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[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should books offensive removed library shelves Some books library offensive people books removed shelves I personally nt think books removed Some people think books need removed nt What choice difficult question First I said I nt think books removed people like opinion These books removed offensive people If another finds book offensive person ignore book asked taken shelf someone else might want read book taken shelf person ca nt read book It nt fair take books shelf someone finds book offensive Any person finds book offensive ignore read book That book offensive someone nt directed authors opinion nt matter Second everyones opinion different Some people want books shelves people nt So gets way little arguement I think books stay shelves One person find book offensive next person Other people even read offensive book But matter book read nt taken shelf nt fair people actually want read book Lastly everyone enjoys different book themes If nt like theme book reading If nt like book find offensive go choose another book Do nt make people ca nt read book like kind themes You would nt like happened No one would like Just pick book theme like So see I nt think fair books get taken shelf people find book offensive Some people like theme book story Some people different opinions book means something different And someone finds book offensive nt mean taken shelf nt fair people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features nearby setting affect cyclist bad way The four main things affect heat lack water lack nearby buildings For cyclist one biggest problems heat He says travelling high deserts California June shows quite hot outside month stated June quite hot month especially deserts The second problem cyclist lack water He says throughout story thirsty much needs drink water When reaches end however finds water The third problem needs water cant find anywhere due lack buildings He pedals great distances trying find towns nearby Once finds either ghost towns useful The final problem faces He says At point tumbleweeds crossed path ridiculously large snake blocked majority pavement front me getting way helping reach destination Truly features nearby setting affecting tramatizing way many things like heat lack water buildings inches way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper I feel though internet computers act advantage sosiety rather problem They help school work like projects email You even take college online People also use internet media simply catch friends One important reasons computer school orenented reasons Like project need get notes making power poin presentation One great reson teachers There computers help teach class way fun easy undersand The new uprizing computer use brought new ways getting college degree Now even simply get bed turn lap top take college classes right computer I dont know guy s I d much rather take college comfort home drive campus time Another great use internet email email makes lives lot easier people use It send us school starts like early dismiste way catch old highschool frends Another great reson internet mention fun relax people computers use media fun reasons like gamelry go youtube Please add article news paper computer put helping add something going make whole world obise thats computers Its people use computers felt dont get exercise computers So put bad way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years ago something strange happened on mars. People may have heard about \"The Face on Mars\" and thinked that it was formed by alien life. Scientists believed the face was an alien artifact . It actually was not. Scientists from NASA say that it was either a butte or mesa-landforms common in the american west. This subject today is still a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film , appeared in books and magazines , radio talk shows and it even haunted grocery stores checkout lines for 25 years. After that , everyone was not satisfied. The face on mars is located at 41 degrees north and was winter in april 1998 - a cloudy time of year. The camera had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. People say it is not a a natural landform , they think it was from alien matter wich is not true because NASA explained in the article that it was just a Martian mesa. It was common around Cyodonia. So once the scientists sent pictures to us ,over time you can see the \"face\" fades out over time. This means that it did have formed shadows giving illusions of the eyes , mouth , and nose. To conclude it was not a face-- it was a Mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting big impact cyclist When started ride confident old timers right directions roads take get Yosemite National Park Though sun bearing refused give says The sun beginning beat I hardy noticed He came places worn deserted knew alone anything happened The desert heat made water pretty regularly tried get I got hands knees When l tried drop two flavor battery acid paragraph He thirsty would drink hot water Then thought miles go kept going He weakening pedaled along changing terrain trying keep balance dehydrated state With little energy last passed abandoned Well Grape Juice factory probably tested patience sanity He resorted gathered pebbles stuck mouth keep mind thirst He losing hope came upon Gary wilbers fish camp best bet felt relieved able get cool water By s learned lesson stick map", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "wouldnt know would faceing rider road something bad might happen bike one bikes wheels might fall bick would set tired cant go might give", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think Luke's point of view of convincing people to go on a Seagoing Cowboy trip. The text states Luke joined the program is it was a once in a lifetime opporortunity. The text states,Luke said why would I pass this up this is anopporortunity of a lifetime. The text alo states, he said being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for him it opened up the world to him. Another thing Luke said is. \"It makes people moreof the other countries in need. The text states,the cattle boat trip is an unbeliveable opportnity for a small town boy. The text also states,Luke said that awareness stayed with him leading his familly to host a numberofinternational students and exchange visitors for many years. The text also states,Luke found time to have fun on board, especially on the return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Another thing Luke said is he was so grateful for the opportunity. The text states,Luke got to see all these different countries like china,and Europe. The text also states that Luke got to tour an excavated castle in Crete. Another thing that Luke said is sometimes you won't no when it will happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The table compares the changes in the number of international travelers in different regions in the years of 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. It is clear that the total number of international travelers increased in the given 15 year period. However, the increase was the most marked from 1990 to 1995. In the given statistics, Europeans are the ones who like to travel the most and the middle east is the place where least people went for trips internationally. While Africa and Asia and the Pacific experienced a similar increasing trend of travellers from 1995 to 2005. In America, people showed a great willingness to travel abroad between 1990 to 1995. But, then the number stayed more or less at the same level till 2005. Likewise, Europe also experienced a significant increase from 1990 to 2000 in travelling abroad. But, after 1995, there was an increase of around 10 million only. Overall, Europe contributed the most in overseas travel, whereas the Middle East had the least share of overseas travelers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon describes safety laws nature three main obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Safety greatest reason dirigibles could docked The biggest safety hazard many countries outside use hydrogen dirigibles instead helium A German dirigible recently destroyed fire New Jersey hydrogen highly flammable CAPS The builders Empire State building realized accident would far worse occurred densely populated area downtown New York CAPS docking dirigibles run risk could happen Nature another big obstacle hindered success mooring mast Violent air currents top Empire State Building always causing winds change front dirigibles tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around CAPS They could use lead weights weigh back like used open fields weights hanging pedestrians street neither practical safe CAPS Nature major obstacle could changed easy way fix issues caused The last obstacle existing law prevented airships flying low urban areas CAPS This law made illegal ship approach area tie building huge obstacle impossible get around The obstacles safety laws nature builders Empire State Building faced made impossible dock dirigibles moore mast building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think that this Face is an alien, I believe it's really a natural landform. I believe it's a natural landform because we have never seen an alien before, therefore we have no proof, this \"Face\" has changed over the years, which landforms do, and how would've the aliens survived, and shouldn't there be more alien faces if this actually was one? These three things show that the Face was just a landform. First off, nobody on this Earth has living proof of an alien. Yes, there have been several theories, and beliefs that there really are aliens. I think that if there was ever an alien, we would've known about it, and we would have proof. There could be aliens living on another planet, but as far as we know there aren't. We have never taken a picture of a real alien. NASA has taken pictures of this \"Face\", but all of them turned out to be natural landforms. Even though the pictures can look like a face, they always turn out not being one. They tried several times to get better pictures of this landform, and every time, it was not an alien. Until we get proof of a living alien, nobody will fully believe that they do exist. WIthout any proof, there is no sense in trying to get others to believe you. Secondly, the face didn't just appear one day. It had to have formed for it to look like what it does. Landforms can take years to actually get their shape and looks, and I think that's what this Face did. Scientists said that it looks like ladforms common around the American West. They said that it reminded them of MIddle Butte in the Snake River of Plain Idaho. I think that if it was an alien it would've popped up one day, and it would've been very defined. In all of the pictures I've seen, none of the faces were extremely defined, and therefore there was no actual evidence of a face. Honestly, anything that has formed has the capability of looking somewhat like a face, or at least have a few similarities. I know that object is going to erode away, but this landform keeps loooking less and less like a face. Landforms change drastically because of the weather and conditions they are in, and that's exactly what this Face has done. Lastly, the weather conditions on Mars are not possible to live in, and if there was one face, shouldn't there be more? I don't see how an \"alien\" could possibly survive on Mars. There are no supplies and there is obviously no other life. If aliens are a real thing, they are most likely going to be built similarly to humans, and we can't live on Mars. I also don't see how they could've gotten there, when once again, there's no other life. I think that if there were other faces that I would consider this Face to be an actual face. There is no explanation to how this face even got there, and we can't explain it either. I don't think that it's remotely possible for this creature to survive on Mars, and if it did there has to be more like itself. In conclusion, I believe there is no possible way for it to be an alien. We have never seen an actual alien, so we have zero proof, the \"Face\" has changed over the years, and so do landforms, and how did this creature survive, and if it did there should be more of it's own. We don't even know what a real alien looks like, so we can't say it is one. These reasons show that this Face, it is just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As another fellow car safety person, I am against the making and developing of these \"Driverless cars.\" The reasons I have are good reasons and are resonable reasons as to why anyone would be against such cars. Firstly, Making these cars are just going to end up causing the \"driver\" of the car to forget how to drive, because the driver is going to be so relaxed to not driving him or herself. Eventually when the time does come and they do end up having to manually drive themselves because the car cannot, the \"driver\" is just going to be confused as to why the car does not function to their liking. My second reason is because cars are machines, and there is ALWAYS going to be a fault somewhere in the machine. No one wants to risk knowing that their life could be in danger because their \"Driverless car\" failed to deliver a message from its sensor to them saying \"Hey watch out there is a car crash ahead!\" or \"Hey look out for that car or person behind you!\" My Last reason is just because your not driving the car and the car can drive you does not mean that the drinking law does not apply to you! So do not try and twist the laws to make it sound reasonable enough for you to be able to go do wrong doings in life. At some point in time you are going to probably have to drive yourself because the car won't be able to, but this time you are going to be drunk! Now what are you going to do? You can drive the car, but it will be the dumbest and the worst decision you will ever make. These are the reasons as to why it is important for the people who are going to drive cars and the poeple who are driving cars must stay driving cars manually and not just have some computer machine do it for you. When you drive a car you learn about many different lessons in life that will eventually improve your driving skills on there own. There is no need for you to succumb to having someone else drive you. There is only the need to better YOURSELF not the other way around.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At present,visitors should take responsibility for protecting the culture and environment of the resort they travelled to, but this suggestion is too impossible to keep.In my view,I strongly believe that it is possible to be a responsible tourist ,even though it is very difficult. I will prove my opinion by introducing the efforts that government can make and illustrating the role that technology can play in informing the local culture. On the one hand, visitors are more likely to be responsible visitors as long as the local government can actively launch policies on the environmental preservation aspect. For example, the harsh stripe penalty in Singapore ensures a clean environment in the city, because no one dares to litter around casually. Another similar example can be found in China. Chinese government releases a regulation about littering that anyone, including visitors, who violates the rule may pay a 100 yuan fine. Thus,this government policy forced visitors to take the responsibility for environmental protection as they are travelling. On the other hand, how culture is prevented depends on the visitors’ awareness,because they might destroy the local culture unconsciously if they do not have an access to local culture. However, nowadays,this error is less common due to the development of technology. For , example,visitors can search the local history and culture on the internet before they travel to that place and watch a documentary about their destination. Therefore,the technology provides a channel for visitors to learn about the local culture and it raises their awareness of culture preservation. In , conclusion,Because of the supervision from the local government in tourism and the help that is provided by technology,I believe it is possible to be a responsible tourist and they should pay attention to the conservation of the environment and culture", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear A recent study scientists shows much sitting especially front computers dagerous health This one reason I think although useful computers entirely beneficial society The hinder us excersising interacting nature spending time family friends Excercising know necessary remain fit health human But possible people going work everyday getting shut offices computers day Too much computer time even kids lead obesity overweightness Also like I mentioned scientists concluded asked much sitting bad It nt body built work If seen wave one recent movies undertaking easy The humans movie relying computers long became obese fat muscle This course minor visions going around world Going instead sitting computer sure way healthy The next thing computers restrict us ability experience nature Even simulations nt cut If wanted see frog animal ca nt look real Developing connection nature really nurture use ill Instead exploring computer explore world know s re old Learn somthing Instead hiring someone make make Do learn sit computer website hire someone Get get outside As become dependent computer become less dependent family friends It causes lift family members Your family might able help re need If re adult re computer time something work supporting family income life future Why would anyone Imagine You nothing except laptop You re family relations Nobody wants kind loser living streets You nobody nothing except computer ve wasted life away Too much time computer means everyone suffers To sum computers maybe every single cloud dark lining Computers stop us exercising interacting nature families So get outside", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face is just a natural landform. As the old photographs of it might have looked like as if it was made by aliens. The new photograph of the Face just shows a regular landform due to the higher resolution. The media is just trying to make you believe that it is an alien monument. At that time, they didn't' really what know what it was exactly. I am here to prove you that the Face is just a natural landform. If the Face is an alien monument, there could have been mysterious looking structures on the monument. The Face is just a butte or a mesa as it was said by scientist Garvin that it reminded him of a butte in Idaho. The 2001 image of the Face doesn't show anything phenomonal, it is just a simple landform. According to NASA, the shadows just give the landform a face. As for my last evidence, Michael Malin and his team took a sharp photo of the Face explicitly revealing that it is just a landform. As the old photographs suggests that it is something made by the aliens, it is not. It is just a landform based on the newer photograph. A scientist claimed that the Face is either a mesa or a butte which reminded him of a butte he saw before. As it is popular within the media, no one knows what it is. Later on, a group of scientists took a sharper photograph of the Face and confirmed that it is just a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries books magizines movies ectThe library wonderful place read quite placeIt also offensive place peopleThey think complane bikker But activities removed library shelves But whose oppenion anyways If I found offensive book movie magizine shelf library I would leave Apparently bad thing wouldnt shelf So I got offensive I wouldnt look pick I mean simpleA library full well everything would enjoy Many diffrent people like diffrent books movies read watch means library right put ever want Even offensive people With experences library nothing came across offensive Im kind person dose nt care However I seeen books ware author making fun people Also seen book ware author writting black people used treated book witch major racism black people It could unfair situation people kids inapropreate book shelf see That could offensive children parents Or could even magizine But books magizines ect tooken shelfs effensive people If libraians took offensive books shelves would nt left Everyone diffrent things offend If dont like book take friend read turn back library You also talk library manager tell issue offensive given Books movies magizines ect library They could offensive If think dont look read Its simple get dont", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus sometimes is called the \"Evenning Star.\" Its one of the highest points of light on the sky. Venus is actually a planet and not a star. Venus is the closeest planet to earth such as its density, size, and sometimes distance too. The author states that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. One of the things that Venus is dangerous becasue of its thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets the planet. The danger of this is that the clouds are made up of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The acid can nearly kill you if there is a little bit touching you in any shape or form. Otherwise, Earth surface is on a average of over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times that what we have on our planet. In conclusion Venus is very dangerous for any kind to be on, such as animals or humans. Although the plant is pretty hot its not good to be on it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke wanted to work at a Grocery store and a Bank but he did not know his life was going to change after he got out, of \"High School\". but instead of that a freind named Don Reist, Invited luke to go to, Europe\" on a cattle boat\".Luke did not wan't to decline because he knew it was once in a life time thing so he choose to go.In 1945 World War II, was over there were alot of people recovering and trying to get there food supplies. Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, wich meat he could somehow be sent to go serve in the Military, something that was not on a wan't to do list so hopeing that would not happen.1947, that was lukes, nine trip and all the trips were decent besides the 2nd one he thought all them were great and took so many mounths to actually arrive, somewere but lukes 2nd trip. He slide down and the men start comming out helping, luke becuase he was hurting himself at the same time trying to save himself so the men pulled luke up, luke was thankful to be alive right now if it was not for them men, who knows what would happen luke did have a broken rib so he needed to rest. Luke liked helping out his aunt, farm when luke retuned he seen people playing boxing, fenceing, and tenis, and more but being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for luke Bomberger. It made me aware of people of other contries and there needs that they starve and need food after war and no freedom he just thought what was all going to happen when was this War, going to end but as he usually dose is stay with his family and make sure there aware of something and he will always help them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When construction Mooring Mast Empire State Building completed builders began face problems apparent begining Some problems faced law US doesnt let aircraft fly close around cities buildings This meant would nt able blimps tethered mast anyway The highly violent constantly changing weather wind also posed problem would blowing blimp everywhere could weighed lead blocks like land would nt safe hang city With winds crazy blimp filled hydrogen could punctured set ablaze following towards people ground With obvious problems would think would nt attempted obsticles never overcome mooring mast still sits unused", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic issue of human activities has been controversial. Some people believe that it is too late to do anything , whereas I agree with those who think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. On the one hand, it is commonly believed that Some people say that it is too late to do anything The most important reason is that We can not solve this problem anymore since we deforest or make many animals extinct. For example, according to the latest research conducted by Bangkok University, it was revealed that 80% of trees in Thailand were cut by businessmen and this act have an impact on animals living in the wild very much such as the black tiger , Nowadays, It extincted, we can't recovery it is alive. This example shows human acting plays a major role in plants and animals On the other hand, it seems to me that we should take effective action to improve the situation. The most significant reason is the fact that we can reduce this issue. This is because we can make trees or other plants grow. To illustrate this, in recent news, it has been reported that Most of the people in Australia set a campaign to plant trees or supervise all species including nearly extinct or neither.I agree with this point because we can do everything to be good or decline an effect from ourselves . In conclusion, having considered both sides of this issue , although some people say that it is too late to do anything , I agree with those who should take effective action to improve the situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do you believe the face was created by aliens? When looking at this image, you can think about that at first but if you believe it immediately, then there is something wrong about that. I will explain to you why the face was not created by aliens though i will also explain why someone may believe that. The face is an image we found in 2001 that was taken by our Viking 1 spacecraft that was circling the Mars. The face is an area of land on Mars that has the illusion of a face. The illusion of the face comes from the shadows making the land look like it has a nose, eyes, and a mouth that resembles a human face. It was a surprise for most people here at NASA but we didn't believe it was alien works immediately because we didn't have any real evidence of it. It just so happened to be a patch of land that looked like a face. We couldn't say it was made by aliens because we needed proof of that and we haven't studied Mars' enough to prove that aliens made the face. We know Mars is similar to Earth but it's still a different planet in our solar system. Although we hoped it might've been an alien civilization, we studied the face more and it was simply a landform similar to a mesa or butte of our world. Even though we know it was just a landform, there are reasons we could see people saying it might've been made by aliens. We know Mars is able to sustain life because of it's conditions and there has been few deposits of water found there, but we have never found an actual living species on the planet itself. We as humans still don't know if aliens live on Mars or if aliens from other worlds exist at all. Many people believe there are aliens from other planets and some don't really care about the subject at all but it is possible that there's life on other planets. Because we haven't figured out if Mars has life, people believe the strange and convinient findings on Mars (like the face) are works of alien beings. Although we have confirmed the face was not a work of aliens, we still don't know if aliens exist. We can conclude that the face is not the work of aliens but there just might be unearthly beings on our neighboring planet, Mars. Before we can confirm there are alien beings on Mars, we would need evidence to explain they do exist at all. But we can conclude, the face is not made by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I nt think magazine taken shelves someone offended People get offended time see trying get ever made fell like I offended cartoons nt see crying suck go life Cartman tv show offensive characters show He uses every offensive language known mankind He makes fun racees says hates everyone equally But still ca nt stop like trying get dog cat wont happen It also like trying get rid racecism That I think finding something offencive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author says that after studying Venus it's a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because many people call Venus Earth's \"twin\", it's the closest planet to Earth in the term of density and size, and it's closest in distance also. Many humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus a cloud-draped world. But many spacecrafts that land don't last anything but a few hours. Venus has an atmosphere of 97% of carbon dioxide blankets, the clouds are high of corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere, and the atmosphereic pressure os 90 times grater than Earth. Venus is the hottest surface temperatures in our solar system. A very long time ago many astronomers think that Venus was once covered in oceans that could have have life like Earth today. NASA has on compelling idea to send humans to Venus to study, but they are conersered by floating 30 miles above the planet. Venus's temperatures are 170 degrees Fahrenheit. Since most forms of light cannot be found it effects the standreds forms of phototgraphy and videography. In order for humans to take samples of rock and actually study Venus would have to get close and personal.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present world, people are likely to give birth to their young one's when they are of age. Although having children during old age might come with some complications, it helps the parents to be financially and psychologically ready for it, which I believe outweighs the disadvantages as the complications can be corrected with adequate medical intervention. However, a lack of preparedness can lead to mental damage to both parents and their children. Firstly,having children at later age helps the parent to prepare for the child both financially and psychologically.They have worked so hard and has enough to meet the need of their children.They are able to spend quality time with their offspring and monitor them appropriately.Although having kids at later age comes with some challenges but with adequate medical care it can be corrected.For instance,couples in their early 40’s came to the antenatal clinic.During physical examinations, the result shows that the mother is at risk of high pregnancy which might lead to inter-uterine fetal death.With proper medication and attention,she was able to deliver safely without any problem. However,young couples who decided to give birth early without adequate knowledge of what parenting is may find it difficult to take good care of their children.For example, Ade's parents gave birth to him in their early 20’s.They find it difficult to take good care of him.They are not able to provide some of his basic needs.This prompted Ade to join a bad gang in school.He was later dismissed from school. In conclusion,parents should be ready both financially and psychologically before giving birth in order to satisfy their basic needs.Giving birth in old age has some complications but with adequate medical intervention, it can be corrected.With these points stated above I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we should change the electoral college to the popular vote for many reasons. I think that the electoral college causes alot of disgreements and agruements. I think we should do this for every election not just the election of the United States of Americas President. I dont think its fair that some states get more votes than another states. We should all be equal like the George washington wanted us to be as he and many others signed the US Constition and The Declartion of Independence. Like Cali. has 55 electrolal votes and wyoming has like 4 how does that make them feel. If one President is like by the whole nation then he should become president no doubt. Just because someone else get more elctoral votes but isnt the popular why should he be President. Like one candiate could get 10 states that are voting for him but their only states with 4 votes then the other candidate gets californa even the other half of californa doesnt want him. He wins because winner takes all and that 55 to his 10 sates which equals 40.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes Winter Hibiscus paragraph continues theme adjusting changes life In story Saeng come United States Vietnam quite change Also changed plants The hibiscus reminds Saeng Vietnam different The mother story says Its flowers arent pretty its strong enough make cold winter months winter hibiscus The hibiscus also relates theme able adjust changes The final paragraph talks snow melting geese returning hibiscus budding These changes author uses connect theme This adds understanding storys message Additionally tone last paragraph hopeful gives reader positive feeling The tone adds theme story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was not created by aliens. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft spotted a shadowy likeness of a face. Scientists figured it was another Martian mesa. MGS flew over Cydonia for the first time on April 5, 1998. Michael Malin and his MOC captured a photo ten times sharper than the orginial photo. The image appeared on a JPL website which revealed it was just a natural landform. That meaning there was no alien monument. The pictre shows the Martian equivalent to a butte or mesa which are landforms common around the American West. It reminds Garvin of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. It is a lava dome which takes place of an isolated mesa, the lava dome is about the same height of the Face on Mars In conclusion the Face on Mars was not created by aliens or any other life form. It was a natural occurance on the surface and the shadows from the sunlight created spots on the \"Face\" to look like an egyptian pharoah. Therefore the Face on Mars was not created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a huge development in the transport system in the last few years. Folks are opting for automobiles in some urban areas, while in others, the public is preferring bikes over cars. There are numerous causes behind this trend, which will be discussed in my subsequent crumb of writing and I will also explain why I think cycles are a better method of commuting. To begin with, motor vehicles are utilized in countries, where people have good quality road systems with proper urban planning. However, this could be lacking in certain nations,consequently citizens might choose bicycles to reach their destination as they might lack well-developed infrastructure. Furthermore, people want to preserve their commute time so they often find cars more convenient, especially to reach farther places as the latter way of travelling can take much more time to reach the destination. For instance, individuals residing in the countryside but working in urban areas might find it exhausting to travel by bicycle. Although, cars are more advantageous in terms of saving time, yet cycles are far more beneficial in the long run. Pedalling often requires a lot of energy expenditure, which can help to burn extra calories, thus, providing long-term health benefits to the individuals. They are extremely helpful for cardiovascular and mental well-being. As the population have a sedentary lifestyle these days, bikes are a great way to include exercise in the daily routine. For example, according to a survey, about 50% of human beings in Japan are seen reaching their offices via pedal so they remain physically fit. To conclude, there is no denying that automobiles make life easier and comfortable, but using cycles is advantageous in many aspects, therefore it is improved progress considering its positive impact on health. Hence, it should be adopted across the globe to travel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To some people the limit of car use is very important to them, because they want to stop pollution or things. In the city of Vauban, Germany they do not use cars because, to start off with to even park a car you would have to pay $40,000 plus the price of your house to be able to park it at a parking garage. The city has worked for two decades to make Vauban, Germany better for walking. Which made Vauban home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile. This made people all around the world consider to reduce car use, in America the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities. Other countries strictly rely on car reducing to take down the amount of polltuion in the air. Paris days after a near-record pollution forced car reduction to everyone. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, and many had their cars impounded. People in the capital city of France were starting to get sick and get congestion because of all of the smog, and pollution from cars. For Paris to have car reduction they had to ban any cars with odd numbered license plates from driving for a certain period of time. After all of the pollution in the air had cleared enough they had a party for the people with odd numbered license plates to drive again. In another occasion of car reduction Bogota, columbia had a car reduced day where people would hike, bike, skate, and take buses to work. They as well used this chance to clear pollution of the air and some people didn't mind it, they had a chance of a stress free day and the ability to lower air population. Any violators who chose to drive a car would be issued a $25 fine. Other countries who did not have car reduced days liked the idea of it, and thought they were generating a \"revelutionary change\". Due to these car reduced days parks and sports centers have been an uprise. The days without cars is a campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. In the United States of America government officials have talked about car reducing, but have never passed it. In 2005 the miles driven in America had peaked, and dropped steadily after. Michael Sivak said, \"What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn\". Bill Ford owner of For Motor proposed partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.so therefore the author was saying its not going to easy by saying despite the dangers.The study of venus is a worthy study because you'll learn things you never knew like venus is referred as earth's twin,venus is also the closest planet to earth.In terms of density and size besides mars.venus has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide which blankets venus.Venus also has challeging weather like clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. On venus the planets surface tempertures average anywhere from 800 degrees and up fahrenheit.The type of atmosphere the planet have's its not very suitable for spacecraft's to stay for no more than a few hours.That's why the author stated that is has dangers but its very interesting.The conditons that are on venus is far too extreme than any humans encounter on earth.So if can infer that if astronaunts went to venus they wouldn't probaly survive for long. I don't understand why the scientist keep discussing further visits to venus surface either.Because venus is a so custom planet but like the author states in the passage.Venus is so fascinating to astronomers because it is the most earth like planet in our solar system.The author believes long ago venus probably was covered largely with oceans and could've had supported various forms of life just like earth.I can't really agree on that with the author because of the facts stated about venus. I think that the national aeronautics and space administration aka (nasa) should overly think about sending astronauts to study venus on a blimp-like vehicles hovering.Around venus because even if all the math and calculations are right you have to think.If the astronaunt scientist can survive more than a hour or 2 will have enough time to get information about the planet.I don't quite think its a good idea cause of what if some exrosion or anything happen.while astronaunt scientist are there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Up to this day, the negative impacts of humans on the environment are actually evident. Besides, it is also debatable whether offering solutions to overcome this phenomenon has become too late or not. From my perspective, nature is still able to be ameliorated by our timely interventions. This essay will elaborate on my belief. Perhaps for many, human beings’ destructive actions on the earth get out of control. First, in some cases, ecosystems have been severely degraded and it is almost impossible to restore them to their original state. To elaborate, the world is facing the mass extinction of numerous species due to habitat loss, which is supposed to be the result of industrialization and the greenhouse effect. Even worse, hunting also contributes to exacerbating this reality, for instance, the West African Black Rhinoceros was declared totally extinct in 2011 because many fool people believe its horns can cure some diseases. Second, there are several insolvable environmental problems that cannot be solved by an individual or even by a single country. To be specific, these include thawing due to climate change and seawater pollution from plastic waste, which damages the habitat of creatures in the Arctic and the ocean. In actuality, it is difficult for the actions of one nation or one person to have a significant impact on improving this situation. Despite the valid arguments detailed above, I still believe that it is never too late to act. The most pertinent point is that numerous animal species which are on the brink of extinction need to be protected. People still constructively influence nature to protect plants and animals through habitat reinstatement as well as breeding projects. Many successful conservation stories demonstrate that it is possible to make a difference, such as the case of humpback whales. Another justification is that macro-environmental issues can be handled by the hand of the whole world. International cooperation can help create effective global movements in retaining biodiversity through public awareness campaigns and supporting environmental policies. Thus, the efforts of individuals will be multiplied and encouraged to alleviate environmental destruction. To conclude, it is indisputable that humankind has caused a variety of harmful effects on our planet, which are irreversible or difficult to mitigate. Even so, I strongly agree with the positive view that there are a range of other parts of the world that can still be recovered if people strive to cure it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The claim that the author supports the idea that studing Venus is worth pursuit despite the dangers because they maybe the issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decade. The dangers and pursuit are higly high risks for people and NASA.It is dangers because Venus is the secound planet from our sun and the atmosphere in Venus is almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets. Even more challenging is that the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere. On the plant surface,temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. The despite to go Venus is that they are hoping to look for something their because the plant has surface rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys,mountains,and craters. Somethings that we some how have they call Venus Earths sister. That why I think it so despite that NASA wants to see what else Venus got that the plants sister does not have. An explanation of the article that supports my claims are when the author says this \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself,but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Also when they said \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"Venus is also dangers for people because it has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system,even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\"Beyond high pressure and heat,Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\" My conclusion to the authors writting is that they will not end up sending people to Venus because its to risky. They will end up sending newer technoligi up their so that they could see what the sister of Earth got. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth -like planet in our solar system. Venus is most likely the most compared planet to Earth. Is to dangers for people because its the secound planet hottest then the Sun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ability dock dirigibles atop Empire State Building initially lucrative major obstacles The problems facing development mooring mast would cost flammability dirigibles weather feet air The structural cost problems facing Al Smith The stress dirigibles load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet In order overcome obstacle The steel frame Empire State Building would modified sixty thousand dollars worth modifications would made This problematic Al Smith must spend time money originally planned Furthermore another problem Most dirigibles outside United States use hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable This huge obstacle fire explosion densely populated areas downtown New York would catastrophic could put thousands people harms way Finally weather top Empire State building unsuitable docking dirigibles The winds top building constantly shifting back ship would swivel around around mooring mast This dangerous structure building surrounding buildings people close Due problems Al Smith engineers could complete Mooring Mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although the usage of motorized vehicles such as cars and motorcycles still remains at large, there is a significant amount of the global population that have realized the advantages of limited automobile usage. Cars and other diesel or gasoline dependant vehicles emit large amounts of greenhouse gases, which eventually lead to the progression of global warming. Not only this, but whether we notice it or not, cars and the spaces that are required to house cars take up valuable space that we can use for agriculture, the stimulation of the economy through the purchase of goods, even for progression of our education. The using of motorized vehicles is not something that should be banned by suburban life, but it, -like its predecessor the transportation means by horse hauling- has started to become obsolete. As shown by Vauban, Germany, a community in which the usage of cars is virtually nonexistant, the extinction of car usage is something to be welcomed; like a weight being lifted off the responsible shoulders of your average driver. Driving is not only a what is now viewed as a necessary activity for daily living, but it is also a hazardous chore that we as common citizens must place on ourselves on a borderline daily basis. When driving, we are subjecting our safety to the hands of chance, leaving our lives suseptible to being taken from us by an irresponsible driver, someone who we will most likely never cross paths with again. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" says a member of the car-free community Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two. Aside from health related deaths, death by car accident is not something that is unheard of, it is actually one of the top theives of life found in the United States alone. It is estimated that a death of a teenager (ages 16-20) resulting from a car accident happens every 16 seconds. Without cars to drive, there would be no way these accidents may occur. Within the last century, the rate of global warming has skyrocketed in an almost terrifying way. The natural process that would normally take several millenia to take place without the interference made by humans has been nearly cut by three-quarters with the technological advancements that we as a species have made. In three of the four sources, it has shown that the emissions made by fossil fuel dependant vehicles have been the biggest contribution to the advancement of global warming. It is even shown in the article written by Robert Duffer that even a partial ban of car usage in Paris was able to reduce the amounts of smog there significantly. In two of the articles, it has been shown that with the reduction of car usage, the space that was once consumed completely by these motorized psychological traps can be used to further flourish our enviornment with shopping malls, schools, parks and health centers that are readily available to us. Although we may not notice on a regular basis, but the amount of space that is used to give drivers a place to drive and to give cars a place to inhabit is more than likely bigger than the amount of space that we give an average citizen to live in. In Vauban, Germany 5,500 residents are able to live within a rectangular square mile, whereas a majority of that space in a place like Miami, Florida would be made vacant in terms of living, but prosperous in terms of space taken up by cars. In Bagota, Columbia as a result from their yearly \"Car-free day\" has increased their amount of publicly availabel park and sports center, and have also improved the sidewalks that are readily available to its citizens. Physical activity has always been promoted, since we were small children who are incapable of driving. Some would say that we were conditioned to view exercise as the best alternative to driving, and it turns out that our conditioning has been proven as fruitful. Within the last several years, the amount of miles driven per person has decreased by nine percent as shown in the article written by Elisabeth Rosenthal, the amount of those looking to receive their driver's liscense has also decreased. This is not because the generation of millenials has viewed driving as something not to their interest, but because we are conditioned to not want to partake in it. Even if our conditioning was not intentional, it has proven fruitful in terms of the improvement of our awareness of both human lives and the enviornment. Both cars and driving are making their way to ineffeciency, and that is not a bad thing. The lack of cars on the road is something to look forward to, both for our ability to look forward to new technological advancements in transportation and for our longevity as a species.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Home The Blueprints Lives warm tribute parents Narciso Rodriguez The author memoir said Growing environment istilled great sense family nothing blood relative Narciso Rodriguez would change way reader would perceive memoir It would story young child perceived physical mental qualities adults acknowledges troubles parents For neighborhood including family immigrants time racism segregation learned appreciate closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants CAPS understood Narciso Rodriguez Sr struggled personally financially became grateful opportunity live Cuban home Newark New Jersey Though parents worked laboratory studied chemical engineering struggle find work financial times adores The author writes They showed lives teachings basis life Without relationships lives various people memoir would selfish story child appreciates everything family done There much generosity impressed upon boy early age learned respect parents In end Narciso Rodriguez would write memoir devoted bonds created parents refugees amongst", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article I going talk way libraries sensor books I going hit points I think subject But also give point view I feel books shelves Also way libraries handle matter presensoring books shelves I try give details taken shelf I think certain materials problem librarians keep closer eye reading But stopped looking review seeing good enough book child read This problem ways kids exposed material reading But children take stuff wrong way reading mature type book But get books watch reading Some ways handle problem get little extreme If take book shelf older person going read You ca nt another persons wants book But make special section types books young children get books This I think help problem I feel could also presensor books This help explain things way understand Plus improve way people feel books But also print two copies one mature audiance one younger one If would make improvement younger kids take information lke mature person say real life In conclusion I feel like I nuatral subject I think bad thing shelf library But I feell prevented way libraries run Just keep closer eye younger audiance Also try presensor make friendly younger audiance", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features surrounding cyclist effect greatly All around hills rough terraine sand tumble weeds These features leave thinking die life around Everything dry vivid thats makes feel The old rusty water pump shows hasnt used ages black tar pumped help negative thought life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I was a scientist working at NASA and discussing the face with someone thinks it was created by aliens. The reason why I think aliens did there was a spacecraft was cicling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for it sister shop. In the story it says \"Caption noted a huge rocks formation\" which resembles a human head fromed by shadows giving the illusion eyes, nose, and mouth. Another reasons why I think that it is alien because in 1967 it start to appear.Then in 1998 it form again.Next In 2001 it look like a noise and eyes and mouth. Face on mars has become a pop icon. It also say in the passage some people think that the face is a fide evidence of life on Mars.I would rather hide and conspiracy theorists.Some scienttists also believed the face was an alien aritfact.When Mars global survyor arrived at the red planet.On Mars golbal surveyor flew over cydonia for the first time. We had to use wispy clouds to see the face.Alien marking were hidden by haze.Scientists figured it was just another martian measa common enough around.Mission contriller prepared to look again.Alien can be hiding when we get earn it. It wasn't so easy to take a pictures back then. The first picture narrow to 2.5 km. The next picture was pass over 1.56.The third picture was far as 43 per meter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Development of the Driverless Car Throughout the development of self-driven cars, we have seen them evolve from only being able to be developed on specialized tracks that use reverse polarities to guide the car on the track to having them prevalent in some cities where they are test driven in the world around us. Although some may say that these cars are a long way from becoming completely driverless, their use of evolving technology, their ability to use the drivers in unprecedented ways, and their evolving acceptance all contribute to the idea that they are the future of transportation for the world. They may be controlling themselves but they also control the world that will some day evolve to the heights of driverless cars. The cars of today have evolved from using minimal sensors to having rear-view cameras and anti-lock braking sensors, which driverless cars are definitely a part of. The driverless cars of today have been produced on the fact that car-making companies have evolved to provide these high-tech gadgets, which are equipped on their cars. \"Google's modified Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors...\" The inclusion of all of these sensors and cameras on the modified Toyota Prius is evidence to the fact that car companies are embracing the move towards technology to better equip their cars for the future, which is moving towards the idea of driverless cars. Proximity sensors and cameras allow for the driverless car to essentially find it's footing on the road and move in the direction that it needs to in order to avoid other vehicles and to carry out it's objective. This can be used on the streets of any city in any part of the world, and shows that this could some day used as a \"public-transport taxi system\" which corresponds with Sergey Brin, the cofounder of Google who has dreams on the subject of the progression of driverless cars in the future. These driverless cars also use the humans inside of the car to drive, which is a vital importance to the success of the driverless cars so that one day they may become completely driverless. \"BMW announced the development of 'Traffic Jam Assistant.' The car can handle driving functions...but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" This shows that driverless cars can handle most city driving situations up to 25 miles per hour, crediting the progression of driverless cars, but also use the human inside the car to control the car when the car needs help navigating through the construction sites or crashes. Eventually as driverless cars develop, they will base the driverless cars habits through a construction site to those of a human accomplishing the same task. This helps develop the car and also gives the driver an opportunity to drive. Furthermore, these driverless cars are still being researched today in cotext that some day they will be used as the premier mode of transportation for most people.\"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumtion that the problems (of technology failure and it's accordance to the law) will be solved. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" The anticipation to get these cars rolling on the road by Tesla and others shows that they believe that this will be the future of transportation and they are unrelenting in the fact that they will make driverless cars a hundred percent of the time happen some day, with Tesla already having a projected release date for the driverless car for most of time, which again shows the development of these cars. To conclude, driverless cars have come a long way, from being mere thoughts of the imagination, to being able to drive only on a specialized test track to becoming something that already has a release date planned in 2016. Their use of developing technology with the use of sensors and cameras as well as their use of the driver as someone with the skill to drive through a contruction site or accident have also contributed to it's prominence in the automobile industry. One of the most important parts of the driverless car's road to success is it's acceptance, and that is something that it has improved on with it's release coming up and the legislation that it will and has already affected. The driverless car will someday be the top form of transportation for many people and will only grow from there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, he describes how a technology called Facial Action Coding System could be used to identify human emotions. In the Article he brings up how this could be used in a classroom stting to show if the student is bored of confused. I do not think this kind of technology would be effective in the classroom. Students don't show enough emotion for it to be useful and humans are already masters at reconizing emotions. Facial Action Coding Sysytem could have many differenty uses but teaching is not one of them. In a classroom setting most students show little to no emotion. The computer would only be able to pick up signs of six different emotions be displayed as D'Alto writes \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions--happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\"(1). It shows here that the computer can only pick up these six while most students would not feel anything in class. Let's say that a computer is looking at me writing this essay right now. It would see me having a neutral and focased face and not be able to do anything. A computer would see a sea of neutral faces and not be able to do anything about. The software woulod just be sitting there being useless and being a waste of money. It is very interesting that a computer can try to read you emotions but it would not be needed in a lesson. Humans have evolved with the ability to read and reconize emotion for thousands of years so that now we are experts. We don't need a computer to tell us wether somone looks happy or sad. Even in the article D'alto states that we can do very well and effiently! In paragraph 5, D'Alto writes \"In fact, we humans preform this same impressive 'calculation' everyday. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face\" (1). He is writing that we can see emotions very easily and clearly just by looking at someones face and not needing some special software to do so. We are so good at doing this that us needing a computer would not be necessary. In the article he explains that a computer could reconize an uninterrested face and change the lesson. He explains this in paragraph 6 where D'Alto writes \"'A Classroom computer could reconize when a student is beoming confused or bored,'Dr. Huang predicts . ' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\"(1). Would a computer change the lesson for only one face in the classrom or would their have to be more. This system could also be manipulated if a few students try to look very angry to try and change the lesson drastically. The quaote even says an effective human insturcture can do the exact same thing so why would we need a robot to reconize our emotions. The technology that is the Facial Action Coding System that D'alto describes could be useful in some cases such as making animated characters show more emotion or for video surgery but not for all. It being in a classroom to reconize students emotion would be unneeded due to students not showing enough emotion and humans alrady being masters at doing so. Maybe someday we will see better emotion reconizing software but not today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Just recently, there has been a new form of technology made to have the ability to read people's facial expressions. The process is done by using a certain type of computer software innovated from Prof. Thomas Huang. Huang and his colleague experts have collaborated together to develop better ways for humans and computers to communicate. Although this has been a different, unique way to identify emotion, it is unquestionably wrong to be in people's personal space like that. Using the FACS System to read students' emotional expressions in a classroom is wrong in a variety of ways. Not everyone has to know the way someone is feeling in a classroom surrounded by students. Certain students may be going through a rough time either at school or home and they wouldn't want everyone to know something is affecting them. Personally, I would be uncomfortabe knowing that my teacher or classmates can easily see I'm stressing out or feeling down. This new technology is very likely to make mistakes since it is man-made. The text states, \"you can tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face... most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy.\" This pretty much shows that if us humans somtimes take the wrong signals on people's expressions, computers will make even more. We sometimes tend to be sad on the inside but are good at hiding it for many reasons. As for me, I feel like I shouldn't show the world how I'm feeling whether it's sad or mad since it's my personal business. The article states that, \"individuals often show varying degrees of expression (like not smiling as broadly)\". As you can see, people often don't show as much expression. You may ask to yourself, \"What does this mean?\" Well these computer softwares are going to make plenty of mistakes by taking the wrong signals on my classmates' faces. In conclusion, if my classroom was to have this technology, no doubt there would be mistakes for a wrong facial expression very often. We already have each other to talk to about our feelings, therefore; if some students don't feel like making it public, let them be. It is true that this is a cool new technology introduced having to do with humans, but it simply has gotten too far into our personal space.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luck is a cowboy and he works on a boat a cattle boat.Lucke's claims are that he helped at his anties farm. Another is that he sails the alantic and pasfic ocean . To get the cattle to the place its suppost to be . Also this was taken place when world war two happend so about in August 1945. 335 horses plus on the cargo with hay and oats to last the whole trip . What i'm saying is I would not take the job of being a cowboy . And sailing the ocean to seal cattle . would you be a seagoing cow boy? Her are some dis claimers that you have to feed cattle. Check on the cattle every hour . Maybe get sea sick from sailing . Not being safe in the story it says that Luck almost fell over board and broke ribs. And he only got a few days off .Why would Itake a job that probly smells from house poop I woyld not like to smell like poop when im off the ship. Realy its my opinon but realy I would jump over board if they said clean the poop no i will disagree. This is why i disagree with seagoing cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sometimes having to be a scientist is not the best idea. Scientist discover different things at different paces,such as the ones that these scientists discovered on Mars. This face that the scientists discovered have evidence that it is just a natural landform. It could also be proven that the face that was found on Mars was not created by aliens. This face was is the face of an alien,and it is going to be proven in this argumentative essay. First off,the face that was found has no signs of being an alien because any planet has those wierd funky looking holes right? It could have been that with the temperature and time those holes could have appeared making it look like a human face. It could of just simply have been a coincidence that it happened like that. Either way we could say that maybe it was an alien or just a natural landform,nobody has been able to personally prove it because there has not been one astronaut that has went up to Mars and looked at it with its own eyes. The human being has made assumptions about a lot of different things and the majority of the time the human being is incorrect because they do not have evidence to prove that what they said was correct. Next,lets say that maybe the human being is correct,how could scientists prove that it is what the human being suspects? In the article in paragraph 2 it reads,\"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa,common enough around Cydonia,only this one had usually shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh.\" In this part of the reading the author of this article are saying that it could have just been another Martian mesa,but that this one had the unusual shadows that make it look like an Egyptian Pharoh. Like it says in the text it could have just been the shadows something that make it look like an ancient Egyptian Pharoh. It could have maybe been that Martian that the scientists have said it is. Finally,in this situation scientists might be correct again. It could only be a natural landform that formed with the weather or something different that helps little things like these form up. There are no certain clues or evidence that this \"face\" could be a human or an ancient Egyptian Pharoh. Sometimes the human being wants to suspect things that are not close or correct to what a specialized scientist can do. Sometimes it is just probably that the human brain gets carried away by what it looks at. Sometimes it helps to pay close attention to what we are doing or looking at, for the hiumans good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Increasing cost of fuel is not the best ways to solve environmental problems according to my opinion. In countries like India, where the major population belongs to middle/upper middle class, increasing fuel cost might affect the countries financial situation. A major population of India belongs to middle class whose major mode of transport to work is motorbike or car. Increasing fuel price will impact working people making them compromise by either paying more for fuel or choosing a public mode of transport for travelling to work. This will further impact the quality of work and living for a very large number of employees. Decreasing quality of work will inturn impact nations financial stability. There are many other ways to tackle environmental problems in todays generations. The world is moving towards electric vehicles. Government can encourage people to buy electric vehicles instead of the vehicles that consume non renewable energies to run. Government schemes like zero percentage road tax, zero percentage registration fees can be made available to target middle class population. Vehicle taxes can be increased on luxury cars and bikes to target upper class to switch from non electric mode of transport to electric mode of transport. More electric charging stations can be built so as to increase the use of electric cars in the country. Such measures will motivate people to choose electric cars/bikes instead. I recently purchased a non electric four wheeler. Even though I wanted to opt for an electric car, I was unable to do so due to high pricing of the car and insurance expenses. The maintainance of the car was also quite expensive which eventually forced me into buying a fuel based car. If only the electric cars in market are listed at an affordable price, many people would defenitely move to electric mode of transport without any hassle. To conclude, there are alternate ways to improve current environmental problems than increasing fuel prices for cars and other modes of transport.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator, I firmly belive that the electoral college is no longer applicible in todays political world. There have been a number of occations in the past were the electoral college has failed. For example in 2000, al gore won the popular vote, but lost the presedency. If we live in a deomcorcy the people should be the wons deciding our leader and in this case they did not. The electoral college must be fixed or exsponged imediatley. The electoral college is unfair to voters. The cannidates can take advantage of a states population by only campaining in the states that \"matter\" to them. The president should not be determined by a couple people here and a couble people there. It should be determined by everybody that lives in america. Not a individual state. The biggest problem here is that we (america) are so much more advanced then the system we have right now. Over 200 years later and were still using the same system. There is so much more room for improvment but that is not happening. The advances weve made in so many aspects of goverment are not being translated into the electoral college. Its time for a change in our favor. In conclusion, the entire electoral college needs some major renovations. I ask for the issue to be reconzied and for a change to happen. I thank you for lisening to my opinion. Farewell", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that self-driving cars can be a good and a bad thing. They can make driving safer, but they can also make it more dangerous. I am in favor of self-driving cars if the problems can be corrected. So far the cars being made by Google are not completely self-driven. There still has to be a driver behind the wheel to take control when needed. A self-driven transportation system would be beneficial to people who need to be taken somewhere. It would be a great improvement. It would help in an emergency situation, such as if someone is injured, they are alone and cannot drive, the car can pick them up and get them medical care. The self-driving cars also would improve the economy by reducing gas milage. The cars do not take up as much gas as other cars. The improved economy would allow for more money to be put into important projects that can benefit people and improve the world. The car sensors would also reduce the number of accidents. If people don't get into car crashes or accidents, there are no medical bills to pay, leaving more money for the driver for important exspenses. People having more money can lead to a better life, such as paying for college, or a new home. The self-driving cars are our key to the future, a better world. The cars improve life by saving money and by not using as much gas, reducing pollution, providing better air to breathe. There needs to be more research done to complete a fully-automated car, this new transportantion system needs to be put into place as soon as more can be done to fix the issues the cars are having. So in conclusion, The sooner the problems are fixed and the cars are being produced, the better life people will have thanks to driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances. Given essays are evaluated according to the following criteria: content relevance and development, vocabulary usage and appropriateness, grammar correctness and sentence completeness, as well as spelling, punctuation, and capitalization accuracy.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story show tone The paragraph shows Saeng determined try pass This teaches lesson reader Lessons try hardestand dont give The last paragraph ends story sence curiosity It makes want passes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]