 100% effort towards achieving a goal leads to greater success than giving only 75%
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But also you will come back knowing against what you are figthig with, next time you will be back with a diferent set of mind, with a diferent plan, even with a diferent actittude, and all that because one thing wich all the people says is bad.''Fail''.
but lets be honest, why would somebody fail if you have the chace to be successfull ?, because if you are not going to win and get what you want and are looking for, do not even struggle, stay at home laying donw and watching some series. Its a fact that possitive actitude is the key of succses. That is the key of success.. Not only because you will learn from the mistakes that led you to the failing box. There is a real hungry world with real hungry people out there and if you are just giving the 75 percent it of your capacity it would be just not enougth.
Thats were positive actittude comes up, if you know your value and you are wheling to give the one hundred percent you dont have to worry.
If you are confident and positive you will go for what you are looking fof do not matter who is agaist you, do not matter what the people would say and specially it do not matter the cost of it. In every single thinsg that you made, or every single act that you take, even a small ane like blink if you are not confident in what you are doing, on that i will make it fealling, you will be failing.
That does not mean that fealing is a bad thing because fealing is a important aspec of successes
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One of the most influential quotes of all time, Thomas Jefferson said "Determine never to be idle". Allocating time wisely and making responsible decisions can open up doors to opportunities that may have otherwise been missed. Time wasted and goals not achieved can lead one to feel unmotivated and incomplete. If one chooses to be idle, the effects can be detrimental.
Although it is tempting to think that sometimes it is better to do nothing, doing nothing rarely brings substantial benefits. It is more rewarding and beneficial in the long run to be proactive and take initiative towards what you truly desire. By stepping out of one's comfort zone, new paths open allowing one to become the best version of themselves. Therefore, I agree with Thomas Jefferson's sentiment and believe that it is crucial to be determined and never idle.. By being active and responsible, people can make progress towards the goals they set out to accomplish. To this day, it remains a timeless piece of advice for those looking to make the most of their life
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That is mean if we don't work or study for a vetter life them we are not going to have nothing for .Exaplem if you are
18 or more you have to look for a jod becase you are respomsible for your self because your parents there are not going to give you anything what you want you have to work and buy your own stuff. for exaple I have a lot stuff to do for gratuade from hight school i have to pass my esol and have a good great grade if i don't graduate from hight school that choise i have is to work out side. In my position do work it's some i like to do every day because that's how i learn more stuff. I agree with this prompt becasause it's something posible and if we always doing something.
In my opinion we acomplish more if we are always doing something because some times we have stuff to do for example going to work after school or study after school. This is something posible we can do in us life.
Some may said that to do nothing is better life. Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle" that is mean like some time we are busy. they said that becsause they never think about thre future or maybe they don't want to do nothing in the life and that is not going to work. However, if a want the opportituti to do something in the future the best choie is to study effort my self and go to the college to have a better jod.
people Sometimes they're bussy in keys that is something posible in us life becuse we want to become a good person and resposible in the future that's that way we learn it is easy to do something never give up.. IF we have a park time after school that is something good because you are reciving money for your self and maybe you can help your parent with bills.
Some peoples think that if we don't do something in this life we ca have a vetter remposible. But some time people they don't like to do school work for the reason they think there are not smart
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When students are asked to join a club or participate in certain activities, it can impede their ability to focus on their schoolwork. This ultimately leaves them with less time to spend on their academic courses and can lead to substandard work.
With all these factors in mind, principals should not make students join extra-curricular activities.
It is often argued that schools should make students join extra-curricular activities, but this can have a damaging effect on students. It is up to the students to decide if they would like to join an extra-curricular activity, not the school.. Trying to balance an extra-curricular activity with their usual course of study can be taxing and puts students under tremendous stress. The increased strain on a student’s academic schedule and the strain of anxiety and fatigue can negatively affect a student’s education. Making students join extracurricular activities increases homework burdens and leads to a heightened level of fatigue and stress.
In addition to the increased homework, students may also experience increased levels of fatigue and stress. This, in turn, can lead to increased amounts of homework and less time to do it in. This can lead to poorer academic results, as well as mental and physical health issues
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Those were all of my reason on why the principal shouldn't make students join a other activity espcially if they don't want too.
Overall,I disagree with the principal making students do a other actvity because of homework,losing sleep faster and last but not least is stress. I disagree with the principal saying that all kids should at least join one extracurricum activity because kids have other things to do like homework,they might be already doing a activity and they'll get tired faster if the principal make them do a other activity, and it can contain stress if you don't get it right the first time.
For and foremost, I disagree with the principal saying that all kids should at least join one extracurricum activity because the student have homework to do and I know that i get a lot of homework maybe you do too i also know teachers give kids projects and if the principal makes them do a extra activity then they wont be able to have anytime to do their own things. This is why I say principals shoudn't make students join activies
Secondly, I disagree with the principal because the students will get way more tired faster and did you know that someone in Washington DC, fainted due to the principal making the student do a other activity and thats why the principals shouldn't make students join a other activity because it'll most likely make them get tired faster and what we want is to keep our kids healthy but we can't keep them healthy if the principal makes them join a activity.
Lastly,my last reason is stress, stress can come from a lot of things like work,school,friends,parents,children as you see stress comes from a lot and school stress is a big oe because we all know sometimes our grades go down and when we try to bring them up it gets really stressful and espcially if your pricipal is making you do a other activity that'll make even more stress and multiple studies have shown that a lot of the stress that kids get is from school and other activies. Also studies have shown that making kids do a extra activity can contain a lot of stress and who wants to be stressing I know I don't, and it can also contain kids losing sleep do to the activities if they have homework and a activity to do it'll make the students lose sleep due to the activity and the brain needs a good hours of sleep for it to function well. Those were all of my reasons on why the principal shouldn't mame students do a other activity
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Being at the Art and Performance Center would provide me with an opportunity to see firsthand the beauty of live theater. Although I have seen some incredible performances in the movies and on television, there is nothing like experiencing a live performance in person.
The Art and Performance Center provides a unique experience with its combination of lectures, workshops, and performances. There is something about the stage that has always captured my imagination. I could also take part in a variety of workshop and master classes taught by well-known performers and directors. This would give me invaluable insight into the industry and help me to understand how I could make my career as an actress more successful.
The live performances at the Art and Performance Center would be even more rewarding, as I would be able to witness the effects of hard work and talent first-hand. From getting to take part in hands-on classes and workshops to experiencing the joy of live performances, visiting the Art and Performance Center is an experience that I know would help to fulfill my dreams of becoming an actress.. I could take part in a variety of classes such as acting, playwriting, set design, and even costume design. This would allow me to gain an insider's perspective on the world of theater and discover what opportunities I may have as an actress. From the actors to the directors to the set designers, I would be able to gain insight into the rigorous process involved in putting on a show. Seeing all of the behind-the-scenes work that goes into a performance would give me a greater appreciation for the craft of acting and inspire me to pursue my own dreams of becoming an actress.
In every way, the Art and Performance Center offers an experience that would be invaluable to me as an aspiring actress.
Visiting the Art and Performance Center would be a dream come true for me as someone who has always had a passion for acting
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I know she would be so happy if I become an actress.
Also, the Art and Performance Center has been the place of one of my favorites presentations,"The Rose", the feelings that the esterpians transmit during the hold act are powerful; they make you feel that you are part o the show, or even better, they make you feel that is not a show. When I was littler, I use to participate on local shows every summer, her proud smile and happy tears make me feel that I was on the right place, doing the right thing. . From the backstage to the actual scenario, everything would be a delaitful experience for me.
For all this reasons, I would like to go to the Art and Performance Center, seeing all the components and experiences that brings you the fantastic world of the theater. Imagine myself on that scenario with the lights, music, the public, while I am realizing a magnificent performances is something that makes my feel really grate. Kids play to have different jobs, but I know, since I was a baby, what I want to do. Some students aren't really interested on the place they go, playing around, acting boring, but not me, I am really interesting in this opportunity, in all the special details of the world of preforming arts. The world of the entertainment, in special the theater, is something that always catch my attention, thats why I would like to visit the Art and Performance Center.
The principal reason why I want to go is for my family influences, my grandma has been dreaming about me been an actress. I want to inspire people in the same way that actors inspires me.
My love for the performant arts isn't the unique reason why a should go, I am a respectful and courteous person; a hardworker which goal is to learn everything about arts. I remember going to the theater with her, telling me that her biggest dream is, one day, see me on one of those performances or shows
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Students should be encouraged and informed on the benefits of healthy eating, but ultimately be left to make their own choices.. Children may not like the mandated food, which may result in them feeling deprived.
Furthermore, healthy food is often more expensive than junk food.
In conclusion, mandating a healthy lunch system in schools is not a good idea. The government should take this into account and not enact policies that are likely to cause financial problems for families that may not be able to afford the more expensive, more nutritious food. Healthy food tend to have less flavour and appeal than the junk food that students usually prefer.
When students are forced to eat healthy food, there is no guarantee that the meals are as nutritious and beneficial to their health as parents or authorities tend to believe. The need to consume fresh fruits and vegetables, or balanced and nutritious meals cannot be overemphasized; however, it should not be mandated in the school lunch system, since it takes away the students’ right to choose their own food. Forced consumption of healthy options will have a negative impact on a student’s enjoyment of food and there is a risk of discouragement of a genuine interest to try and explore healthy foods.
Students should not be forced to consume healthy food in the school lunch system
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They will say say it's a good idea because they will consume healthy foods that will make students grow stronger, will have a healthy diet, and be more energized within there life.
That may be true but that's not the case because student are comfortable on what they eat and what suits them will suit there future lifestyle. Students favorite food being replaced by healthy food will be a nightmare to them. They will feel hungry, sick, or possibly pass out. No more pizza, burgers, spaghetti, etc, will be all gone and will cause a problem. He will lose focus and will start begging for food. He never ate salad before but sees a lot of vegetables including lettuce, tomatos, onions, etc. For example, Generic_Name came back to class from lunch and he didn't eat anything because of the food that was serve. While doing class work, Generic_Name doesn't feel well and his stomach starts to growl because he didn't eat anything. Imagine going to school everyday to learn and experience new things, when it comes to lunch, students are ready to eat and enjoy there favorite food with others but the principal made an announcement about changing the lunch system by getting rid of junk foods to healthy foods. For example, Generic_Name goes to lunch and sees the only food aviliable is a salad. The principal should not make these changes and keep the system of lunch the same because there body will be in good shape and will gain energy through out the day.
Some people will disagree my reasoning and opinion on changing the school food system to healthier ones is a bad idea. He feels disgusted by the food he was serve and rather starve. What I mean by that is students in class will feel hungry and there stomach will soon to growl and will lose focus on class instructions. Removing students favorite food to healtheir ones will be a bad idea. Thus, changing students favorite food to healthy ones in lunch is a bad idea.. What I mean is that students being served to vegetables which they won't take a bite of, won't make them eat because they don't enjoy eating vegetables that was served to them and might get student to not eat but starve which will be bad to there body.
Additionally, the students will be in bad shape during class time. Students will dislike eating healthy food, and students will feel hunger and lose concentration in class.
Firstly, Some students will dislike some healthy food that they don't enjoy
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Remaining optimistic and maintaining a positive outlook in “times of need” is essential for one’s emotional well-being and capacity to persevere. A negative attitude can prevent one from prospering, as it can give rise to feelings of doubt, insecurity, and helplessness. Having a positive attitude can help individuals to take on obstacles with enthusiasm and resilience. In the workplace, having a positive attitude can help to motivate, innovate, problem-solve, and lift the spirits of colleagues. A positive attitude is also especially beneficial during “times of need”, when one must face personal life crises with courage.
Having a positive attitude in life is incredibly significant to personal success. Ultimately, having a positive attitude leads to personal success, self-confidence, and a willingness to take risks, making it an invaluable asset for anyone seeking growth and progress in life.
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How can you have the biggest expectations in life when you are so dull and negative. Feelings are always temporary and you need to always make sure that the positive things impact you the most. There are so many other thing you could and should be thinking about, the little this matter in this life. If you stay in the mindset of " i cant do this," "this is too hard." You will never see yourself prosper and grow. . Those are the little things that matter.
Lastly , in your " time of need" you should always be more optimistic. I agree, I think its nessasary to have a positive attitude in your everyday life , in your work place, in your "time of need." those are the most important times you will need to show your best.
First , I think its important to have a positive attitude in your everyday life because, of the stress that goes on. Think about the little things in life , you have a roof over your head, your family is safe, you are safe. To advance you need to be aware that everything is going to be okay, be reminded of that.
Secondly, your work place always has to stay positive. You can do the impossible it will just be up to you to change your circle.
Although, there are many people who live in doubt and build this wall of negativity in there life. No one will understand how you feel other than you. Its been said that a positive attitude is key to success in life. If you set your self as the person who puts too much on themselves, you will never see growth. Whenever you are feeling down and feel like your world is falling apart be aware that your surroundings should never bring you negativity. This is the place you go to work in , this is a place you try to distract yourself from the rest of the world. You never go a day without eating. You cannot be that person. Greater things are to come in everyone life.
In conclusion, being positive in many ways will always change your mindset . If you set your self to a person who feels as if they cant do anything then you will never reach that promotion youve been waiting for. Positive attitudes are key to a better future and for the best success in your life
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Summer classes are an option for those looking to graduate early, but it is important to weigh the reasons one might not want to take courses during the summer, such as exhaustion from taking classes during the school year or wanting to pursue other interests such as a job or a summer internship.
Graduating high school in four or three years has potential advantages and drawbacks that must be considered when making the decision to pursue the shortened schedule. Electives may include art, music, foreign language, and other courses not typically part of the traditional curriculum.
Additional factors influencing student decisions include working to save money for college and the cost of supplies such as textbooks. These classes may have an advantage in terms of helping a student stand out in the college application process.
Elective classes are a great way to round out a high school educational experience. Graduating high school early could ease the financial burden, but the amount of coursework students may miss could have a negative impact on their college readiness. Ultimately, students must consider potential financial, time, and educational implications when determining how valuable an early graduation timeline will be for their academic future.
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They're some family who love traveling with they're kids.
Most of the students want to take a elective courses but not in summer. I believe that schools should allow the students to graduate in traitional four years,
instead of three years because If some of the student faill the class or the SOL, they should a time to retake those classess they faill. I think it's head for some of the student to work and graduate in three years instead of four years. Most of the students dont what to take a courses during the summers. Some students want to take a elective courses in schools not in summers chas as a art, muise, and language they want.
I personily believe students graduate in four years because they will have time to retake a class or SOL if they need to do. Couses whay want to take is art, muise, and language they want. . They don't want to work for schools on summers. Some of the elective courese that students take can help them find out what they like or dislike.
Overall my position on this issue is that schools should offer a four years hight schools, instead of three years because it's can hlpe students to get ready for college and work. Some students work and save some money for college. Some of the classes that students take as a elective courese can help them in college or in work force. The most immopat think is that if the students faill a class they can't graduate the hight schools befor they pass the class they faill.
Most of the student's don't want to take a courses during the summer because they want to have free time , they don't want to work on summers
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To overcome this, group members should be mindful of giving each other space and voice, and be open to productive feedback and compromise. For example, a group of students working on a school project can divide the work into manageable amounts, with each member of the group having their own task and accountability for its completion. These skills can prove to be invaluable both in and out of the classroom, as they can improve interactions, communication, and teamwork abilities in other aspects of life.
Though working in groups can offer these benefits, it can also pose potential challenges. In terms of academics, working in groups promotes the sharing of ideas and resources, which can improve the quality of the work being done and reduce the overall burden of tasks.
Group collaboration can offer a number of benefits both academically and socially. Students can form relationships with their peers and learn how to work effectively as a team. By fostering communication and understanding within the group, and by establishing expectations and roles, the members of a group can work together effectively to complete a project with the best possible results.. Additionally, establishing clear expectations, goals, and deadlines for the project, and assigning clear roles to each group member, can help ensure that everyone is on the same page and that all tasks are completed on time. Not every group member is capable of putting in an equal amount of effort, and a lack of respect for one another’s contributions can lead to inefficiencies or delays in completing the projects.
In conclusion, working in groups can offer both academic and social benefits, but challenges can arise if adequate measures are not taken to ensure everyone is working together efficiently and respectfully. By doing this, the overall project can be completed much more efficiently than if each student was working on their own.
Socially, working in groups can allow for the development of relationships and networking opportunities
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I think that work in groups is more benefit. And the last one can make the presentation and make the work creative.
Second, In groups can take less time to work on it that working alone. The other two can be checking that the writing is good and that the information is good. First, work in group can be a good for class because they can know each other. Second, In a group decide what to do it can be hard. Here are some reason why
I think that work in groups is benefit.
First, They can divide the work in same parts. therefore, work in groups is benefit for students and teacher. If a class is works more successfully that makes the topic easy and knowing each other makes the class more understanding. also, the students can know each other and they can meet new people. Second, They have more opportunity to have a better work. Also, they can search for information more faster then alone because they can divide the work but they can also help each other. For example, if one student can't understand the topic he can ask for help to the teacher and he can ask to people around hem for help.
In conclusion, work as a group is funny and make the class better. Because work is groups make the class successful. If the class work in group they can do much better in the work that working alone because they can do the work more easily by working as a team. While someone is working in searching information the other one can think in how to make the work more creative. The group can check if the work is good or not and decide either to keep the information o to make some changes. Also, it makes the students to do better workers and meet people. therefore, I think that work will be better in groups because the class can meet and know each other and they can be better person and better students. For example, If the class works in groups of 4 they can do a good work by dividing the work in same parts like one can be searching for information the other one can be looking for imagines. If the class meet each other the class can be more successful. And, It will make the class more fun because everyone can help each other in thing that are hard for people. Also, if they divide the work is more fair for the group so they can have more opportunity to work successfully. Because there will not fight or enmity so the class can work more successfully. If a group meet in one place and they start working they can easily finish the work on time. So, the group can have more opportunity to have a better grade.
Third, Work as a group can also be fun because you are working with your friends or you can met new people. But when the group decide what to do and they finish the work fast. This are some reasons why a think that work in groups is better.
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Older students have an opportunity to help younger students reach their academic goals by volunteering their time through a special program. The program offers a variety of activities, from board games and reading to sports, as well as a chance for older students to assist younger students in reviewing notes for tests such as the SOLs. With the help of older volunteers, youth in this program will become better prepared to take their studies to the next level.
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Younger students who want to pick sports is fine as well, Older students can support or encourage younger students to do what they want. Older students can review things in the year for younger students to remember the key things or notes for the SOL's. . Older and younger students can play board games or read a book to help them get better with their English and writing skills.
Play outside basketball, soccer, football, etc just to have fun and waste that energy. Then younger students won't have to fail the SOL because they have the knowledge to surpass the test. Younger students won't have to deal with their assignments being due because they already turned it in. This program is helpful for younger students because it would get work accomplished with the presence of the older student. This program will help younger students study with assistance by the older students to get a high grade in tests or quiz. Younger students with knowledge can get past Elementary, Middle, and High school and get that degree to College leading them to jobs they need or want in the future. Older students that volunteer helping younger students would make younger students feel more at ease
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A professional career is one of the highest forms of responsibility and can come with a tremendous amount of pressure.
Having a professional career is essential to living a successful and meaningful life. Students must remain fully aware of their personal goals and take ownership of their career in order to guarantee success and a happy future, both for themselves and their families. If a student fails to meet their obligations, whether due to lack of knowledge or a simple lack of dedication, it can lead to severe repercussions.
Overall, a professional career is on the utmost importance and comes with its own set of unique responsibilities. Students should also stay aware of the risks associated with neglecting their responsibilities. In order for this to happen, students must take full responsibility for their professional journey. It is important that students pay close attention to what they’re doing and take all the necessary steps to pursue their professional aspirations.
However, it is not enough to merely pursue and secure a professional career. Only through diligence and hard work can a student truly realize their full potential and reach their highest aspirations.. Most importantly, it can bring happiness not only to the individual but to the family as well
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And i thing is a good ideas for students because the students has to possibility, about a caeer in the life about he , and in the school help the students about that he want to a caeer in the life for put happy on the family and he.
Paragrap: That is very good for the students, because he want to do it that is your responsability in all your job because is a agreer, waht you take for you life in the caeer is good because your family help on you and all family help for you caeer.
Conclucion: If you want to do it a caeer, in your life is fine for you and help in the caeer about you job.. If you should be want to do it a profesional, in your life is fine for you.
My ideas however about this career.
More tecnology, is good because in your life to help, for your family, if i am agree.
The ideas some time are bad. because you not undesrtan, if you already for the not is good.
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.is important that, because help in your life are a career and the family put happynes about your caeer but you pay attention if you not pay attention you can not power, the something you has to possebilty in your life for learning to much something about your caeer.
.That is good, because you help on the family in the life the students, has to responssibility about that because is your responssibility because is your caeer.
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Many successful people have achieved their success, in part, from having a positive attitude. Oprah Winfrey, another inspiring example, credits her abundant success to her decision to never doubt herself and to always think positively. . Studies have shown that positivity not only helps boost morale and productivity, but can also affect outcomes in the situations mentioned above. These stories exemplify how having a positive attitude can have a positive impact on one's life in a variety of ways.
Having a positive attitude is essential to success in many aspects of life, including school, relationships, and dealing with difficult obstacles in life. In addition, when faced with difficult obstacles, those with a positive attitude can better recognize potential solutions and navigate their way to a better outcome. For instance, research has shown that students who have a more positive outlook on their academic performance tend to receive higher grades and do better on tests than those with a negative attitude. For example, Apple co-founder, Steve Jobs, is known for his unwavering optimism, which helped him push through the difficult times during Apple’s early years and eventually led to great success. In relationships, having a positive attitude encourages positive interactions between two people, resulting in better communication and a stronger bond
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Instead of being hard head i stayed positive learn English really fast and started to start feeling more comfortable in America. Is important to not loose our cool and have the type of attitude that everything is going to turn out great at the end of the day.
Having a positive attitude when it come to school can be a way to cope with all your assignments, teachers and schoolmates. For example, when it comes to school, significant others and obstacles that life may throw at us. I agree that having a positive attitude is the key to being successful in life. . We all have them phase that we go through and we feel like we cant keep moving forward but why stand in the same place with that same negative attitude is going to prevent you from wanting or doing more. I believe that having a positive attitude is the key to being successful in life because you viewing life on a whole other level all you see is good things coming your way and the nothing can get in between of your dreams and if you was to fall you going to pick yourself right back up and start again.
In conclusion being able to wake up every morning and thank God for another day and pray that things are going to turn out better than yesterday is an important skill to have in this world we call life. We all go through so much and the only way to get through is having a positive attitude that things well turn out better than yesterday.
Others would say that you dont have to have a positive attitude in life to be successful because they probably dont have self confidence, someone around to give them hope or have giving up on their self to many times. Especially being a teenager people thing is not difficult to wake up every morning 6 or 7 AM and deal with people's attitude and also having to worry about the amount of work the teachers give out to students and then going home to do chorus is something that teenager are capable of doing, but adults don't take that time to think that they was teens back in the 60s where life isn't easy but when it comes to school rules have change. Now we must pass SOLs to graduate but, a person who stays positive believes in there self makes it easy for their self to get through what's stop you from being happy.
Everyone in life have to deal with different types of obstacles physically and mentally. I believe is important to have a positive attitude because having a positive attitude can open doors to different phase in life. I also was thinking of families back home and how i cant let them down, because they would love an opportunity like this to have a free education and being able to make it to the 12 grade. For example when i came to America I thought my life was over learning a whole different language and also trying to adapt to whole new country a whole different environment would be hard for me
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